Comments received on poems by domilla
If I was a boy
Neville said:
Fine words indeed and fit for a Princess at the very least .. Neville
December 5th, 2024 05:52
Neville said:
Fine words indeed and fit for a Princess at the very least .. Neville
December 5th, 2024 05:52
Farewell Mary
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad but beautifully written poem, you can feel the sadness as you read it, thank you
December 4th, 2024 11:35
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad but beautifully written poem, you can feel the sadness as you read it, thank you
December 4th, 2024 11:35
My sweet rain
sorenbarrett said:
A longing poem that lays out its need for another before the reader. Dependent upon another, the words, cry out in a pleading and longing way. Very nicely written.
December 4th, 2024 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
A longing poem that lays out its need for another before the reader. Dependent upon another, the words, cry out in a pleading and longing way. Very nicely written.
December 4th, 2024 05:00
If I was a boy
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful romantic take on what a man should say to a woman but that they do not have the where with all to say. Most beautiful
December 3rd, 2024 11:31
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful romantic take on what a man should say to a woman but that they do not have the where with all to say. Most beautiful
December 3rd, 2024 11:31
If I was a boy
Noah Malice said:
and if i were a girl
in this great big world
your words would reach me
and move me deeply
lovely write domilla
December 2nd, 2024 20:03
Noah Malice said:
and if i were a girl
in this great big world
your words would reach me
and move me deeply
lovely write domilla
December 2nd, 2024 20:03
Our bad habit
orchidee said:
It\'s a common \'nicety\' just to reply \'Yes, I\'m OK\', whether we are OK or not. Then we wonder if the person asking us would be truly interested if we said \'No, I\'m not OK\'? Then again, we may not wish to tell certain people why we may not be OK.
October 18th, 2024 03:03
orchidee said:
It\'s a common \'nicety\' just to reply \'Yes, I\'m OK\', whether we are OK or not. Then we wonder if the person asking us would be truly interested if we said \'No, I\'m not OK\'? Then again, we may not wish to tell certain people why we may not be OK.
October 18th, 2024 03:03
Fine dining
sorenbarrett said:
Here you have painted in metaphor and careful word choice a picture of male female relationships. \"you can\'t feed a hunger that goes deeper than the plate\" a perfect depiction that is enhanced with all of the rest of the poem.
October 17th, 2024 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
Here you have painted in metaphor and careful word choice a picture of male female relationships. \"you can\'t feed a hunger that goes deeper than the plate\" a perfect depiction that is enhanced with all of the rest of the poem.
October 17th, 2024 05:45
Pain’s interlude
sorenbarrett said:
Another good message that people need to hear. More people need to read your poems
October 16th, 2024 10:21
sorenbarrett said:
Another good message that people need to hear. More people need to read your poems
October 16th, 2024 10:21
A Poetic Cryptolalia
sorenbarrett said:
One must depend on oneself first and love oneself first before one can find love outside. An inspired message
October 16th, 2024 10:19
sorenbarrett said:
One must depend on oneself first and love oneself first before one can find love outside. An inspired message
October 16th, 2024 10:19
The lesson in the struggle
sorenbarrett said:
A great self pep talk in this poem. One needs to feel that they can make it and that they are all right to go on. Lovely
August 20th, 2024 15:58
sorenbarrett said:
A great self pep talk in this poem. One needs to feel that they can make it and that they are all right to go on. Lovely
August 20th, 2024 15:58
Curse of the runaways
sorenbarrett said:
Full of imagery and painted with metaphor this piece reads smoothly to the end.
August 18th, 2024 07:04
sorenbarrett said:
Full of imagery and painted with metaphor this piece reads smoothly to the end.
August 18th, 2024 07:04
Miss sunshine
Raven333 said:
Really good write, I thought that was a well written poem and very descriptive. Enjoyed..
July 27th, 2022 10:09
Raven333 said:
Really good write, I thought that was a well written poem and very descriptive. Enjoyed..
July 27th, 2022 10:09
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