Comments received on poems by domilla
Fine dining
sorenbarrett said:
Here you have painted in metaphor and careful word choice a picture of male female relationships. \"you can\'t feed a hunger that goes deeper than the plate\" a perfect depiction that is enhanced with all of the rest of the poem.
October 17th, 2024 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
Here you have painted in metaphor and careful word choice a picture of male female relationships. \"you can\'t feed a hunger that goes deeper than the plate\" a perfect depiction that is enhanced with all of the rest of the poem.
October 17th, 2024 05:45
Pain’s interlude
sorenbarrett said:
Another good message that people need to hear. More people need to read your poems
October 16th, 2024 10:21
sorenbarrett said:
Another good message that people need to hear. More people need to read your poems
October 16th, 2024 10:21
A Poetic Cryptolalia
sorenbarrett said:
One must depend on oneself first and love oneself first before one can find love outside. An inspired message
October 16th, 2024 10:19
sorenbarrett said:
One must depend on oneself first and love oneself first before one can find love outside. An inspired message
October 16th, 2024 10:19
The lesson in the struggle
sorenbarrett said:
A great self pep talk in this poem. One needs to feel that they can make it and that they are all right to go on. Lovely
August 20th, 2024 15:58
sorenbarrett said:
A great self pep talk in this poem. One needs to feel that they can make it and that they are all right to go on. Lovely
August 20th, 2024 15:58
Curse of the runaways
sorenbarrett said:
Full of imagery and painted with metaphor this piece reads smoothly to the end.
August 18th, 2024 07:04
sorenbarrett said:
Full of imagery and painted with metaphor this piece reads smoothly to the end.
August 18th, 2024 07:04
Miss sunshine
Raven333 said:
Really good write, I thought that was a well written poem and very descriptive. Enjoyed..
July 27th, 2022 10:09
Raven333 said:
Really good write, I thought that was a well written poem and very descriptive. Enjoyed..
July 27th, 2022 10:09
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