Comments received on poems by domilla
Our bad habit
orchidee said:
It\'s a common \'nicety\' just to reply \'Yes, I\'m OK\', whether we are OK or not. Then we wonder if the person asking us would be truly interested if we said \'No, I\'m not OK\'? Then again, we may not wish to tell certain people why we may not be OK.
October 18th, 2024 03:03
orchidee said:
It\'s a common \'nicety\' just to reply \'Yes, I\'m OK\', whether we are OK or not. Then we wonder if the person asking us would be truly interested if we said \'No, I\'m not OK\'? Then again, we may not wish to tell certain people why we may not be OK.
October 18th, 2024 03:03
Fine dining
sorenbarrett said:
Here you have painted in metaphor and careful word choice a picture of male female relationships. \"you can\'t feed a hunger that goes deeper than the plate\" a perfect depiction that is enhanced with all of the rest of the poem.
October 17th, 2024 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
Here you have painted in metaphor and careful word choice a picture of male female relationships. \"you can\'t feed a hunger that goes deeper than the plate\" a perfect depiction that is enhanced with all of the rest of the poem.
October 17th, 2024 05:45
Pain’s interlude
sorenbarrett said:
Another good message that people need to hear. More people need to read your poems
October 16th, 2024 10:21
sorenbarrett said:
Another good message that people need to hear. More people need to read your poems
October 16th, 2024 10:21
A Poetic Cryptolalia
sorenbarrett said:
One must depend on oneself first and love oneself first before one can find love outside. An inspired message
October 16th, 2024 10:19
sorenbarrett said:
One must depend on oneself first and love oneself first before one can find love outside. An inspired message
October 16th, 2024 10:19
The lesson in the struggle
sorenbarrett said:
A great self pep talk in this poem. One needs to feel that they can make it and that they are all right to go on. Lovely
August 20th, 2024 15:58
sorenbarrett said:
A great self pep talk in this poem. One needs to feel that they can make it and that they are all right to go on. Lovely
August 20th, 2024 15:58
Curse of the runaways
sorenbarrett said:
Full of imagery and painted with metaphor this piece reads smoothly to the end.
August 18th, 2024 07:04
sorenbarrett said:
Full of imagery and painted with metaphor this piece reads smoothly to the end.
August 18th, 2024 07:04
Miss sunshine
Raven333 said:
Really good write, I thought that was a well written poem and very descriptive. Enjoyed..
July 27th, 2022 10:09
Raven333 said:
Really good write, I thought that was a well written poem and very descriptive. Enjoyed..
July 27th, 2022 10:09
