Comments received on poems by domilla
One life in my name
sorenbarrett said:
The sea is a great metaphor for many things and no less so here. Water one of the four basic elements of the ancients is at its core with all its properties. Very nice Domilla
March 29th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
The sea is a great metaphor for many things and no less so here. Water one of the four basic elements of the ancients is at its core with all its properties. Very nice Domilla
March 29th, 2025 03:55
Diary of the dandelion
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully emotional write, determination to get passed the hurt and setbacks and come back even stronger, nicely expressed and written
March 24th, 2025 15:30
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully emotional write, determination to get passed the hurt and setbacks and come back even stronger, nicely expressed and written
March 24th, 2025 15:30
Diary of the dandelion
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognition, resolve and determination. A lovely metaphor that has room to be explored more. A very emotional write. Nicely done
March 24th, 2025 15:19
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognition, resolve and determination. A lovely metaphor that has room to be explored more. A very emotional write. Nicely done
March 24th, 2025 15:19
Euphrasia’s legacy
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written this poem seems hauntingly mournful and yet familiar. It speaks with a sense of loss. A calling voice.
March 16th, 2025 06:55
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written this poem seems hauntingly mournful and yet familiar. It speaks with a sense of loss. A calling voice.
March 16th, 2025 06:55
Elusive traces
domilla said:
Thank you soren, your comments always warm my heart
March 13th, 2025 03:35
domilla said:
Thank you soren, your comments always warm my heart
March 13th, 2025 03:35
Elusive traces
RSM0812 said:
This is a really good write. People fear what they don\'t understand and change can be exactly that. Thanks for posting this.
March 9th, 2025 16:27
RSM0812 said:
This is a really good write. People fear what they don\'t understand and change can be exactly that. Thanks for posting this.
March 9th, 2025 16:27
Elusive traces
sorenbarrett said:
Questions unanswered. Well written this poem takes one inside the head of the author. Nicely done
March 9th, 2025 14:32
sorenbarrett said:
Questions unanswered. Well written this poem takes one inside the head of the author. Nicely done
March 9th, 2025 14:32
A dance with the devil
Poetic Licence said:
Feels like a call out for helping,having their life take a bad turn, well expressed in the write
March 5th, 2025 06:43
Poetic Licence said:
Feels like a call out for helping,having their life take a bad turn, well expressed in the write
March 5th, 2025 06:43
A dance with the devil
sorenbarrett said:
A plea of desperation for help. This poem cries out. Well written
March 5th, 2025 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
A plea of desperation for help. This poem cries out. Well written
March 5th, 2025 05:40
Dirty mistakes
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of regret prevades this work and gives the feeling that one wishes they could go back in time. A sense that one can never go home again. Very nicely stated
February 1st, 2025 08:57
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of regret prevades this work and gives the feeling that one wishes they could go back in time. A sense that one can never go home again. Very nicely stated
February 1st, 2025 08:57
The wandering wind and fate
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful piece of writing of someone suffering hardships but refusing to be beaten, and always maintaining their belief and hope that it will be better. A powerful message to all, written in a caring and touching way, Great write
January 6th, 2025 16:36
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful piece of writing of someone suffering hardships but refusing to be beaten, and always maintaining their belief and hope that it will be better. A powerful message to all, written in a caring and touching way, Great write
January 6th, 2025 16:36
The wandering wind and fate
sorenbarrett said:
Hope follows hardships and one is never lost. Most lovely with a tenderness and softness
January 6th, 2025 13:23
sorenbarrett said:
Hope follows hardships and one is never lost. Most lovely with a tenderness and softness
January 6th, 2025 13:23
Loneliness; the unwelcomed guest
sorenbarrett said:
A most existential write with powerful questions that the reader has to answer for themselves. Questions that we all have and all have different answers to. I say to be comfortable in one\'s loneliness one must be comfortable with oneself. A wonderful write
December 29th, 2024 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
A most existential write with powerful questions that the reader has to answer for themselves. Questions that we all have and all have different answers to. I say to be comfortable in one\'s loneliness one must be comfortable with oneself. A wonderful write
December 29th, 2024 05:07
Deep howls and melodies
sorenbarrett said:
Play it forward seems to be the message of this poem. A lovely message in a wonderful poem
December 28th, 2024 12:42
sorenbarrett said:
Play it forward seems to be the message of this poem. A lovely message in a wonderful poem
December 28th, 2024 12:42
Deep howls and melodies
Poetic Licence said:
Leaving a legacy for others to enjoy is a lovely sentence, and i hope that is something we achieve, enjoyed the read
December 28th, 2024 12:39
Poetic Licence said:
Leaving a legacy for others to enjoy is a lovely sentence, and i hope that is something we achieve, enjoyed the read
December 28th, 2024 12:39
The leaf on the tree
sorenbarrett said:
A most important message at any time of the year but even more so at this time of the year. Well said in a powerful way it rings out like a bell and needs to be heard by all
December 24th, 2024 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
A most important message at any time of the year but even more so at this time of the year. Well said in a powerful way it rings out like a bell and needs to be heard by all
December 24th, 2024 04:18
From sparks to ash
sorenbarrett said:
Times have changed and not for the better in this poem. There is a feeling of doom cast where darkness is pending.
December 22nd, 2024 12:35
sorenbarrett said:
Times have changed and not for the better in this poem. There is a feeling of doom cast where darkness is pending.
December 22nd, 2024 12:35
From sparks to ash
Demar Desu said:
1580?!?! I doubt those days were anything but beautiful LOL! Nothing but war and sickness. Sheesh though this is definitely a good romanticized version of love way back in the day.
These days I feel like love is the best it’s ever been.
December 22nd, 2024 11:43
Demar Desu said:
1580?!?! I doubt those days were anything but beautiful LOL! Nothing but war and sickness. Sheesh though this is definitely a good romanticized version of love way back in the day.
These days I feel like love is the best it’s ever been.
December 22nd, 2024 11:43
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Neville said:
Very well poemed & likewise enjoyed .. Neville
December 22nd, 2024 08:43
Neville said:
Very well poemed & likewise enjoyed .. Neville
December 22nd, 2024 08:43
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arqios said:
Loving the interface of images and symbolic allusions!
December 22nd, 2024 07:35
arqios said:
Loving the interface of images and symbolic allusions!
December 22nd, 2024 07:35
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Poetic Licence said:
A very well crafted poem riddled with sadness, darkness and unhappiness, i hope the candles do burn for you and you can find a way out.
December 21st, 2024 16:20
Poetic Licence said:
A very well crafted poem riddled with sadness, darkness and unhappiness, i hope the candles do burn for you and you can find a way out.
December 21st, 2024 16:20
Farewell Mary
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of separation, loss and death of someone close. The poem itself conveyed these feelings with periodic rhyme that gave it decoration. It is a very nice write and moving.
December 21st, 2024 16:12
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of separation, loss and death of someone close. The poem itself conveyed these feelings with periodic rhyme that gave it decoration. It is a very nice write and moving.
December 21st, 2024 16:12
Give me that sweet ballad
sorenbarrett said:
I seldom find two poems in a row that I feel worthy of Favs but you have captured this in this poem and the last. A poem comes from the heart and I feel it in this one and the last. This one becomes art in its ability to bring this feeling with its words pleading for a poem to do just that. Lovely
December 21st, 2024 16:08
sorenbarrett said:
I seldom find two poems in a row that I feel worthy of Favs but you have captured this in this poem and the last. A poem comes from the heart and I feel it in this one and the last. This one becomes art in its ability to bring this feeling with its words pleading for a poem to do just that. Lovely
December 21st, 2024 16:08
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sorenbarrett said:
A cry from the heart this poem flows with a darkness that the reader can feel. It ends in uncertainty and a sense of hope that glimmer as a star, distant but there before the morning sun.
December 21st, 2024 16:03
sorenbarrett said:
A cry from the heart this poem flows with a darkness that the reader can feel. It ends in uncertainty and a sense of hope that glimmer as a star, distant but there before the morning sun.
December 21st, 2024 16:03
Give me that sweet ballad
Poetic Licence said:
I find your poetry very powerful and a bit dark at times, interesting and enjoyable read ( not enjoyable because someone is suffering, the poetry itself.
December 10th, 2024 08:40
Poetic Licence said:
I find your poetry very powerful and a bit dark at times, interesting and enjoyable read ( not enjoyable because someone is suffering, the poetry itself.
December 10th, 2024 08:40
Embracing me
sorenbarrett said:
I hear pain calling out from a soul that feels abandoned, hurt and unappreciated for what she is. This pain so well worded screams out at the one that left her for justice and then in its strength makes a statement of arising from the ashes to a new rebirth. Very nicely done Domilla
December 9th, 2024 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
I hear pain calling out from a soul that feels abandoned, hurt and unappreciated for what she is. This pain so well worded screams out at the one that left her for justice and then in its strength makes a statement of arising from the ashes to a new rebirth. Very nicely done Domilla
December 9th, 2024 04:38
Embracing me
Poetic Licence said:
I feel the emotion and echo the sentiment within this nicely written poem, Thank you
December 9th, 2024 03:45
Poetic Licence said:
I feel the emotion and echo the sentiment within this nicely written poem, Thank you
December 9th, 2024 03:45
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