Comments received on poems by nephilim56
GUARDIAN ANGEL
L. B. Mek said:
\'Bleeding poetry from my fate\'
how I know these words, intimately
even, if this
be the very first time, I\'m reading them...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(crazy
how deceiving our side mirrors
can be
often, we have to stick our heads out
and check for ourselves, to make sure
we\'re not missing anything..
see, proximity
affords, that we most treasure
a blind spot, in our life
and so, once again
we\'re left appreciating the deeds
of those
who helped us in our time of need
when only feeling the draft, void
of a presence
we once, took for granted as being
ubiquitous, in our life...)
January 27th, 2023 07:19
L. B. Mek said:
\'Bleeding poetry from my fate\'
how I know these words, intimately
even, if this
be the very first time, I\'m reading them...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(crazy
how deceiving our side mirrors
can be
often, we have to stick our heads out
and check for ourselves, to make sure
we\'re not missing anything..
see, proximity
affords, that we most treasure
a blind spot, in our life
and so, once again
we\'re left appreciating the deeds
of those
who helped us in our time of need
when only feeling the draft, void
of a presence
we once, took for granted as being
ubiquitous, in our life...)
January 27th, 2023 07:19
JANUARY CHILD
L. B. Mek said:
vivid imagery, such wonderful flow
a great read!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 23rd, 2023 06:59
L. B. Mek said:
vivid imagery, such wonderful flow
a great read!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 23rd, 2023 06:59
MISCARRIAGE
mvvenkataraman said:
Nice meaning and rhyme, but a poem mustn\'t be written in capital letters throughout as that is abnormal and may spoil the beauty of the poem!
January 21st, 2023 09:40
mvvenkataraman said:
Nice meaning and rhyme, but a poem mustn\'t be written in capital letters throughout as that is abnormal and may spoil the beauty of the poem!
January 21st, 2023 09:40
IDEOLOGY
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m so sorry for your loss
this is acute and insightful commentary
thanks for sharing
(i still think, they tried to decimate
the elder population with covid
but that battle hardened generation
wouldn\'t give-in and go quite
so now its frozen homes
with gas price hikes
I wonder, what fate they think
awaits them
when they too, reach
that threshold age?
shameful, absolutely shameful!)
January 20th, 2023 07:05
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m so sorry for your loss
this is acute and insightful commentary
thanks for sharing
(i still think, they tried to decimate
the elder population with covid
but that battle hardened generation
wouldn\'t give-in and go quite
so now its frozen homes
with gas price hikes
I wonder, what fate they think
awaits them
when they too, reach
that threshold age?
shameful, absolutely shameful!)
January 20th, 2023 07:05
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