Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
ROMANTIC WARRIOR
arqios said:
A very romantic view of life and it’s challenges. Don Quixote’s windmill giants are a far cry from this reality. 🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 04:07
arqios said:
A very romantic view of life and it’s challenges. Don Quixote’s windmill giants are a far cry from this reality. 🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 04:07
BOXING BOOTH
arqios said:
A vivid tale as well as a metaphorical treatise in the circus of life, taking blows but always a sideshow… how much is the value of a life where life is meant to be of highest value!?
February 17th, 2025 05:24
arqios said:
A vivid tale as well as a metaphorical treatise in the circus of life, taking blows but always a sideshow… how much is the value of a life where life is meant to be of highest value!?
February 17th, 2025 05:24
BOXING BOOTH
sorenbarrett said:
In the literal memory loss and Parkinson\'s disease in the metaphorical more serious still. A wonderful write with great short lines like punches and careful wording delivering each blow
February 17th, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
In the literal memory loss and Parkinson\'s disease in the metaphorical more serious still. A wonderful write with great short lines like punches and careful wording delivering each blow
February 17th, 2025 04:50
OLD SOLDIER
sorenbarrett said:
This poem makes clear the devastation of war and the question that occurs to survivors. Well written and heartfelt
February 16th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
This poem makes clear the devastation of war and the question that occurs to survivors. Well written and heartfelt
February 16th, 2025 04:20
OLD SOLDIER
arqios said:
It’s tough all around for the soldiering kind. Thanks for giving voice to this 🙏🏻🕊️
February 16th, 2025 04:01
arqios said:
It’s tough all around for the soldiering kind. Thanks for giving voice to this 🙏🏻🕊️
February 16th, 2025 04:01
STRANGER
RSM0812 said:
Really good read. Great rhym scheme. I really liked this one.
February 15th, 2025 14:38
RSM0812 said:
Really good read. Great rhym scheme. I really liked this one.
February 15th, 2025 14:38
WINTER SKY
RSM0812 said:
This is awesome. I really like the short stanza style and rhyming patterns. Tells the story with great imagery also. \"Upon first kiss, of winter sky\". Very pretty to imagine.
February 15th, 2025 10:42
RSM0812 said:
This is awesome. I really like the short stanza style and rhyming patterns. Tells the story with great imagery also. \"Upon first kiss, of winter sky\". Very pretty to imagine.
February 15th, 2025 10:42
ECHO
sorenbarrett said:
An image that had not occurred to me, love that burnt an echo. Very poetic and evokes several vivid images. The poem flows well and is a pleasurable read.
February 15th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
An image that had not occurred to me, love that burnt an echo. Very poetic and evokes several vivid images. The poem flows well and is a pleasurable read.
February 15th, 2025 04:34
ECHO
Poetic Licence said:
This read has a lovely flow as you read it, enjoyed
February 15th, 2025 03:22
Poetic Licence said:
This read has a lovely flow as you read it, enjoyed
February 15th, 2025 03:22
GABRIEL
arqios said:
If it’s the message announced that is needed, then Gabriel is the one to be heeded!
February 14th, 2025 07:42
arqios said:
If it’s the message announced that is needed, then Gabriel is the one to be heeded!
February 14th, 2025 07:42
GABRIEL
Poetic Licence said:
Has a lovely feeling as you read through, enjoyed the read
February 14th, 2025 05:28
Poetic Licence said:
Has a lovely feeling as you read through, enjoyed the read
February 14th, 2025 05:28
GABRIEL
sorenbarrett said:
Such a rocking rhythm to this poem the meter rolls on and on carrying the reader to the end; Very nicely done
February 14th, 2025 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
Such a rocking rhythm to this poem the meter rolls on and on carrying the reader to the end; Very nicely done
February 14th, 2025 05:04
HUMBLE
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written this poem flowes off the tongue easily. Very nice
February 13th, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written this poem flowes off the tongue easily. Very nice
February 13th, 2025 03:54
SNIPPET
Poetic Licence said:
We have become a throw away society and do not value anything anymore including people, and it is very sad it has become like this. The write makes it`s points very well, enjoyed the read.
February 12th, 2025 06:01
Poetic Licence said:
We have become a throw away society and do not value anything anymore including people, and it is very sad it has become like this. The write makes it`s points very well, enjoyed the read.
February 12th, 2025 06:01
SNIPPET
arqios said:
Nan used to tell us that a story as such used to go on for half a year or so, then later slips into town legend. Now it is so common that we have been desensitised. 🙏🏻🕊
February 12th, 2025 05:45
arqios said:
Nan used to tell us that a story as such used to go on for half a year or so, then later slips into town legend. Now it is so common that we have been desensitised. 🙏🏻🕊
February 12th, 2025 05:45
SNIPPET
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor the paper with the notice used to wrap up a meal then to be discarded just as the memory of a life. Casual and calloused we go on with our lives what was once someone\'s treasure is now our trash. A powerful write
February 12th, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor the paper with the notice used to wrap up a meal then to be discarded just as the memory of a life. Casual and calloused we go on with our lives what was once someone\'s treasure is now our trash. A powerful write
February 12th, 2025 04:37
NECESSARY FOR ECONOMIC GROWTH
sorenbarrett said:
Tis true that eliminating the weak, old and disabled is a cost savings but on the other side of the scale a heavy cost. Nicely written
February 11th, 2025 08:49
sorenbarrett said:
Tis true that eliminating the weak, old and disabled is a cost savings but on the other side of the scale a heavy cost. Nicely written
February 11th, 2025 08:49
NECESSARY FOR ECONOMIC GROWTH
arqios said:
Wow a tough (subject matter and tone) but moving read. A pleasure as always 🙏🏻🕊️
February 11th, 2025 05:24
arqios said:
Wow a tough (subject matter and tone) but moving read. A pleasure as always 🙏🏻🕊️
February 11th, 2025 05:24
RAINDROP
RSM0812 said:
I like your poems like this. Short stanzas, off rhymes and beauty in the words. Thanks for the read.
February 10th, 2025 09:15
RSM0812 said:
I like your poems like this. Short stanzas, off rhymes and beauty in the words. Thanks for the read.
February 10th, 2025 09:15
WASTEGROUND
arqios said:
And as we get on in years we see more and more of this around us, in other places and within ourselves as well… a striking work 🙏🏻🕊
February 10th, 2025 07:31
arqios said:
And as we get on in years we see more and more of this around us, in other places and within ourselves as well… a striking work 🙏🏻🕊
February 10th, 2025 07:31
WASTEGROUND
sorenbarrett said:
Whether place or in metaphor a person this write paints a picture of deterioration and aging that will soon be its destruction. Well written
February 10th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Whether place or in metaphor a person this write paints a picture of deterioration and aging that will soon be its destruction. Well written
February 10th, 2025 04:13
WASTEGROUND
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write about the demolition of past communities, i can just picture that pub with everything else around it demolished, waiting for it`s own fate, enjoyed the read.
February 10th, 2025 04:08
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write about the demolition of past communities, i can just picture that pub with everything else around it demolished, waiting for it`s own fate, enjoyed the read.
February 10th, 2025 04:08
RAINDROP
Cheeky Missy said:
Hauntingly provocative, thank you very much for posting this pretty little, rather laden number. Since the Scriptures seem to contradict its assessment in concluding, I\'ll leave it at that. Fascinating and excellently rendered with lovely imagery. Thank you for sharing.
February 9th, 2025 09:59
Cheeky Missy said:
Hauntingly provocative, thank you very much for posting this pretty little, rather laden number. Since the Scriptures seem to contradict its assessment in concluding, I\'ll leave it at that. Fascinating and excellently rendered with lovely imagery. Thank you for sharing.
February 9th, 2025 09:59
PAIN
teardrop said:
Love this read. Well written and your rhyming not forced ( I am a big fan of rhyming poetry) Also tells a story which makes it very enjoyable/ Seems to come from the heart. Thank you for the read.
February 9th, 2025 05:31
teardrop said:
Love this read. Well written and your rhyming not forced ( I am a big fan of rhyming poetry) Also tells a story which makes it very enjoyable/ Seems to come from the heart. Thank you for the read.
February 9th, 2025 05:31
RAINDROP
sorenbarrett said:
Some beautiful imagery here nicely worded and lands upon the reader\'s ear like a kiss
February 9th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
Some beautiful imagery here nicely worded and lands upon the reader\'s ear like a kiss
February 9th, 2025 04:44
RAINDROP
arqios said:
A beautiful poem to got lost inside of, in spite of some heavy hitting spots. A triumph! 🙏🏻🕊️
February 9th, 2025 03:45
arqios said:
A beautiful poem to got lost inside of, in spite of some heavy hitting spots. A triumph! 🙏🏻🕊️
February 9th, 2025 03:45
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