Comments received on poems by nephilim56
CHRISTMAS EVE
Poetic Licence said:
So many reasons that people are homeless and the politicians in way or another are mainly responsible, a heartfelt read.
December 19th, 2024 07:39
Poetic Licence said:
So many reasons that people are homeless and the politicians in way or another are mainly responsible, a heartfelt read.
December 19th, 2024 07:39
CHRISTMAS EVE
Cassie58 said:
Politicians have no compassion. It isn’t just about life choices. There are so many reasons why people become homeless. Your poem touches my heart, it really does. People deserve better.
December 19th, 2024 07:09
Cassie58 said:
Politicians have no compassion. It isn’t just about life choices. There are so many reasons why people become homeless. Your poem touches my heart, it really does. People deserve better.
December 19th, 2024 07:09
CHRISTMAS EVE
sorenbarrett said:
A great spirit of Christmas poem that puts the Christ back in Christmas. Where our eyes should be at this time of the year not on the lights and presents and Christmas dollars that we can ill afford to spend. Nicely done
December 19th, 2024 07:08
sorenbarrett said:
A great spirit of Christmas poem that puts the Christ back in Christmas. Where our eyes should be at this time of the year not on the lights and presents and Christmas dollars that we can ill afford to spend. Nicely done
December 19th, 2024 07:08
CHRISTMAS EVE
teardrop said:
Beautifully written and .so very true. Thank you for the read.
December 19th, 2024 06:26
teardrop said:
Beautifully written and .so very true. Thank you for the read.
December 19th, 2024 06:26
THE FINAL TIME
Poetic Licence said:
Goes to quickly while reading it, love the poem
December 16th, 2024 09:59
Poetic Licence said:
Goes to quickly while reading it, love the poem
December 16th, 2024 09:59
THE FINAL TIME
arqios said:
Makes the heart race whilst reading. Very effective!
December 16th, 2024 07:31
arqios said:
Makes the heart race whilst reading. Very effective!
December 16th, 2024 07:31
THE FINAL TIME
sorenbarrett said:
Short lines like hurried footsteps race this poem to its end. There is a sense of urgency here set by the clock at the begining. Very nicely done
December 16th, 2024 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
Short lines like hurried footsteps race this poem to its end. There is a sense of urgency here set by the clock at the begining. Very nicely done
December 16th, 2024 05:29
THE NEXT TABLE
Poetic Licence said:
This is a beautiful but very haunting piece, depicting i feel the despair of a person left on the wayside of life living in a place left on the way side of life. Brilliant read.
December 15th, 2024 19:37
Poetic Licence said:
This is a beautiful but very haunting piece, depicting i feel the despair of a person left on the wayside of life living in a place left on the way side of life. Brilliant read.
December 15th, 2024 19:37
THE NEXT TABLE
Cheeky Missy said:
Reality is forever in our faces, yet we rarely look it straight in the face because it is so macabre and so ghastly. How very beautifully you\'ve rendered this with superb imagery and aptly haunting, biting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 15th, 2024 15:40
Cheeky Missy said:
Reality is forever in our faces, yet we rarely look it straight in the face because it is so macabre and so ghastly. How very beautifully you\'ve rendered this with superb imagery and aptly haunting, biting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 15th, 2024 15:40
THE NEXT TABLE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem paints such a vivid picture that I could not help but Fav it. It speaks to me as any good art does. So much word art in one piece, masterful
December 15th, 2024 13:03
sorenbarrett said:
This poem paints such a vivid picture that I could not help but Fav it. It speaks to me as any good art does. So much word art in one piece, masterful
December 15th, 2024 13:03
FORTY YEARS
rin said:
The afterglow of your remembrance that you can talk about now.
I think it\'s wonderful.
December 9th, 2024 15:11
rin said:
The afterglow of your remembrance that you can talk about now.
I think it\'s wonderful.
December 9th, 2024 15:11
FORTY YEARS
Poetic Licence said:
An emotional journey of sadness at looking what used to be, a really well written piece, thank you
December 9th, 2024 11:37
Poetic Licence said:
An emotional journey of sadness at looking what used to be, a really well written piece, thank you
December 9th, 2024 11:37
LIFEBLOOD
Doggerel Dave said:
Could fill the space on many a plain white tombstone.
October 24th, 2024 08:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Could fill the space on many a plain white tombstone.
October 24th, 2024 08:26
FROM CAD TO SAM
Doggerel Dave said:
Like to elaborate in a couple of lines?
Thanks.
September 30th, 2024 16:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Like to elaborate in a couple of lines?
Thanks.
September 30th, 2024 16:25
DIFFERENT
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice lines in this beautiful and thought provoking poem. Lovely
August 19th, 2024 08:06
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice lines in this beautiful and thought provoking poem. Lovely
August 19th, 2024 08:06
BROKEN GLASS
sorenbarrett said:
A dark write of freedom? Well democracy? Maybe? Loved the poem
August 12th, 2024 08:51
sorenbarrett said:
A dark write of freedom? Well democracy? Maybe? Loved the poem
August 12th, 2024 08:51
COWARD ( EXECUTED WW1 )
Doggerel Dave said:
I can remember a time, many years ago when I dwelt on this topic a lot. Couldn\'t leave it alone. Sometimes that feeling returns as for example when confronted by your poem.
I thought I was reading about a horrendous history, And that humanity, politics and so on was now better than that… how misguided.
July 11th, 2024 19:35
Doggerel Dave said:
I can remember a time, many years ago when I dwelt on this topic a lot. Couldn\'t leave it alone. Sometimes that feeling returns as for example when confronted by your poem.
I thought I was reading about a horrendous history, And that humanity, politics and so on was now better than that… how misguided.
July 11th, 2024 19:35
COWARD ( EXECUTED WW1 )
Cassie58 said:
Such a moving poem. You have captured the carnage so well. Shot for cowardice, when they were suffering from the awful effects of shell shock. Judged by madmen. Thank you for remembering them.
July 11th, 2024 14:14
Cassie58 said:
Such a moving poem. You have captured the carnage so well. Shot for cowardice, when they were suffering from the awful effects of shell shock. Judged by madmen. Thank you for remembering them.
July 11th, 2024 14:14
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