Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
TRAIN STATION
arqios said:
Most families have had this kind of experience in every major conflict in the history of humanity 🙏🏻🕊️
February 20th, 2025 05:05
arqios said:
Most families have had this kind of experience in every major conflict in the history of humanity 🙏🏻🕊️
February 20th, 2025 05:05
TRAIN STATION
sorenbarrett said:
A timeless poem casting a distant image set in a distant time so as not to touch tender nerves but set this in perspective. Well done and with graphic images that remind us well what war is and its lack of purpose. Well done
February 20th, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
A timeless poem casting a distant image set in a distant time so as not to touch tender nerves but set this in perspective. Well done and with graphic images that remind us well what war is and its lack of purpose. Well done
February 20th, 2025 04:54
JAGGED
arqios said:
Like a razor or a saw in its movement, tempo and rhythm 🙏🏻🕊
February 19th, 2025 05:30
arqios said:
Like a razor or a saw in its movement, tempo and rhythm 🙏🏻🕊
February 19th, 2025 05:30
JAGGED
sorenbarrett said:
It is the flow and rhyme of this poem that I loved the most. Very nicely done and deserves a fave
February 19th, 2025 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
It is the flow and rhyme of this poem that I loved the most. Very nicely done and deserves a fave
February 19th, 2025 05:04
ROMANTIC WARRIOR
sorenbarrett said:
Chasing a dream is a long journey that is like trying to catch a cloud in a net or the classic looking for the end of a rainbow. A lovely write.
February 18th, 2025 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
Chasing a dream is a long journey that is like trying to catch a cloud in a net or the classic looking for the end of a rainbow. A lovely write.
February 18th, 2025 05:45
ROMANTIC WARRIOR
Poetic Licence said:
A very poetic view on life and the battles we face, enjoyable read
February 18th, 2025 05:21
Poetic Licence said:
A very poetic view on life and the battles we face, enjoyable read
February 18th, 2025 05:21
ROMANTIC WARRIOR
arqios said:
A very romantic view of life and it’s challenges. Don Quixote’s windmill giants are a far cry from this reality. 🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 04:07
arqios said:
A very romantic view of life and it’s challenges. Don Quixote’s windmill giants are a far cry from this reality. 🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 04:07
BOXING BOOTH
arqios said:
A vivid tale as well as a metaphorical treatise in the circus of life, taking blows but always a sideshow… how much is the value of a life where life is meant to be of highest value!?
February 17th, 2025 05:24
arqios said:
A vivid tale as well as a metaphorical treatise in the circus of life, taking blows but always a sideshow… how much is the value of a life where life is meant to be of highest value!?
February 17th, 2025 05:24
BOXING BOOTH
sorenbarrett said:
In the literal memory loss and Parkinson\'s disease in the metaphorical more serious still. A wonderful write with great short lines like punches and careful wording delivering each blow
February 17th, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
In the literal memory loss and Parkinson\'s disease in the metaphorical more serious still. A wonderful write with great short lines like punches and careful wording delivering each blow
February 17th, 2025 04:50
OLD SOLDIER
sorenbarrett said:
This poem makes clear the devastation of war and the question that occurs to survivors. Well written and heartfelt
February 16th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
This poem makes clear the devastation of war and the question that occurs to survivors. Well written and heartfelt
February 16th, 2025 04:20
OLD SOLDIER
arqios said:
It’s tough all around for the soldiering kind. Thanks for giving voice to this 🙏🏻🕊️
February 16th, 2025 04:01
arqios said:
It’s tough all around for the soldiering kind. Thanks for giving voice to this 🙏🏻🕊️
February 16th, 2025 04:01
STRANGER
RSM0812 said:
Really good read. Great rhym scheme. I really liked this one.
February 15th, 2025 14:38
RSM0812 said:
Really good read. Great rhym scheme. I really liked this one.
February 15th, 2025 14:38
WINTER SKY
RSM0812 said:
This is awesome. I really like the short stanza style and rhyming patterns. Tells the story with great imagery also. \"Upon first kiss, of winter sky\". Very pretty to imagine.
February 15th, 2025 10:42
RSM0812 said:
This is awesome. I really like the short stanza style and rhyming patterns. Tells the story with great imagery also. \"Upon first kiss, of winter sky\". Very pretty to imagine.
February 15th, 2025 10:42
ECHO
sorenbarrett said:
An image that had not occurred to me, love that burnt an echo. Very poetic and evokes several vivid images. The poem flows well and is a pleasurable read.
February 15th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
An image that had not occurred to me, love that burnt an echo. Very poetic and evokes several vivid images. The poem flows well and is a pleasurable read.
February 15th, 2025 04:34
ECHO
Poetic Licence said:
This read has a lovely flow as you read it, enjoyed
February 15th, 2025 03:22
Poetic Licence said:
This read has a lovely flow as you read it, enjoyed
February 15th, 2025 03:22
GABRIEL
arqios said:
If it’s the message announced that is needed, then Gabriel is the one to be heeded!
February 14th, 2025 07:42
arqios said:
If it’s the message announced that is needed, then Gabriel is the one to be heeded!
February 14th, 2025 07:42
GABRIEL
Poetic Licence said:
Has a lovely feeling as you read through, enjoyed the read
February 14th, 2025 05:28
Poetic Licence said:
Has a lovely feeling as you read through, enjoyed the read
February 14th, 2025 05:28
GABRIEL
sorenbarrett said:
Such a rocking rhythm to this poem the meter rolls on and on carrying the reader to the end; Very nicely done
February 14th, 2025 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
Such a rocking rhythm to this poem the meter rolls on and on carrying the reader to the end; Very nicely done
February 14th, 2025 05:04
HUMBLE
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written this poem flowes off the tongue easily. Very nice
February 13th, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written this poem flowes off the tongue easily. Very nice
February 13th, 2025 03:54
SNIPPET
Poetic Licence said:
We have become a throw away society and do not value anything anymore including people, and it is very sad it has become like this. The write makes it`s points very well, enjoyed the read.
February 12th, 2025 06:01
Poetic Licence said:
We have become a throw away society and do not value anything anymore including people, and it is very sad it has become like this. The write makes it`s points very well, enjoyed the read.
February 12th, 2025 06:01
SNIPPET
arqios said:
Nan used to tell us that a story as such used to go on for half a year or so, then later slips into town legend. Now it is so common that we have been desensitised. 🙏🏻🕊
February 12th, 2025 05:45
arqios said:
Nan used to tell us that a story as such used to go on for half a year or so, then later slips into town legend. Now it is so common that we have been desensitised. 🙏🏻🕊
February 12th, 2025 05:45
SNIPPET
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor the paper with the notice used to wrap up a meal then to be discarded just as the memory of a life. Casual and calloused we go on with our lives what was once someone\'s treasure is now our trash. A powerful write
February 12th, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor the paper with the notice used to wrap up a meal then to be discarded just as the memory of a life. Casual and calloused we go on with our lives what was once someone\'s treasure is now our trash. A powerful write
February 12th, 2025 04:37
NECESSARY FOR ECONOMIC GROWTH
sorenbarrett said:
Tis true that eliminating the weak, old and disabled is a cost savings but on the other side of the scale a heavy cost. Nicely written
February 11th, 2025 08:49
sorenbarrett said:
Tis true that eliminating the weak, old and disabled is a cost savings but on the other side of the scale a heavy cost. Nicely written
February 11th, 2025 08:49
NECESSARY FOR ECONOMIC GROWTH
arqios said:
Wow a tough (subject matter and tone) but moving read. A pleasure as always 🙏🏻🕊️
February 11th, 2025 05:24
arqios said:
Wow a tough (subject matter and tone) but moving read. A pleasure as always 🙏🏻🕊️
February 11th, 2025 05:24
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