Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
SUMMER HAZE
arqios said:
Very relatable and moving! How some people seem to vanish and leave the heart wanting and longing. 🙏🏻🕊
January 13th, 2025 06:56
arqios said:
Very relatable and moving! How some people seem to vanish and leave the heart wanting and longing. 🙏🏻🕊
January 13th, 2025 06:56
SUMMER HAZE
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of longing for what has gone and i feel a sense of wondering why, a touching and sensitive write
January 13th, 2025 05:52
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of longing for what has gone and i feel a sense of wondering why, a touching and sensitive write
January 13th, 2025 05:52
SUMMER HAZE
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting in feel aswell as longing. It reads with an unfinished ending and this is as it should be. A most delicate and fragil wirte the leaves a broken feeling. Lovely
January 13th, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting in feel aswell as longing. It reads with an unfinished ending and this is as it should be. A most delicate and fragil wirte the leaves a broken feeling. Lovely
January 13th, 2025 04:51
STREETLIGHT
Poetic Licence said:
Has a lovely feel to the writing, enjoyed the read
January 12th, 2025 05:34
Poetic Licence said:
Has a lovely feel to the writing, enjoyed the read
January 12th, 2025 05:34
STREETLIGHT
arqios said:
Liking the shape of this poem and the contemplative and atmospheric feel, almost like an embrace. Thanks for sharing. 👍🕊️
January 12th, 2025 05:00
arqios said:
Liking the shape of this poem and the contemplative and atmospheric feel, almost like an embrace. Thanks for sharing. 👍🕊️
January 12th, 2025 05:00
STREETLIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
You have set the scene well and I feel that I have been there, in fact am sure I have. I feel that I am there now and from here were do I proceed? Nicely written
January 12th, 2025 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
You have set the scene well and I feel that I have been there, in fact am sure I have. I feel that I am there now and from here were do I proceed? Nicely written
January 12th, 2025 04:53
JIM
arqios said:
Brings it home for me. Many of my relatives served at the frontlines in all the conflicts that I know of, from WWI to the present. It’s tough for their families as well, if they don’t turn their backs on them. Thanks for sharing.
January 11th, 2025 07:50
arqios said:
Brings it home for me. Many of my relatives served at the frontlines in all the conflicts that I know of, from WWI to the present. It’s tough for their families as well, if they don’t turn their backs on them. Thanks for sharing.
January 11th, 2025 07:50
JIM
sorenbarrett said:
Post traumatic stress disorder from trauma lived is a devastating and debilitating disability. Here you paint the picture well.
January 11th, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
Post traumatic stress disorder from trauma lived is a devastating and debilitating disability. Here you paint the picture well.
January 11th, 2025 05:09
JIM
Poetic Licence said:
This gives me the impression it is a haunting and touch poem of the ongoing struggles of a Ex Soldier, reliving all the nightmares he has seen in real life. Well written
January 11th, 2025 05:00
Poetic Licence said:
This gives me the impression it is a haunting and touch poem of the ongoing struggles of a Ex Soldier, reliving all the nightmares he has seen in real life. Well written
January 11th, 2025 05:00
LOVE DYING
arqios said:
No matter how much we prepare and anticipate, it strikes just as heavily. 🙏🏻🕊
January 10th, 2025 07:29
arqios said:
No matter how much we prepare and anticipate, it strikes just as heavily. 🙏🏻🕊
January 10th, 2025 07:29
LOVE DYING
sorenbarrett said:
The wording and lack of punctuation in this verse leave it open to various interpretations. Most lovely
January 10th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
The wording and lack of punctuation in this verse leave it open to various interpretations. Most lovely
January 10th, 2025 04:42
LOVE DYING
Poetic Licence said:
And through life we probably rehearse it a few times, enjoyed the read
January 10th, 2025 04:23
Poetic Licence said:
And through life we probably rehearse it a few times, enjoyed the read
January 10th, 2025 04:23
MY DAD
RSM0812 said:
We keep the souls alive of the dead by simply remembering them. Losing a father must be hard. I enjoyed the write a lot.
January 9th, 2025 07:40
RSM0812 said:
We keep the souls alive of the dead by simply remembering them. Losing a father must be hard. I enjoyed the write a lot.
January 9th, 2025 07:40
MY DAD
sorenbarrett said:
Love can grow over the years as our understanding grows as well. A truely sensitive write in such good poetic form
January 9th, 2025 06:08
sorenbarrett said:
Love can grow over the years as our understanding grows as well. A truely sensitive write in such good poetic form
January 9th, 2025 06:08
MY DAD
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of the maturing of love and the missing of their father, beautifully written
January 9th, 2025 03:00
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of the maturing of love and the missing of their father, beautifully written
January 9th, 2025 03:00
MY DAD
arqios said:
Beautiful, heart rending in the same breath inspiring. Growing and maturing love is the best of its kind! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 9th, 2025 02:57
arqios said:
Beautiful, heart rending in the same breath inspiring. Growing and maturing love is the best of its kind! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 9th, 2025 02:57
WINTER SKY
Poetic Licence said:
That is a beautifully written poem that makes you feel warm and happy, really enjoyed the read
January 8th, 2025 10:09
Poetic Licence said:
That is a beautifully written poem that makes you feel warm and happy, really enjoyed the read
January 8th, 2025 10:09
WINTER SKY
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the stanza
\"As infants dream
Such wondrous dreams
Old men in memory
Thoughts are streamed.\"
A most beautiful poem
January 8th, 2025 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the stanza
\"As infants dream
Such wondrous dreams
Old men in memory
Thoughts are streamed.\"
A most beautiful poem
January 8th, 2025 09:40
WINTER SKY
arqios said:
Now that is a poem that nature sings. Liked and Faved! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 8th, 2025 07:20
arqios said:
Now that is a poem that nature sings. Liked and Faved! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 8th, 2025 07:20
FOODBANKS
Poetic Licence said:
I appreciate that for many thousands they have become a life line, but The answer i feel is clearly No to caring and i feel society does not either, if we looked out for each other like we used to, there would be no where the need there is for the foodbanks. Though provoking read.
January 7th, 2025 08:29
Poetic Licence said:
I appreciate that for many thousands they have become a life line, but The answer i feel is clearly No to caring and i feel society does not either, if we looked out for each other like we used to, there would be no where the need there is for the foodbanks. Though provoking read.
January 7th, 2025 08:29
FOODBANKS
sorenbarrett said:
No it doesn\'t is the answer. But the people should care and do something about it by helping those we know first and those we don\'t next. A sad comentary on society not just today but always.
January 7th, 2025 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
No it doesn\'t is the answer. But the people should care and do something about it by helping those we know first and those we don\'t next. A sad comentary on society not just today but always.
January 7th, 2025 06:06
FOODBANKS
arqios said:
I used to be embarrassed as well. The food banks we have were we live are government subsidised. A concession card is given out at assigned government agencies and used at quite a few establishments, a big help not only to the destitute but also to the pensioners, disabled and other categories of the demographic. It isn’t much, really; but something in the meantime. I’m not aware how it works in other places.
January 7th, 2025 06:05
arqios said:
I used to be embarrassed as well. The food banks we have were we live are government subsidised. A concession card is given out at assigned government agencies and used at quite a few establishments, a big help not only to the destitute but also to the pensioners, disabled and other categories of the demographic. It isn’t much, really; but something in the meantime. I’m not aware how it works in other places.
January 7th, 2025 06:05
UNKNOWN VICTIM
Poetic Licence said:
A short piece but powerfully written of bravery and pride, and standing for what they believe in, Enjoyed the read
January 5th, 2025 10:13
Poetic Licence said:
A short piece but powerfully written of bravery and pride, and standing for what they believe in, Enjoyed the read
January 5th, 2025 10:13
UNKNOWN VICTIM
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of courage and pride well worded in a most classical sense that gives it strength and power. Very nice
January 5th, 2025 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of courage and pride well worded in a most classical sense that gives it strength and power. Very nice
January 5th, 2025 09:41
UNKNOWN VICTIM
arqios said:
I believe many will be just so if and when that time comes.
January 5th, 2025 08:00
arqios said:
I believe many will be just so if and when that time comes.
January 5th, 2025 08:00
DARK HEART
Cassie58 said:
Knowing something is right, does not ease the pain of loss. Poignantly penned stanzas. Well done.
January 4th, 2025 22:44
Cassie58 said:
Knowing something is right, does not ease the pain of loss. Poignantly penned stanzas. Well done.
January 4th, 2025 22:44
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