Comments received on poems by nephilim56



FOODBANKS
sorenbarrett said:

No it doesn\'t is the answer. But the people should care and do something about it by helping those we know first and those we don\'t next. A sad comentary on society not just today but always.

January 7th, 2025 06:06

FOODBANKS
arqios said:

I used to be embarrassed as well. The food banks we have were we live are government subsidised. A concession card is given out at assigned government agencies and used at quite a few establishments, a big help not only to the destitute but also to the pensioners, disabled and other categories of the demographic. It isn’t much, really; but something in the meantime. I’m not aware how it works in other places.

January 7th, 2025 06:05

UNKNOWN VICTIM
Poetic Licence said:

A short piece but powerfully written of bravery and pride, and standing for what they believe in, Enjoyed the read

January 5th, 2025 10:13

UNKNOWN VICTIM
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of courage and pride well worded in a most classical sense that gives it strength and power. Very nice

January 5th, 2025 09:41

UNKNOWN VICTIM
arqios said:

I believe many will be just so if and when that time comes.

January 5th, 2025 08:00

DARK HEART
Cassie58 said:

Knowing something is right, does not ease the pain of loss. Poignantly penned stanzas. Well done.

January 4th, 2025 22:44

DARK HEART
sorenbarrett said:

Loss although painful can be for the best although this is often not seen until much later and sometimes not at all

January 4th, 2025 15:23

DARK HEART
Poetic Licence said:

The painful losing of a love, you can sense the loss and pain in the writing.

January 4th, 2025 14:06

DARK HEART
rin said:

I can gradually feel the sense of loss.

January 4th, 2025 13:02

THE MAN AT NUMBER 6
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

January 2nd, 2025 10:25

THE MAN AT NUMBER 6
Poetic Licence said:

I think it`s a good thing he has the will to want to stay on, but sadly death is the only thing we can be certain of, enjoyed the read.

January 2nd, 2025 09:39

THE MAN AT NUMBER 6
arqios said:

Tears enough to cry… that is so touching… just like travelling, we want to have enough fuel for that extra mile… must recede and contemplate…

January 2nd, 2025 08:37

THE MAN AT NUMBER 6
sorenbarrett said:

Life is precious when it comes to an end. Just one more ride is the cry. But death is certain to all and we must go when it calls. A thought provoking poem

January 2nd, 2025 08:18

DREAM
sorenbarrett said:

So beautifully worded this poem is ethereal and a bit haunting it drifts through the mind like a soft fog exposing and hiding feelings and meaning that disappear and reappear as ghosts

December 31st, 2024 07:06

THE LONELY WOMAN
arqios said:

A vivid picture of loneliness and isolation and the gripping sorrow that accompanies. Thanks for sharing. 👍

December 31st, 2024 01:28

THE LONELY WOMAN
arqios said:

This one sends me reeling! Keep’em coming.

December 30th, 2024 21:32

THE LONELY WOMAN
Poetic Licence said:

A haunting and touching poem on the reflection of loneliness and how in time because you only have memories, they gradually imprison you, well written

December 30th, 2024 04:23

THE LONELY WOMAN
Michael Edwards said:

Wow - packs a great punch.

December 30th, 2024 02:53

SEPARATE ROADS
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 29th, 2024 10:52

SEPARATE ROADS
arqios said:

Some youthful connections don’t ever go away! The pangs and reminiscing is real. Thanks for sharing. 🙏🏻

December 29th, 2024 05:27

SEPARATE ROADS
Poetic Licence said:

A reflection on loving days gone by and that love might still be shining, enjoyed the read.

December 29th, 2024 04:31

UK AUSTERITY
Lorenz said:

I tested the british health care system for several years .

December 28th, 2024 14:19

UK AUSTERITY
Poetic Licence said:

Sadly this a part of our current life and at the moment i cannot see an end, nicely worded

December 28th, 2024 06:06

MIDNIGHT ANGEL
Poetic Licence said:

A beautiful written poem and enjoyable read

December 27th, 2024 17:49

MIDNIGHT ANGEL
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

December 27th, 2024 17:39

MIDNIGHT ANGEL
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful picture painted by this poem. Great images and very nice rhyme as well

December 27th, 2024 14:30

CHRISTMAS EVE
NafisaSB said:

you have captured the cruelty of the world that often ignores the poor and homeless suffering in the vicinity while the world talks of charity and goodwill.
wonderful piece - wish you a merry X\'mas

December 26th, 2024 02:12

CHRISTMAS EVE
Shahla Latifi said:

As the modern age progresses, we can openly see human unkindness in the layers of fakeness within civilisation.
Thank you for this truthful piece.

December 20th, 2024 10:15

CHRISTMAS EVE
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

December 19th, 2024 10:32

CHRISTMAS EVE
Tristan Robert Lange said:

💯 True. Thank you for being a voice for the voiceless! This poem bears the TRUE Christmas...and HUMAN...spirit! 🌹👏 This is the Matthew 25 kind of Christmas we are supposed to be focusing on...year round!

December 19th, 2024 07:42



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