Comments received on poems by Addy



My Legacy
L. B. Mek said:

Beautiful, a lovely read
thanks for sharing, dear poet

March 10th, 2023 03:53

River
2781 said:

I\'ll 2nd that.

March 8th, 2023 05:40

River
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!

March 8th, 2023 04:31

Painting
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Addy, I can find many things when looking at and into paintings and I have seen so many in my time.

Andy

February 27th, 2023 01:12

Painting
Doggerel Dave said:

Some paintings....

February 26th, 2023 19:41

One sided
VenneKing said:

Great work Addy! I guess you found your inspiration.


February 26th, 2023 13:27

Leave me
Myth said:

Nice .. seems like a love epic..

February 26th, 2023 13:13

Puppet Master
sweetwords said:

I could feel your words, absolutely love this!

February 26th, 2023 13:11

One sided
rhmn_7 said:

Oh that one person that comes into your life and changes your whole view of it.

February 26th, 2023 07:57

One sided
Goldfinch60 said:

True love will come your way Addy.

Andy

February 26th, 2023 02:47

One sided
2781 said:

Probably for the best x

February 25th, 2023 06:50

My Legacy
Dhiman Shah said:

Just loved it.

February 25th, 2023 06:44

One sided
Dhiman Shah said:

Nicely written poem, loved it.

February 25th, 2023 06:43

Puppet Master
ModernPoemLover said:

Hiya, I really enjoyed the rawness of this poem, thank you for sharing it :)

February 24th, 2023 11:05

Puppet Master
2781 said:

Or maybe you do.

February 24th, 2023 07:41

Puppet Master
2781 said:

You don\'t write like a 17 year old.

February 24th, 2023 07:39

Grim reaper
Doggerel Dave said:

Not too keen on your Grim Reaper my self.....probably just a matter of taste...LOL!

\"just started out and am exploring my style as a poet.\"
Try this for size (I don\'t think you need all of it, but if some little hint makes sense, it was worth the effort):

https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-155194

February 20th, 2023 18:58

Grim reaper
2781 said:

Will it make an agreement with you for you to take it as your slave for life?

February 20th, 2023 09:14

Gates of heaven
Natalie Gladmir said:

\"No longer can we keep evil at bay...\"
This line is very reproachful. If people can no longer hold back evil, then who can do it? All people of good will are simply obliged to do this so that the world becomes kinder. Thank you. Your poem is addressed to hard-hearted and brutal humanity.
Let them think about it!

February 19th, 2023 15:21

Leave me
Neville said:


it happens and you told about it well :)

February 19th, 2023 03:29

Her Beating Heart
Neville said:


remind me never to go on vacation when she\'s having a bad day at the office .. I kinda enjoyed the tale you told here Addy ... Neville

February 19th, 2023 03:28

Leave me
Mara \"Marzipan\" said:

This is woefully beautiful. You set the mood alone with the title, but your the last line of your first stanza gives the imagery of it. Excellent piece, great job.

February 15th, 2023 11:46

Where the monsters hide
L. B. Mek said:

so true!
thanks for sharing

February 10th, 2023 06:38

Where the monsters hide
undreamed_friend said:

Well written. The poem has so deep meaning. With time people change.

February 10th, 2023 02:54

I love you
L. B. Mek said:

good write, wonderful passion
thanks for sharing

January 9th, 2023 04:17