Comments received on poems by Norman Flagtea
Three senryus about the state of he world - June 11, 2025
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sad, scary, true. Well done on these. πΉπ
June 21st, 2025 05:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sad, scary, true. Well done on these. πΉπ
June 21st, 2025 05:59
Three senryus about the state of he world - June 11, 2025
nephilim56 said:
a powerful peace with a message of great injustice
June 20th, 2025 03:29
nephilim56 said:
a powerful peace with a message of great injustice
June 20th, 2025 03:29
Three senryus about the state of he world - June 11, 2025
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely written writes if the barbaric actions going on in today\'s world,
June 19th, 2025 22:44
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely written writes if the barbaric actions going on in today\'s world,
June 19th, 2025 22:44
Three senryus about the state of he world - June 11, 2025
arqios said:
One could but sigh at times like these
June 19th, 2025 18:31
arqios said:
One could but sigh at times like these
June 19th, 2025 18:31
Three senryus about the state of he world - June 11, 2025
sorenbarrett said:
Senryu after senryu of barbarous acts in a savage world. Well written
June 19th, 2025 17:58
sorenbarrett said:
Senryu after senryu of barbarous acts in a savage world. Well written
June 19th, 2025 17:58
The poet\'s lament
arqios said:
Had it senses
what had fallen
surely felt it!
ππ»ποΈ
June 18th, 2025 17:32
arqios said:
Had it senses
what had fallen
surely felt it!
ππ»ποΈ
June 18th, 2025 17:32
The poet\'s lament
sorenbarrett said:
Short and I have felt that way before when I wrote,. Usually it is the whole Idea that is lost. Well said
June 18th, 2025 13:05
sorenbarrett said:
Short and I have felt that way before when I wrote,. Usually it is the whole Idea that is lost. Well said
June 18th, 2025 13:05
Haiku # 3
jarcher54 said:
Interesting how a few lines can create a whole imagined scene for the reader... I see thousands of tired dirty scarred warriors drop their shields in a pile and begin to trudge home to their fields and families.
October 26th, 2023 02:51
jarcher54 said:
Interesting how a few lines can create a whole imagined scene for the reader... I see thousands of tired dirty scarred warriors drop their shields in a pile and begin to trudge home to their fields and families.
October 26th, 2023 02:51
Haiku # 3
Teddy.15 said:
One can hope. although it\'s actually a senryu simply because it focuses on emotion rather than imagery just to help you. Haiku is about nature and imagery of nature. β€οΈ in any case a lovely thought
October 26th, 2023 00:50
Teddy.15 said:
One can hope. although it\'s actually a senryu simply because it focuses on emotion rather than imagery just to help you. Haiku is about nature and imagery of nature. β€οΈ in any case a lovely thought
October 26th, 2023 00:50
fly by night (from the cycle NIGHTS)
Thomas W Case said:
Well done. Very atmospheric. Great poem.
October 24th, 2023 16:02
Thomas W Case said:
Well done. Very atmospheric. Great poem.
October 24th, 2023 16:02
Advice for night hawks ( From the cycle NIGHTS)
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent. I like the flow.
October 17th, 2023 04:54
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent. I like the flow.
October 17th, 2023 04:54
Advice for night hawks ( From the cycle NIGHTS)
Parisab said:
An important βto doβ list to follow! Reads with ease but in an orderly fashion. Thanks for the write! Interestingly I have published one of those βletters to Godβ on my page here.
October 16th, 2023 16:38
Parisab said:
An important βto doβ list to follow! Reads with ease but in an orderly fashion. Thanks for the write! Interestingly I have published one of those βletters to Godβ on my page here.
October 16th, 2023 16:38
Leave me alone
Doggerel Dave said:
Nice one! You have nailed the kind of trepidation I and others feel about the onward march of AI. It is going to take time to work this one out....
April 27th, 2023 19:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Nice one! You have nailed the kind of trepidation I and others feel about the onward march of AI. It is going to take time to work this one out....
April 27th, 2023 19:10
Chances are
L. B. Mek said:
an important and timely write
and sadly, i too can relate
that debilitating, curse
of endless uncertainty..
(so many people i\'ve met and known
scarred by frown lines
worrying for the fate
of a beloved or friend
cancer plagued
whose\' been told.....
yet again)
April 14th, 2023 03:29
L. B. Mek said:
an important and timely write
and sadly, i too can relate
that debilitating, curse
of endless uncertainty..
(so many people i\'ve met and known
scarred by frown lines
worrying for the fate
of a beloved or friend
cancer plagued
whose\' been told.....
yet again)
April 14th, 2023 03:29
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