Comments received on poems by Norman Flagtea
America
charles69 said:
I liked this brief poem; read it several times. I think it is a fine example of the \"slice of life\" or \"snapshot\" form of literature, like that of earlier modern poets. Hope to see others soon.
February 26th, 2023 18:57
charles69 said:
I liked this brief poem; read it several times. I think it is a fine example of the \"slice of life\" or \"snapshot\" form of literature, like that of earlier modern poets. Hope to see others soon.
February 26th, 2023 18:57
The Suffolk Coast
Neville said:
You just nailed it ..
and in doing so, you also reminded me why I fell in love with poetry .. brill and I aint talking fish ... :)
February 25th, 2023 06:54
Neville said:
You just nailed it ..
and in doing so, you also reminded me why I fell in love with poetry .. brill and I aint talking fish ... :)
February 25th, 2023 06:54
The Suffolk Coast
L. B. Mek said:
I love write\'s like this, thanks for sharing
(a sombre ode
to our beloved blighty\'s
dispiritingly, deserted
coastlines:
\'What remains
is the click, click, click
of the pebbles
in the shallow waters\')
February 24th, 2023 06:33
L. B. Mek said:
I love write\'s like this, thanks for sharing
(a sombre ode
to our beloved blighty\'s
dispiritingly, deserted
coastlines:
\'What remains
is the click, click, click
of the pebbles
in the shallow waters\')
February 24th, 2023 06:33
Some day
Norman Flagtea said:
I meant this poem to have an open ending. Obviously the writer of the letter (male? female?) knew the recipient well many years ago. How does he/she feel about it? Does he/she like to be reminded of the past? Is he/ she glad about the letter? Will he/ she answer, even try to meet again? How would you feel? How would you react?
February 23rd, 2023 16:36
Norman Flagtea said:
I meant this poem to have an open ending. Obviously the writer of the letter (male? female?) knew the recipient well many years ago. How does he/she feel about it? Does he/she like to be reminded of the past? Is he/ she glad about the letter? Will he/ she answer, even try to meet again? How would you feel? How would you react?
February 23rd, 2023 16:36
Some day
David Wakeling said:
This is unfinished and frankly has no meaning.The reader is completely ignored
February 23rd, 2023 02:40
David Wakeling said:
This is unfinished and frankly has no meaning.The reader is completely ignored
February 23rd, 2023 02:40
Don\'t trust residential streets
L. B. Mek said:
so unique, exemplary
art as our validation of quirky
such a tongue twister
to read out loud, thank you!
dear Poet
February 20th, 2023 05:22
L. B. Mek said:
so unique, exemplary
art as our validation of quirky
such a tongue twister
to read out loud, thank you!
dear Poet
February 20th, 2023 05:22
Don\'t trust residential streets
Doggerel Dave said:
I know this is humorous, but haven\'t enough knowledge of the culture to figure it all out.
Any chance of an explanation?
February 20th, 2023 03:56
Doggerel Dave said:
I know this is humorous, but haven\'t enough knowledge of the culture to figure it all out.
Any chance of an explanation?
February 20th, 2023 03:56
Sitting with others
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful!
a snapshot of innocence
of untainted hope
what a lovely way to utilise your art
(thanks for sharing, dear poet)
February 17th, 2023 04:31
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful!
a snapshot of innocence
of untainted hope
what a lovely way to utilise your art
(thanks for sharing, dear poet)
February 17th, 2023 04:31
Mother Goose
jarcher54 said:
I like how you built this... it is full of suggestion and hints at lives and stories and loves and tragedies. Very witty.
February 7th, 2023 23:11
jarcher54 said:
I like how you built this... it is full of suggestion and hints at lives and stories and loves and tragedies. Very witty.
February 7th, 2023 23:11
Waiting room
jarcher54 said:
This is delightful. A witty and imaginative piece, full of respect, bittersweet sentimentality, and deep humanity.
February 7th, 2023 23:08
jarcher54 said:
This is delightful. A witty and imaginative piece, full of respect, bittersweet sentimentality, and deep humanity.
February 7th, 2023 23:08
The human condition
Mase ♪ said:
Such Little Words, Can Have Such BIG Meaning\'s. a Pictures Worth A Thousand Words.
January 30th, 2023 18:14
Mase ♪ said:
Such Little Words, Can Have Such BIG Meaning\'s. a Pictures Worth A Thousand Words.
January 30th, 2023 18:14
Experience
Mase ♪ said:
Wow, Very Intresting As Well As Impressive, Thanks Norman. -M. C. Vollmann
January 30th, 2023 18:13
Mase ♪ said:
Wow, Very Intresting As Well As Impressive, Thanks Norman. -M. C. Vollmann
January 30th, 2023 18:13
The human condition
amepiesces said:
few lines that carry the burden of this world\'s reality...
January 30th, 2023 06:03
amepiesces said:
few lines that carry the burden of this world\'s reality...
January 30th, 2023 06:03
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