Comments received on poems by NewWolf
\"In My Feelings\"
L. B. Mek said:
lovelorn, forsaken poetic refrain
with hope as anchors
to those electric storm waves
lightning, as seed
and thunder, as soundtrack
to those breakup scenes
\'Why so entuned with these emotions that tend to annoy?
The same emotions that dictate there\'s life in me.
Announcing that over here is love and good energy.\'
this that tidal storm of waning
romance
(such a decisive poetic voice
a relatable theme, great read)
thank you!
June 9th, 2023 04:33
L. B. Mek said:
lovelorn, forsaken poetic refrain
with hope as anchors
to those electric storm waves
lightning, as seed
and thunder, as soundtrack
to those breakup scenes
\'Why so entuned with these emotions that tend to annoy?
The same emotions that dictate there\'s life in me.
Announcing that over here is love and good energy.\'
this that tidal storm of waning
romance
(such a decisive poetic voice
a relatable theme, great read)
thank you!
June 9th, 2023 04:33
Silence Kills
David Wakeling said:
Silence is golden except when women are involved.
March 14th, 2023 05:19
David Wakeling said:
Silence is golden except when women are involved.
March 14th, 2023 05:19
Complaining Love
L. B. Mek said:
(I so relate,
happy poems take all we\'ve got! to pen
lol)
\'Am I To be picked up once more with unselfish hands.\'
we\'re all left waiting, for that mercy
where kindness\', visits us
affording us a sample of normality
we\'ve come to believe
as being something fantastic, a mirage
our of reach for the likes of us...
(a great questing write
worded so accessibly, relatable
thanks for sharing, kind Poet)
March 13th, 2023 03:05
L. B. Mek said:
(I so relate,
happy poems take all we\'ve got! to pen
lol)
\'Am I To be picked up once more with unselfish hands.\'
we\'re all left waiting, for that mercy
where kindness\', visits us
affording us a sample of normality
we\'ve come to believe
as being something fantastic, a mirage
our of reach for the likes of us...
(a great questing write
worded so accessibly, relatable
thanks for sharing, kind Poet)
March 13th, 2023 03:05
Her Laugh
L. B. Mek said:
sometimes, all we can do
is let it go
the more we contemplate
the deeper the gangrene of hurt
takes hold
till all we are is a bitter husk
of what we once were...
thanks for sharing
sorry for your pain, stay strong!
March 10th, 2023 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
sometimes, all we can do
is let it go
the more we contemplate
the deeper the gangrene of hurt
takes hold
till all we are is a bitter husk
of what we once were...
thanks for sharing
sorry for your pain, stay strong!
March 10th, 2023 04:51
Untold Tellings
Eileen Clark said:
Hi, this is a beautiful piece of work, so well written it held my attention to the very end. The hurt feelings are put right out there for everyone reading it to also feel.
February 18th, 2023 15:36
Eileen Clark said:
Hi, this is a beautiful piece of work, so well written it held my attention to the very end. The hurt feelings are put right out there for everyone reading it to also feel.
February 18th, 2023 15:36
Listen Love
L. B. Mek said:
this is so impassioned, dear Poet
I\'m picturing a scene
with a waterfall of tears and mucus
a last throw of the dice
no curtains to a heart\'s desperation
(it\'s sad, to think
few people get to experience
such an overwhelming type of love
so many of us, choose to be reserved
committing only what we can afford to lose
and in so-doing, missing out
on one of life\'s, immeasurable wonder\'s)
\'Soak the aura out of the gesture to refill it with pain.\'
what a great line this is!
February 10th, 2023 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
this is so impassioned, dear Poet
I\'m picturing a scene
with a waterfall of tears and mucus
a last throw of the dice
no curtains to a heart\'s desperation
(it\'s sad, to think
few people get to experience
such an overwhelming type of love
so many of us, choose to be reserved
committing only what we can afford to lose
and in so-doing, missing out
on one of life\'s, immeasurable wonder\'s)
\'Soak the aura out of the gesture to refill it with pain.\'
what a great line this is!
February 10th, 2023 04:51
Lovely Opinion
L. B. Mek said:
\'Love is Internal, a flask for all their good, all their bad.
The towel to soak up anger where no one can stay mad.\'
how raw and real you\'ve worded love
really insightful, a great read
thanks for sharing dear Poet
February 10th, 2023 04:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'Love is Internal, a flask for all their good, all their bad.
The towel to soak up anger where no one can stay mad.\'
how raw and real you\'ve worded love
really insightful, a great read
thanks for sharing dear Poet
February 10th, 2023 04:41
Alone, alone.
jarcher54 said:
Well-wrought meditation on the mystery of how to make \"us\" back into \"we.\"
February 7th, 2023 09:54
jarcher54 said:
Well-wrought meditation on the mystery of how to make \"us\" back into \"we.\"
February 7th, 2023 09:54
Alone, alone.
Natalie Gladmir said:
\"How do I approach a Lioness in her element and not be the meat?\"
Liked this line. I understand you had a big quarrel. Do you know that the development of relationships is not a “prosperous swamp”, where there is peace and quiet and God\'s grace. No. Through hardship to the stars. As psychologists say, quarrels are the engine of progress in couples. Everything will be alright!
February 2nd, 2023 06:21
Natalie Gladmir said:
\"How do I approach a Lioness in her element and not be the meat?\"
Liked this line. I understand you had a big quarrel. Do you know that the development of relationships is not a “prosperous swamp”, where there is peace and quiet and God\'s grace. No. Through hardship to the stars. As psychologists say, quarrels are the engine of progress in couples. Everything will be alright!
February 2nd, 2023 06:21
Alone, alone.
L. B. Mek said:
\'Alone in my alone\'
Brilliant!!!
I simply bow to your superior poetic talent.
It is a privilege to read your Art, thank you!
January 30th, 2023 05:08
L. B. Mek said:
\'Alone in my alone\'
Brilliant!!!
I simply bow to your superior poetic talent.
It is a privilege to read your Art, thank you!
January 30th, 2023 05:08
