Comments received on poems by 2781



Bread
2781 said:

Flakes?

July 1st, 2023 17:36

Bread
orchidee said:

This joke from me is too corny - Crumbs! That\'s a good poem 2781!

July 1st, 2023 13:06

At the cross
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

I have recently found my way back to God. This is very touching and beautifully written. So relatable to me!

June 30th, 2023 12:41

Civil
John Prophet said:

It was once said we’re all entitled to our opinions. Pushing back on those who say we are not. Great write!

June 30th, 2023 12:35

Civil
2781 said:

Yes, even if we don\'t agree we can find common ground to build on. Righteousness is righteous and is on the peoples side. History shows it always wins, in the end.
Thank you for visiting, you are a gem.

June 30th, 2023 06:39

Civil
L. B. Mek said:

amen!
(a \'righteousness\' with inclusivity
at its core, and
not merely a selection process
for like-minded mind\'s, only
excluding all
who disagree with what we deem
as ideal
rather promoting a oneness of civility
where we afford respect, to all...!)
in hope we entrust, dear poet

June 30th, 2023 05:34

Without You
Neville said:


just thought I would check to see where you are coming from .. I was not disappointed ..

June 30th, 2023 01:26

At the cross
orchidee said:

A sensitive write 2.
We had a song on that theme. But a \'mad musician\' ruined it, by hammering on a keyboard, and nearly broke it!

June 28th, 2023 01:51

Who
Kinsey Peterson said:

well done love- another piece to be proud of :)

June 27th, 2023 13:13

Submerged
Neville said:


either this is very apt and timely, or you are some kind of prophet and henceforth answer to the handle Nostradamus .. Neville

June 27th, 2023 07:32

Keep some cash
2781 said:

God help us when the lights go out!

June 27th, 2023 06:17

Keep some cash
sorenbarrett said:

Have been there and done that. It is too bad that cash like gold is going away. Plastic too will disappear. There is to much pressure from governments to control money and its flow to have such things anymore. Too bad.

June 27th, 2023 06:15

Keep some cash
Kinsey Peterson said:

i have always been the friend who has a jar of cash and pockets of coins... i know the feeling of digital stress all too well.

amazing poem darlin

June 26th, 2023 14:17

Keep some cash
peto said:

Gotta be holding the folding
I believe your prediction to be in the post
interesting

June 26th, 2023 10:48

Keep some cash
lostmoon said:

Lol that poem strikes so true

June 26th, 2023 08:08

Keep some cash
2781 said:

That\'s nothing- down here they ask for your credit card details.

June 26th, 2023 05:15

Keep some cash
2781 said:

Always out to upstage: My old church used to let people take money out of the bag! A risky gamble that paid off.

June 26th, 2023 05:14

Keep some cash
orchidee said:

Bit more - now the opposite is where some places pass round TWO \'hats\' in one service. Or even a bucket - such faith?! Or such greediness?!
Well, it\'s inflation, they may say. We\'ve moved from offertory plate to bucket now.

June 26th, 2023 05:13

Keep some cash
orchidee said:

Good write 2.
I fainted in a sermon. I was in shock. It said \'Keep enough cash for yourself; bit daft to give it all away, if you have none left afterwards\'.
A sermon where the church says KEEP some of your money? A rare occurrence. lol.
Yet there\'s the widow\'s mite story.... Hmmm.

June 26th, 2023 05:11

Keep some cash
L. B. Mek said:

cash and plastic
will soon be museum archaic
we\'re a generation away
from barcodes on our wrists
and chips, in our minds...
who knows, it may come to us
using cash to wipe out butts
the rate we\'re demolishing the trees
lol
I so relate, dear poet

June 26th, 2023 04:43

Gotta do
2781 said:

Thanks,
We don\'t need a lack of discernment!

June 24th, 2023 03:06

Gotta do
peto said:

An epic
Loved the rhythm especially
And the \"above or underground \" line is classic


June 24th, 2023 02:23

What\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'s all this
2781 said:

An oxymoron.

June 23rd, 2023 04:28

What\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'s all this
L. B. Mek said:

we should all do that we enjoy
its toxic to wade in waters we detest
hurts only ourselves...
shed comparisons n waging wars
to pass one more idle minute
after all
it\'s only ourselves we\'re fooling
only our time we\'re wasting
forcing a passion upon yourself
is such
a betrayal of your own, worth
a sad state, when that\'s the best
we think we deserve...

June 23rd, 2023 04:15

What\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'s all this
orchidee said:

I might know what poetry is, but not the foggiest of what an iambic pentameter is!

June 22nd, 2023 05:15

What happened
peto said:

Great content
And rhyme
Enjoyed this read

June 21st, 2023 10:27

What happened
orchidee said:

You not seen me for 20 years?! I never knew it was so long! lol.

June 21st, 2023 02:13

How long
BlessedbyGod said:

Love this!!! Creative and brilliant 👏
Keep it up my friend !!

June 19th, 2023 13:44

How long
orchidee said:

I got enough problem sharpening this blunt knife \'ere, let alone a sword! heehee.

June 19th, 2023 10:52

Does it?
arqios said:

A spoon? sceptre? dagger? chess piece? some structure this bears!

June 17th, 2023 09:25



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