Comments received on poems by 2781



Where is it
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:

To find it, you first must know what you are looking for.

May 21st, 2024 21:20

Where is it
David Wakeling said:

Fear of the Lord is worth millions.A powerful read.

May 21st, 2024 07:38

Where is it
Poetic Dan said:

I love where my brain took me on this! I\'ve searched for nothing but a reason to exist and now I\'ve stopped asking silly questions and just got on with it....

Ooo thanks for the inspiration I think I\'ll write something more to this lol

Have a wonderful day

May 21st, 2024 05:08

Where is it
orchidee said:

I thought ya was looking for your mislaid millions - where is it?!

May 21st, 2024 01:44

Judge
sorenbarrett said:

No I would never want to be a judge for it implies injustice or omnipotence. Nicely written

May 20th, 2024 05:33

Judge
2781 said:

Thanks, I am glad he brought it home!

May 20th, 2024 04:06

Judge
Alan R said:

The last four lines! Gorgeous

May 20th, 2024 04:01

Games
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words and question 2781, will we ever know who is right?

Andy

May 20th, 2024 01:25

Games
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work. Great flow and rhyme.

May 19th, 2024 14:53

Games
orchidee said:

I was The Birdman until I flew into a black hole! lol.

May 19th, 2024 05:03

Games
kering.karim said:

Puzzling is the question, sizzling in the dark, will there ever be light?

May 19th, 2024 04:51

Puzzle
Neville said:



sounds like a good kip is crucial

May 19th, 2024 02:03

Please
Neville said:



reads like a prayer

May 19th, 2024 01:53

Please
sorenbarrett said:

I feel in church somehow. Tomorrow is Sunday, am I Jewish? or seventh day Adventice? Good write.

May 18th, 2024 19:29

Please
2781 said:

Passover that one.

May 18th, 2024 08:31

Please
orchidee said:

I dunno what I do - I\'m sure it\'s Christmas next week! lol.

May 18th, 2024 01:21

Puzzle
Goldfinch60 said:

Once you awake from that sleep 2781 all wilbe in place again.

Andy

May 18th, 2024 00:57

Tentacles
Goldfinch60 said:

Indeed 2781, when will it end.

Andy

May 17th, 2024 01:13

Tentacles
Doggerel Dave said:

Good write - the structure and rhyme does it for me as does the message. But forget the \'we\' will ya......

May 16th, 2024 20:06

Tentacles
2781 said:

It a bizarre thing, evil kills evil.
He\'s very clever.

May 16th, 2024 09:19

Tentacles
orchidee said:

Yes, the Psalmists seems to \'rant\' in places. But evil has to be overcome for good to triumph.

May 16th, 2024 09:11

Tentacles
2781 said:

If we were to judge ourselves we wouldn\'t be judged.


May 16th, 2024 06:12

Tentacles
sorenbarrett said:

So it appears. When we look for the cause we only need to look in a mirror. A most poignant write done with power in rhyme

May 16th, 2024 06:10

Wimps
Neville said:



I suggest you get a new inbox and some disinfectant wipes

May 14th, 2024 09:52

Dilly-dally
Goldfinch60 said:

Dilly dally all the way 2781, we will make it in the end\'

Andy

May 14th, 2024 01:22

Dilly-dally
Thomas W Case said:

Good stuff. Relatable.

May 13th, 2024 10:40

Dilly-dally
2781 said:

Yes, and others that rhyme with it.....

May 13th, 2024 08:16

Dilly-dally
orchidee said:

A bit of procrasti-wotsit there. Oh, I can\'t say very long words. lol.

May 13th, 2024 07:47

Dilly-dally
sorenbarrett said:

Been there done that. I can feel this one as if it were a mirror and a reflection within. Putting off things I think we all do at times. A most fun read.

May 13th, 2024 03:56

Ten days
Neville said:


I stopped by because these words looked downcast and lonely

May 13th, 2024 02:42



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