Comments received on poems by 2781



Drunk
arqios said:

Winebibbing has always been a hilarious term…. Like baby whines and bibs. Not besmirching this poem though. And the Day is soon approaching.

November 15th, 2023 04:40

Drunk
Lorenz said:

you\'ll never drink alone !

November 15th, 2023 03:42

Drunk
orchidee said:

A finesh writesh I shay!
Notice the good acting dialogue there? Or have I had a gin or three?! heehee.

November 15th, 2023 02:51

Joy
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

November 14th, 2023 19:34

Saved
Hey! said:

Great writing!!

November 14th, 2023 18:53

Saved
orchidee said:

Now would this be the charismatic speaking in tongues?! Not a mystery if we understand it simply.

November 12th, 2023 11:01

I want
John Prophet said:

Was once called over generous. Go figure!

November 11th, 2023 19:34

I want
Bella Shepard said:

If we were all givers, then we would all be receivers in the best sense. What a wonderful thought you have expressed here. Loved it!

November 11th, 2023 15:03

I want
orchidee said:

I want to say good write 2.

November 11th, 2023 13:17

I want
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant thought.

November 11th, 2023 09:01

I want
Positive Girl said:

Great idea. I enjoyed your poem.

November 11th, 2023 08:43

The dove
arqios said:

Plovers and ibises also make for watching and waiting.

November 10th, 2023 06:48

The dove
orchidee said:

Good write 2.

November 10th, 2023 03:51

I know
arqios said:

The torture it appears attests to the fact of the need for mercy and the necessity of grace. Thanks for sharing!

November 7th, 2023 02:37

I know
Neville said:



if you have a clue to what is going on, I hope you feel able to share .. N

November 7th, 2023 02:12

I know
2781 said:

Lover of our soul.

November 7th, 2023 01:39

I know
NinjaGirl said:

So beautiful, very comforting!

November 6th, 2023 22:00

I know
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

Beautiful

November 6th, 2023 16:18

Mischief
Ma5on said:

2781,

razor sharp bite of a poem. I do read the line:

\"But lies could never defeat the truth\", and wonder if we have ever really been told the truth and have only been a fed lies from the beginning?

I\'m beginning to understand the reverse technology implied by the so-called news; it seems that the truth is the opposite to that which we are shown and told.

Anyway, I digress into a world of conspiracy where i will be damned for my words, so lets agree on something...a damn fine poem however you interpret it,

regards

M

November 6th, 2023 14:26

I know
Yamikani Jamali Hassan said:

A beautiful piece

November 6th, 2023 09:33

I know
orchidee said:

You knows it! Good write 2.

November 6th, 2023 08:17

Goals and objectives
Neville said:



I would try and take them from the inside

November 4th, 2023 12:38

Goals and objectives
Lorenz said:

greedy black hole
swallowing white star .

November 4th, 2023 08:13

Goals and objectives
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

November 4th, 2023 08:10

Wicked
orchidee said:

Good write 2.

November 3rd, 2023 03:05

Prosper
Neville said:



seems like everyone\'s a winner babe

November 2nd, 2023 08:11

Prosper
orchidee said:

A prosperous write 2.

November 2nd, 2023 03:00

Prosper
Thomas W Case said:

Yep.

November 2nd, 2023 02:36

Fallen
Thomas W Case said:

Great write. Yashua?

November 2nd, 2023 02:26

Fallen
orchidee said:

Good write 2.

November 1st, 2023 02:59



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