Comments received on poems by 2781
Insight
orchidee said:
Good write 2781. Erm, an alternative version by Bobby? I\'ve not read that version before. Ooohh!
Woof! started my imaginary dog, Fido, barking now - that F word, not marked 18+. lol.
August 13th, 2023 07:04
orchidee said:
Good write 2781. Erm, an alternative version by Bobby? I\'ve not read that version before. Ooohh!
Woof! started my imaginary dog, Fido, barking now - that F word, not marked 18+. lol.
August 13th, 2023 07:04
Insight
Bobby O said:
Yay that I walk through the shadow of the valley of death I shall fear no evil for I AM the meanest Motherfucker in the Valley!
August 13th, 2023 06:04
Bobby O said:
Yay that I walk through the shadow of the valley of death I shall fear no evil for I AM the meanest Motherfucker in the Valley!
August 13th, 2023 06:04
F the greens
Introverted Sage said:
This is great!
Reminds me of a close call I had myself😆
Except mine was natural peanut butter getting lodged in my throat.... rough.. to say the least.
It\'s like \'you\'re trying to do the right thing.. and your body betrays you\'.
at least that\'s how I felt.. ha
Thanks for sharing!
🪶Happy writing
August 11th, 2023 10:42
Introverted Sage said:
This is great!
Reminds me of a close call I had myself😆
Except mine was natural peanut butter getting lodged in my throat.... rough.. to say the least.
It\'s like \'you\'re trying to do the right thing.. and your body betrays you\'.
at least that\'s how I felt.. ha
Thanks for sharing!
🪶Happy writing
August 11th, 2023 10:42
F the greens
Doggerel Dave said:
Me - long term vegetarian - never happened. Not a bad way to go though, after the first five minutes.......
August 11th, 2023 08:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Me - long term vegetarian - never happened. Not a bad way to go though, after the first five minutes.......
August 11th, 2023 08:37
Today
orchidee said:
Wow, you\'ve given me brilliant inspiration for two poems. Erm, \'Tomorrow\' and \'Yesterday\'.
I might even do \'Next Week\' or \'Next Year\'. lol.
August 9th, 2023 04:58
orchidee said:
Wow, you\'ve given me brilliant inspiration for two poems. Erm, \'Tomorrow\' and \'Yesterday\'.
I might even do \'Next Week\' or \'Next Year\'. lol.
August 9th, 2023 04:58
Energy
orchidee said:
Good write 2.
I not got the energy to add \'781\'. Oops, well I have. lol.
August 8th, 2023 04:08
orchidee said:
Good write 2.
I not got the energy to add \'781\'. Oops, well I have. lol.
August 8th, 2023 04:08
All
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful!
hope someone gifts you with such a compliment, dear poet
its only fair since you put this out in the world
thank you!
August 4th, 2023 06:46
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful!
hope someone gifts you with such a compliment, dear poet
its only fair since you put this out in the world
thank you!
August 4th, 2023 06:46
As I
2781 said:
It\'s a strange thing but other versions don\'t do it for me. This will sound strange to some, the KJV has a simplicity that allows access and gives room for expansion. As my dear departed mum might say, \"these days they leave nothing for the imagination!\"
Others might say it\'s all imagination!
But wisdom is justified of her children. x
August 3rd, 2023 06:59
2781 said:
It\'s a strange thing but other versions don\'t do it for me. This will sound strange to some, the KJV has a simplicity that allows access and gives room for expansion. As my dear departed mum might say, \"these days they leave nothing for the imagination!\"
Others might say it\'s all imagination!
But wisdom is justified of her children. x
August 3rd, 2023 06:59
As I
orchidee said:
Was it \'The Message\' version inflicted on you, that you heard?
August 3rd, 2023 06:48
orchidee said:
Was it \'The Message\' version inflicted on you, that you heard?
August 3rd, 2023 06:48
As I
orchidee said:
Ohh, don;t get me started on \'The Message\' Version. Well, I haven\'t started on it. lol. Only heard odd verses from it, unaccustomed as I am to finding \'Bravo\', \'Whoopee\', and such like in the Bible. Doh!
Not that I\'m old fogey or super-strict about translations.
August 3rd, 2023 06:47
orchidee said:
Ohh, don;t get me started on \'The Message\' Version. Well, I haven\'t started on it. lol. Only heard odd verses from it, unaccustomed as I am to finding \'Bravo\', \'Whoopee\', and such like in the Bible. Doh!
Not that I\'m old fogey or super-strict about translations.
August 3rd, 2023 06:47
Line upon line
orchidee said:
Good write 7.
Can I call you 7 sometimes? Or even 2, 8, or 1?
It\'s sad, I know. haven\'t I got anything better to do? lol.
August 1st, 2023 09:30
orchidee said:
Good write 7.
Can I call you 7 sometimes? Or even 2, 8, or 1?
It\'s sad, I know. haven\'t I got anything better to do? lol.
August 1st, 2023 09:30
Burnt offerings
orchidee said:
Good write 2.
Can I call you 7, 8, or 1? heehee.
July 30th, 2023 08:23
orchidee said:
Good write 2.
Can I call you 7, 8, or 1? heehee.
July 30th, 2023 08:23
Fruits
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
It emphasizes the importance of discernment in identifying those who might not be trustworthy and the consequences they may face in the end.
July 29th, 2023 13:46
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
It emphasizes the importance of discernment in identifying those who might not be trustworthy and the consequences they may face in the end.
July 29th, 2023 13:46
Seek
Bobby O said:
You write well. If there is an Almighty my guess is his/her involvement is less than noticing everyone. There are billions. If that kind of power exists then God should at least intercede and abolish child rape. Not stopping that can’t be explained by any zealot that prints the virtue of faith in him. Child rape is allowed by God and that’s why I have questions. I respect any and all different beliefs however.
July 28th, 2023 03:32
Bobby O said:
You write well. If there is an Almighty my guess is his/her involvement is less than noticing everyone. There are billions. If that kind of power exists then God should at least intercede and abolish child rape. Not stopping that can’t be explained by any zealot that prints the virtue of faith in him. Child rape is allowed by God and that’s why I have questions. I respect any and all different beliefs however.
July 28th, 2023 03:32
Written
Jeffrey Weese said:
2781, your poem \"Written\" beautifully captures the spiritual journey in search of truth. Despite my personal lack of religious orientation, I found your words resonating with a universal quest for understanding and guidance. The simplicity of the structure enhances the profundity of the message, inviting contemplation. The use of phrases like \'His sheep hear his voice\' effectively evokes religious imagery, while also conveying a wider message of seeking and heeding guidance. The succinctness of \'Follow his voice / Seek him now / While we / Can\' emphasizes the urgency and importance of this search. Overall, your poem is thoughtful and well-constructed. Excellent work.
July 27th, 2023 10:03
Jeffrey Weese said:
2781, your poem \"Written\" beautifully captures the spiritual journey in search of truth. Despite my personal lack of religious orientation, I found your words resonating with a universal quest for understanding and guidance. The simplicity of the structure enhances the profundity of the message, inviting contemplation. The use of phrases like \'His sheep hear his voice\' effectively evokes religious imagery, while also conveying a wider message of seeking and heeding guidance. The succinctness of \'Follow his voice / Seek him now / While we / Can\' emphasizes the urgency and importance of this search. Overall, your poem is thoughtful and well-constructed. Excellent work.
July 27th, 2023 10:03
Don\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'t try
L. B. Mek said:
well offending people, apart
going with the flow and letting things unfurl
as they were meant to, is always a good strategy
in life, I think..
we just have to remember
all the blessings in our lives
so we can stay grateful and humble..
(but what do i know)
a thought provoking read, dear poet
thank you!
July 24th, 2023 03:05
L. B. Mek said:
well offending people, apart
going with the flow and letting things unfurl
as they were meant to, is always a good strategy
in life, I think..
we just have to remember
all the blessings in our lives
so we can stay grateful and humble..
(but what do i know)
a thought provoking read, dear poet
thank you!
July 24th, 2023 03:05
What we are
arqios said:
Yay! A star tree - from mustard to gold, increasing and growing, unfolding and flowing for all eternity!
July 21st, 2023 07:51
arqios said:
Yay! A star tree - from mustard to gold, increasing and growing, unfolding and flowing for all eternity!
July 21st, 2023 07:51
What we are
orchidee said:
I got birds flapping in me hair - that mustard seed\'s grown to a tree! Taking the \'kingdom\' as individuals. It\'s corporate too, we know.
July 21st, 2023 04:48
orchidee said:
I got birds flapping in me hair - that mustard seed\'s grown to a tree! Taking the \'kingdom\' as individuals. It\'s corporate too, we know.
July 21st, 2023 04:48
Don\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'t try
Bobby O said:
That was nice. You go dude, you go!
July 20th, 2023 15:49
Bobby O said:
That was nice. You go dude, you go!
July 20th, 2023 15:49
Don\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'t try
orchidee said:
A g\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\ood write 2781. Notice the back-slashes there? lol.
July 20th, 2023 11:44
orchidee said:
A g\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\ood write 2781. Notice the back-slashes there? lol.
July 20th, 2023 11:44
Grief
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Quite an apt descript in title, and wise in content... Honest in every write.
July 19th, 2023 15:15
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Quite an apt descript in title, and wise in content... Honest in every write.
July 19th, 2023 15:15
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