Comments received on poems by 2781
Ponder
orchidee said:
I put out a notice on me door: \'Do not disturb - pondering for 3 hours!\'
July 14th, 2023 08:37
orchidee said:
I put out a notice on me door: \'Do not disturb - pondering for 3 hours!\'
July 14th, 2023 08:37
Destination
Mario Piedra said:
Your heart knows the path
You just don’t remember
Each of us hold the key
You must find it
The journey is yours and
Yours alone to take
May the gentle winds of karma
Guide you and sustain you….
July 14th, 2023 07:05
Mario Piedra said:
Your heart knows the path
You just don’t remember
Each of us hold the key
You must find it
The journey is yours and
Yours alone to take
May the gentle winds of karma
Guide you and sustain you….
July 14th, 2023 07:05
Ponder
L. B. Mek said:
a lovely dream
hope its what awaits to greet you
when that bell toll rings, dear poet
July 14th, 2023 05:29
L. B. Mek said:
a lovely dream
hope its what awaits to greet you
when that bell toll rings, dear poet
July 14th, 2023 05:29
Lover call
Teddy.15 said:
Awe this is beautiful 💖 without the pain we never really get to see what it could be like in love.
July 14th, 2023 04:58
Teddy.15 said:
Awe this is beautiful 💖 without the pain we never really get to see what it could be like in love.
July 14th, 2023 04:58
Lover call
L. B. Mek said:
there you go teasing us with that Poet
you work so hard to keep repressed
lol
thank you! a lovely read dear Poet
(i was just teasing no offense intended)
July 14th, 2023 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
there you go teasing us with that Poet
you work so hard to keep repressed
lol
thank you! a lovely read dear Poet
(i was just teasing no offense intended)
July 14th, 2023 04:58
Spreading the good news
2781 said:
After I wrote this I realised it sounded like a rant against the church.
I was thinking more broadly, but hey, it\'s open to interpretation!
July 12th, 2023 15:58
2781 said:
After I wrote this I realised it sounded like a rant against the church.
I was thinking more broadly, but hey, it\'s open to interpretation!
July 12th, 2023 15:58
Spreading the good news
orchidee said:
Another tale - when plate (or hat) came round, a young lad took some coins out of it. He said \'Well, it is the collection plate, so I\'m collecting coins!\' lol.
July 12th, 2023 10:46
orchidee said:
Another tale - when plate (or hat) came round, a young lad took some coins out of it. He said \'Well, it is the collection plate, so I\'m collecting coins!\' lol.
July 12th, 2023 10:46
Spreading the good news
orchidee said:
At a church, one forgot to bring cash - for the offertory - they booted him out! (did they, or did I make that up?)
What\'s true is that some places pass round TWO collection \'hats\' in the same service! Doh!
July 12th, 2023 10:45
orchidee said:
At a church, one forgot to bring cash - for the offertory - they booted him out! (did they, or did I make that up?)
What\'s true is that some places pass round TWO collection \'hats\' in the same service! Doh!
July 12th, 2023 10:45
I am not
peto said:
Rhythm flow rhyme all spot on
Content even better
Loved this write
July 11th, 2023 10:25
peto said:
Rhythm flow rhyme all spot on
Content even better
Loved this write
July 11th, 2023 10:25
Smell a rat
orchidee said:
What I want to know is why does the s**t always hit the fan? Best stand down-wind then! lol.
July 9th, 2023 01:38
orchidee said:
What I want to know is why does the s**t always hit the fan? Best stand down-wind then! lol.
July 9th, 2023 01:38
Destination
orchidee said:
Good write 2.
To reach my destination I must take the No. 2781 bus!
July 8th, 2023 11:44
orchidee said:
Good write 2.
To reach my destination I must take the No. 2781 bus!
July 8th, 2023 11:44
Destination
Bobby O said:
In the land of the blind the one eyed man is king. I respect your core beliefs and I grew up much in that manner but now I just setle for decent and think there’s many approaches to finding center v
July 8th, 2023 11:03
Bobby O said:
In the land of the blind the one eyed man is king. I respect your core beliefs and I grew up much in that manner but now I just setle for decent and think there’s many approaches to finding center v
July 8th, 2023 11:03
Nothing new
orchidee said:
Same old...... poems on here?
I will get shot down if I mean that! lol.
July 7th, 2023 08:58
orchidee said:
Same old...... poems on here?
I will get shot down if I mean that! lol.
July 7th, 2023 08:58
Forgive me
Neville said:
it is possible to try too hard you know .. there are those who find that if and when they lighten up, things begin to improve .. just sayin .. not wishing to preach to the converted or to teach my grannie to suck eggs ... Neville
July 6th, 2023 11:47
Neville said:
it is possible to try too hard you know .. there are those who find that if and when they lighten up, things begin to improve .. just sayin .. not wishing to preach to the converted or to teach my grannie to suck eggs ... Neville
July 6th, 2023 11:47
Have we
lostmoon said:
Nice flow, I love the way you\'re pondering and criticising at the same time. Have we, I wonder? Maybe, maybe not.
July 5th, 2023 10:16
lostmoon said:
Nice flow, I love the way you\'re pondering and criticising at the same time. Have we, I wonder? Maybe, maybe not.
July 5th, 2023 10:16
Aussie dollar
Teddy.15 said:
Very well orchestrated poetry and so true for so many of us at this time. Thank you.
July 4th, 2023 08:37
Teddy.15 said:
Very well orchestrated poetry and so true for so many of us at this time. Thank you.
July 4th, 2023 08:37
Aussie dollar
Bobby O said:
Reading w anticipation and the ending caught me off guard.
July 4th, 2023 05:38
Bobby O said:
Reading w anticipation and the ending caught me off guard.
July 4th, 2023 05:38
Bread
Neville said:
I suspect this is somewhat spiritual
but I know for sure you are not the only believer .. Neville
July 4th, 2023 02:00
Neville said:
I suspect this is somewhat spiritual
but I know for sure you are not the only believer .. Neville
July 4th, 2023 02:00
Pleasure
2781 said:
Thanks Bobby,
They shall not hurt nor destroy in all my holy mountain; for the earth shall be full of the knowledge of the Lord, as the waters cover the sea. Isaiah 11
July 3rd, 2023 07:39
2781 said:
Thanks Bobby,
They shall not hurt nor destroy in all my holy mountain; for the earth shall be full of the knowledge of the Lord, as the waters cover the sea. Isaiah 11
July 3rd, 2023 07:39
Pleasure
Bobby O said:
The babe and the beast. A memorable line indeed. It added a dimension that one hundred more words couldn’t match. Nice write good read.
July 3rd, 2023 07:31
Bobby O said:
The babe and the beast. A memorable line indeed. It added a dimension that one hundred more words couldn’t match. Nice write good read.
July 3rd, 2023 07:31
I strife
AwHec8 said:
Nice 😊 Poem. Sounds like most people who go through the process of seeing the full weight of sin and seeks redemption. Don
July 2nd, 2023 11:05
AwHec8 said:
Nice 😊 Poem. Sounds like most people who go through the process of seeing the full weight of sin and seeks redemption. Don
July 2nd, 2023 11:05
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