Comments received on poems by 2781
What\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'s all this
L. B. Mek said:
we should all do that we enjoy
its toxic to wade in waters we detest
hurts only ourselves...
shed comparisons n waging wars
to pass one more idle minute
after all
it\'s only ourselves we\'re fooling
only our time we\'re wasting
forcing a passion upon yourself
is such
a betrayal of your own, worth
a sad state, when that\'s the best
we think we deserve...
June 23rd, 2023 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
we should all do that we enjoy
its toxic to wade in waters we detest
hurts only ourselves...
shed comparisons n waging wars
to pass one more idle minute
after all
it\'s only ourselves we\'re fooling
only our time we\'re wasting
forcing a passion upon yourself
is such
a betrayal of your own, worth
a sad state, when that\'s the best
we think we deserve...
June 23rd, 2023 04:15
What\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'s all this
orchidee said:
I might know what poetry is, but not the foggiest of what an iambic pentameter is!
June 22nd, 2023 05:15
orchidee said:
I might know what poetry is, but not the foggiest of what an iambic pentameter is!
June 22nd, 2023 05:15
What happened
orchidee said:
You not seen me for 20 years?! I never knew it was so long! lol.
June 21st, 2023 02:13
orchidee said:
You not seen me for 20 years?! I never knew it was so long! lol.
June 21st, 2023 02:13
How long
BlessedbyGod said:
Love this!!! Creative and brilliant đź‘Ź
Keep it up my friend !!
June 19th, 2023 13:44
BlessedbyGod said:
Love this!!! Creative and brilliant đź‘Ź
Keep it up my friend !!
June 19th, 2023 13:44
How long
orchidee said:
I got enough problem sharpening this blunt knife \'ere, let alone a sword! heehee.
June 19th, 2023 10:52
orchidee said:
I got enough problem sharpening this blunt knife \'ere, let alone a sword! heehee.
June 19th, 2023 10:52
Does it?
arqios said:
A spoon? sceptre? dagger? chess piece? some structure this bears!
June 17th, 2023 09:25
arqios said:
A spoon? sceptre? dagger? chess piece? some structure this bears!
June 17th, 2023 09:25
While you can.
Teddy.15 said:
Heaven is a place we all imagine, beautifully written.
June 15th, 2023 01:56
Teddy.15 said:
Heaven is a place we all imagine, beautifully written.
June 15th, 2023 01:56
While you can.
Ok Waleed said:
I rather hold a woman’s hand… can “Him” be Her?
June 14th, 2023 12:47
Ok Waleed said:
I rather hold a woman’s hand… can “Him” be Her?
June 14th, 2023 12:47
It\\\\\\\'s you
arqios said:
On this let my prayer agree that where to or three (or more) gather together in His name, there He is in their midst.
June 12th, 2023 23:48
arqios said:
On this let my prayer agree that where to or three (or more) gather together in His name, there He is in their midst.
June 12th, 2023 23:48
yowh
L. B. Mek said:
it seems \'the devil\'s advocate\'
had it right
\'but they\'re* not the winners\'
so true
let\'s hope so, dear poet
June 9th, 2023 02:48
L. B. Mek said:
it seems \'the devil\'s advocate\'
had it right
\'but they\'re* not the winners\'
so true
let\'s hope so, dear poet
June 9th, 2023 02:48
Instrument
Bobby O said:
A true aficionado that’s also humble yet digs in sure to not let irrelevant shortcomings detract from the glory that is melodic orchestration.
June 9th, 2023 01:44
Bobby O said:
A true aficionado that’s also humble yet digs in sure to not let irrelevant shortcomings detract from the glory that is melodic orchestration.
June 9th, 2023 01:44
Gimmies
orchidee said:
All contributions gratefully received - send \'em to me! lol
June 6th, 2023 02:00
orchidee said:
All contributions gratefully received - send \'em to me! lol
June 6th, 2023 02:00
Do-do
2781 said:
Everything in moderation they used to say. Problem seems, there\'s nothing moderate in the sales pitched. Thanks for reading, cheers.
June 5th, 2023 05:04
2781 said:
Everything in moderation they used to say. Problem seems, there\'s nothing moderate in the sales pitched. Thanks for reading, cheers.
June 5th, 2023 05:04
Do-do
L. B. Mek said:
there is only so much, we can do
to try and take care of ourselves
physically
if we can\'t, laugh and live a little
to what end, do we suffer
temperance in all things
even, in temperance itself..
(a relatable read, dear poet)
June 5th, 2023 03:30
L. B. Mek said:
there is only so much, we can do
to try and take care of ourselves
physically
if we can\'t, laugh and live a little
to what end, do we suffer
temperance in all things
even, in temperance itself..
(a relatable read, dear poet)
June 5th, 2023 03:30
A day makes
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'ll sow a seed of gratitude for this beautiful day,\'
what a line!
Brilliant!
June 5th, 2023 01:52
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'ll sow a seed of gratitude for this beautiful day,\'
what a line!
Brilliant!
June 5th, 2023 01:52
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