Comments received on poems by 2781



Strong
orchidee said:

But you is only....61 I see!
But then I heard one say \'Oh no, I will be 30 this year; that\'s really old! lol.

May 5th, 2023 02:38

Howard
Neville said:


What a jolly little rhyme to kickstart a brand new day .. Good old Howard
I hear myself say .. Neville :)

May 5th, 2023 00:46

Fact or fiction
Neville said:


sounds like he was bowled a googly

May 5th, 2023 00:44

Fact or fiction
2781 said:

Amen.

May 5th, 2023 00:00

Fact or fiction
arqios said:

The mangling of truth is an endtimes symptom. We need all the help that is available to us.

May 4th, 2023 20:48

Business
Goldfinch60 said:

True words 2781, if only it could be true for everyone.

Andy

April 30th, 2023 01:49

Tonight
arqios said:

That\'s always handy when the supplies are low!

April 28th, 2023 08:55

Tonight
orchidee said:

Good write 2781.
Can I call you \'\'2\' for short? lol.

April 28th, 2023 01:26

Blood
Doggerel Dave said:

In a place I once lived (thankfully no longer) that would be a not unusual Saturday night. Well writ.

April 27th, 2023 19:06

Blood
sorenbarrett said:

A great story in poetic form. I found it entertaining and well written.

April 27th, 2023 09:41

Doves eyes
orchidee said:

Good write 2781.

April 26th, 2023 02:20

Doves eyes
Goldfinch60 said:

May that friendship last forever 2781.

Andy

April 26th, 2023 02:00

Today
sorenbarrett said:

I have, in my latter years, acquired a deep appreciation for the heroics of the Australian and New Zealand forces. Yet, I too feel that there is hypocrisy in war. Very well written

April 25th, 2023 07:14

Today
arqios said:

A solemn ANZAC day to you!

April 25th, 2023 07:10

Local
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words 2781.

Andy

April 25th, 2023 01:47

Local
2781 said:

Thanks,I think?

April 24th, 2023 17:55

Local
MysteryGhost said:

A stoatin poem!

April 24th, 2023 09:58

There\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'s gold in them there.
Bobby O said:

Sounds like a plan. I like the rhyme scheme and the prose that leads to perhaps a joyous climax. Nice piece

April 23rd, 2023 04:50

Windscreen
arqios said:

Oh wow, that happened to us once, stone chips that began growing so off to the mechanics and what a relief when that service was covered by insurance. So many things go wrong with our modern \'steeds.\'

April 17th, 2023 08:58

Windscreen
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

The poem presents a critical view of the speaker\'s attitude towards responsibility and accountability.

April 17th, 2023 05:02

Evangelism
arqios said:

Many a mysterious way there is and tuned in to how we are as individuals and the revelation is tailor made to suit. Quite an awesome thing as well.

April 16th, 2023 07:51

Evangelism
orchidee said:

Good teachers are OK, I feel. There are many about, not too hard to find.

April 16th, 2023 02:45

Anonymous
arqios said:

When we succeed is quite soon indeed, in Him upon His shining bright!

April 15th, 2023 09:16

Anonymous
orchidee said:

God write, erm, who are ya? Anon?! heehee.

April 15th, 2023 01:49

Sight
arqios said:

Either spray on those lens cleaner fluid or have Specsavers recalibrate your script.

April 14th, 2023 08:18

Sight
L. B. Mek said:

(as part of that \'four eyed\' gang
these words resonate, deep
that perspective of living life
a glass removed from all around us)
sincerity\'s succinct poetry
at its accessible best
thank you, dear poet

April 14th, 2023 04:18

Sight
orchidee said:

Good write 2781.

April 14th, 2023 02:14

The stick
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Good write👌

April 14th, 2023 00:29

The stick
arqios said:

Where the lungs filled with truth now being -\'rona-ised, and that nuclear shadow heats up from a not too-forgotten Cold War. We were in Kiribati a few years back and now much of it has been swallowed by the sea. Truly the leaven that is hypocrisy is a grand delusion that besets humanity.

April 13th, 2023 09:19

Scheme
sorenbarrett said:

True it is control is the issue silver and gold are the tools.

April 11th, 2023 09:37



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