Comments received on poems by 2781



I level
orchidee said:

\'I says\' good write 2!

August 23rd, 2023 12:42

Controversial
John Prophet said:

Yup, darkness encroaches.
JP

August 22nd, 2023 06:48

Over
orchidee said:

I read somewhere of Babylon\'s walls - massive fortifications. Or was it Nineveh? Have to look up the data in one of me poems.
Or I will let you\'ll know when I get back from me hols to both places. lol. But all ruins now?

August 22nd, 2023 06:45

Over
Neville said:



I\'m not with anyone ambidextrous

August 22nd, 2023 05:05

Controversial
2781 said:

Seek and you shall find

August 21st, 2023 08:10

Controversial
Bobby O said:

I got confused

August 21st, 2023 07:17

Beyond
Neville said:



............ ouch

August 21st, 2023 00:09

Keep some cash
Nature said:

Its so well written. I appreciate it! And its very much true from my side.

August 20th, 2023 23:42

Beyond
2781 said:

We were the worst, you were next. Hardly understand English, so can\'t comment on the rest.
The Spanish seemed nice.

August 20th, 2023 09:25

Beyond
orchidee said:

More of a quiet mewing now - says me in the UK! lol.

August 20th, 2023 09:19

Publishers
Eugene S. said:

The battle is not done, indeed!👍

August 19th, 2023 04:42

Publishers
orchidee said:

Good write Bugs, erm, 2781.

August 19th, 2023 03:34

Publishers
Bobby O said:

I’m on your side, but, who exactly are we battling?

August 19th, 2023 03:06

Funny thing
LIZ said:



August 18th, 2023 09:08



World cup
2781 said:

I don\'t have a problem with women\'s sport, it\'s the lack of humility.
Pride comes before a fall.
I would have preferred the Matildas to win but the better team won..and Sportsbet!

August 16th, 2023 07:38

World cup
Doggerel Dave said:

Think you are 100% right in your commentary - so long as no part of that displays any antagonism towards women\'s sport, which has been downgraded over the years, I\'d have to agree that the noise around this has been right over the top.

August 16th, 2023 07:29

Stinking thinking
orchidee said:

A pongy poem 2781!

August 15th, 2023 02:40

Perpetual motion
orchidee said:

Good write 2781.

August 14th, 2023 04:08

Insight
orchidee said:

Good write 2781. Erm, an alternative version by Bobby? I\'ve not read that version before. Ooohh!
Woof! started my imaginary dog, Fido, barking now - that F word, not marked 18+. lol.

August 13th, 2023 07:04

Insight
Bobby O said:

Yay that I walk through the shadow of the valley of death I shall fear no evil for I AM the meanest Motherfucker in the Valley!

August 13th, 2023 06:04

F the greens
Bobby O said:

Reality transcribed. Nice.
How’s the guitar ??

August 11th, 2023 14:34

F the greens
Introverted Sage said:

This is great!
Reminds me of a close call I had myself😆
Except mine was natural peanut butter getting lodged in my throat.... rough.. to say the least.
It\'s like \'you\'re trying to do the right thing.. and your body betrays you\'.
at least that\'s how I felt.. ha
Thanks for sharing!

🪶Happy writing


August 11th, 2023 10:42

F the greens
Doggerel Dave said:

Me - long term vegetarian - never happened. Not a bad way to go though, after the first five minutes.......

August 11th, 2023 08:37

Gone
orchidee said:

I was \'The Birdman\' until I fell off a cliff. Doh!

August 10th, 2023 02:05

Today
orchidee said:

Wow, you\'ve given me brilliant inspiration for two poems. Erm, \'Tomorrow\' and \'Yesterday\'.
I might even do \'Next Week\' or \'Next Year\'. lol.

August 9th, 2023 04:58

Energy
orchidee said:

Good write 2.
I not got the energy to add \'781\'. Oops, well I have. lol.

August 8th, 2023 04:08

All
L. B. Mek said:

Beautiful!
hope someone gifts you with such a compliment, dear poet
its only fair since you put this out in the world
thank you!

August 4th, 2023 06:46

As I
2781 said:

It\'s a strange thing but other versions don\'t do it for me. This will sound strange to some, the KJV has a simplicity that allows access and gives room for expansion. As my dear departed mum might say, \"these days they leave nothing for the imagination!\"
Others might say it\'s all imagination!
But wisdom is justified of her children. x

August 3rd, 2023 06:59



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