Comments received on poems by 2781



Problems
2781 said:

Your right, again.

March 23rd, 2023 07:54

Problems
arqios said:

The challenge in a problem is the testing that proves. Good stuff here.

March 23rd, 2023 06:43

Problems
orchidee said:

Erm, it\'s no problem for me to say this is a good write! Did you know I would say that? lol.

March 23rd, 2023 03:00

Confidence
Samprikta Paul said:

the rhyming is so good hear

March 23rd, 2023 01:30

Confidence
orchidee said:

I\'m confident that this is a good poem!

March 22nd, 2023 03:09

Everyone
arqios said:

That is what poetry and life is all about! And clues are all about... reminds me of that famous one liner: \"get a clue!\" in a good way. Well, that my little \'take-away\' from this wonderful poem.

March 21st, 2023 09:43

Everyone
L. B. Mek said:

all as one, inclusive of everyone
a beautiful ideal
a dream to believe in
no entry fees, a heaven for all
where fallible flesh
doesn\'t dare to dictate, what a deity
may or may not want
a humanity, where all are equal
devoid of differences
anchored within that banner of hope

March 21st, 2023 04:44

Indian summer
Doggerel Dave said:

You sure? Two days ago we had February heat in mid March....Now you might fantasise this as an Indian Summer - I call it a bloody inconvenience...😇!!!
(Apologies to other readers for this very localised debate.....)

March 20th, 2023 07:11

Indian summer
arqios said:

Getting colder down south according to mates in Melbourne. There is something about the changing of the seasons that truly excites.

March 20th, 2023 05:22

Brothers
Ok Waleed said:

They say war and violence is apart of the human nature… I’ve come to the point where it isn’t, it’s a choice

March 19th, 2023 10:30

Divided
2781 said:

Thank you. It not hard to see who profits and who the looser are.

March 18th, 2023 08:47

Divided
Doggerel Dave said:

Each State\'s (country\'s) military machine is self perpetuating......
Well penned.

March 18th, 2023 04:52

The con
orchidee said:

It\'s nothing new, is it - whether we refer to \'bad old days\' or \'good old days\'.

March 17th, 2023 03:31

The con
Doggerel Dave said:

I quite like it..........but I\'d be keen to know to which \"big one\" you are referring....

March 17th, 2023 01:48

The track
orchidee said:

Good write 2781.

March 16th, 2023 02:57

It\'s spiritual
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:

Great work, loved it.

March 15th, 2023 08:39

It\'s spiritual
sorenbarrett said:

A greater power than we surely there must be.

March 15th, 2023 06:20

It\'s spiritual
orchidee said:

We don\'t always see the spiritual battle aspect of this. We are just cosy in churches, as a social club maybe.

March 15th, 2023 03:14

Cruel masters
Goldfinch60 said:

That righteousness will return sometime but I don\'t think it will be in my lifetime. Good words 2781.

Andy

March 14th, 2023 02:07

Surrender
L. B. Mek said:

really well written!
thanks for sharing dear poet

March 13th, 2023 03:33

Surrender
2781 said:

I get that, thanks.

March 12th, 2023 08:35

Surrender
Syd said:

\"Don\'t worry if it ever gets read\" I can very much relate to this line. I suppose it is what has kept me writing over the years.

- Syd

March 12th, 2023 08:00

Attraction
hzugman said:

I think the voice inside is our ego that is both indispensable and a pain in the ass simultaneously. Like your poem.

March 11th, 2023 17:35

Attraction
Syd said:

Wow! An awesome poem and very relatable to me.

- Syd

March 11th, 2023 06:02

Old school
2781 said:

Peace is my middle name! I have no bitterness, just a longing for righteousness. Thanks for reading.

March 10th, 2023 05:41

Old school
L. B. Mek said:

life punches hard
even when the sun is out...
sorry for your troubles
try to not let bitterness
determine your worth!
stay strong
hope it felt good to ink it out,
if it did, treasure that solace
seek peace, dear poet

March 10th, 2023 04:57

Today
sorenbarrett said:

That was a good comic relief and well done too.

March 9th, 2023 09:59

Today
2781 said:

Ok Waleed, BlessedbyGod, Thank you.

March 9th, 2023 01:37

Today
Ok Waleed said:

Good poem

March 9th, 2023 00:37

Today
BlessedbyGod said:

Hahaha thank you 2781 I needed that Hahaha Hahaha 😆 😂

March 9th, 2023 00:35



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