Comments received on poems by 2781
Keep some cash
L. B. Mek said:
cash and plastic
will soon be museum archaic
we\'re a generation away
from barcodes on our wrists
and chips, in our minds...
who knows, it may come to us
using cash to wipe out butts
the rate we\'re demolishing the trees
lol
I so relate, dear poet
June 26th, 2023 04:43
L. B. Mek said:
cash and plastic
will soon be museum archaic
we\'re a generation away
from barcodes on our wrists
and chips, in our minds...
who knows, it may come to us
using cash to wipe out butts
the rate we\'re demolishing the trees
lol
I so relate, dear poet
June 26th, 2023 04:43
Gotta do
peto said:
An epic
Loved the rhythm especially
And the \"above or underground \" line is classic
June 24th, 2023 02:23
peto said:
An epic
Loved the rhythm especially
And the \"above or underground \" line is classic
June 24th, 2023 02:23
What\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'s all this
L. B. Mek said:
we should all do that we enjoy
its toxic to wade in waters we detest
hurts only ourselves...
shed comparisons n waging wars
to pass one more idle minute
after all
it\'s only ourselves we\'re fooling
only our time we\'re wasting
forcing a passion upon yourself
is such
a betrayal of your own, worth
a sad state, when that\'s the best
we think we deserve...
June 23rd, 2023 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
we should all do that we enjoy
its toxic to wade in waters we detest
hurts only ourselves...
shed comparisons n waging wars
to pass one more idle minute
after all
it\'s only ourselves we\'re fooling
only our time we\'re wasting
forcing a passion upon yourself
is such
a betrayal of your own, worth
a sad state, when that\'s the best
we think we deserve...
June 23rd, 2023 04:15
What\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'s all this
orchidee said:
I might know what poetry is, but not the foggiest of what an iambic pentameter is!
June 22nd, 2023 05:15
orchidee said:
I might know what poetry is, but not the foggiest of what an iambic pentameter is!
June 22nd, 2023 05:15
What happened
orchidee said:
You not seen me for 20 years?! I never knew it was so long! lol.
June 21st, 2023 02:13
orchidee said:
You not seen me for 20 years?! I never knew it was so long! lol.
June 21st, 2023 02:13
How long
BlessedbyGod said:
Love this!!! Creative and brilliant đź‘Ź
Keep it up my friend !!
June 19th, 2023 13:44
BlessedbyGod said:
Love this!!! Creative and brilliant đź‘Ź
Keep it up my friend !!
June 19th, 2023 13:44
How long
orchidee said:
I got enough problem sharpening this blunt knife \'ere, let alone a sword! heehee.
June 19th, 2023 10:52
orchidee said:
I got enough problem sharpening this blunt knife \'ere, let alone a sword! heehee.
June 19th, 2023 10:52
Does it?
arqios said:
A spoon? sceptre? dagger? chess piece? some structure this bears!
June 17th, 2023 09:25
arqios said:
A spoon? sceptre? dagger? chess piece? some structure this bears!
June 17th, 2023 09:25
While you can.
Teddy.15 said:
Heaven is a place we all imagine, beautifully written.
June 15th, 2023 01:56
Teddy.15 said:
Heaven is a place we all imagine, beautifully written.
June 15th, 2023 01:56
While you can.
Ok Waleed said:
I rather hold a woman’s hand… can “Him” be Her?
June 14th, 2023 12:47
Ok Waleed said:
I rather hold a woman’s hand… can “Him” be Her?
June 14th, 2023 12:47
It\\\\\\\'s you
arqios said:
On this let my prayer agree that where to or three (or more) gather together in His name, there He is in their midst.
June 12th, 2023 23:48
arqios said:
On this let my prayer agree that where to or three (or more) gather together in His name, there He is in their midst.
June 12th, 2023 23:48
yowh
L. B. Mek said:
it seems \'the devil\'s advocate\'
had it right
\'but they\'re* not the winners\'
so true
let\'s hope so, dear poet
June 9th, 2023 02:48
L. B. Mek said:
it seems \'the devil\'s advocate\'
had it right
\'but they\'re* not the winners\'
so true
let\'s hope so, dear poet
June 9th, 2023 02:48
Instrument
Bobby O said:
A true aficionado that’s also humble yet digs in sure to not let irrelevant shortcomings detract from the glory that is melodic orchestration.
June 9th, 2023 01:44
Bobby O said:
A true aficionado that’s also humble yet digs in sure to not let irrelevant shortcomings detract from the glory that is melodic orchestration.
June 9th, 2023 01:44
Gimmies
orchidee said:
All contributions gratefully received - send \'em to me! lol
June 6th, 2023 02:00
orchidee said:
All contributions gratefully received - send \'em to me! lol
June 6th, 2023 02:00
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