Comments received on poems by 2781



The con
Doggerel Dave said:

I quite like it..........but I\'d be keen to know to which \"big one\" you are referring....

March 17th, 2023 01:48

The track
orchidee said:

Good write 2781.

March 16th, 2023 02:57

It\'s spiritual
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:

Great work, loved it.

March 15th, 2023 08:39

It\'s spiritual
sorenbarrett said:

A greater power than we surely there must be.

March 15th, 2023 06:20

It\'s spiritual
orchidee said:

We don\'t always see the spiritual battle aspect of this. We are just cosy in churches, as a social club maybe.

March 15th, 2023 03:14

Cruel masters
Goldfinch60 said:

That righteousness will return sometime but I don\'t think it will be in my lifetime. Good words 2781.

Andy

March 14th, 2023 02:07

Surrender
L. B. Mek said:

really well written!
thanks for sharing dear poet

March 13th, 2023 03:33

Surrender
2781 said:

I get that, thanks.

March 12th, 2023 08:35

Surrender
Syd said:

\"Don\'t worry if it ever gets read\" I can very much relate to this line. I suppose it is what has kept me writing over the years.

- Syd

March 12th, 2023 08:00

Attraction
hzugman said:

I think the voice inside is our ego that is both indispensable and a pain in the ass simultaneously. Like your poem.

March 11th, 2023 17:35

Attraction
Syd said:

Wow! An awesome poem and very relatable to me.

- Syd

March 11th, 2023 06:02

Old school
2781 said:

Peace is my middle name! I have no bitterness, just a longing for righteousness. Thanks for reading.

March 10th, 2023 05:41

Old school
L. B. Mek said:

life punches hard
even when the sun is out...
sorry for your troubles
try to not let bitterness
determine your worth!
stay strong
hope it felt good to ink it out,
if it did, treasure that solace
seek peace, dear poet

March 10th, 2023 04:57

Today
sorenbarrett said:

That was a good comic relief and well done too.

March 9th, 2023 09:59

Today
2781 said:

Ok Waleed, BlessedbyGod, Thank you.

March 9th, 2023 01:37

Today
Ok Waleed said:

Good poem

March 9th, 2023 00:37

Today
BlessedbyGod said:

Hahaha thank you 2781 I needed that Hahaha Hahaha 😆 😂

March 9th, 2023 00:35

Summary
2781 said:

hidden mystery

March 8th, 2023 05:58

Summary
L. B. Mek said:

(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i_nLsG_asQg
)

March 8th, 2023 04:34

Kumquats
hzugman said:

Nice poem, 2781

March 6th, 2023 09:34

Kumquats
2781 said:

Your right, we need a sacrifice.

March 6th, 2023 07:59

Kumquats
Doggerel Dave said:

🤣Keep the kumquat trees, otherwise he\'ll be at your wood work next...............They were here first, though....

March 6th, 2023 07:20

Kumquats
L. B. Mek said:

a lovely write, dear poet
(nature vies to serenade us
we seldom, find the peace within
to notice; turmoil of mind
and unsettled emotions, warping
our experience of existence)

March 6th, 2023 06:34

What I love
rhmn_7 said:

You must have a pretty big heart for all that love..

March 5th, 2023 08:57

What I love
Neville said:



Yes, tis indeed lovely sir .. Neville

March 5th, 2023 04:45

What I love
2781 said:

Thank you kind sir.

March 5th, 2023 03:10

What I love
orchidee said:

A fine write 2781.

March 5th, 2023 03:08

What if
2781 said:

No toil a little uncertainty maybe but who knows? Thanks again

March 4th, 2023 15:53

What if
orchidee said:

Was this poem much toiling, or did it flow easily?! lol.

March 4th, 2023 12:52

Go figure
L. B. Mek said:

so true, dear poet
reading or listening
is only, the beginning
it\'s only
when we\'ve churned it
in our mind\'s, mill
utilise our insight\'s, mulch
by questioning, it
so as to nurture, it
as an idea, a truth
we can call our own...
(an inventive write, a memorable read
something to consider and mulch)
thank you!

March 3rd, 2023 05:35



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