Comments received on poems by 2781
Elections
L. B. Mek said:
choosing, not - to vote
can become
a utilisation of your vote
\'civil disobedience\'
is far better than anarchic zealotry
yet, also
if you\'ve chosen to disengage
then save yourself
from all those headaches
and impotent rage
just, find your own corner of hope
keep it small, build it strong
make sure it\'s something
those righteous, other\'s
can\'t absentmindedly, destroy
and then find acceptance
in what peace you\'ve been able
to salvage
from this chaotic cesspool of absurdity
we call a society...
stay strong!
try to not make hate, your focus
in life
try to find a way, to let go
walk light dear poet kin
indeed, life\'s sht pile of unfair
but we all can choose, to move
past
whatever destroyed our house
imagine, fate
as a tsunami
it\'s pointless, screaming at the sky
after the fact
best to just move with the clouds
and try and make the best
of the time we have left..
(but hey
what do i know
do you
more power to you)
March 27th, 2023 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
choosing, not - to vote
can become
a utilisation of your vote
\'civil disobedience\'
is far better than anarchic zealotry
yet, also
if you\'ve chosen to disengage
then save yourself
from all those headaches
and impotent rage
just, find your own corner of hope
keep it small, build it strong
make sure it\'s something
those righteous, other\'s
can\'t absentmindedly, destroy
and then find acceptance
in what peace you\'ve been able
to salvage
from this chaotic cesspool of absurdity
we call a society...
stay strong!
try to not make hate, your focus
in life
try to find a way, to let go
walk light dear poet kin
indeed, life\'s sht pile of unfair
but we all can choose, to move
past
whatever destroyed our house
imagine, fate
as a tsunami
it\'s pointless, screaming at the sky
after the fact
best to just move with the clouds
and try and make the best
of the time we have left..
(but hey
what do i know
do you
more power to you)
March 27th, 2023 05:11
It died
Doggerel Dave said:
The have beaten me to the draw above.. A fun shortie.
March 26th, 2023 19:43
Doggerel Dave said:
The have beaten me to the draw above.. A fun shortie.
March 26th, 2023 19:43
It died
Olaf Gatermann said:
Witty!
There is a smart book around here: \"What can poetry do? Everything.\"
March 26th, 2023 17:18
Olaf Gatermann said:
Witty!
There is a smart book around here: \"What can poetry do? Everything.\"
March 26th, 2023 17:18
It died
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - I love the surprise finalé to this engaging word- use - -- thanks for sharing and for my wide smile.
March 26th, 2023 06:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - I love the surprise finalé to this engaging word- use - -- thanks for sharing and for my wide smile.
March 26th, 2023 06:15
Glory
2781 said:
Ask and it shall be given you; seek, and you shall find; knock, and it shall be opened to you;
March 25th, 2023 05:22
2781 said:
Ask and it shall be given you; seek, and you shall find; knock, and it shall be opened to you;
March 25th, 2023 05:22
Glory
Neville said:
you pose a question I\'m sure many would like an answer to ..
March 25th, 2023 04:33
Neville said:
you pose a question I\'m sure many would like an answer to ..
March 25th, 2023 04:33
Glory
orchidee said:
My brain cells - all 3 of them - go on holiday sometimes! heehee. Me being daft, not meant to offend any with mental health problems. I only ever had 3 brain cells, I reckon. lol.
March 25th, 2023 03:22
orchidee said:
My brain cells - all 3 of them - go on holiday sometimes! heehee. Me being daft, not meant to offend any with mental health problems. I only ever had 3 brain cells, I reckon. lol.
March 25th, 2023 03:22
Glory
Sakwa Franc said:
For the day is coming when gross darkness shall cover the earth ...
Who has said to Jacob seek me has not said it in vain
March 25th, 2023 02:47
Sakwa Franc said:
For the day is coming when gross darkness shall cover the earth ...
Who has said to Jacob seek me has not said it in vain
March 25th, 2023 02:47
Problems
Peter Pan - The Rock said:
Makes perfect sense...
True common sense...
Your neighbour destroys your life...
love him.
You neighbour murders your parents... love him.
Your neighbour tortures, murders your friends... love him.
Your neighbours rape and murder your wife, husband... whatever...
love him
Your neighbour rapes and murders your children... love him.
love him. love him. love him.
Turn the other cheek... always.
Nothing but love...
Nothing but love.
March 24th, 2023 17:13
Peter Pan - The Rock said:
Makes perfect sense...
True common sense...
Your neighbour destroys your life...
love him.
You neighbour murders your parents... love him.
Your neighbour tortures, murders your friends... love him.
Your neighbours rape and murder your wife, husband... whatever...
love him
Your neighbour rapes and murders your children... love him.
love him. love him. love him.
Turn the other cheek... always.
Nothing but love...
Nothing but love.
March 24th, 2023 17:13
Trying to kill
2781 said:
Thank you Ok. Just doing what I am told, can\'t take the credit. Cheers brother.
March 24th, 2023 12:06
2781 said:
Thank you Ok. Just doing what I am told, can\'t take the credit. Cheers brother.
March 24th, 2023 12:06
Trying to kill
Ok Waleed said:
You’re really one of my favorite poets on this site and this poem once again proves your greatness thank you
March 24th, 2023 11:56
Ok Waleed said:
You’re really one of my favorite poets on this site and this poem once again proves your greatness thank you
March 24th, 2023 11:56
Problems
MendedFences27 said:
Amen! They say a gift from caring comes back two-fold, and you seem to have proven that today. A very generous write full of truth.
March 23rd, 2023 10:44
MendedFences27 said:
Amen! They say a gift from caring comes back two-fold, and you seem to have proven that today. A very generous write full of truth.
March 23rd, 2023 10:44
Problems
arqios said:
The challenge in a problem is the testing that proves. Good stuff here.
March 23rd, 2023 06:43
arqios said:
The challenge in a problem is the testing that proves. Good stuff here.
March 23rd, 2023 06:43
Problems
orchidee said:
Erm, it\'s no problem for me to say this is a good write! Did you know I would say that? lol.
March 23rd, 2023 03:00
orchidee said:
Erm, it\'s no problem for me to say this is a good write! Did you know I would say that? lol.
March 23rd, 2023 03:00
Everyone
arqios said:
That is what poetry and life is all about! And clues are all about... reminds me of that famous one liner: \"get a clue!\" in a good way. Well, that my little \'take-away\' from this wonderful poem.
March 21st, 2023 09:43
arqios said:
That is what poetry and life is all about! And clues are all about... reminds me of that famous one liner: \"get a clue!\" in a good way. Well, that my little \'take-away\' from this wonderful poem.
March 21st, 2023 09:43
Everyone
L. B. Mek said:
all as one, inclusive of everyone
a beautiful ideal
a dream to believe in
no entry fees, a heaven for all
where fallible flesh
doesn\'t dare to dictate, what a deity
may or may not want
a humanity, where all are equal
devoid of differences
anchored within that banner of hope
March 21st, 2023 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
all as one, inclusive of everyone
a beautiful ideal
a dream to believe in
no entry fees, a heaven for all
where fallible flesh
doesn\'t dare to dictate, what a deity
may or may not want
a humanity, where all are equal
devoid of differences
anchored within that banner of hope
March 21st, 2023 04:44
Indian summer
Doggerel Dave said:
You sure? Two days ago we had February heat in mid March....Now you might fantasise this as an Indian Summer - I call it a bloody inconvenience...😇!!!
(Apologies to other readers for this very localised debate.....)
March 20th, 2023 07:11
Doggerel Dave said:
You sure? Two days ago we had February heat in mid March....Now you might fantasise this as an Indian Summer - I call it a bloody inconvenience...😇!!!
(Apologies to other readers for this very localised debate.....)
March 20th, 2023 07:11
Indian summer
arqios said:
Getting colder down south according to mates in Melbourne. There is something about the changing of the seasons that truly excites.
March 20th, 2023 05:22
arqios said:
Getting colder down south according to mates in Melbourne. There is something about the changing of the seasons that truly excites.
March 20th, 2023 05:22
Brothers
Ok Waleed said:
They say war and violence is apart of the human nature… I’ve come to the point where it isn’t, it’s a choice
March 19th, 2023 10:30
Ok Waleed said:
They say war and violence is apart of the human nature… I’ve come to the point where it isn’t, it’s a choice
March 19th, 2023 10:30
Divided
2781 said:
Thank you. It not hard to see who profits and who the looser are.
March 18th, 2023 08:47
2781 said:
Thank you. It not hard to see who profits and who the looser are.
March 18th, 2023 08:47
Divided
Doggerel Dave said:
Each State\'s (country\'s) military machine is self perpetuating......
Well penned.
March 18th, 2023 04:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Each State\'s (country\'s) military machine is self perpetuating......
Well penned.
March 18th, 2023 04:52
The con
orchidee said:
It\'s nothing new, is it - whether we refer to \'bad old days\' or \'good old days\'.
March 17th, 2023 03:31
orchidee said:
It\'s nothing new, is it - whether we refer to \'bad old days\' or \'good old days\'.
March 17th, 2023 03:31
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