Comments received on poems by 2781
Blood
Doggerel Dave said:
In a place I once lived (thankfully no longer) that would be a not unusual Saturday night. Well writ.
April 27th, 2023 19:06
Doggerel Dave said:
In a place I once lived (thankfully no longer) that would be a not unusual Saturday night. Well writ.
April 27th, 2023 19:06
Blood
sorenbarrett said:
A great story in poetic form. I found it entertaining and well written.
April 27th, 2023 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
A great story in poetic form. I found it entertaining and well written.
April 27th, 2023 09:41
Today
sorenbarrett said:
I have, in my latter years, acquired a deep appreciation for the heroics of the Australian and New Zealand forces. Yet, I too feel that there is hypocrisy in war. Very well written
April 25th, 2023 07:14
sorenbarrett said:
I have, in my latter years, acquired a deep appreciation for the heroics of the Australian and New Zealand forces. Yet, I too feel that there is hypocrisy in war. Very well written
April 25th, 2023 07:14
There\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'s gold in them there.
Bobby O said:
Sounds like a plan. I like the rhyme scheme and the prose that leads to perhaps a joyous climax. Nice piece
April 23rd, 2023 04:50
Bobby O said:
Sounds like a plan. I like the rhyme scheme and the prose that leads to perhaps a joyous climax. Nice piece
April 23rd, 2023 04:50
Windscreen
arqios said:
Oh wow, that happened to us once, stone chips that began growing so off to the mechanics and what a relief when that service was covered by insurance. So many things go wrong with our modern \'steeds.\'
April 17th, 2023 08:58
arqios said:
Oh wow, that happened to us once, stone chips that began growing so off to the mechanics and what a relief when that service was covered by insurance. So many things go wrong with our modern \'steeds.\'
April 17th, 2023 08:58
Windscreen
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem presents a critical view of the speaker\'s attitude towards responsibility and accountability.
April 17th, 2023 05:02
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem presents a critical view of the speaker\'s attitude towards responsibility and accountability.
April 17th, 2023 05:02
Evangelism
arqios said:
Many a mysterious way there is and tuned in to how we are as individuals and the revelation is tailor made to suit. Quite an awesome thing as well.
April 16th, 2023 07:51
arqios said:
Many a mysterious way there is and tuned in to how we are as individuals and the revelation is tailor made to suit. Quite an awesome thing as well.
April 16th, 2023 07:51
Evangelism
orchidee said:
Good teachers are OK, I feel. There are many about, not too hard to find.
April 16th, 2023 02:45
orchidee said:
Good teachers are OK, I feel. There are many about, not too hard to find.
April 16th, 2023 02:45
Anonymous
arqios said:
When we succeed is quite soon indeed, in Him upon His shining bright!
April 15th, 2023 09:16
arqios said:
When we succeed is quite soon indeed, in Him upon His shining bright!
April 15th, 2023 09:16
Sight
arqios said:
Either spray on those lens cleaner fluid or have Specsavers recalibrate your script.
April 14th, 2023 08:18
arqios said:
Either spray on those lens cleaner fluid or have Specsavers recalibrate your script.
April 14th, 2023 08:18
Sight
L. B. Mek said:
(as part of that \'four eyed\' gang
these words resonate, deep
that perspective of living life
a glass removed from all around us)
sincerity\'s succinct poetry
at its accessible best
thank you, dear poet
April 14th, 2023 04:18
L. B. Mek said:
(as part of that \'four eyed\' gang
these words resonate, deep
that perspective of living life
a glass removed from all around us)
sincerity\'s succinct poetry
at its accessible best
thank you, dear poet
April 14th, 2023 04:18
The stick
arqios said:
Where the lungs filled with truth now being -\'rona-ised, and that nuclear shadow heats up from a not too-forgotten Cold War. We were in Kiribati a few years back and now much of it has been swallowed by the sea. Truly the leaven that is hypocrisy is a grand delusion that besets humanity.
April 13th, 2023 09:19
arqios said:
Where the lungs filled with truth now being -\'rona-ised, and that nuclear shadow heats up from a not too-forgotten Cold War. We were in Kiribati a few years back and now much of it has been swallowed by the sea. Truly the leaven that is hypocrisy is a grand delusion that besets humanity.
April 13th, 2023 09:19
Scheme
sorenbarrett said:
True it is control is the issue silver and gold are the tools.
April 11th, 2023 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
True it is control is the issue silver and gold are the tools.
April 11th, 2023 09:37
Fault
John Prophet said:
Great write. Unfortunately, as I’ve aged increasingly I’ve lost faith in human nature.
April 10th, 2023 08:48
John Prophet said:
Great write. Unfortunately, as I’ve aged increasingly I’ve lost faith in human nature.
April 10th, 2023 08:48
Fault
L. B. Mek said:
even devoid of any theological alignment
I can\'t help marvelling at the power faith can afford
those who choose to wield it for good
wonderfully written, dear Poet
April 10th, 2023 05:19
L. B. Mek said:
even devoid of any theological alignment
I can\'t help marvelling at the power faith can afford
those who choose to wield it for good
wonderfully written, dear Poet
April 10th, 2023 05:19
Fault
orchidee said:
You know I\'m gonna say this - erm, there\'s no fault in this good write! lol.
April 10th, 2023 04:23
orchidee said:
You know I\'m gonna say this - erm, there\'s no fault in this good write! lol.
April 10th, 2023 04:23
Slipping
orchidee said:
Good write 2781.
l prefer \'servant\' to \'slave\'. Some Bible versions put \'servant\' instead.
April 10th, 2023 02:14
orchidee said:
Good write 2781.
l prefer \'servant\' to \'slave\'. Some Bible versions put \'servant\' instead.
April 10th, 2023 02:14
Sorry about Sorry
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The language is accessible and the structure is simple, but there are deeper layers of meaning that can be unpacked through closer reading and interpretation.
April 6th, 2023 11:11
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The language is accessible and the structure is simple, but there are deeper layers of meaning that can be unpacked through closer reading and interpretation.
April 6th, 2023 11:11
Sorry about Sorry
orchidee said:
I\'m not sorry that I\'ve not said \'Sorry, this is not a good write\', for there\'s nothing for me to be sorry about, cos it\'s a good write! Eh? lol.
April 6th, 2023 07:34
orchidee said:
I\'m not sorry that I\'ve not said \'Sorry, this is not a good write\', for there\'s nothing for me to be sorry about, cos it\'s a good write! Eh? lol.
April 6th, 2023 07:34
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