Comments received on poems by 2781



Narrative
Bloodorange said:

Wow you have so much emotion in your poetry. It’s amazing I hope I can me as good as you .

May 12th, 2023 01:25

Dumbed down
arqios said:

AI is never a friend and \"2001: A Space Odyssey\" made that clear with HAL\'s increasingly bizarre behaviour.

May 9th, 2023 07:16

Graduation day
L. B. Mek said:

\'Parent\'s like me just wanted to see their son\'
every so often, you gift us a glimpse
of a most sensitive, articulate
and genuinely eloquent, Poet
what a beautifully vivid account
for us, childless
we can but be jealous
bless your shared fatherly success
and may your son, surpass
your laudable, levels
of wisdom and empathetic genius..
I hope serenity finds you
thank you! for choosing to share
stay strong
stay blessed


May 8th, 2023 04:54

Common
orchidee said:

There\'s that controversial verse in \'All things bright and beautiful\', removed from some hymn books:
\'The rich man in his castle
The poor man at his gate....\'

May 8th, 2023 02:09

Elements
arqios said:

There and soon the day of reckoning shall bless and assail one and all at the feet of the Worthy One.

May 7th, 2023 16:18

Graduation day
2781 said:

Well I do feel worn, and a life of salt and sun has left me a little leathery!

May 6th, 2023 18:59

Graduation day
sorenbarrett said:

Loved the honesty of the poem. It felt very real, having walked that road before. Don\'t worry about the outburst, it just shows a bit of character, like a worn leather chair.

May 6th, 2023 18:55

Graduation day
Parisab said:

Significant day in a parent’s life: the tension is present in an otherwise perfect day-

May 6th, 2023 11:31

Strong
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

This poem is a heartfelt and relatable expression of the human desire to overcome physical limitations and live life to the fullest.

May 5th, 2023 13:45

Strong
arqios said:

Same petition this way.

May 5th, 2023 08:35

Strong
Ok Waleed said:

Is getting old bad

May 5th, 2023 07:25

Strong
L. B. Mek said:

beautiful!
thank you dear poet

May 5th, 2023 05:05

Strong
Bobby O said:

Bake the bilges and tell the tale.
Adding those to bucket lists today.

May 5th, 2023 02:43

Strong
orchidee said:

Should be \'care\' in last line? A tender car would be Ok! heehee.

May 5th, 2023 02:39

Strong
orchidee said:

But you is only....61 I see!
But then I heard one say \'Oh no, I will be 30 this year; that\'s really old! lol.

May 5th, 2023 02:38

Howard
Neville said:


What a jolly little rhyme to kickstart a brand new day .. Good old Howard
I hear myself say .. Neville :)

May 5th, 2023 00:46

Fact or fiction
Neville said:


sounds like he was bowled a googly

May 5th, 2023 00:44

Fact or fiction
2781 said:

Amen.

May 5th, 2023 00:00

Fact or fiction
arqios said:

The mangling of truth is an endtimes symptom. We need all the help that is available to us.

May 4th, 2023 20:48

Business
Goldfinch60 said:

True words 2781, if only it could be true for everyone.

Andy

April 30th, 2023 01:49

Tonight
arqios said:

That\'s always handy when the supplies are low!

April 28th, 2023 08:55

Tonight
orchidee said:

Good write 2781.
Can I call you \'\'2\' for short? lol.

April 28th, 2023 01:26

Blood
Doggerel Dave said:

In a place I once lived (thankfully no longer) that would be a not unusual Saturday night. Well writ.

April 27th, 2023 19:06

Blood
sorenbarrett said:

A great story in poetic form. I found it entertaining and well written.

April 27th, 2023 09:41

Doves eyes
orchidee said:

Good write 2781.

April 26th, 2023 02:20

Doves eyes
Goldfinch60 said:

May that friendship last forever 2781.

Andy

April 26th, 2023 02:00

Today
sorenbarrett said:

I have, in my latter years, acquired a deep appreciation for the heroics of the Australian and New Zealand forces. Yet, I too feel that there is hypocrisy in war. Very well written

April 25th, 2023 07:14

Today
arqios said:

A solemn ANZAC day to you!

April 25th, 2023 07:10

Local
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words 2781.

Andy

April 25th, 2023 01:47

Local
2781 said:

Thanks,I think?

April 24th, 2023 17:55



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