Comments received on poems by 2781
Narrative
Bloodorange said:
Wow you have so much emotion in your poetry. It’s amazing I hope I can me as good as you .
May 12th, 2023 01:25
Bloodorange said:
Wow you have so much emotion in your poetry. It’s amazing I hope I can me as good as you .
May 12th, 2023 01:25
Dumbed down
arqios said:
AI is never a friend and \"2001: A Space Odyssey\" made that clear with HAL\'s increasingly bizarre behaviour.
May 9th, 2023 07:16
arqios said:
AI is never a friend and \"2001: A Space Odyssey\" made that clear with HAL\'s increasingly bizarre behaviour.
May 9th, 2023 07:16
Graduation day
L. B. Mek said:
\'Parent\'s like me just wanted to see their son\'
every so often, you gift us a glimpse
of a most sensitive, articulate
and genuinely eloquent, Poet
what a beautifully vivid account
for us, childless
we can but be jealous
bless your shared fatherly success
and may your son, surpass
your laudable, levels
of wisdom and empathetic genius..
I hope serenity finds you
thank you! for choosing to share
stay strong
stay blessed
May 8th, 2023 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
\'Parent\'s like me just wanted to see their son\'
every so often, you gift us a glimpse
of a most sensitive, articulate
and genuinely eloquent, Poet
what a beautifully vivid account
for us, childless
we can but be jealous
bless your shared fatherly success
and may your son, surpass
your laudable, levels
of wisdom and empathetic genius..
I hope serenity finds you
thank you! for choosing to share
stay strong
stay blessed
May 8th, 2023 04:54
Common
orchidee said:
There\'s that controversial verse in \'All things bright and beautiful\', removed from some hymn books:
\'The rich man in his castle
The poor man at his gate....\'
May 8th, 2023 02:09
orchidee said:
There\'s that controversial verse in \'All things bright and beautiful\', removed from some hymn books:
\'The rich man in his castle
The poor man at his gate....\'
May 8th, 2023 02:09
Elements
arqios said:
There and soon the day of reckoning shall bless and assail one and all at the feet of the Worthy One.
May 7th, 2023 16:18
arqios said:
There and soon the day of reckoning shall bless and assail one and all at the feet of the Worthy One.
May 7th, 2023 16:18
Graduation day
2781 said:
Well I do feel worn, and a life of salt and sun has left me a little leathery!
May 6th, 2023 18:59
2781 said:
Well I do feel worn, and a life of salt and sun has left me a little leathery!
May 6th, 2023 18:59
Graduation day
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the honesty of the poem. It felt very real, having walked that road before. Don\'t worry about the outburst, it just shows a bit of character, like a worn leather chair.
May 6th, 2023 18:55
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the honesty of the poem. It felt very real, having walked that road before. Don\'t worry about the outburst, it just shows a bit of character, like a worn leather chair.
May 6th, 2023 18:55
Graduation day
Parisab said:
Significant day in a parent’s life: the tension is present in an otherwise perfect day-
May 6th, 2023 11:31
Parisab said:
Significant day in a parent’s life: the tension is present in an otherwise perfect day-
May 6th, 2023 11:31
Strong
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem is a heartfelt and relatable expression of the human desire to overcome physical limitations and live life to the fullest.
May 5th, 2023 13:45
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem is a heartfelt and relatable expression of the human desire to overcome physical limitations and live life to the fullest.
May 5th, 2023 13:45
Strong
Bobby O said:
Bake the bilges and tell the tale.
Adding those to bucket lists today.
May 5th, 2023 02:43
Bobby O said:
Bake the bilges and tell the tale.
Adding those to bucket lists today.
May 5th, 2023 02:43
Strong
orchidee said:
Should be \'care\' in last line? A tender car would be Ok! heehee.
May 5th, 2023 02:39
orchidee said:
Should be \'care\' in last line? A tender car would be Ok! heehee.
May 5th, 2023 02:39
Strong
orchidee said:
But you is only....61 I see!
But then I heard one say \'Oh no, I will be 30 this year; that\'s really old! lol.
May 5th, 2023 02:38
orchidee said:
But you is only....61 I see!
But then I heard one say \'Oh no, I will be 30 this year; that\'s really old! lol.
May 5th, 2023 02:38
Howard
Neville said:
What a jolly little rhyme to kickstart a brand new day .. Good old Howard
I hear myself say .. Neville :)
May 5th, 2023 00:46
Neville said:
What a jolly little rhyme to kickstart a brand new day .. Good old Howard
I hear myself say .. Neville :)
May 5th, 2023 00:46
Fact or fiction
arqios said:
The mangling of truth is an endtimes symptom. We need all the help that is available to us.
May 4th, 2023 20:48
arqios said:
The mangling of truth is an endtimes symptom. We need all the help that is available to us.
May 4th, 2023 20:48
Business
Goldfinch60 said:
True words 2781, if only it could be true for everyone.
Andy
April 30th, 2023 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
True words 2781, if only it could be true for everyone.
Andy
April 30th, 2023 01:49
Tonight
orchidee said:
Good write 2781.
Can I call you \'\'2\' for short? lol.
April 28th, 2023 01:26
orchidee said:
Good write 2781.
Can I call you \'\'2\' for short? lol.
April 28th, 2023 01:26
Blood
Doggerel Dave said:
In a place I once lived (thankfully no longer) that would be a not unusual Saturday night. Well writ.
April 27th, 2023 19:06
Doggerel Dave said:
In a place I once lived (thankfully no longer) that would be a not unusual Saturday night. Well writ.
April 27th, 2023 19:06
Blood
sorenbarrett said:
A great story in poetic form. I found it entertaining and well written.
April 27th, 2023 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
A great story in poetic form. I found it entertaining and well written.
April 27th, 2023 09:41
Today
sorenbarrett said:
I have, in my latter years, acquired a deep appreciation for the heroics of the Australian and New Zealand forces. Yet, I too feel that there is hypocrisy in war. Very well written
April 25th, 2023 07:14
sorenbarrett said:
I have, in my latter years, acquired a deep appreciation for the heroics of the Australian and New Zealand forces. Yet, I too feel that there is hypocrisy in war. Very well written
April 25th, 2023 07:14
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