Comments received on poems by 2781
Graduation day
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the honesty of the poem. It felt very real, having walked that road before. Don\'t worry about the outburst, it just shows a bit of character, like a worn leather chair.
May 6th, 2023 18:55
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the honesty of the poem. It felt very real, having walked that road before. Don\'t worry about the outburst, it just shows a bit of character, like a worn leather chair.
May 6th, 2023 18:55
Graduation day
Parisab said:
Significant day in a parent’s life: the tension is present in an otherwise perfect day-
May 6th, 2023 11:31
Parisab said:
Significant day in a parent’s life: the tension is present in an otherwise perfect day-
May 6th, 2023 11:31
Strong
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem is a heartfelt and relatable expression of the human desire to overcome physical limitations and live life to the fullest.
May 5th, 2023 13:45
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem is a heartfelt and relatable expression of the human desire to overcome physical limitations and live life to the fullest.
May 5th, 2023 13:45
Strong
Bobby O said:
Bake the bilges and tell the tale.
Adding those to bucket lists today.
May 5th, 2023 02:43
Bobby O said:
Bake the bilges and tell the tale.
Adding those to bucket lists today.
May 5th, 2023 02:43
Strong
orchidee said:
Should be \'care\' in last line? A tender car would be Ok! heehee.
May 5th, 2023 02:39
orchidee said:
Should be \'care\' in last line? A tender car would be Ok! heehee.
May 5th, 2023 02:39
Strong
orchidee said:
But you is only....61 I see!
But then I heard one say \'Oh no, I will be 30 this year; that\'s really old! lol.
May 5th, 2023 02:38
orchidee said:
But you is only....61 I see!
But then I heard one say \'Oh no, I will be 30 this year; that\'s really old! lol.
May 5th, 2023 02:38
Howard
Neville said:
What a jolly little rhyme to kickstart a brand new day .. Good old Howard
I hear myself say .. Neville :)
May 5th, 2023 00:46
Neville said:
What a jolly little rhyme to kickstart a brand new day .. Good old Howard
I hear myself say .. Neville :)
May 5th, 2023 00:46
Fact or fiction
arqios said:
The mangling of truth is an endtimes symptom. We need all the help that is available to us.
May 4th, 2023 20:48
arqios said:
The mangling of truth is an endtimes symptom. We need all the help that is available to us.
May 4th, 2023 20:48
Business
Goldfinch60 said:
True words 2781, if only it could be true for everyone.
Andy
April 30th, 2023 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
True words 2781, if only it could be true for everyone.
Andy
April 30th, 2023 01:49
Tonight
orchidee said:
Good write 2781.
Can I call you \'\'2\' for short? lol.
April 28th, 2023 01:26
orchidee said:
Good write 2781.
Can I call you \'\'2\' for short? lol.
April 28th, 2023 01:26
Blood
Doggerel Dave said:
In a place I once lived (thankfully no longer) that would be a not unusual Saturday night. Well writ.
April 27th, 2023 19:06
Doggerel Dave said:
In a place I once lived (thankfully no longer) that would be a not unusual Saturday night. Well writ.
April 27th, 2023 19:06
Blood
sorenbarrett said:
A great story in poetic form. I found it entertaining and well written.
April 27th, 2023 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
A great story in poetic form. I found it entertaining and well written.
April 27th, 2023 09:41
Today
sorenbarrett said:
I have, in my latter years, acquired a deep appreciation for the heroics of the Australian and New Zealand forces. Yet, I too feel that there is hypocrisy in war. Very well written
April 25th, 2023 07:14
sorenbarrett said:
I have, in my latter years, acquired a deep appreciation for the heroics of the Australian and New Zealand forces. Yet, I too feel that there is hypocrisy in war. Very well written
April 25th, 2023 07:14
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Bobby O said:
Sounds like a plan. I like the rhyme scheme and the prose that leads to perhaps a joyous climax. Nice piece
April 23rd, 2023 04:50
Bobby O said:
Sounds like a plan. I like the rhyme scheme and the prose that leads to perhaps a joyous climax. Nice piece
April 23rd, 2023 04:50
Windscreen
arqios said:
Oh wow, that happened to us once, stone chips that began growing so off to the mechanics and what a relief when that service was covered by insurance. So many things go wrong with our modern \'steeds.\'
April 17th, 2023 08:58
arqios said:
Oh wow, that happened to us once, stone chips that began growing so off to the mechanics and what a relief when that service was covered by insurance. So many things go wrong with our modern \'steeds.\'
April 17th, 2023 08:58
Windscreen
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem presents a critical view of the speaker\'s attitude towards responsibility and accountability.
April 17th, 2023 05:02
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem presents a critical view of the speaker\'s attitude towards responsibility and accountability.
April 17th, 2023 05:02
Evangelism
arqios said:
Many a mysterious way there is and tuned in to how we are as individuals and the revelation is tailor made to suit. Quite an awesome thing as well.
April 16th, 2023 07:51
arqios said:
Many a mysterious way there is and tuned in to how we are as individuals and the revelation is tailor made to suit. Quite an awesome thing as well.
April 16th, 2023 07:51
Evangelism
orchidee said:
Good teachers are OK, I feel. There are many about, not too hard to find.
April 16th, 2023 02:45
orchidee said:
Good teachers are OK, I feel. There are many about, not too hard to find.
April 16th, 2023 02:45
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