Comments received on poems by phylock
A Dandelion Love
Cheeky Missy said:
Beautiful! I'd love to see the final version, and to hear it too. Delightful metaphorical expression, I quite like it!
March 19th, 2011 22:04
Cheeky Missy said:
Beautiful! I'd love to see the final version, and to hear it too. Delightful metaphorical expression, I quite like it!
March 19th, 2011 22:04
A Dandelion Love
Emi said:
I love it!! :) I think it would make a very good song.
March 19th, 2011 20:34
Emi said:
I love it!! :) I think it would make a very good song.
March 19th, 2011 20:34
What Keeps Me Here?
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Something like persistent "love" keeps you there, and displays itself, making you bite your tongue(check the spelling on yours). I like how you expressed the frustrating dilemma, concluding it so sweetly/bittersweetly. Beautiful.
March 1st, 2011 23:59
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Something like persistent "love" keeps you there, and displays itself, making you bite your tongue(check the spelling on yours). I like how you expressed the frustrating dilemma, concluding it so sweetly/bittersweetly. Beautiful.
March 1st, 2011 23:59
Cure
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw. I love how beautifully you expressed it. Excellent. It seems such a common cry as well.
March 1st, 2011 23:24
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw. I love how beautifully you expressed it. Excellent. It seems such a common cry as well.
March 1st, 2011 23:24
Satisfaction
Emi said:
This poem really made me smile. :) And I'm not in the best mood, so that says something! I love it!
February 26th, 2011 20:19
Emi said:
This poem really made me smile. :) And I'm not in the best mood, so that says something! I love it!
February 26th, 2011 20:19
Too Much.
amberlea said:
i like this poem.
You can really feel this emotion put into it
February 24th, 2011 09:18
amberlea said:
i like this poem.
You can really feel this emotion put into it
February 24th, 2011 09:18
Too Much.
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Excellent depiction of....? Fascinating, intriguing, bittersweetly beautiful. I quite like it.
February 24th, 2011 01:04
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Excellent depiction of....? Fascinating, intriguing, bittersweetly beautiful. I quite like it.
February 24th, 2011 01:04
Your Nothing Without Me.
dbremner said:
Good one. Whoever its for wont be able to ignore it
November 21st, 2010 16:52
dbremner said:
Good one. Whoever its for wont be able to ignore it
November 21st, 2010 16:52
Your Nothing Without Me.
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting......very.
Antagonistic, argumentative......a bone to pick with whom?
Almost similar to the old saying something like, when you point a finger, how many are pointing back at YOU?!
November 21st, 2010 16:38
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting......very.
Antagonistic, argumentative......a bone to pick with whom?
Almost similar to the old saying something like, when you point a finger, how many are pointing back at YOU?!
November 21st, 2010 16:38
