Comments received on poems by Love-Me-Softly
Growing up
L. B. Mek said:
maybe you just need
to love yourself, gently
don\'t be too hard on yourself
what nightmares await, won\'t
dissipate, because
we panicked today
better, maybe
to simply anchor ourselves
in the now
and deal with what we can
living life
from minute to day, allow
ourselves
a chance, at enjoying life
and no
this won\'t solve the issues
waiting
but at least, we won\'t suffer
before
our obstacles reveal themselves
(or maybe just have a good all panic
and let it all out
what do i know?
still I have a feeling, down the line
you\'re gonna be just fine
\'stay\' strong!)
thanks for sharing
July 10th, 2023 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
maybe you just need
to love yourself, gently
don\'t be too hard on yourself
what nightmares await, won\'t
dissipate, because
we panicked today
better, maybe
to simply anchor ourselves
in the now
and deal with what we can
living life
from minute to day, allow
ourselves
a chance, at enjoying life
and no
this won\'t solve the issues
waiting
but at least, we won\'t suffer
before
our obstacles reveal themselves
(or maybe just have a good all panic
and let it all out
what do i know?
still I have a feeling, down the line
you\'re gonna be just fine
\'stay\' strong!)
thanks for sharing
July 10th, 2023 05:09
Just a memory
sonal monhyung said:
This poem is something related the same for me.where did you get these beautiful and meaningful words.this poem touch my heart seriously.
July 10th, 2023 04:24
sonal monhyung said:
This poem is something related the same for me.where did you get these beautiful and meaningful words.this poem touch my heart seriously.
July 10th, 2023 04:24
Just a memory
David Wakeling said:
Yet another tedious poem about the failure of relationships.Snooze
June 27th, 2023 00:28
David Wakeling said:
Yet another tedious poem about the failure of relationships.Snooze
June 27th, 2023 00:28
Permit
Parisab said:
It’s probably not your driving, but a reaction to their fear and anxiety-your poem displays hurt feelings in such a pure way-thanks for sharing…We’ll all gain more confidence with practice of life challenges and poetry.
June 20th, 2023 01:45
Parisab said:
It’s probably not your driving, but a reaction to their fear and anxiety-your poem displays hurt feelings in such a pure way-thanks for sharing…We’ll all gain more confidence with practice of life challenges and poetry.
June 20th, 2023 01:45
Battle Scars- TW SH
LIZ said:
Those battle scars....sometimes pain is the only thing keeping us alive. And although we \"know\" or think it\'s bad, it\'s a familiar FEELING, something to hold on to. Don\'t stay there too long though! There\'s so much more!
June 18th, 2023 12:54
LIZ said:
Those battle scars....sometimes pain is the only thing keeping us alive. And although we \"know\" or think it\'s bad, it\'s a familiar FEELING, something to hold on to. Don\'t stay there too long though! There\'s so much more!
June 18th, 2023 12:54
If I Were Accepted
L. B. Mek said:
sometimes, the only solution
to rid yourself of the toxic people
in your life, is distance
its rare we can change, them
so better
to plan our escape, from them
then, maybe
we\'ll be lucky enough, to find
a few like minded friends
and begin, to start seeing our
true weakness and strengths..
thanks for sharing, stay strong!
June 16th, 2023 04:06
L. B. Mek said:
sometimes, the only solution
to rid yourself of the toxic people
in your life, is distance
its rare we can change, them
so better
to plan our escape, from them
then, maybe
we\'ll be lucky enough, to find
a few like minded friends
and begin, to start seeing our
true weakness and strengths..
thanks for sharing, stay strong!
June 16th, 2023 04:06
November 6th 2021 8:30pm
Parisab said:
Thank you for sharing, the tone and the imagery of your poem is also bold and genuine, as you are brave to tell your story- I can tell that you are more than any hardship or trauma
June 14th, 2023 11:44
Parisab said:
Thank you for sharing, the tone and the imagery of your poem is also bold and genuine, as you are brave to tell your story- I can tell that you are more than any hardship or trauma
June 14th, 2023 11:44
What is Love?
Santajah Douglass said:
loving someone and moving on from them is very hard and the heart usually wants what the heart wants but finding your peace and healing from the one you love always take strength and no one can take that from you.
June 5th, 2023 16:29
Santajah Douglass said:
loving someone and moving on from them is very hard and the heart usually wants what the heart wants but finding your peace and healing from the one you love always take strength and no one can take that from you.
June 5th, 2023 16:29
Justice System Cruelty
Parisab said:
I’m afraid the Truth and the law may overlap but are not the same-I hope that you felt some vindication for now for the victim and their loved ones…
June 2nd, 2023 07:19
Parisab said:
I’m afraid the Truth and the law may overlap but are not the same-I hope that you felt some vindication for now for the victim and their loved ones…
June 2nd, 2023 07:19
Justice System Cruelty
2781 said:
Vengeance is mine; I will repay, saith the Lord.
June 2nd, 2023 04:06
2781 said:
Vengeance is mine; I will repay, saith the Lord.
June 2nd, 2023 04:06
Justice System Cruelty
L. B. Mek said:
to ask
weight of a crime
to wonder
measure of punishment
they say law is blind
a judge, impartial
courtrooms, as a church of fact
and yet
and yet
with each passing generation
it\'s apparent the law
is only blind to its own hypocrisy..
(i\'m sorry for your hurt
that your bravery
should be rewarded with such
little justice
is a shameful mark on all of society)
glad you have an outlet for your rage
stay strong!
June 2nd, 2023 04:06
L. B. Mek said:
to ask
weight of a crime
to wonder
measure of punishment
they say law is blind
a judge, impartial
courtrooms, as a church of fact
and yet
and yet
with each passing generation
it\'s apparent the law
is only blind to its own hypocrisy..
(i\'m sorry for your hurt
that your bravery
should be rewarded with such
little justice
is a shameful mark on all of society)
glad you have an outlet for your rage
stay strong!
June 2nd, 2023 04:06
