Comments received on poems by Dev Parth
The Missing Pages
sorenbarrett said:
A touching story poetically told of a gap of happiness taken with a departed soul. Lovely Dev a fave
October 30th, 2026 06:12
sorenbarrett said:
A touching story poetically told of a gap of happiness taken with a departed soul. Lovely Dev a fave
October 30th, 2026 06:12
Instructions for a Human Being
Doggerel Dave said:
A curly one: \'Everyone is improvising\'. Plus \'You were never meant to follow these instructions\' True, but I can certainly agree with some of them...
October 29th, 2026 06:03
Doggerel Dave said:
A curly one: \'Everyone is improvising\'. Plus \'You were never meant to follow these instructions\' True, but I can certainly agree with some of them...
October 29th, 2026 06:03
Instructions for a Human Being
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely instructions that hold a good deal of wisdom. Nicely written Dev
October 29th, 2026 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely instructions that hold a good deal of wisdom. Nicely written Dev
October 29th, 2026 04:53
The Man in Apartment 9
Lorenz Perryroldhan said:
This reminds me of an episode of the twilight zone !
October 28th, 2026 11:22
Lorenz Perryroldhan said:
This reminds me of an episode of the twilight zone !
October 28th, 2026 11:22
The Man in Apartment 9
sorenbarrett said:
A twilight zone type of story that takes one on a journey not so much through space as through a mind. Nicely done Dev
October 28th, 2026 08:24
sorenbarrett said:
A twilight zone type of story that takes one on a journey not so much through space as through a mind. Nicely done Dev
October 28th, 2026 08:24
The Department of Unchosen Things
Lorenz said:
an interesting topic to explore ...
October 27th, 2026 10:38
Lorenz said:
an interesting topic to explore ...
October 27th, 2026 10:38
The Department of Unchosen Things
Paul Bell said:
Yes, I think we all live lives in parallel, and maybe that\'s what life is.
We all pretend we\'ve got commitments, but in reality, we just won\'t push ourselves.
October 27th, 2026 10:35
Paul Bell said:
Yes, I think we all live lives in parallel, and maybe that\'s what life is.
We all pretend we\'ve got commitments, but in reality, we just won\'t push ourselves.
October 27th, 2026 10:35
The Department of Unchosen Things
Caring dove said:
Life hurts people and when we miss out on so much .. or go through difficult things for so long .. it’s unfair .. so … no wander people grieve
October 27th, 2026 10:31
Caring dove said:
Life hurts people and when we miss out on so much .. or go through difficult things for so long .. it’s unfair .. so … no wander people grieve
October 27th, 2026 10:31
The Department of Unchosen Things
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a quietly devastating wisdom here, turning regret into a surreal department of unopened files before gently revealing how imagination can make us mourn lives that were never guaranteed to bring us happiness, either. “We are given one life / to experience, / but an imagination / capable of making us mourn / a thousand others.” is the keeper for me, because it captures the cruel bargain of being human: we can picture a thousand roads not taken, but every minute spent grieving them is another minute taken from the one road still beneath our feet.
October 27th, 2026 08:51
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a quietly devastating wisdom here, turning regret into a surreal department of unopened files before gently revealing how imagination can make us mourn lives that were never guaranteed to bring us happiness, either. “We are given one life / to experience, / but an imagination / capable of making us mourn / a thousand others.” is the keeper for me, because it captures the cruel bargain of being human: we can picture a thousand roads not taken, but every minute spent grieving them is another minute taken from the one road still beneath our feet.
October 27th, 2026 08:51
The Department of Unchosen Things
sorenbarrett said:
A great story that has meaning. Nicely composed it fancifully presents a deeper meaning that applies to real life. Well done
October 27th, 2026 08:50
sorenbarrett said:
A great story that has meaning. Nicely composed it fancifully presents a deeper meaning that applies to real life. Well done
October 27th, 2026 08:50
The Last Witness
Novaselic said:
I believe everything we do contributes something to the world, and it doesn’t have to be something massive that the news will be talking about, something as simple as making something for a friend will give them joy and let them know that there are good people. Very nice poem :))
October 26th, 2026 09:46
Novaselic said:
I believe everything we do contributes something to the world, and it doesn’t have to be something massive that the news will be talking about, something as simple as making something for a friend will give them joy and let them know that there are good people. Very nice poem :))
October 26th, 2026 09:46
The Last Witness
sorenbarrett said:
What a marvelous message, a piece of hope for an eternal existence that carries on long after we are gone and by our actions through others even when they are gone passed on to yet others we live on. So nicely said a fave my friend
October 26th, 2026 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
What a marvelous message, a piece of hope for an eternal existence that carries on long after we are gone and by our actions through others even when they are gone passed on to yet others we live on. So nicely said a fave my friend
October 26th, 2026 08:43
The Day the World Forgot My Name
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of sharing and making someone else\'s day a little brighter. Nicely written Dev
October 25th, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of sharing and making someone else\'s day a little brighter. Nicely written Dev
October 25th, 2026 04:09
The Man Who Remembered Tomorrow
Novaselic said:
I feel like this has potential to a possible short story, I enjoyed it. Nice job :))
October 24th, 2026 10:17
Novaselic said:
I feel like this has potential to a possible short story, I enjoyed it. Nice job :))
October 24th, 2026 10:17
The Man Who Remembered Tomorrow
Lorenz said:
The topic could offer some interesting ideas to explore...
October 24th, 2026 09:20
Lorenz said:
The topic could offer some interesting ideas to explore...
October 24th, 2026 09:20
The Man Who Remembered Tomorrow
sorenbarrett said:
Such a good story with a meaning it was like a story from the twilight zone. Nicely penned Dev
October 24th, 2026 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
Such a good story with a meaning it was like a story from the twilight zone. Nicely penned Dev
October 24th, 2026 05:33
The Man Who Remembered Tomorrow
Caring dove said:
That doesn’t make sense don’t understand what your trying to say
October 24th, 2026 04:34
Caring dove said:
That doesn’t make sense don’t understand what your trying to say
October 24th, 2026 04:34
The Man Who Remembered Tomorrow
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write, much enjoyed
October 24th, 2026 04:08
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write, much enjoyed
October 24th, 2026 04:08
The Universe Does Not Explain Itself
Caring dove said:
People have feelings in life
October 23rd, 2026 14:48
Caring dove said:
People have feelings in life
October 23rd, 2026 14:48
The Universe Does Not Explain Itself
Caring dove said:
reaches for another hand ‘ …Because people need other people in life . Nobody meant to be complely alone without others
October 23rd, 2026 14:21
Caring dove said:
reaches for another hand ‘ …Because people need other people in life . Nobody meant to be complely alone without others
October 23rd, 2026 14:21
The Universe Does Not Explain Itself
Caring dove said:
What do you mean ‘ the universe has found a way to look at itself and wonder ‘
Well some things don’t always make sense and sometimes we can’t understand certain things …
So …
We’re not just ‘ matter ‘ tho are we
October 23rd, 2026 14:06
Caring dove said:
What do you mean ‘ the universe has found a way to look at itself and wonder ‘
Well some things don’t always make sense and sometimes we can’t understand certain things …
So …
We’re not just ‘ matter ‘ tho are we
October 23rd, 2026 14:06
The Universe Does Not Explain Itself
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last part of your write Deve that captured my attention most:
\"We may never discover
why the universe exists.
But we are part of it,
and for a little while,
the universe has found a way
to look at itself
and wonder.\"
This is not only another point of view but poetic in nature. Loved it
October 23rd, 2026 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last part of your write Deve that captured my attention most:
\"We may never discover
why the universe exists.
But we are part of it,
and for a little while,
the universe has found a way
to look at itself
and wonder.\"
This is not only another point of view but poetic in nature. Loved it
October 23rd, 2026 04:35
The Person I Am Becoming
Novaselic said:
In a way it feels definitely relatable.
October 22nd, 2026 09:42
Novaselic said:
In a way it feels definitely relatable.
October 22nd, 2026 09:42
The Person I Am Becoming
sorenbarrett said:
What an existential discovery and growth in itself. A lovely write Dev and very nicely done
October 22nd, 2026 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
What an existential discovery and growth in itself. A lovely write Dev and very nicely done
October 22nd, 2026 09:39
Somewhere, Life Is Still Beautiful
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful itself the message of this write Dev if more of us looked for the wonderful we would find it in those small spaces that now annoy us. Well said my friend.
October 21st, 2026 11:37
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful itself the message of this write Dev if more of us looked for the wonderful we would find it in those small spaces that now annoy us. Well said my friend.
October 21st, 2026 11:37
The Things We Never Say
sorenbarrett said:
The key for me is the recognition. Until one knows one is wounded or ill one can not treat it. The poem then proceeds to lay out a healing process. Nicely done.
October 20th, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
The key for me is the recognition. Until one knows one is wounded or ill one can not treat it. The poem then proceeds to lay out a healing process. Nicely done.
October 20th, 2026 04:19
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