Comments received on poems by Dev Parth
Being Lonely Is Better Than Living in a Fake World
Doggerel Dave said:
A raw critique of what passes for caring interaction in large swathes of the population. I understand completely. Had precisely your thoughts (though expressed less poetically) intermittently for most of my life. However I must agree with Caring Dove (above); her statement is the closest you will get to truth round here.
Turn your thoughts to what you want out of life and go for it . You will find folks on the same journey whom you can relate to.
(Sorry – I don’t usually dispense advice like that, but in this case I felt an urgent need to do so.)
September 19th, 2026 05:10
Doggerel Dave said:
A raw critique of what passes for caring interaction in large swathes of the population. I understand completely. Had precisely your thoughts (though expressed less poetically) intermittently for most of my life. However I must agree with Caring Dove (above); her statement is the closest you will get to truth round here.
Turn your thoughts to what you want out of life and go for it . You will find folks on the same journey whom you can relate to.
(Sorry – I don’t usually dispense advice like that, but in this case I felt an urgent need to do so.)
September 19th, 2026 05:10
Being Lonely Is Better Than Living in a Fake World
Caring dove said:
You express yourself well .
And true … it’s lonely when you feel invisible around people .
Though Some people do want to know how others are .. their not just saying it .
Everything isn’t fake
September 18th, 2026 21:25
Caring dove said:
You express yourself well .
And true … it’s lonely when you feel invisible around people .
Though Some people do want to know how others are .. their not just saying it .
Everything isn’t fake
September 18th, 2026 21:25
Being Lonely Is Better Than Living in a Fake World
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said Dev this poem speaks of sincerity and being oneself where others are honest as well. Nicely done.
September 18th, 2026 19:33
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said Dev this poem speaks of sincerity and being oneself where others are honest as well. Nicely done.
September 18th, 2026 19:33
The Day I Left
Caring dove said:
Waiting for someone ?
Bit of a sad writing but nicely written
July 25th, 2026 11:30
Caring dove said:
Waiting for someone ?
Bit of a sad writing but nicely written
July 25th, 2026 11:30
The Day I Left
sorenbarrett said:
Dev this poem left a sadness and a longing in me. It is identifiable because of its humanity and the experiences that many of us share along the way. I leaves a feeling of loneliness as well. Nicely written my friend
July 25th, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Dev this poem left a sadness and a longing in me. It is identifiable because of its humanity and the experiences that many of us share along the way. I leaves a feeling of loneliness as well. Nicely written my friend
July 25th, 2026 04:17
Sleeping Beneath the Sky
Caring dove said:
Nicely written .. but sad .. like you want to feel more noticed or to feel less alone in the world
July 11th, 2026 08:53
Caring dove said:
Nicely written .. but sad .. like you want to feel more noticed or to feel less alone in the world
July 11th, 2026 08:53
Sleeping Beneath the Sky
sorenbarrett said:
So good to see you back Dev this poem is a bit haunting and speaks from the ground. It has a omnipotent feel to it as if it can see all from a different perspective. It at the same time is lonely and feels so isolated. Nicely penned in rhyme and with good flow and meter it is a fave
July 11th, 2026 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
So good to see you back Dev this poem is a bit haunting and speaks from the ground. It has a omnipotent feel to it as if it can see all from a different perspective. It at the same time is lonely and feels so isolated. Nicely penned in rhyme and with good flow and meter it is a fave
July 11th, 2026 04:40
Towards the Eternity
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely thought with deep philosophical meaning. Nicely written Dev
May 24th, 2026 15:26
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely thought with deep philosophical meaning. Nicely written Dev
May 24th, 2026 15:26
A Message to the World
NafisaSB said:
so inspirational - yet we tend to fall prey to slander, and lose our cool and our serenity: this is a timely reminder to hold fast...
May 20th, 2026 01:06
NafisaSB said:
so inspirational - yet we tend to fall prey to slander, and lose our cool and our serenity: this is a timely reminder to hold fast...
May 20th, 2026 01:06
A Message to the World
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Dev a piece of good advice set in poetic form a fave
May 17th, 2026 13:07
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Dev a piece of good advice set in poetic form a fave
May 17th, 2026 13:07
The Letter I Didn’t Leave
Ellen Marsell said:
I like the quiet wisdom of this poem.
March 14th, 2026 11:36
Ellen Marsell said:
I like the quiet wisdom of this poem.
March 14th, 2026 11:36
The Letter I Didn’t Leave
sorenbarrett said:
Procrastinating death is not a bad thing. A great write about an action not taken that leaves further options and I was always told to leave as many options open as possible
March 14th, 2026 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
Procrastinating death is not a bad thing. A great write about an action not taken that leaves further options and I was always told to leave as many options open as possible
March 14th, 2026 09:40
An Apology
Caring dove said:
Well sometimes people make mistakes or do things wrong .. but yeah owning up to it might help , and yeah apologising .. because yeah nobody’s perfect .
Nice writing anyway )
March 1st, 2026 15:19
Caring dove said:
Well sometimes people make mistakes or do things wrong .. but yeah owning up to it might help , and yeah apologising .. because yeah nobody’s perfect .
Nice writing anyway )
March 1st, 2026 15:19
Between Who I Was and Who I Am
sorenbarrett said:
We are all a composite of many things blended into a unique individual. Nicely written
March 1st, 2026 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
We are all a composite of many things blended into a unique individual. Nicely written
March 1st, 2026 06:10
May I Love You
Caring dove said:
You have a beautiful way with words .. I couldn’t write in that way
February 28th, 2026 02:29
Caring dove said:
You have a beautiful way with words .. I couldn’t write in that way
February 28th, 2026 02:29
The Door That Opens Inward
Caring dove said:
Sounds like your reflecting on yourself or doing some healing ? Sometimes tho .. we need help with how we feel
February 26th, 2026 10:36
Caring dove said:
Sounds like your reflecting on yourself or doing some healing ? Sometimes tho .. we need help with how we feel
February 26th, 2026 10:36
My eyes are crying for me
Caring dove said:
Sometimes we grieve the things the things that we have missed out on .. the things we should have had but didn’t .. and the things we have lost
February 25th, 2026 15:36
Caring dove said:
Sometimes we grieve the things the things that we have missed out on .. the things we should have had but didn’t .. and the things we have lost
February 25th, 2026 15:36
The Door That Opens Inward
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept Dev. I once asked why doors had to open outward and was told that it was the fire code so people would not die stacked up against a door that opened inward. A great metaphor in this poem and it is used throughout. Nicely done
February 25th, 2026 12:32
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept Dev. I once asked why doors had to open outward and was told that it was the fire code so people would not die stacked up against a door that opened inward. A great metaphor in this poem and it is used throughout. Nicely done
February 25th, 2026 12:32
No Character, Just Me
sorenbarrett said:
Being real is a big part of a good poem. You don\'t have to live it but you do have to feel it. Nicely written Dev
February 24th, 2026 14:19
sorenbarrett said:
Being real is a big part of a good poem. You don\'t have to live it but you do have to feel it. Nicely written Dev
February 24th, 2026 14:19
No Character, Just Me
Caring dove said:
That’s lovely .. there’s a gentleness in your words .. I like the lines about the ‘ heart ‘
And yeah true sometimes we do say I’m fine . When we’re not ..
February 24th, 2026 13:41
Caring dove said:
That’s lovely .. there’s a gentleness in your words .. I like the lines about the ‘ heart ‘
And yeah true sometimes we do say I’m fine . When we’re not ..
February 24th, 2026 13:41
The Room That Knows Me
Caring dove said:
Strange how our minds can make us feel ..
February 23rd, 2026 13:38
Caring dove said:
Strange how our minds can make us feel ..
February 23rd, 2026 13:38
After 12th , We Became Strangers
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic, melancholic, sad but real time and distance does fade feelings. They still remain but are only shadows of memories and every once in a while there is a rustle in the shadows and hair stands on end goose flesh raises and feelings return but only briefly. So nicely written Dev a fave
February 23rd, 2026 12:53
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic, melancholic, sad but real time and distance does fade feelings. They still remain but are only shadows of memories and every once in a while there is a rustle in the shadows and hair stands on end goose flesh raises and feelings return but only briefly. So nicely written Dev a fave
February 23rd, 2026 12:53
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