Comments received on poems by Dev Parth
Letter to Death
TobaniNataiella said:
A very interesting and well written read , even if a bit dark and haunting
January 7th, 2025 11:00
TobaniNataiella said:
A very interesting and well written read , even if a bit dark and haunting
January 7th, 2025 11:00
Letter to Death
Caring dove said:
I couldn’t even read all of that . Seems like a really sad depressed writing
Take care
January 7th, 2025 07:48
Caring dove said:
I couldn’t even read all of that . Seems like a really sad depressed writing
Take care
January 7th, 2025 07:48
Still Away From You
Bella Shepard said:
I love reading this poem aloud, it has a beautiful, rhyming pattern that is almost musical. The words express a deep sentiment, truly exquisite.
December 24th, 2024 13:29
Bella Shepard said:
I love reading this poem aloud, it has a beautiful, rhyming pattern that is almost musical. The words express a deep sentiment, truly exquisite.
December 24th, 2024 13:29
Still Away From You
sorenbarrett said:
Dev you have done well with this poem that not only is nicely rhymed and carefully constructed but tells a story in a concise and well organized manner with some great lines.(Your shadow lingers, a faint embrace, But I reach for you and touch empty space.) (Though hearts may yearn, they bear the weight,
Of love confined by the hands of fate.)
December 24th, 2024 03:22
sorenbarrett said:
Dev you have done well with this poem that not only is nicely rhymed and carefully constructed but tells a story in a concise and well organized manner with some great lines.(Your shadow lingers, a faint embrace, But I reach for you and touch empty space.) (Though hearts may yearn, they bear the weight,
Of love confined by the hands of fate.)
December 24th, 2024 03:22
Still Away From You
TobaniNataiella said:
A sense of longing for what is longer there, written very nicely
December 24th, 2024 02:34
TobaniNataiella said:
A sense of longing for what is longer there, written very nicely
December 24th, 2024 02:34
Still Away From You
rin said:
I\'m sure it will arrive someday.
``Tenderness to You\'\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 00:40
rin said:
I\'m sure it will arrive someday.
``Tenderness to You\'\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 00:40
One-Sided Love
Cassie58 said:
An excellent composition, so well narrated, but sooo sad Dev. Gets a fav from me. Well done.
December 21st, 2024 12:58
Cassie58 said:
An excellent composition, so well narrated, but sooo sad Dev. Gets a fav from me. Well done.
December 21st, 2024 12:58
One-Sided Love
TobaniNataiella said:
A very well written poem about being in love on a one way street.
December 21st, 2024 10:46
TobaniNataiella said:
A very well written poem about being in love on a one way street.
December 21st, 2024 10:46
One-Sided Love
sorenbarrett said:
Dev you have grown, your poetry has exploded. This piece is so well written with such great lines and images as well as rhyme it sparkles and shines and calls out to all that have had a love unrequited.
December 21st, 2024 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
Dev you have grown, your poetry has exploded. This piece is so well written with such great lines and images as well as rhyme it sparkles and shines and calls out to all that have had a love unrequited.
December 21st, 2024 09:15
One-Sided Love
Caring dove said:
Oh , that’s very sad . So much sadness in your words ((
But you write so verY well
December 21st, 2024 08:10
Caring dove said:
Oh , that’s very sad . So much sadness in your words ((
But you write so verY well
December 21st, 2024 08:10
Never Trust Any Girl
TobaniNataiella said:
All people have met one of these, your faith will be restored and you will meet one who is not like this. Emotional and well written poem
December 7th, 2024 04:03
TobaniNataiella said:
All people have met one of these, your faith will be restored and you will meet one who is not like this. Emotional and well written poem
December 7th, 2024 04:03
Never Trust Any Girl
Caring dove said:
Sad but beautiful writing .. filled with emotion . I’m sorry if you’ v been hurt
December 7th, 2024 01:53
Caring dove said:
Sad but beautiful writing .. filled with emotion . I’m sorry if you’ v been hurt
December 7th, 2024 01:53
I think I\'m too loud
TobaniNataiella said:
Well written poem and i can connect with it, I can see you wrote this a while ago but in case you are still having issues, i have added the following.
I find the problem with being lonely is that it is not visual like a broken arm for example, so no one notices it. I was married for 15 years and i was very lonely which was difficult for people to get there heads around.
Some one once said to me, you are and will become what you perceive yourself to be, in order to change that you have to think differently about yourself, this then transmits to other people. For me it did help a bit, not saying it will for everyone, but thought i would mention it. Wishing you all the very best
December 2nd, 2024 21:26
TobaniNataiella said:
Well written poem and i can connect with it, I can see you wrote this a while ago but in case you are still having issues, i have added the following.
I find the problem with being lonely is that it is not visual like a broken arm for example, so no one notices it. I was married for 15 years and i was very lonely which was difficult for people to get there heads around.
Some one once said to me, you are and will become what you perceive yourself to be, in order to change that you have to think differently about yourself, this then transmits to other people. For me it did help a bit, not saying it will for everyone, but thought i would mention it. Wishing you all the very best
December 2nd, 2024 21:26
Journey of Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams are the fuel that propells us on our journey. A most important write
November 15th, 2024 05:41
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams are the fuel that propells us on our journey. A most important write
November 15th, 2024 05:41
My eyes are crying for me
Dan Williams said:
As fine a description of heartache as it can be defined, nice work.
October 27th, 2024 23:03
Dan Williams said:
As fine a description of heartache as it can be defined, nice work.
October 27th, 2024 23:03
Hide Yourself
Caring dove said:
Nice writing .. tho it doesn’t always help .. to hide
October 27th, 2024 13:47
Caring dove said:
Nice writing .. tho it doesn’t always help .. to hide
October 27th, 2024 13:47
My eyes are crying for me
RSM0812 said:
Men are not allowed to cry. Didn\'t you know?
October 26th, 2024 12:24
RSM0812 said:
Men are not allowed to cry. Didn\'t you know?
October 26th, 2024 12:24
My eyes are crying for me
Caring dove said:
Very sad . I’m really sorry you feel that way ((
October 26th, 2024 09:24
Caring dove said:
Very sad . I’m really sorry you feel that way ((
October 26th, 2024 09:24
My eyes are crying for me
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write of pain and loss. Nicely composed and with some good lines it reads well. Very nice and easy to understand. It is sad and heartbreaking.
October 26th, 2024 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write of pain and loss. Nicely composed and with some good lines it reads well. Very nice and easy to understand. It is sad and heartbreaking.
October 26th, 2024 09:15
I think I\'m too loud
Caring dove said:
I’m sorry you feel that way .. but maybe some people accept you , and would accept you . I’m sorry your hurting . Take care ..
October 25th, 2024 10:36
Caring dove said:
I’m sorry you feel that way .. but maybe some people accept you , and would accept you . I’m sorry your hurting . Take care ..
October 25th, 2024 10:36
I think I\'m too loud
sorenbarrett said:
Have been there and felt that. It yells in its silence but remains unheard in its screams. I think that you have captured the essence of the feel of this loneliness and understood its motivation. Very nicely done
October 25th, 2024 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
Have been there and felt that. It yells in its silence but remains unheard in its screams. I think that you have captured the essence of the feel of this loneliness and understood its motivation. Very nicely done
October 25th, 2024 09:13
I\'m Deeply Introvert
sorenbarrett said:
A dark write about a dark feeling. I love the night and the shade so sounds good to me but many feel discomfort in the dark. Believe it or not sad music is the best treatment for sadness. Everyone needs company that understands. Loved the rhyme and rhythm of the poem keep it up
October 24th, 2024 12:19
sorenbarrett said:
A dark write about a dark feeling. I love the night and the shade so sounds good to me but many feel discomfort in the dark. Believe it or not sad music is the best treatment for sadness. Everyone needs company that understands. Loved the rhyme and rhythm of the poem keep it up
October 24th, 2024 12:19
I\'m Deeply Introvert
Caring dove said:
Sad way to feel . I too feel trapped in myself sometimes . It’s ok to be quiet tho .
October 24th, 2024 12:00
Caring dove said:
Sad way to feel . I too feel trapped in myself sometimes . It’s ok to be quiet tho .
October 24th, 2024 12:00
खामोशियों का साया
Dev Parth said:
English version
In an empty room, I converse with my soul,
Since you\'ve left, I’ve lost all control.
Wrapped in silence, my heart lies bare,
Haunted by shadows of memories we shared.
Your laughter\'s echo no longer fills the air,
Without you, this heartbeat feels like a snare.
In the moonlight of nights, there’s an emptiness bright,
Without you, this world feels devoid of light.
In every dream, your face I see,
Every joy seems lonely without thee.
Holding myself together, I wear a smile,
Yet each day I endure this pain all the while.
In my eyes, untold stories reside,
Without you, this life feels like a barren tide.
One day return, this heart longs for you,
In the journey of memories, I\'ll always be true.
October 19th, 2024 11:20
Dev Parth said:
English version
In an empty room, I converse with my soul,
Since you\'ve left, I’ve lost all control.
Wrapped in silence, my heart lies bare,
Haunted by shadows of memories we shared.
Your laughter\'s echo no longer fills the air,
Without you, this heartbeat feels like a snare.
In the moonlight of nights, there’s an emptiness bright,
Without you, this world feels devoid of light.
In every dream, your face I see,
Every joy seems lonely without thee.
Holding myself together, I wear a smile,
Yet each day I endure this pain all the while.
In my eyes, untold stories reside,
Without you, this life feels like a barren tide.
One day return, this heart longs for you,
In the journey of memories, I\'ll always be true.
October 19th, 2024 11:20
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