The Coder and the Creator
Poetic Licence said:

A very well crafted and enjoyable read

March 26th, 2025 12:54

She Became a Memory, I Became a Ghost
Poetic Licence said:

A heartfelt write of the sorrow of chances gone and time passed, nicely expressed and written

March 16th, 2025 12:23

She Became a Memory, I Became a Ghost
sorenbarrett said:

A sad poem of loss that bleeds with sorrow. Missed encounters, lost opportunities, time past. Very well written in rhyme and with good meter. Nicely done.

March 16th, 2025 10:00

Am I Enough
sorenbarrett said:

A poem that speaks to being oneself. A lovely write about finding oneself and standing up for it. Lovely

February 28th, 2025 19:08

Letter to Death
Poetic Licence said:

A very interesting and well written read , even if a bit dark and haunting

January 7th, 2025 11:00

Letter to Death
Caring dove said:

I couldn’t even read all of that . Seems like a really sad depressed writing

Take care

January 7th, 2025 07:48

Still Away From You
sorenbarrett said:

Dev you have done well with this poem that not only is nicely rhymed and carefully constructed but tells a story in a concise and well organized manner with some great lines.(Your shadow lingers, a faint embrace, But I reach for you and touch empty space.) (Though hearts may yearn, they bear the weight,
Of love confined by the hands of fate.)

December 24th, 2024 03:22

Still Away From You
rin said:

I\'m sure it will arrive someday.
``Tenderness to You\'\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.

December 24th, 2024 00:40

One-Sided Love
Cassie58 said:

An excellent composition, so well narrated, but sooo sad Dev. Gets a fav from me. Well done.

December 21st, 2024 12:58

One-Sided Love
sorenbarrett said:

Dev you have grown, your poetry has exploded. This piece is so well written with such great lines and images as well as rhyme it sparkles and shines and calls out to all that have had a love unrequited.

December 21st, 2024 09:15

Never Trust Any Girl
Poetic Licence said:

All people have met one of these, your faith will be restored and you will meet one who is not like this. Emotional and well written poem

December 7th, 2024 04:03

I think I\'m too loud
Poetic Licence said:

Well written poem and i can connect with it, I can see you wrote this a while ago but in case you are still having issues, i have added the following.
I find the problem with being lonely is that it is not visual like a broken arm for example, so no one notices it. I was married for 15 years and i was very lonely which was difficult for people to get there heads around.
Some one once said to me, you are and will become what you perceive yourself to be, in order to change that you have to think differently about yourself, this then transmits to other people. For me it did help a bit, not saying it will for everyone, but thought i would mention it. Wishing you all the very best

December 2nd, 2024 21:26

Journey of Dreams
sorenbarrett said:

Dreams are the fuel that propells us on our journey. A most important write

November 15th, 2024 05:41

My eyes are crying for me
Dan Williams said:

As fine a description of heartache as it can be defined, nice work.

October 27th, 2024 23:03

My eyes are crying for me
RSM0812 said:

Men are not allowed to cry. Didn\'t you know?

October 26th, 2024 12:24