Comments received on poems by Dev Parth
Towards the Eternity
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely thought with deep philosophical meaning. Nicely written Dev
May 24th, 2026 15:26
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely thought with deep philosophical meaning. Nicely written Dev
May 24th, 2026 15:26
A Message to the World
NafisaSB said:
so inspirational - yet we tend to fall prey to slander, and lose our cool and our serenity: this is a timely reminder to hold fast...
May 20th, 2026 01:06
NafisaSB said:
so inspirational - yet we tend to fall prey to slander, and lose our cool and our serenity: this is a timely reminder to hold fast...
May 20th, 2026 01:06
A Message to the World
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Dev a piece of good advice set in poetic form a fave
May 17th, 2026 13:07
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Dev a piece of good advice set in poetic form a fave
May 17th, 2026 13:07
The Letter I Didn’t Leave
Ellen Marsell said:
I like the quiet wisdom of this poem.
March 14th, 2026 11:36
Ellen Marsell said:
I like the quiet wisdom of this poem.
March 14th, 2026 11:36
The Letter I Didn’t Leave
sorenbarrett said:
Procrastinating death is not a bad thing. A great write about an action not taken that leaves further options and I was always told to leave as many options open as possible
March 14th, 2026 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
Procrastinating death is not a bad thing. A great write about an action not taken that leaves further options and I was always told to leave as many options open as possible
March 14th, 2026 09:40
An Apology
Caring dove said:
Well sometimes people make mistakes or do things wrong .. but yeah owning up to it might help , and yeah apologising .. because yeah nobody’s perfect .
Nice writing anyway )
March 1st, 2026 15:19
Caring dove said:
Well sometimes people make mistakes or do things wrong .. but yeah owning up to it might help , and yeah apologising .. because yeah nobody’s perfect .
Nice writing anyway )
March 1st, 2026 15:19
Between Who I Was and Who I Am
sorenbarrett said:
We are all a composite of many things blended into a unique individual. Nicely written
March 1st, 2026 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
We are all a composite of many things blended into a unique individual. Nicely written
March 1st, 2026 06:10
May I Love You
Caring dove said:
You have a beautiful way with words .. I couldn’t write in that way
February 28th, 2026 02:29
Caring dove said:
You have a beautiful way with words .. I couldn’t write in that way
February 28th, 2026 02:29
The Door That Opens Inward
Caring dove said:
Sounds like your reflecting on yourself or doing some healing ? Sometimes tho .. we need help with how we feel
February 26th, 2026 10:36
Caring dove said:
Sounds like your reflecting on yourself or doing some healing ? Sometimes tho .. we need help with how we feel
February 26th, 2026 10:36
My eyes are crying for me
Caring dove said:
Sometimes we grieve the things the things that we have missed out on .. the things we should have had but didn’t .. and the things we have lost
February 25th, 2026 15:36
Caring dove said:
Sometimes we grieve the things the things that we have missed out on .. the things we should have had but didn’t .. and the things we have lost
February 25th, 2026 15:36
The Door That Opens Inward
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept Dev. I once asked why doors had to open outward and was told that it was the fire code so people would not die stacked up against a door that opened inward. A great metaphor in this poem and it is used throughout. Nicely done
February 25th, 2026 12:32
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept Dev. I once asked why doors had to open outward and was told that it was the fire code so people would not die stacked up against a door that opened inward. A great metaphor in this poem and it is used throughout. Nicely done
February 25th, 2026 12:32
No Character, Just Me
sorenbarrett said:
Being real is a big part of a good poem. You don\'t have to live it but you do have to feel it. Nicely written Dev
February 24th, 2026 14:19
sorenbarrett said:
Being real is a big part of a good poem. You don\'t have to live it but you do have to feel it. Nicely written Dev
February 24th, 2026 14:19
No Character, Just Me
Caring dove said:
That’s lovely .. there’s a gentleness in your words .. I like the lines about the ‘ heart ‘
And yeah true sometimes we do say I’m fine . When we’re not ..
February 24th, 2026 13:41
Caring dove said:
That’s lovely .. there’s a gentleness in your words .. I like the lines about the ‘ heart ‘
And yeah true sometimes we do say I’m fine . When we’re not ..
February 24th, 2026 13:41
The Room That Knows Me
Caring dove said:
Strange how our minds can make us feel ..
February 23rd, 2026 13:38
Caring dove said:
Strange how our minds can make us feel ..
February 23rd, 2026 13:38
After 12th , We Became Strangers
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic, melancholic, sad but real time and distance does fade feelings. They still remain but are only shadows of memories and every once in a while there is a rustle in the shadows and hair stands on end goose flesh raises and feelings return but only briefly. So nicely written Dev a fave
February 23rd, 2026 12:53
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic, melancholic, sad but real time and distance does fade feelings. They still remain but are only shadows of memories and every once in a while there is a rustle in the shadows and hair stands on end goose flesh raises and feelings return but only briefly. So nicely written Dev a fave
February 23rd, 2026 12:53
After 12th , We Became Strangers
Lorenz said:
There is a tense existential dimension .
February 23rd, 2026 12:35
Lorenz said:
There is a tense existential dimension .
February 23rd, 2026 12:35
The Room Where I Exist
sorenbarrett said:
I hear you Dev I too prefer quiet most of the time. If I want a little noise I put on music or go listen to the birds they are much more accomodating and seem to listen to what I say too. Well written my friend
August 2nd, 2025 13:14
sorenbarrett said:
I hear you Dev I too prefer quiet most of the time. If I want a little noise I put on music or go listen to the birds they are much more accomodating and seem to listen to what I say too. Well written my friend
August 2nd, 2025 13:14
The Room Where I Exist
Poetic Licence said:
I got a sense of someone finding some comfort in them being alone, nicely expressed and written
August 2nd, 2025 12:49
Poetic Licence said:
I got a sense of someone finding some comfort in them being alone, nicely expressed and written
August 2nd, 2025 12:49
The Room Where I Exist
Lorenz said:
Be more optimistic dev ! You see sometime you have something to say !
August 2nd, 2025 10:22
Lorenz said:
Be more optimistic dev ! You see sometime you have something to say !
August 2nd, 2025 10:22
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