Comments received on poems by Dev Parth
CHEMISTRY
Skally said:
We are all atoms, we are all connected to the infinite of the universe.
May 1st, 2025 09:47
Skally said:
We are all atoms, we are all connected to the infinite of the universe.
May 1st, 2025 09:47
Walking Towards God
sorenbarrett said:
Eye steady on the mark perseverance with a steady march. Nicely said in poetic form Dev.
April 26th, 2025 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
Eye steady on the mark perseverance with a steady march. Nicely said in poetic form Dev.
April 26th, 2025 05:00
Just Me, and All My Failing
Poetic Licence said:
A very brave,raw and honest reflection on how there life has gone so far, a sense of regret and sadness although it has not been deliberate the way things have gone, it is just the way they are, a relatable write to many beautifully written
April 12th, 2025 12:24
Poetic Licence said:
A very brave,raw and honest reflection on how there life has gone so far, a sense of regret and sadness although it has not been deliberate the way things have gone, it is just the way they are, a relatable write to many beautifully written
April 12th, 2025 12:24
Just Me, and All My Failing
sorenbarrett said:
A brave poem that opens up one\'s soul and lays bare in raw honesty for all to read in its majesty. The rhyme is good and the flow is nice but most of all is the content of this poem a bit of all of us we could recognize in this piece. A definite fave
April 12th, 2025 10:39
sorenbarrett said:
A brave poem that opens up one\'s soul and lays bare in raw honesty for all to read in its majesty. The rhyme is good and the flow is nice but most of all is the content of this poem a bit of all of us we could recognize in this piece. A definite fave
April 12th, 2025 10:39
The Road Though Quiet Pines
sorenbarrett said:
Robert Frost comes to mind and this journey we take we have choices in our journey all leading to other places none of which we know. A haunting piece
April 1st, 2025 13:17
sorenbarrett said:
Robert Frost comes to mind and this journey we take we have choices in our journey all leading to other places none of which we know. A haunting piece
April 1st, 2025 13:17
The Road Though Quiet Pines
Poetic Licence said:
Those tree\'s have witnessed so much and if could talk would have alot to say, enjoyed the read
April 1st, 2025 12:20
Poetic Licence said:
Those tree\'s have witnessed so much and if could talk would have alot to say, enjoyed the read
April 1st, 2025 12:20
The Coder and the Creator
Poetic Licence said:
A very well crafted and enjoyable read
March 26th, 2025 12:54
Poetic Licence said:
A very well crafted and enjoyable read
March 26th, 2025 12:54
The Coder and the Creator
sorenbarrett said:
A personal message sent and a mark made. Very nicely worded and written. Lovely
March 26th, 2025 11:49
sorenbarrett said:
A personal message sent and a mark made. Very nicely worded and written. Lovely
March 26th, 2025 11:49
She Became a Memory, I Became a Ghost
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt write of the sorrow of chances gone and time passed, nicely expressed and written
March 16th, 2025 12:23
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt write of the sorrow of chances gone and time passed, nicely expressed and written
March 16th, 2025 12:23
She Became a Memory, I Became a Ghost
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of loss that bleeds with sorrow. Missed encounters, lost opportunities, time past. Very well written in rhyme and with good meter. Nicely done.
March 16th, 2025 10:00
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of loss that bleeds with sorrow. Missed encounters, lost opportunities, time past. Very well written in rhyme and with good meter. Nicely done.
March 16th, 2025 10:00
Am I Enough
Poetic Licence said:
You are yourself and always be proud of it, enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2025 01:43
Poetic Licence said:
You are yourself and always be proud of it, enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2025 01:43
Am I Enough
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks to being oneself. A lovely write about finding oneself and standing up for it. Lovely
February 28th, 2025 19:08
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks to being oneself. A lovely write about finding oneself and standing up for it. Lovely
February 28th, 2025 19:08
Still Away From You
RSM0812 said:
Great rhythm, great rhym. A heart felt write. I really liked it.
February 8th, 2025 09:39
RSM0812 said:
Great rhythm, great rhym. A heart felt write. I really liked it.
February 8th, 2025 09:39
Letter to Death
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting and well written read , even if a bit dark and haunting
January 7th, 2025 11:00
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting and well written read , even if a bit dark and haunting
January 7th, 2025 11:00
Letter to Death
Caring dove said:
I couldn’t even read all of that . Seems like a really sad depressed writing
Take care
January 7th, 2025 07:48
Caring dove said:
I couldn’t even read all of that . Seems like a really sad depressed writing
Take care
January 7th, 2025 07:48
Still Away From You
Bella Shepard said:
I love reading this poem aloud, it has a beautiful, rhyming pattern that is almost musical. The words express a deep sentiment, truly exquisite.
December 24th, 2024 13:29
Bella Shepard said:
I love reading this poem aloud, it has a beautiful, rhyming pattern that is almost musical. The words express a deep sentiment, truly exquisite.
December 24th, 2024 13:29
Still Away From You
sorenbarrett said:
Dev you have done well with this poem that not only is nicely rhymed and carefully constructed but tells a story in a concise and well organized manner with some great lines.(Your shadow lingers, a faint embrace, But I reach for you and touch empty space.) (Though hearts may yearn, they bear the weight,
Of love confined by the hands of fate.)
December 24th, 2024 03:22
sorenbarrett said:
Dev you have done well with this poem that not only is nicely rhymed and carefully constructed but tells a story in a concise and well organized manner with some great lines.(Your shadow lingers, a faint embrace, But I reach for you and touch empty space.) (Though hearts may yearn, they bear the weight,
Of love confined by the hands of fate.)
December 24th, 2024 03:22
Still Away From You
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of longing for what is longer there, written very nicely
December 24th, 2024 02:34
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of longing for what is longer there, written very nicely
December 24th, 2024 02:34
Still Away From You
rin said:
I\'m sure it will arrive someday.
``Tenderness to You\'\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 00:40
rin said:
I\'m sure it will arrive someday.
``Tenderness to You\'\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 00:40
One-Sided Love
Cassie58 said:
An excellent composition, so well narrated, but sooo sad Dev. Gets a fav from me. Well done.
December 21st, 2024 12:58
Cassie58 said:
An excellent composition, so well narrated, but sooo sad Dev. Gets a fav from me. Well done.
December 21st, 2024 12:58
One-Sided Love
Poetic Licence said:
A very well written poem about being in love on a one way street.
December 21st, 2024 10:46
Poetic Licence said:
A very well written poem about being in love on a one way street.
December 21st, 2024 10:46
One-Sided Love
sorenbarrett said:
Dev you have grown, your poetry has exploded. This piece is so well written with such great lines and images as well as rhyme it sparkles and shines and calls out to all that have had a love unrequited.
December 21st, 2024 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
Dev you have grown, your poetry has exploded. This piece is so well written with such great lines and images as well as rhyme it sparkles and shines and calls out to all that have had a love unrequited.
December 21st, 2024 09:15
One-Sided Love
Caring dove said:
Oh , that’s very sad . So much sadness in your words ((
But you write so verY well
December 21st, 2024 08:10
Caring dove said:
Oh , that’s very sad . So much sadness in your words ((
But you write so verY well
December 21st, 2024 08:10
Never Trust Any Girl
Poetic Licence said:
All people have met one of these, your faith will be restored and you will meet one who is not like this. Emotional and well written poem
December 7th, 2024 04:03
Poetic Licence said:
All people have met one of these, your faith will be restored and you will meet one who is not like this. Emotional and well written poem
December 7th, 2024 04:03
Never Trust Any Girl
Caring dove said:
Sad but beautiful writing .. filled with emotion . I’m sorry if you’ v been hurt
December 7th, 2024 01:53
Caring dove said:
Sad but beautiful writing .. filled with emotion . I’m sorry if you’ v been hurt
December 7th, 2024 01:53
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