The Letter I Didn’t Leave
Ellen Marsell said:

I like the quiet wisdom of this poem.

March 14th, 2026 11:36

The Letter I Didn’t Leave
sorenbarrett said:

Procrastinating death is not a bad thing. A great write about an action not taken that leaves further options and I was always told to leave as many options open as possible

March 14th, 2026 09:40

An Apology
Caring dove said:

Well sometimes people make mistakes or do things wrong .. but yeah owning up to it might help , and yeah apologising .. because yeah nobody’s perfect .

Nice writing anyway )

March 1st, 2026 15:19

Between Who I Was and Who I Am
sorenbarrett said:

We are all a composite of many things blended into a unique individual. Nicely written

March 1st, 2026 06:10

The Door That Opens Inward
Caring dove said:

Sounds like your reflecting on yourself or doing some healing ? Sometimes tho .. we need help with how we feel

February 26th, 2026 10:36

The Door That Opens Inward
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting concept Dev. I once asked why doors had to open outward and was told that it was the fire code so people would not die stacked up against a door that opened inward. A great metaphor in this poem and it is used throughout. Nicely done

February 25th, 2026 12:32

No Character, Just Me
Caring dove said:

That’s lovely .. there’s a gentleness in your words .. I like the lines about the ‘ heart ‘

And yeah true sometimes we do say I’m fine . When we’re not ..

February 24th, 2026 13:41

After 12th , We Became Strangers
sorenbarrett said:

Nostalgic, melancholic, sad but real time and distance does fade feelings. They still remain but are only shadows of memories and every once in a while there is a rustle in the shadows and hair stands on end goose flesh raises and feelings return but only briefly. So nicely written Dev a fave

February 23rd, 2026 12:53

I\'M SINGLE
Caring dove said:

That’s beautiful …

January 20th, 2026 13:37

The Room Where I Exist
sorenbarrett said:

I hear you Dev I too prefer quiet most of the time. If I want a little noise I put on music or go listen to the birds they are much more accomodating and seem to listen to what I say too. Well written my friend

August 2nd, 2025 13:14

The Room Where I Exist
Caring dove said:

So much sadness in this poem ( ..

August 2nd, 2025 10:41

CHEMISTRY
Skally said:

We are all atoms, we are all connected to the infinite of the universe.

May 1st, 2025 09:47

Just Me, and All My Failing
Poetic Licence said:

A very brave,raw and honest reflection on how there life has gone so far, a sense of regret and sadness although it has not been deliberate the way things have gone, it is just the way they are, a relatable write to many beautifully written

April 12th, 2025 12:24

The Road Though Quiet Pines
sorenbarrett said:

Robert Frost comes to mind and this journey we take we have choices in our journey all leading to other places none of which we know. A haunting piece

April 1st, 2025 13:17

The Road Though Quiet Pines
Poetic Licence said:

Those tree\'s have witnessed so much and if could talk would have alot to say, enjoyed the read

April 1st, 2025 12:20