Comments received on poems by Dev Parth
On My Way To Star
Bella Shepard said:
This poem has a wonderful, rhyming flow that enhances the imagery of the cosmos you describe. Beautifully versed my friend!
August 6th, 2024 13:42
Bella Shepard said:
This poem has a wonderful, rhyming flow that enhances the imagery of the cosmos you describe. Beautifully versed my friend!
August 6th, 2024 13:42
On My Way To Star
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice write that takes one out of this world and in to the space of our own mind. How many have stared into space and wondered. Very well worded with great rhyme.
August 6th, 2024 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice write that takes one out of this world and in to the space of our own mind. How many have stared into space and wondered. Very well worded with great rhyme.
August 6th, 2024 05:13
Crying For Freedom
Dan Williams said:
I sure hope such optimism is rewarded. Nice work.
August 5th, 2024 23:03
Dan Williams said:
I sure hope such optimism is rewarded. Nice work.
August 5th, 2024 23:03
Crying For Freedom
sorenbarrett said:
A well worked poem with great power
so well rhymed and metered it flows off the tongue with ease. Many great lines in this poem too many to cite.
August 5th, 2024 06:56
sorenbarrett said:
A well worked poem with great power
so well rhymed and metered it flows off the tongue with ease. Many great lines in this poem too many to cite.
August 5th, 2024 06:56
Morning\'s Embrace
Dan Williams said:
I am so jealous of optimists like you. Good job of spreading it around.
August 2nd, 2024 00:21
Dan Williams said:
I am so jealous of optimists like you. Good job of spreading it around.
August 2nd, 2024 00:21
Morning\'s Embrace
sorenbarrett said:
So bright and fresh it gives hope and puts a smile on the day. Wonderful
August 1st, 2024 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
So bright and fresh it gives hope and puts a smile on the day. Wonderful
August 1st, 2024 05:30
Wanderer\'s Dream
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful imagery throughout this piece and the metaphor is well stated. Nicely done
July 30th, 2024 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful imagery throughout this piece and the metaphor is well stated. Nicely done
July 30th, 2024 06:21
Wanderer\'s Dream
2781 said:
If you haven\'t got a guide, you should at least have a compass...
July 30th, 2024 01:38
2781 said:
If you haven\'t got a guide, you should at least have a compass...
July 30th, 2024 01:38
Whispers Of The Night
sorenbarrett said:
Avery peaceful and calming poem that is a pleasure to read.
July 28th, 2024 05:52
sorenbarrett said:
Avery peaceful and calming poem that is a pleasure to read.
July 28th, 2024 05:52
Dancing Flames
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful use of imagery to paint a picture in words and metaphor. Fire such a fleeting thing yet so powerful. One of the original basic elements Fire, Water, Air, Earth. So nicely rhymed as well
July 26th, 2024 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful use of imagery to paint a picture in words and metaphor. Fire such a fleeting thing yet so powerful. One of the original basic elements Fire, Water, Air, Earth. So nicely rhymed as well
July 26th, 2024 05:19
No More
Caring dove said:
Sad writing yet beautiful , you have a beautiful way with words
July 25th, 2024 08:43
Caring dove said:
Sad writing yet beautiful , you have a beautiful way with words
July 25th, 2024 08:43
No More
sorenbarrett said:
I love the message left in the last few lines that ending can be the beginning of a new start. Wonderful
July 25th, 2024 05:36
sorenbarrett said:
I love the message left in the last few lines that ending can be the beginning of a new start. Wonderful
July 25th, 2024 05:36
Whispers Of Dawn
Dan Williams said:
Aaahhh! Easy imagery, all too common sentiments. Thanks.
July 24th, 2024 00:36
Dan Williams said:
Aaahhh! Easy imagery, all too common sentiments. Thanks.
July 24th, 2024 00:36
Whispers Of Dawn
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet you have described so exquisitely the feeling I have each morning as I begin my walk at dawn. Thank you for putting that feeling into such beautiful words!
July 23rd, 2024 13:52
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet you have described so exquisitely the feeling I have each morning as I begin my walk at dawn. Thank you for putting that feeling into such beautiful words!
July 23rd, 2024 13:52
Whispers Of Dawn
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor as well set in good AB rhyme. Great imagery as well. Nicely done
July 23rd, 2024 06:04
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor as well set in good AB rhyme. Great imagery as well. Nicely done
July 23rd, 2024 06:04
Eternal Flame
Bella Shepard said:
As I read this poem aloud, I love the beautiful rhyming flow of each line, culminating in a perfect final stanza. Such love as this is an \"Eternal Flame\". Exquisite!
July 18th, 2024 10:39
Bella Shepard said:
As I read this poem aloud, I love the beautiful rhyming flow of each line, culminating in a perfect final stanza. Such love as this is an \"Eternal Flame\". Exquisite!
July 18th, 2024 10:39
Eternal Flame
Cassie58 said:
End rhyme in all your stanzas in this love poem. Your lines have a beautiful flow and your title is so apt. Well penned Dev.
July 18th, 2024 10:09
Cassie58 said:
End rhyme in all your stanzas in this love poem. Your lines have a beautiful flow and your title is so apt. Well penned Dev.
July 18th, 2024 10:09
Eternal Flame
sorenbarrett said:
A continual rhyme falls like waves in this poem of romance, passion and proclaimed love. Nicely done
July 18th, 2024 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
A continual rhyme falls like waves in this poem of romance, passion and proclaimed love. Nicely done
July 18th, 2024 05:33
Eternal Flame
Caring dove said:
Your title is the same name as that song by ‘ the bangles .. ‘
Good writing expressed nicely
July 18th, 2024 03:50
Caring dove said:
Your title is the same name as that song by ‘ the bangles .. ‘
Good writing expressed nicely
July 18th, 2024 03:50
Whispers Of The Morning
Cassie58 said:
Perfectly beautiful Dev. Your stanzas here, a feast of description for the start of the new day. Full of promise.
July 10th, 2024 02:41
Cassie58 said:
Perfectly beautiful Dev. Your stanzas here, a feast of description for the start of the new day. Full of promise.
July 10th, 2024 02:41
Tranquil Waters
MendedFences27 said:
It seems it\'s always in a moment of solitude that wisdom unfolds to us. Maybe it\'s the forced contemplation, that causes us to recognize a great truth or appreciate a great art. Your poem touches on these things, \" amidst the quiet, a clarity unfolds.\" Loved your poem. Phil A.
July 6th, 2024 17:47
MendedFences27 said:
It seems it\'s always in a moment of solitude that wisdom unfolds to us. Maybe it\'s the forced contemplation, that causes us to recognize a great truth or appreciate a great art. Your poem touches on these things, \" amidst the quiet, a clarity unfolds.\" Loved your poem. Phil A.
July 6th, 2024 17:47
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