Comments received on poems by Dev Parth
Whispers Of The Night
sorenbarrett said:
Avery peaceful and calming poem that is a pleasure to read.
July 28th, 2024 05:52
sorenbarrett said:
Avery peaceful and calming poem that is a pleasure to read.
July 28th, 2024 05:52
Dancing Flames
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful use of imagery to paint a picture in words and metaphor. Fire such a fleeting thing yet so powerful. One of the original basic elements Fire, Water, Air, Earth. So nicely rhymed as well
July 26th, 2024 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful use of imagery to paint a picture in words and metaphor. Fire such a fleeting thing yet so powerful. One of the original basic elements Fire, Water, Air, Earth. So nicely rhymed as well
July 26th, 2024 05:19
No More
Caring dove said:
Sad writing yet beautiful , you have a beautiful way with words
July 25th, 2024 08:43
Caring dove said:
Sad writing yet beautiful , you have a beautiful way with words
July 25th, 2024 08:43
No More
sorenbarrett said:
I love the message left in the last few lines that ending can be the beginning of a new start. Wonderful
July 25th, 2024 05:36
sorenbarrett said:
I love the message left in the last few lines that ending can be the beginning of a new start. Wonderful
July 25th, 2024 05:36
Whispers Of Dawn
Dan Williams said:
Aaahhh! Easy imagery, all too common sentiments. Thanks.
July 24th, 2024 00:36
Dan Williams said:
Aaahhh! Easy imagery, all too common sentiments. Thanks.
July 24th, 2024 00:36
Whispers Of Dawn
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet you have described so exquisitely the feeling I have each morning as I begin my walk at dawn. Thank you for putting that feeling into such beautiful words!
July 23rd, 2024 13:52
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet you have described so exquisitely the feeling I have each morning as I begin my walk at dawn. Thank you for putting that feeling into such beautiful words!
July 23rd, 2024 13:52
Whispers Of Dawn
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor as well set in good AB rhyme. Great imagery as well. Nicely done
July 23rd, 2024 06:04
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor as well set in good AB rhyme. Great imagery as well. Nicely done
July 23rd, 2024 06:04
Eternal Flame
Bella Shepard said:
As I read this poem aloud, I love the beautiful rhyming flow of each line, culminating in a perfect final stanza. Such love as this is an \"Eternal Flame\". Exquisite!
July 18th, 2024 10:39
Bella Shepard said:
As I read this poem aloud, I love the beautiful rhyming flow of each line, culminating in a perfect final stanza. Such love as this is an \"Eternal Flame\". Exquisite!
July 18th, 2024 10:39
Eternal Flame
Cassie58 said:
End rhyme in all your stanzas in this love poem. Your lines have a beautiful flow and your title is so apt. Well penned Dev.
July 18th, 2024 10:09
Cassie58 said:
End rhyme in all your stanzas in this love poem. Your lines have a beautiful flow and your title is so apt. Well penned Dev.
July 18th, 2024 10:09
Eternal Flame
sorenbarrett said:
A continual rhyme falls like waves in this poem of romance, passion and proclaimed love. Nicely done
July 18th, 2024 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
A continual rhyme falls like waves in this poem of romance, passion and proclaimed love. Nicely done
July 18th, 2024 05:33
Eternal Flame
Caring dove said:
Your title is the same name as that song by ‘ the bangles .. ‘
Good writing expressed nicely
July 18th, 2024 03:50
Caring dove said:
Your title is the same name as that song by ‘ the bangles .. ‘
Good writing expressed nicely
July 18th, 2024 03:50
Whispers Of The Morning
Cassie58 said:
Perfectly beautiful Dev. Your stanzas here, a feast of description for the start of the new day. Full of promise.
July 10th, 2024 02:41
Cassie58 said:
Perfectly beautiful Dev. Your stanzas here, a feast of description for the start of the new day. Full of promise.
July 10th, 2024 02:41
Tranquil Waters
MendedFences27 said:
It seems it\'s always in a moment of solitude that wisdom unfolds to us. Maybe it\'s the forced contemplation, that causes us to recognize a great truth or appreciate a great art. Your poem touches on these things, \" amidst the quiet, a clarity unfolds.\" Loved your poem. Phil A.
July 6th, 2024 17:47
MendedFences27 said:
It seems it\'s always in a moment of solitude that wisdom unfolds to us. Maybe it\'s the forced contemplation, that causes us to recognize a great truth or appreciate a great art. Your poem touches on these things, \" amidst the quiet, a clarity unfolds.\" Loved your poem. Phil A.
July 6th, 2024 17:47
Beyonds The Limits
MendedFences27 said:
Well, I for one hope you are absolutely right. It takes all of us, working together to create the world we all can peacefully inhabit. Though, as they say, one rotten apple will spoil the whole barrel. _ Phil A.
July 5th, 2024 15:27
MendedFences27 said:
Well, I for one hope you are absolutely right. It takes all of us, working together to create the world we all can peacefully inhabit. Though, as they say, one rotten apple will spoil the whole barrel. _ Phil A.
July 5th, 2024 15:27
Is God With Me
2781 said:
He never leaves us, nor forsakes us.
Unless of coarse..we leave him.
July 1st, 2024 07:55
2781 said:
He never leaves us, nor forsakes us.
Unless of coarse..we leave him.
July 1st, 2024 07:55
AM I THE WORST
Alan R said:
Not the worst, but simply aware.
What a beautiful sentence!
June 30th, 2024 05:54
Alan R said:
Not the worst, but simply aware.
What a beautiful sentence!
June 30th, 2024 05:54
UNTOUCHED SOCIETY
Sarthak shukla said:
Amazing but poems are more amazing when we write it in our mother tongue after that as you wish
May 21st, 2024 22:41
Sarthak shukla said:
Amazing but poems are more amazing when we write it in our mother tongue after that as you wish
May 21st, 2024 22:41
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