Comments received on poems by Dev Parth
Eternal Flame
Bella Shepard said:
As I read this poem aloud, I love the beautiful rhyming flow of each line, culminating in a perfect final stanza. Such love as this is an \"Eternal Flame\". Exquisite!
July 18th, 2024 10:39
Bella Shepard said:
As I read this poem aloud, I love the beautiful rhyming flow of each line, culminating in a perfect final stanza. Such love as this is an \"Eternal Flame\". Exquisite!
July 18th, 2024 10:39
Eternal Flame
Cassie58 said:
End rhyme in all your stanzas in this love poem. Your lines have a beautiful flow and your title is so apt. Well penned Dev.
July 18th, 2024 10:09
Cassie58 said:
End rhyme in all your stanzas in this love poem. Your lines have a beautiful flow and your title is so apt. Well penned Dev.
July 18th, 2024 10:09
Eternal Flame
sorenbarrett said:
A continual rhyme falls like waves in this poem of romance, passion and proclaimed love. Nicely done
July 18th, 2024 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
A continual rhyme falls like waves in this poem of romance, passion and proclaimed love. Nicely done
July 18th, 2024 05:33
Eternal Flame
Caring dove said:
Your title is the same name as that song by ‘ the bangles .. ‘
Good writing expressed nicely
July 18th, 2024 03:50
Caring dove said:
Your title is the same name as that song by ‘ the bangles .. ‘
Good writing expressed nicely
July 18th, 2024 03:50
Whispers Of The Morning
Cassie58 said:
Perfectly beautiful Dev. Your stanzas here, a feast of description for the start of the new day. Full of promise.
July 10th, 2024 02:41
Cassie58 said:
Perfectly beautiful Dev. Your stanzas here, a feast of description for the start of the new day. Full of promise.
July 10th, 2024 02:41
Tranquil Waters
MendedFences27 said:
It seems it\'s always in a moment of solitude that wisdom unfolds to us. Maybe it\'s the forced contemplation, that causes us to recognize a great truth or appreciate a great art. Your poem touches on these things, \" amidst the quiet, a clarity unfolds.\" Loved your poem. Phil A.
July 6th, 2024 17:47
MendedFences27 said:
It seems it\'s always in a moment of solitude that wisdom unfolds to us. Maybe it\'s the forced contemplation, that causes us to recognize a great truth or appreciate a great art. Your poem touches on these things, \" amidst the quiet, a clarity unfolds.\" Loved your poem. Phil A.
July 6th, 2024 17:47
Beyonds The Limits
MendedFences27 said:
Well, I for one hope you are absolutely right. It takes all of us, working together to create the world we all can peacefully inhabit. Though, as they say, one rotten apple will spoil the whole barrel. _ Phil A.
July 5th, 2024 15:27
MendedFences27 said:
Well, I for one hope you are absolutely right. It takes all of us, working together to create the world we all can peacefully inhabit. Though, as they say, one rotten apple will spoil the whole barrel. _ Phil A.
July 5th, 2024 15:27
Is God With Me
2781 said:
He never leaves us, nor forsakes us.
Unless of coarse..we leave him.
July 1st, 2024 07:55
2781 said:
He never leaves us, nor forsakes us.
Unless of coarse..we leave him.
July 1st, 2024 07:55
AM I THE WORST
Alan R said:
Not the worst, but simply aware.
What a beautiful sentence!
June 30th, 2024 05:54
Alan R said:
Not the worst, but simply aware.
What a beautiful sentence!
June 30th, 2024 05:54
UNTOUCHED SOCIETY
Sarthak shukla said:
Amazing but poems are more amazing when we write it in our mother tongue after that as you wish
May 21st, 2024 22:41
Sarthak shukla said:
Amazing but poems are more amazing when we write it in our mother tongue after that as you wish
May 21st, 2024 22:41
Forgotten Dreams
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A beautiful write and beautiful message
May 19th, 2024 19:35
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A beautiful write and beautiful message
May 19th, 2024 19:35
Solution Of Everything
2781 said:
Like the old builders would say-it\'s not how we get into trouble, it\'s how we get out of it that matters.
May 8th, 2024 03:21
2781 said:
Like the old builders would say-it\'s not how we get into trouble, it\'s how we get out of it that matters.
May 8th, 2024 03:21
It My Last
Cassie58 said:
Partings can be painful, especially when it involves close friendships. Whether by distance or death the sadness will leave a heavy heart. Nicely crafted poem Dev.
May 3rd, 2024 20:57
Cassie58 said:
Partings can be painful, especially when it involves close friendships. Whether by distance or death the sadness will leave a heavy heart. Nicely crafted poem Dev.
May 3rd, 2024 20:57
WHERE IT IS GONE
Cassie58 said:
What a fine piece of poetry this is Dev. Loss casts such a shadow in its sadness. Thank goodness for memories. You never disappoint. I very much enjoyed my visit to your page. Have a great day.
April 23rd, 2024 09:13
Cassie58 said:
What a fine piece of poetry this is Dev. Loss casts such a shadow in its sadness. Thank goodness for memories. You never disappoint. I very much enjoyed my visit to your page. Have a great day.
April 23rd, 2024 09:13
Take It Down
Cassie58 said:
We build walls to protect ourselves from further hurt. However once built they can be isolating and difficult to dismantle. Takes courage, but brick by brick leads to freedom. You express this beautifully Dev. Another fine poem from your talented pen.
March 10th, 2024 01:01
Cassie58 said:
We build walls to protect ourselves from further hurt. However once built they can be isolating and difficult to dismantle. Takes courage, but brick by brick leads to freedom. You express this beautifully Dev. Another fine poem from your talented pen.
March 10th, 2024 01:01
I Love You
Royce Earnest Rasmussen said:
It\'s beautifully written. Well done, sir!
March 6th, 2024 21:34
Royce Earnest Rasmussen said:
It\'s beautifully written. Well done, sir!
March 6th, 2024 21:34
I Love You
Royce Earnest Rasmussen said:
It\'s beautifully written. Well done, sir!
March 6th, 2024 21:21
Royce Earnest Rasmussen said:
It\'s beautifully written. Well done, sir!
March 6th, 2024 21:21
The Last Day
Cassie58 said:
Partings are sorrowful. Three beautifully penned stanzas capture the emotions well. Chapters that are closing are heavy on the heart. An excellent write from an experienced poet. I envisaged several different types of partings here.
March 3rd, 2024 11:31
Cassie58 said:
Partings are sorrowful. Three beautifully penned stanzas capture the emotions well. Chapters that are closing are heavy on the heart. An excellent write from an experienced poet. I envisaged several different types of partings here.
March 3rd, 2024 11:31
I Thought So
Cassie58 said:
You pen a beautiful poem here out of a simple phrase. When the doubts are confirmed and that sadness knocks the heart for six :(
Better to know than not know says I. Fine stanzas, rhyme and flow. A poem much appreciated Dev.
March 1st, 2024 11:46
Cassie58 said:
You pen a beautiful poem here out of a simple phrase. When the doubts are confirmed and that sadness knocks the heart for six :(
Better to know than not know says I. Fine stanzas, rhyme and flow. A poem much appreciated Dev.
March 1st, 2024 11:46
I Thought So
Alan R said:
For what was believed, now a silhouette.
.... beautiful
February 29th, 2024 12:43
Alan R said:
For what was believed, now a silhouette.
.... beautiful
February 29th, 2024 12:43
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