Comments received on poems by Dev Parth
My Earth Looks Like
L. B. Mek said:
\'My Earth is a place of diversity,
A world where all life thrives in unity.\'
great message!
a wonderful read
thanks for sharing
May 12th, 2023 04:14
L. B. Mek said:
\'My Earth is a place of diversity,
A world where all life thrives in unity.\'
great message!
a wonderful read
thanks for sharing
May 12th, 2023 04:14
Love\'s Eternal Symphony
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
This is a beautiful poem )) liked reading this ))
May 10th, 2023 14:39
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
This is a beautiful poem )) liked reading this ))
May 10th, 2023 14:39
School is cinema
L. B. Mek said:
I like your strong resolve
well written, tight editing
thanks for sharing
May 8th, 2023 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
I like your strong resolve
well written, tight editing
thanks for sharing
May 8th, 2023 05:58
My Last Hope
Bobby O said:
Nice content but you use the same subject/verb sentence structure throughout and that detracts from the message
For example , a quick rearrange 2nd stanza
ie;
Conducting this journey we’re on is love
As destiny guides us from above
Through twists and turns
Our Embers burn
Joined until the final dawn
May 6th, 2023 08:38
Bobby O said:
Nice content but you use the same subject/verb sentence structure throughout and that detracts from the message
For example , a quick rearrange 2nd stanza
ie;
Conducting this journey we’re on is love
As destiny guides us from above
Through twists and turns
Our Embers burn
Joined until the final dawn
May 6th, 2023 08:38
Tears in Dev Parth\'s Eyes
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Dev, that light in our life is always there for us and brings joy to us all.
Andy
April 29th, 2023 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Dev, that light in our life is always there for us and brings joy to us all.
Andy
April 29th, 2023 00:27
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