Comments received on poems by Dev Parth
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sonal monhyung said:
If I\'ll ask you to write a poetry on Diwali, would you ?
November 9th, 2023 20:56
sonal monhyung said:
If I\'ll ask you to write a poetry on Diwali, would you ?
November 9th, 2023 20:56
Love\'s Bitter End
JuneM said:
Beautifully and truthfully written, I loved it. I am experiencing something similiar at the moment. Anyway, I hope your pain eases in time
November 7th, 2023 10:24
JuneM said:
Beautifully and truthfully written, I loved it. I am experiencing something similiar at the moment. Anyway, I hope your pain eases in time
November 7th, 2023 10:24
I\'m Death
NinjaGirl said:
What a beautiful poem! It is lovely, I also have to admire your wingdings encryption method. Death is a comforter for some it\'s true. It is nice to have such a well-done personification. Very comforting.
November 6th, 2023 21:59
NinjaGirl said:
What a beautiful poem! It is lovely, I also have to admire your wingdings encryption method. Death is a comforter for some it\'s true. It is nice to have such a well-done personification. Very comforting.
November 6th, 2023 21:59
Ocean\'s Lament
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Sad, but true. Great write.
October 20th, 2023 11:33
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Sad, but true. Great write.
October 20th, 2023 11:33
Tears Like Rain
Teddy.15 said:
Ah so very beautiful I adore your rhyme it\'s so natural off the tongue, it\'s so sad when love disappoints us but their are more and even better ones on the way. LoL I\'m a true fan of love and I say what doesn\'t kill us makes us stronger, you are 17? When I was 17 I found a love that was so awful and painful I then became a poetess. ❤️
October 20th, 2023 11:22
Teddy.15 said:
Ah so very beautiful I adore your rhyme it\'s so natural off the tongue, it\'s so sad when love disappoints us but their are more and even better ones on the way. LoL I\'m a true fan of love and I say what doesn\'t kill us makes us stronger, you are 17? When I was 17 I found a love that was so awful and painful I then became a poetess. ❤️
October 20th, 2023 11:22
Shadows and Resilience
BlessedbyGod said:
It does capture the beauty of life, though we suffer and have scarred, we heal and can find the beauty in it all,
October 20th, 2023 10:35
BlessedbyGod said:
It does capture the beauty of life, though we suffer and have scarred, we heal and can find the beauty in it all,
October 20th, 2023 10:35
Ocean\'s Lament
Firefall said:
Your poem perfectly captures the sad state of our oceans today. Hopefully, humanity will wake up before its too late.
October 19th, 2023 21:23
Firefall said:
Your poem perfectly captures the sad state of our oceans today. Hopefully, humanity will wake up before its too late.
October 19th, 2023 21:23
Ocean\'s Lament
novaa said:
A powerful message which we all should pay heed to sooner than later. Great piece!
October 19th, 2023 14:19
novaa said:
A powerful message which we all should pay heed to sooner than later. Great piece!
October 19th, 2023 14:19
Tears Like Rain
novaa said:
Profound and beautiful depiction of sorrow and lost love......Very evocative....Nice write!
October 16th, 2023 10:05
novaa said:
Profound and beautiful depiction of sorrow and lost love......Very evocative....Nice write!
October 16th, 2023 10:05
Tears Like Rain
Pop64 said:
You summed this up in that lst line, love never ends, we can\'t just drop emotions, but it can cease. Beautifully expressed but a truly sad write.
October 16th, 2023 09:49
Pop64 said:
You summed this up in that lst line, love never ends, we can\'t just drop emotions, but it can cease. Beautifully expressed but a truly sad write.
October 16th, 2023 09:49
Serenity Song
Mario Piedra said:
The sweet melody of serenity
Can be felt anywhere
With a quiet mind…..
I felt such serenity reading your insight
Thank you
July 17th, 2023 05:54
Mario Piedra said:
The sweet melody of serenity
Can be felt anywhere
With a quiet mind…..
I felt such serenity reading your insight
Thank you
July 17th, 2023 05:54
Unleashed Fire: The Spirit of Dev Parth
2781 said:
Before destruction the heart of man is haughty, and before honour is humility.
May 20th, 2023 17:11
2781 said:
Before destruction the heart of man is haughty, and before honour is humility.
May 20th, 2023 17:11
I Love You
Debake said:
I loved your poem! and it inspired me to write this one.
May 18th, 2023 10:13
Debake said:
I loved your poem! and it inspired me to write this one.
May 18th, 2023 10:13
I Love You
Debake said:
fingers, hands, and hearts intertwined as one
love so strong, this time he\'s not gonna run
and in turn, she doesn\'t feel the need for self-sabotage
this time it\'s real not hidden, nor camouflaged
they want to grow gray and wrinkled together
to say the cliche I need, or I will love you forever
to pack the kid\'s lunches or to the principal offices
to pack the family up for those church services
time flys and soon enough, those gray hairs arrived
covered up with a hat or some dye, and your age denied
wrinkles here covered up with makeup or existence refused
till in the end, they accept that they are fragile and easily bruised
though time seemed to have passed oh so fast
they did seem to create a love that will last
the deal was sealed with the first young call
they made it work I guess it wasn\'t a cliche after all
May 18th, 2023 10:11
Debake said:
fingers, hands, and hearts intertwined as one
love so strong, this time he\'s not gonna run
and in turn, she doesn\'t feel the need for self-sabotage
this time it\'s real not hidden, nor camouflaged
they want to grow gray and wrinkled together
to say the cliche I need, or I will love you forever
to pack the kid\'s lunches or to the principal offices
to pack the family up for those church services
time flys and soon enough, those gray hairs arrived
covered up with a hat or some dye, and your age denied
wrinkles here covered up with makeup or existence refused
till in the end, they accept that they are fragile and easily bruised
though time seemed to have passed oh so fast
they did seem to create a love that will last
the deal was sealed with the first young call
they made it work I guess it wasn\'t a cliche after all
May 18th, 2023 10:11
Failure Rise Up
2781 said:
Down under they legislate against failure. Not allowing people to make mistakes only dumbs them down. Good advice, cheers.
May 17th, 2023 09:39
2781 said:
Down under they legislate against failure. Not allowing people to make mistakes only dumbs them down. Good advice, cheers.
May 17th, 2023 09:39
Failure Rise Up
Bobby O said:
A stepping stone indeed. “The credit belongs to the man who is actually in the arena …. so that his place shall never be with those cold and timid souls who neither know victory nor defeat.”
…an abridged excerpt from Teddy Roosevelt.
May 17th, 2023 07:58
Bobby O said:
A stepping stone indeed. “The credit belongs to the man who is actually in the arena …. so that his place shall never be with those cold and timid souls who neither know victory nor defeat.”
…an abridged excerpt from Teddy Roosevelt.
May 17th, 2023 07:58
My Earth Looks Like
L. B. Mek said:
\'My Earth is a place of diversity,
A world where all life thrives in unity.\'
great message!
a wonderful read
thanks for sharing
May 12th, 2023 04:14
L. B. Mek said:
\'My Earth is a place of diversity,
A world where all life thrives in unity.\'
great message!
a wonderful read
thanks for sharing
May 12th, 2023 04:14
Love\'s Eternal Symphony
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
This is a beautiful poem )) liked reading this ))
May 10th, 2023 14:39
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
This is a beautiful poem )) liked reading this ))
May 10th, 2023 14:39
School is cinema
L. B. Mek said:
I like your strong resolve
well written, tight editing
thanks for sharing
May 8th, 2023 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
I like your strong resolve
well written, tight editing
thanks for sharing
May 8th, 2023 05:58
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