Comments received on poems by Dev Parth
Hide Yourself
Doggerel Dave said:
Polished , neat and direct to me. I like that mode, but know I must balance with the outside world too.
August 22nd, 2024 17:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Polished , neat and direct to me. I like that mode, but know I must balance with the outside world too.
August 22nd, 2024 17:50
Hide Yourself
sorenbarrett said:
Although listening to others can be helpful making ones own decisions is always best. Great write
August 22nd, 2024 15:54
sorenbarrett said:
Although listening to others can be helpful making ones own decisions is always best. Great write
August 22nd, 2024 15:54
My Dearest Sisters
sorenbarrett said:
A tribute to a sister and all that she means present and past nicely written
August 18th, 2024 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
A tribute to a sister and all that she means present and past nicely written
August 18th, 2024 06:39
Why Women Weren’t Safe
Doggerel Dave said:
A worthwhile project, this one. Not only have you made clear in your response above without embellishment, the facts of that case, but the piece itself in a disciplined structured way told me where you are at even before the detail. Reaction to the poem must include that women’s treatment by men as you state occurs everywhere to varying degrees, and progress has a long way to go.
August 16th, 2024 06:52
Doggerel Dave said:
A worthwhile project, this one. Not only have you made clear in your response above without embellishment, the facts of that case, but the piece itself in a disciplined structured way told me where you are at even before the detail. Reaction to the poem must include that women’s treatment by men as you state occurs everywhere to varying degrees, and progress has a long way to go.
August 16th, 2024 06:52
Why Women Weren’t Safe
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write in more than one way. The message itself is great but the writing and rhyme as well as rhythm pulled this one along. Very nicely done.
August 16th, 2024 05:20
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write in more than one way. The message itself is great but the writing and rhyme as well as rhythm pulled this one along. Very nicely done.
August 16th, 2024 05:20
Why Women Weren’t Safe
Justina said:
I feel a strong sense of power in this poem and enjoy its rich vocabulary. May I ask what inspired you?
August 16th, 2024 04:11
Justina said:
I feel a strong sense of power in this poem and enjoy its rich vocabulary. May I ask what inspired you?
August 16th, 2024 04:11
May I Love You
Caring dove said:
Very gentle and loving .. beautiful writing )
August 15th, 2024 14:00
Caring dove said:
Very gentle and loving .. beautiful writing )
August 15th, 2024 14:00
It\'s Me Vs. Me
sorenbarrett said:
True words spoken in this well rhymed poem. Nicely said.
August 14th, 2024 06:04
sorenbarrett said:
True words spoken in this well rhymed poem. Nicely said.
August 14th, 2024 06:04
WHY THAT\"S SO
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written this piece explores the why. Lovely!
August 13th, 2024 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written this piece explores the why. Lovely!
August 13th, 2024 05:19
Fragments of Us
Dan Williams said:
All of this is true of my second wife who left me after twenty years. Twenty more years later I do still breathe her memories. Very nice.
August 13th, 2024 00:31
Dan Williams said:
All of this is true of my second wife who left me after twenty years. Twenty more years later I do still breathe her memories. Very nice.
August 13th, 2024 00:31
Fragments of Us
sorenbarrett said:
This one was wonderfully worded with a timing that let it roll off the tongue as if it was meant to be. A lovely poem of longing and loss..
August 12th, 2024 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
This one was wonderfully worded with a timing that let it roll off the tongue as if it was meant to be. A lovely poem of longing and loss..
August 12th, 2024 05:45
Actually, Who I Am and What I Am Doing
sorenbarrett said:
One sets one\'s own path and creates one\'s own destiny stated in this piece with passion. Nicely done.
August 11th, 2024 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
One sets one\'s own path and creates one\'s own destiny stated in this piece with passion. Nicely done.
August 11th, 2024 06:48
Actually, Who I Am and What I Am Doing
Cassie58 said:
I am the architect of my future,
I very much like that line. Acknowledging that you are your own creation. Build well, despite the troubles one encounters on life’s pathway. Finely penned stanzas Dev. Much enjoyed.
August 11th, 2024 02:48
Cassie58 said:
I am the architect of my future,
I very much like that line. Acknowledging that you are your own creation. Build well, despite the troubles one encounters on life’s pathway. Finely penned stanzas Dev. Much enjoyed.
August 11th, 2024 02:48
Flames of Defiance
Dan Williams said:
I am so jealous of the kind of optimism you possess. I believe I will print this for comfort on my bad days. Thank you for this.
August 11th, 2024 00:21
Dan Williams said:
I am so jealous of the kind of optimism you possess. I believe I will print this for comfort on my bad days. Thank you for this.
August 11th, 2024 00:21
Flames of Defiance
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully versed, you present the growth of courage from inception to conclusion, thoroughly enjoyed and much appreciated.
August 10th, 2024 10:13
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully versed, you present the growth of courage from inception to conclusion, thoroughly enjoyed and much appreciated.
August 10th, 2024 10:13
Flames of Defiance
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautifully worded this poem is a call to courage and perseverance. Very nicely done
August 10th, 2024 06:56
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautifully worded this poem is a call to courage and perseverance. Very nicely done
August 10th, 2024 06:56
On My Way To Star
Bella Shepard said:
This poem has a wonderful, rhyming flow that enhances the imagery of the cosmos you describe. Beautifully versed my friend!
August 6th, 2024 13:42
Bella Shepard said:
This poem has a wonderful, rhyming flow that enhances the imagery of the cosmos you describe. Beautifully versed my friend!
August 6th, 2024 13:42
On My Way To Star
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice write that takes one out of this world and in to the space of our own mind. How many have stared into space and wondered. Very well worded with great rhyme.
August 6th, 2024 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice write that takes one out of this world and in to the space of our own mind. How many have stared into space and wondered. Very well worded with great rhyme.
August 6th, 2024 05:13
Crying For Freedom
Dan Williams said:
I sure hope such optimism is rewarded. Nice work.
August 5th, 2024 23:03
Dan Williams said:
I sure hope such optimism is rewarded. Nice work.
August 5th, 2024 23:03
Crying For Freedom
sorenbarrett said:
A well worked poem with great power
so well rhymed and metered it flows off the tongue with ease. Many great lines in this poem too many to cite.
August 5th, 2024 06:56
sorenbarrett said:
A well worked poem with great power
so well rhymed and metered it flows off the tongue with ease. Many great lines in this poem too many to cite.
August 5th, 2024 06:56
Morning\'s Embrace
Dan Williams said:
I am so jealous of optimists like you. Good job of spreading it around.
August 2nd, 2024 00:21
Dan Williams said:
I am so jealous of optimists like you. Good job of spreading it around.
August 2nd, 2024 00:21
Morning\'s Embrace
sorenbarrett said:
So bright and fresh it gives hope and puts a smile on the day. Wonderful
August 1st, 2024 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
So bright and fresh it gives hope and puts a smile on the day. Wonderful
August 1st, 2024 05:30
Wanderer\'s Dream
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful imagery throughout this piece and the metaphor is well stated. Nicely done
July 30th, 2024 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful imagery throughout this piece and the metaphor is well stated. Nicely done
July 30th, 2024 06:21
Wanderer\'s Dream
2781 said:
If you haven\'t got a guide, you should at least have a compass...
July 30th, 2024 01:38
2781 said:
If you haven\'t got a guide, you should at least have a compass...
July 30th, 2024 01:38
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