Comments received on poems by Dev Parth
Forgotten Dreams
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A beautiful write and beautiful message
May 19th, 2024 19:35
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A beautiful write and beautiful message
May 19th, 2024 19:35
Solution Of Everything
2781 said:
Like the old builders would say-it\'s not how we get into trouble, it\'s how we get out of it that matters.
May 8th, 2024 03:21
2781 said:
Like the old builders would say-it\'s not how we get into trouble, it\'s how we get out of it that matters.
May 8th, 2024 03:21
It My Last
Cassie58 said:
Partings can be painful, especially when it involves close friendships. Whether by distance or death the sadness will leave a heavy heart. Nicely crafted poem Dev.
May 3rd, 2024 20:57
Cassie58 said:
Partings can be painful, especially when it involves close friendships. Whether by distance or death the sadness will leave a heavy heart. Nicely crafted poem Dev.
May 3rd, 2024 20:57
WHERE IT IS GONE
Cassie58 said:
What a fine piece of poetry this is Dev. Loss casts such a shadow in its sadness. Thank goodness for memories. You never disappoint. I very much enjoyed my visit to your page. Have a great day.
April 23rd, 2024 09:13
Cassie58 said:
What a fine piece of poetry this is Dev. Loss casts such a shadow in its sadness. Thank goodness for memories. You never disappoint. I very much enjoyed my visit to your page. Have a great day.
April 23rd, 2024 09:13
Take It Down
Cassie58 said:
We build walls to protect ourselves from further hurt. However once built they can be isolating and difficult to dismantle. Takes courage, but brick by brick leads to freedom. You express this beautifully Dev. Another fine poem from your talented pen.
March 10th, 2024 01:01
Cassie58 said:
We build walls to protect ourselves from further hurt. However once built they can be isolating and difficult to dismantle. Takes courage, but brick by brick leads to freedom. You express this beautifully Dev. Another fine poem from your talented pen.
March 10th, 2024 01:01
I Love You
Royce Earnest Rasmussen said:
It\'s beautifully written. Well done, sir!
March 6th, 2024 21:34
Royce Earnest Rasmussen said:
It\'s beautifully written. Well done, sir!
March 6th, 2024 21:34
I Love You
Royce Earnest Rasmussen said:
It\'s beautifully written. Well done, sir!
March 6th, 2024 21:21
Royce Earnest Rasmussen said:
It\'s beautifully written. Well done, sir!
March 6th, 2024 21:21
The Last Day
Cassie58 said:
Partings are sorrowful. Three beautifully penned stanzas capture the emotions well. Chapters that are closing are heavy on the heart. An excellent write from an experienced poet. I envisaged several different types of partings here.
March 3rd, 2024 11:31
Cassie58 said:
Partings are sorrowful. Three beautifully penned stanzas capture the emotions well. Chapters that are closing are heavy on the heart. An excellent write from an experienced poet. I envisaged several different types of partings here.
March 3rd, 2024 11:31
I Thought So
Cassie58 said:
You pen a beautiful poem here out of a simple phrase. When the doubts are confirmed and that sadness knocks the heart for six :(
Better to know than not know says I. Fine stanzas, rhyme and flow. A poem much appreciated Dev.
March 1st, 2024 11:46
Cassie58 said:
You pen a beautiful poem here out of a simple phrase. When the doubts are confirmed and that sadness knocks the heart for six :(
Better to know than not know says I. Fine stanzas, rhyme and flow. A poem much appreciated Dev.
March 1st, 2024 11:46
I Thought So
Alan R said:
For what was believed, now a silhouette.
.... beautiful
February 29th, 2024 12:43
Alan R said:
For what was believed, now a silhouette.
.... beautiful
February 29th, 2024 12:43
Be Yourself
Alan R said:
No mask to wear, no pretense to bear
I like the way this sounds
February 3rd, 2024 01:38
Alan R said:
No mask to wear, no pretense to bear
I like the way this sounds
February 3rd, 2024 01:38
STAY WITH ME
Cassie58 said:
Three beautiful stanzas with a plea. The repetition works so well here. Love is everything. Nicely penned Dev.
January 27th, 2024 17:36
Cassie58 said:
Three beautiful stanzas with a plea. The repetition works so well here. Love is everything. Nicely penned Dev.
January 27th, 2024 17:36
CHEMISTRY
sonal monhyung said:
I\'m in STD.7 😄 but i see my teachers also dealing with chemistry and physics.
January 10th, 2024 04:55
sonal monhyung said:
I\'m in STD.7 😄 but i see my teachers also dealing with chemistry and physics.
January 10th, 2024 04:55
CHEMISTRY
sonal monhyung said:
Are you singing with atoms and molecules?well, my chemistry is not so strong but I really find it interesting. Lol
January 8th, 2024 21:55
sonal monhyung said:
Are you singing with atoms and molecules?well, my chemistry is not so strong but I really find it interesting. Lol
January 8th, 2024 21:55
Dear Death
2781 said:
O death, where is thy sting? Obgrave where is thy victory?
January 7th, 2024 05:39
2781 said:
O death, where is thy sting? Obgrave where is thy victory?
January 7th, 2024 05:39
Resilient Melodies
Eileen Clark said:
Hi, a really nice poem, I enjoyed reading it.
January 6th, 2024 18:54
Eileen Clark said:
Hi, a really nice poem, I enjoyed reading it.
January 6th, 2024 18:54
Dear Death
sorenbarrett said:
A very poetic write that I can feel. If I might offer one small suggestion it would be even better if you used a different word for depth in the line where it is used twice. Very nice
January 5th, 2024 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
A very poetic write that I can feel. If I might offer one small suggestion it would be even better if you used a different word for depth in the line where it is used twice. Very nice
January 5th, 2024 11:30
I Think I Am Bad
Alan R said:
For as Dev, I\'m not bound by the past,
In the sculpting of self, a mold to cast.
\"I think I am bad,\" but can I find,
The strength within, a different kind?
This was the part that shows so much potential for growth and self awareness, if this is something you were going for, well put.
January 4th, 2024 11:04
Alan R said:
For as Dev, I\'m not bound by the past,
In the sculpting of self, a mold to cast.
\"I think I am bad,\" but can I find,
The strength within, a different kind?
This was the part that shows so much potential for growth and self awareness, if this is something you were going for, well put.
January 4th, 2024 11:04
I Think I Am Bad
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written in verse this common thought shows progression to the end where hope prevails and reveals that bad may not be bad after all. Nicely done
January 4th, 2024 10:32
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written in verse this common thought shows progression to the end where hope prevails and reveals that bad may not be bad after all. Nicely done
January 4th, 2024 10:32
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