Comments received on poems by Dev Parth
The Universe Does Not Explain Itself
Caring dove said:
People have feelings in life
October 23rd, 2026 14:48
Caring dove said:
People have feelings in life
October 23rd, 2026 14:48
The Universe Does Not Explain Itself
Caring dove said:
reaches for another hand ‘ …Because people need other people in life . Nobody meant to be complely alone without others
October 23rd, 2026 14:21
Caring dove said:
reaches for another hand ‘ …Because people need other people in life . Nobody meant to be complely alone without others
October 23rd, 2026 14:21
The Universe Does Not Explain Itself
Caring dove said:
What do you mean ‘ the universe has found a way to look at itself and wonder ‘
Well some things don’t always make sense and sometimes we can’t understand certain things …
So …
We’re not just ‘ matter ‘ tho are we
October 23rd, 2026 14:06
Caring dove said:
What do you mean ‘ the universe has found a way to look at itself and wonder ‘
Well some things don’t always make sense and sometimes we can’t understand certain things …
So …
We’re not just ‘ matter ‘ tho are we
October 23rd, 2026 14:06
The Universe Does Not Explain Itself
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last part of your write Deve that captured my attention most:
\"We may never discover
why the universe exists.
But we are part of it,
and for a little while,
the universe has found a way
to look at itself
and wonder.\"
This is not only another point of view but poetic in nature. Loved it
October 23rd, 2026 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last part of your write Deve that captured my attention most:
\"We may never discover
why the universe exists.
But we are part of it,
and for a little while,
the universe has found a way
to look at itself
and wonder.\"
This is not only another point of view but poetic in nature. Loved it
October 23rd, 2026 04:35
The Person I Am Becoming
Novaselic said:
In a way it feels definitely relatable.
October 22nd, 2026 09:42
Novaselic said:
In a way it feels definitely relatable.
October 22nd, 2026 09:42
The Person I Am Becoming
sorenbarrett said:
What an existential discovery and growth in itself. A lovely write Dev and very nicely done
October 22nd, 2026 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
What an existential discovery and growth in itself. A lovely write Dev and very nicely done
October 22nd, 2026 09:39
Somewhere, Life Is Still Beautiful
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful itself the message of this write Dev if more of us looked for the wonderful we would find it in those small spaces that now annoy us. Well said my friend.
October 21st, 2026 11:37
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful itself the message of this write Dev if more of us looked for the wonderful we would find it in those small spaces that now annoy us. Well said my friend.
October 21st, 2026 11:37
The Things We Never Say
sorenbarrett said:
The key for me is the recognition. Until one knows one is wounded or ill one can not treat it. The poem then proceeds to lay out a healing process. Nicely done.
October 20th, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
The key for me is the recognition. Until one knows one is wounded or ill one can not treat it. The poem then proceeds to lay out a healing process. Nicely done.
October 20th, 2026 04:19
The Art of Staying Soft
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely message set to good rhyme it touches me Dev and gets a fave
October 17th, 2026 09:58
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely message set to good rhyme it touches me Dev and gets a fave
October 17th, 2026 09:58
Somewhere Between Today and Tomorrow
Paul Bell said:
Yes, sometimes the penny drops before you\'ve realised it.
I always say.
If you wake up tomorrow, it\'s a great day,
If you don\'t. it\'s somebody elses problem.
October 15th, 2026 15:02
Paul Bell said:
Yes, sometimes the penny drops before you\'ve realised it.
I always say.
If you wake up tomorrow, it\'s a great day,
If you don\'t. it\'s somebody elses problem.
October 15th, 2026 15:02
Somewhere Between Today and Tomorrow
sorenbarrett said:
A great message for a society that must have action in the first minute of a film or page of a novel or they loose interest. Patience is a virtue and there is nothing wrong with a day that is not filled with excitement. Nicely written
October 15th, 2026 12:09
sorenbarrett said:
A great message for a society that must have action in the first minute of a film or page of a novel or they loose interest. Patience is a virtue and there is nothing wrong with a day that is not filled with excitement. Nicely written
October 15th, 2026 12:09
A Heart That Asks for Nothing
Caring dove said:
Beautiful lies ? What do you mean by that ?
October 14th, 2026 07:25
Caring dove said:
Beautiful lies ? What do you mean by that ?
October 14th, 2026 07:25
A Heart That Asks for Nothing
sorenbarrett said:
Dev this one sets the tone for an ideal and a good one at that. Lovely my friend
October 14th, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Dev this one sets the tone for an ideal and a good one at that. Lovely my friend
October 14th, 2026 04:22
A Heart That Asks for Nothing
Caring dove said:
Always good to be kind and gentle ) nice writing
October 14th, 2026 00:48
Caring dove said:
Always good to be kind and gentle ) nice writing
October 14th, 2026 00:48
The Shape of an Absence
sorenbarrett said:
The message carries through this Dev where every person has a value and worth and needs to be listened to. Nicely done
October 11th, 2026 09:52
sorenbarrett said:
The message carries through this Dev where every person has a value and worth and needs to be listened to. Nicely done
October 11th, 2026 09:52
Being Lonely Is Better Than Living in a Fake World
Doggerel Dave said:
A raw critique of what passes for caring interaction in large swathes of the population. I understand completely. Had precisely your thoughts (though expressed less poetically) intermittently for most of my life. However I must agree with Caring Dove (above); her statement is the closest you will get to truth round here.
Turn your thoughts to what you want out of life and go for it . You will find folks on the same journey whom you can relate to.
(Sorry – I don’t usually dispense advice like that, but in this case I felt an urgent need to do so.)
September 19th, 2026 05:10
Doggerel Dave said:
A raw critique of what passes for caring interaction in large swathes of the population. I understand completely. Had precisely your thoughts (though expressed less poetically) intermittently for most of my life. However I must agree with Caring Dove (above); her statement is the closest you will get to truth round here.
Turn your thoughts to what you want out of life and go for it . You will find folks on the same journey whom you can relate to.
(Sorry – I don’t usually dispense advice like that, but in this case I felt an urgent need to do so.)
September 19th, 2026 05:10
Being Lonely Is Better Than Living in a Fake World
Caring dove said:
You express yourself well .
And true … it’s lonely when you feel invisible around people .
Though Some people do want to know how others are .. their not just saying it .
Everything isn’t fake
September 18th, 2026 21:25
Caring dove said:
You express yourself well .
And true … it’s lonely when you feel invisible around people .
Though Some people do want to know how others are .. their not just saying it .
Everything isn’t fake
September 18th, 2026 21:25
Being Lonely Is Better Than Living in a Fake World
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said Dev this poem speaks of sincerity and being oneself where others are honest as well. Nicely done.
September 18th, 2026 19:33
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said Dev this poem speaks of sincerity and being oneself where others are honest as well. Nicely done.
September 18th, 2026 19:33
The Day I Left
Caring dove said:
Waiting for someone ?
Bit of a sad writing but nicely written
July 25th, 2026 11:30
Caring dove said:
Waiting for someone ?
Bit of a sad writing but nicely written
July 25th, 2026 11:30
The Day I Left
sorenbarrett said:
Dev this poem left a sadness and a longing in me. It is identifiable because of its humanity and the experiences that many of us share along the way. I leaves a feeling of loneliness as well. Nicely written my friend
July 25th, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Dev this poem left a sadness and a longing in me. It is identifiable because of its humanity and the experiences that many of us share along the way. I leaves a feeling of loneliness as well. Nicely written my friend
July 25th, 2026 04:17
Sleeping Beneath the Sky
Caring dove said:
Nicely written .. but sad .. like you want to feel more noticed or to feel less alone in the world
July 11th, 2026 08:53
Caring dove said:
Nicely written .. but sad .. like you want to feel more noticed or to feel less alone in the world
July 11th, 2026 08:53
Sleeping Beneath the Sky
sorenbarrett said:
So good to see you back Dev this poem is a bit haunting and speaks from the ground. It has a omnipotent feel to it as if it can see all from a different perspective. It at the same time is lonely and feels so isolated. Nicely penned in rhyme and with good flow and meter it is a fave
July 11th, 2026 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
So good to see you back Dev this poem is a bit haunting and speaks from the ground. It has a omnipotent feel to it as if it can see all from a different perspective. It at the same time is lonely and feels so isolated. Nicely penned in rhyme and with good flow and meter it is a fave
July 11th, 2026 04:40
Towards the Eternity
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely thought with deep philosophical meaning. Nicely written Dev
May 24th, 2026 15:26
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely thought with deep philosophical meaning. Nicely written Dev
May 24th, 2026 15:26
A Message to the World
NafisaSB said:
so inspirational - yet we tend to fall prey to slander, and lose our cool and our serenity: this is a timely reminder to hold fast...
May 20th, 2026 01:06
NafisaSB said:
so inspirational - yet we tend to fall prey to slander, and lose our cool and our serenity: this is a timely reminder to hold fast...
May 20th, 2026 01:06
A Message to the World
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Dev a piece of good advice set in poetic form a fave
May 17th, 2026 13:07
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Dev a piece of good advice set in poetic form a fave
May 17th, 2026 13:07
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