Comments received on poems by Dev Parth
The Art of Staying Soft
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely message set to good rhyme it touches me Dev and gets a fave
October 17th, 2026 09:58
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely message set to good rhyme it touches me Dev and gets a fave
October 17th, 2026 09:58
Somewhere Between Today and Tomorrow
Paul Bell said:
Yes, sometimes the penny drops before you\'ve realised it.
I always say.
If you wake up tomorrow, it\'s a great day,
If you don\'t. it\'s somebody elses problem.
October 15th, 2026 15:02
Paul Bell said:
Yes, sometimes the penny drops before you\'ve realised it.
I always say.
If you wake up tomorrow, it\'s a great day,
If you don\'t. it\'s somebody elses problem.
October 15th, 2026 15:02
Somewhere Between Today and Tomorrow
sorenbarrett said:
A great message for a society that must have action in the first minute of a film or page of a novel or they loose interest. Patience is a virtue and there is nothing wrong with a day that is not filled with excitement. Nicely written
October 15th, 2026 12:09
sorenbarrett said:
A great message for a society that must have action in the first minute of a film or page of a novel or they loose interest. Patience is a virtue and there is nothing wrong with a day that is not filled with excitement. Nicely written
October 15th, 2026 12:09
A Heart That Asks for Nothing
Caring dove said:
Beautiful lies ? What do you mean by that ?
October 14th, 2026 07:25
Caring dove said:
Beautiful lies ? What do you mean by that ?
October 14th, 2026 07:25
A Heart That Asks for Nothing
sorenbarrett said:
Dev this one sets the tone for an ideal and a good one at that. Lovely my friend
October 14th, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Dev this one sets the tone for an ideal and a good one at that. Lovely my friend
October 14th, 2026 04:22
A Heart That Asks for Nothing
Caring dove said:
Always good to be kind and gentle ) nice writing
October 14th, 2026 00:48
Caring dove said:
Always good to be kind and gentle ) nice writing
October 14th, 2026 00:48
The Shape of an Absence
sorenbarrett said:
The message carries through this Dev where every person has a value and worth and needs to be listened to. Nicely done
October 11th, 2026 09:52
sorenbarrett said:
The message carries through this Dev where every person has a value and worth and needs to be listened to. Nicely done
October 11th, 2026 09:52
Being Lonely Is Better Than Living in a Fake World
Doggerel Dave said:
A raw critique of what passes for caring interaction in large swathes of the population. I understand completely. Had precisely your thoughts (though expressed less poetically) intermittently for most of my life. However I must agree with Caring Dove (above); her statement is the closest you will get to truth round here.
Turn your thoughts to what you want out of life and go for it . You will find folks on the same journey whom you can relate to.
(Sorry – I don’t usually dispense advice like that, but in this case I felt an urgent need to do so.)
September 19th, 2026 05:10
Doggerel Dave said:
A raw critique of what passes for caring interaction in large swathes of the population. I understand completely. Had precisely your thoughts (though expressed less poetically) intermittently for most of my life. However I must agree with Caring Dove (above); her statement is the closest you will get to truth round here.
Turn your thoughts to what you want out of life and go for it . You will find folks on the same journey whom you can relate to.
(Sorry – I don’t usually dispense advice like that, but in this case I felt an urgent need to do so.)
September 19th, 2026 05:10
Being Lonely Is Better Than Living in a Fake World
Caring dove said:
You express yourself well .
And true … it’s lonely when you feel invisible around people .
Though Some people do want to know how others are .. their not just saying it .
Everything isn’t fake
September 18th, 2026 21:25
Caring dove said:
You express yourself well .
And true … it’s lonely when you feel invisible around people .
Though Some people do want to know how others are .. their not just saying it .
Everything isn’t fake
September 18th, 2026 21:25
Being Lonely Is Better Than Living in a Fake World
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said Dev this poem speaks of sincerity and being oneself where others are honest as well. Nicely done.
September 18th, 2026 19:33
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said Dev this poem speaks of sincerity and being oneself where others are honest as well. Nicely done.
September 18th, 2026 19:33
The Day I Left
Caring dove said:
Waiting for someone ?
Bit of a sad writing but nicely written
July 25th, 2026 11:30
Caring dove said:
Waiting for someone ?
Bit of a sad writing but nicely written
July 25th, 2026 11:30
The Day I Left
sorenbarrett said:
Dev this poem left a sadness and a longing in me. It is identifiable because of its humanity and the experiences that many of us share along the way. I leaves a feeling of loneliness as well. Nicely written my friend
July 25th, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Dev this poem left a sadness and a longing in me. It is identifiable because of its humanity and the experiences that many of us share along the way. I leaves a feeling of loneliness as well. Nicely written my friend
July 25th, 2026 04:17
Sleeping Beneath the Sky
Caring dove said:
Nicely written .. but sad .. like you want to feel more noticed or to feel less alone in the world
July 11th, 2026 08:53
Caring dove said:
Nicely written .. but sad .. like you want to feel more noticed or to feel less alone in the world
July 11th, 2026 08:53
Sleeping Beneath the Sky
sorenbarrett said:
So good to see you back Dev this poem is a bit haunting and speaks from the ground. It has a omnipotent feel to it as if it can see all from a different perspective. It at the same time is lonely and feels so isolated. Nicely penned in rhyme and with good flow and meter it is a fave
July 11th, 2026 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
So good to see you back Dev this poem is a bit haunting and speaks from the ground. It has a omnipotent feel to it as if it can see all from a different perspective. It at the same time is lonely and feels so isolated. Nicely penned in rhyme and with good flow and meter it is a fave
July 11th, 2026 04:40
Towards the Eternity
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely thought with deep philosophical meaning. Nicely written Dev
May 24th, 2026 15:26
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely thought with deep philosophical meaning. Nicely written Dev
May 24th, 2026 15:26
A Message to the World
NafisaSB said:
so inspirational - yet we tend to fall prey to slander, and lose our cool and our serenity: this is a timely reminder to hold fast...
May 20th, 2026 01:06
NafisaSB said:
so inspirational - yet we tend to fall prey to slander, and lose our cool and our serenity: this is a timely reminder to hold fast...
May 20th, 2026 01:06
A Message to the World
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Dev a piece of good advice set in poetic form a fave
May 17th, 2026 13:07
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Dev a piece of good advice set in poetic form a fave
May 17th, 2026 13:07
The Letter I Didn’t Leave
Ellen Marsell said:
I like the quiet wisdom of this poem.
March 14th, 2026 11:36
Ellen Marsell said:
I like the quiet wisdom of this poem.
March 14th, 2026 11:36
The Letter I Didn’t Leave
sorenbarrett said:
Procrastinating death is not a bad thing. A great write about an action not taken that leaves further options and I was always told to leave as many options open as possible
March 14th, 2026 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
Procrastinating death is not a bad thing. A great write about an action not taken that leaves further options and I was always told to leave as many options open as possible
March 14th, 2026 09:40
An Apology
Caring dove said:
Well sometimes people make mistakes or do things wrong .. but yeah owning up to it might help , and yeah apologising .. because yeah nobody’s perfect .
Nice writing anyway )
March 1st, 2026 15:19
Caring dove said:
Well sometimes people make mistakes or do things wrong .. but yeah owning up to it might help , and yeah apologising .. because yeah nobody’s perfect .
Nice writing anyway )
March 1st, 2026 15:19
Between Who I Was and Who I Am
sorenbarrett said:
We are all a composite of many things blended into a unique individual. Nicely written
March 1st, 2026 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
We are all a composite of many things blended into a unique individual. Nicely written
March 1st, 2026 06:10
May I Love You
Caring dove said:
You have a beautiful way with words .. I couldn’t write in that way
February 28th, 2026 02:29
Caring dove said:
You have a beautiful way with words .. I couldn’t write in that way
February 28th, 2026 02:29
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