Comments received on poems by Dev Parth
Dear Death
sorenbarrett said:
A very poetic write that I can feel. If I might offer one small suggestion it would be even better if you used a different word for depth in the line where it is used twice. Very nice
January 5th, 2024 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
A very poetic write that I can feel. If I might offer one small suggestion it would be even better if you used a different word for depth in the line where it is used twice. Very nice
January 5th, 2024 11:30
I Think I Am Bad
Alan R said:
For as Dev, I\'m not bound by the past,
In the sculpting of self, a mold to cast.
\"I think I am bad,\" but can I find,
The strength within, a different kind?
This was the part that shows so much potential for growth and self awareness, if this is something you were going for, well put.
January 4th, 2024 11:04
Alan R said:
For as Dev, I\'m not bound by the past,
In the sculpting of self, a mold to cast.
\"I think I am bad,\" but can I find,
The strength within, a different kind?
This was the part that shows so much potential for growth and self awareness, if this is something you were going for, well put.
January 4th, 2024 11:04
I Think I Am Bad
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written in verse this common thought shows progression to the end where hope prevails and reveals that bad may not be bad after all. Nicely done
January 4th, 2024 10:32
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written in verse this common thought shows progression to the end where hope prevails and reveals that bad may not be bad after all. Nicely done
January 4th, 2024 10:32
May I Love You
Lil said:
This is romantic and soooo beautiful. i love this.
December 31st, 2023 12:57
Lil said:
This is romantic and soooo beautiful. i love this.
December 31st, 2023 12:57
I\'M SINGLE
Accidental Poet said:
And trust me Neville knows what he\'s talking about. 😉👍
December 31st, 2023 11:04
Accidental Poet said:
And trust me Neville knows what he\'s talking about. 😉👍
December 31st, 2023 11:04
NO TIME
Accidental Poet said:
Let no time pass without being shared in words of beautiful poetry. 😉👍
December 31st, 2023 11:00
Accidental Poet said:
Let no time pass without being shared in words of beautiful poetry. 😉👍
December 31st, 2023 11:00
May I Love You
Cassie58 said:
Such beautiful poetic expression, bringing into the frame wonderful imagery of the natural environment. You are a true romantic poet. Lovely work. You have a fan.
December 31st, 2023 08:45
Cassie58 said:
Such beautiful poetic expression, bringing into the frame wonderful imagery of the natural environment. You are a true romantic poet. Lovely work. You have a fan.
December 31st, 2023 08:45
NO TIME
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dev, in life there are many moments like this.
Andy
December 31st, 2023 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dev, in life there are many moments like this.
Andy
December 31st, 2023 02:27
I\'M SINGLE
Neville said:
Hello my very new literary friend ..
I sincerely urge you to continue writing as I do believe that you have a considerable talent .. All Good Things,
Neville
December 30th, 2023 10:11
Neville said:
Hello my very new literary friend ..
I sincerely urge you to continue writing as I do believe that you have a considerable talent .. All Good Things,
Neville
December 30th, 2023 10:11
NO TIME
Neville said:
this is not only a beautifully presented poem & looks good on the page upon which it has been pinned .. it is a true depiction of what happens to us all .. muchly enjoyed Dev, very muchly indeed ..
December 30th, 2023 10:06
Neville said:
this is not only a beautifully presented poem & looks good on the page upon which it has been pinned .. it is a true depiction of what happens to us all .. muchly enjoyed Dev, very muchly indeed ..
December 30th, 2023 10:06
NO TIME
Cassie58 said:
Beautifully expressed poetry. A passing glance, a snapshot in time can certainly leave lovely memories. I enjoyed your poem.
December 30th, 2023 07:07
Cassie58 said:
Beautifully expressed poetry. A passing glance, a snapshot in time can certainly leave lovely memories. I enjoyed your poem.
December 30th, 2023 07:07
EARTH MAY BE
Parisab said:
To be small but so full of light! We live on a special planet, as you wrote about so brilliantly.
December 27th, 2023 23:39
Parisab said:
To be small but so full of light! We live on a special planet, as you wrote about so brilliantly.
December 27th, 2023 23:39
EARTH MAY BE
Philip said:
A very positive message about our planet and well written.
Phil
December 27th, 2023 11:32
Philip said:
A very positive message about our planet and well written.
Phil
December 27th, 2023 11:32
Tears in Dev Parth\'s Eyes
Neville said:
I journeyed back here to see where you were coming from .. I was not disappointed .. Neville
December 22nd, 2023 02:40
Neville said:
I journeyed back here to see where you were coming from .. I was not disappointed .. Neville
December 22nd, 2023 02:40
Alone Vs Lonely
Tooway said:
Nice play on words and narrative structure, cool.
December 15th, 2023 13:20
Tooway said:
Nice play on words and narrative structure, cool.
December 15th, 2023 13:20
Alone Vs Lonely
Altrialino said:
Rly like the emotion. Very powerful words thank you
December 15th, 2023 12:27
Altrialino said:
Rly like the emotion. Very powerful words thank you
December 15th, 2023 12:27
Droplets Of Dreams
Santajah Douglass said:
Wow the intense emotions is just so beautiful I might cry
November 30th, 2023 13:53
Santajah Douglass said:
Wow the intense emotions is just so beautiful I might cry
November 30th, 2023 13:53
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