Comments received on poems by Dev Parth
Are We Together?
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded a beautiful poem of love.
September 13th, 2024 05:58
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded a beautiful poem of love.
September 13th, 2024 05:58
Whether I Lost You or Not
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely expressed with great metaphor the feeling of loss and returning memories. Lovely
September 11th, 2024 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely expressed with great metaphor the feeling of loss and returning memories. Lovely
September 11th, 2024 05:45
I Have Loved You
Dan Williams said:
Aww, this is for some very lucky mate. Well done.
September 10th, 2024 01:00
Dan Williams said:
Aww, this is for some very lucky mate. Well done.
September 10th, 2024 01:00
I Have Loved You
sorenbarrett said:
This poem was beautifully written with wonderful meter and rhyme. Its words convey a feeling of fading loss and general sense of longing. Very nicely done.
September 9th, 2024 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
This poem was beautifully written with wonderful meter and rhyme. Its words convey a feeling of fading loss and general sense of longing. Very nicely done.
September 9th, 2024 06:45
Journey Of The Star
Bella Shepard said:
This is beautiful my friend, following the path, holding onto the dream by the light of the star, hope everpresent. It is both enlightening and uplifting.
September 2nd, 2024 14:22
Bella Shepard said:
This is beautiful my friend, following the path, holding onto the dream by the light of the star, hope everpresent. It is both enlightening and uplifting.
September 2nd, 2024 14:22
The Abyss of Nothingness
sorenbarrett said:
It is from pain that joy springs in the appreciation of experience and growth. The best steel is tempered in the hottest fire.
August 28th, 2024 06:38
sorenbarrett said:
It is from pain that joy springs in the appreciation of experience and growth. The best steel is tempered in the hottest fire.
August 28th, 2024 06:38
Whispers of Midnight: A Janmashtami Hymn
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful poem of divine birth, in flowing rhymical lines. A joy to read!
August 26th, 2024 14:31
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful poem of divine birth, in flowing rhymical lines. A joy to read!
August 26th, 2024 14:31
Whispers of Midnight: A Janmashtami Hymn
sorenbarrett said:
My god is nature but you have so well made this god into nature that it fits well in my view. Krishna would be my god of choice if I had one for my god has to be a happy god, a god of song, and with a sense of humor. So nice to read this well written and rhymed piece
August 26th, 2024 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
My god is nature but you have so well made this god into nature that it fits well in my view. Krishna would be my god of choice if I had one for my god has to be a happy god, a god of song, and with a sense of humor. So nice to read this well written and rhymed piece
August 26th, 2024 09:13
Whispers of Midnight: A Janmashtami Hymn
Cassie58 said:
Very nicely conveyed stanzas Dev. A wonderful poem of faith and love.
August 26th, 2024 06:33
Cassie58 said:
Very nicely conveyed stanzas Dev. A wonderful poem of faith and love.
August 26th, 2024 06:33
In Dev\'s Light
sorenbarrett said:
Positive, motivating, energizing, very nice.
August 24th, 2024 09:11
sorenbarrett said:
Positive, motivating, energizing, very nice.
August 24th, 2024 09:11
Hide Yourself
Doggerel Dave said:
Polished , neat and direct to me. I like that mode, but know I must balance with the outside world too.
August 22nd, 2024 17:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Polished , neat and direct to me. I like that mode, but know I must balance with the outside world too.
August 22nd, 2024 17:50
Hide Yourself
sorenbarrett said:
Although listening to others can be helpful making ones own decisions is always best. Great write
August 22nd, 2024 15:54
sorenbarrett said:
Although listening to others can be helpful making ones own decisions is always best. Great write
August 22nd, 2024 15:54
My Dearest Sisters
sorenbarrett said:
A tribute to a sister and all that she means present and past nicely written
August 18th, 2024 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
A tribute to a sister and all that she means present and past nicely written
August 18th, 2024 06:39
Why Women Weren’t Safe
Doggerel Dave said:
A worthwhile project, this one. Not only have you made clear in your response above without embellishment, the facts of that case, but the piece itself in a disciplined structured way told me where you are at even before the detail. Reaction to the poem must include that women’s treatment by men as you state occurs everywhere to varying degrees, and progress has a long way to go.
August 16th, 2024 06:52
Doggerel Dave said:
A worthwhile project, this one. Not only have you made clear in your response above without embellishment, the facts of that case, but the piece itself in a disciplined structured way told me where you are at even before the detail. Reaction to the poem must include that women’s treatment by men as you state occurs everywhere to varying degrees, and progress has a long way to go.
August 16th, 2024 06:52
Why Women Weren’t Safe
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write in more than one way. The message itself is great but the writing and rhyme as well as rhythm pulled this one along. Very nicely done.
August 16th, 2024 05:20
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write in more than one way. The message itself is great but the writing and rhyme as well as rhythm pulled this one along. Very nicely done.
August 16th, 2024 05:20
Why Women Weren’t Safe
Justina said:
I feel a strong sense of power in this poem and enjoy its rich vocabulary. May I ask what inspired you?
August 16th, 2024 04:11
Justina said:
I feel a strong sense of power in this poem and enjoy its rich vocabulary. May I ask what inspired you?
August 16th, 2024 04:11
May I Love You
Caring dove said:
Very gentle and loving .. beautiful writing )
August 15th, 2024 14:00
Caring dove said:
Very gentle and loving .. beautiful writing )
August 15th, 2024 14:00
It\'s Me Vs. Me
sorenbarrett said:
True words spoken in this well rhymed poem. Nicely said.
August 14th, 2024 06:04
sorenbarrett said:
True words spoken in this well rhymed poem. Nicely said.
August 14th, 2024 06:04
WHY THAT\"S SO
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written this piece explores the why. Lovely!
August 13th, 2024 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written this piece explores the why. Lovely!
August 13th, 2024 05:19
Fragments of Us
Dan Williams said:
All of this is true of my second wife who left me after twenty years. Twenty more years later I do still breathe her memories. Very nice.
August 13th, 2024 00:31
Dan Williams said:
All of this is true of my second wife who left me after twenty years. Twenty more years later I do still breathe her memories. Very nice.
August 13th, 2024 00:31
Fragments of Us
sorenbarrett said:
This one was wonderfully worded with a timing that let it roll off the tongue as if it was meant to be. A lovely poem of longing and loss..
August 12th, 2024 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
This one was wonderfully worded with a timing that let it roll off the tongue as if it was meant to be. A lovely poem of longing and loss..
August 12th, 2024 05:45
Actually, Who I Am and What I Am Doing
sorenbarrett said:
One sets one\'s own path and creates one\'s own destiny stated in this piece with passion. Nicely done.
August 11th, 2024 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
One sets one\'s own path and creates one\'s own destiny stated in this piece with passion. Nicely done.
August 11th, 2024 06:48
Actually, Who I Am and What I Am Doing
Cassie58 said:
I am the architect of my future,
I very much like that line. Acknowledging that you are your own creation. Build well, despite the troubles one encounters on life’s pathway. Finely penned stanzas Dev. Much enjoyed.
August 11th, 2024 02:48
Cassie58 said:
I am the architect of my future,
I very much like that line. Acknowledging that you are your own creation. Build well, despite the troubles one encounters on life’s pathway. Finely penned stanzas Dev. Much enjoyed.
August 11th, 2024 02:48
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