Comments received on poems by Dev Parth
Failure Rise Up
2781 said:
Down under they legislate against failure. Not allowing people to make mistakes only dumbs them down. Good advice, cheers.
May 17th, 2023 09:39
2781 said:
Down under they legislate against failure. Not allowing people to make mistakes only dumbs them down. Good advice, cheers.
May 17th, 2023 09:39
Failure Rise Up
Bobby O said:
A stepping stone indeed. “The credit belongs to the man who is actually in the arena …. so that his place shall never be with those cold and timid souls who neither know victory nor defeat.”
…an abridged excerpt from Teddy Roosevelt.
May 17th, 2023 07:58
Bobby O said:
A stepping stone indeed. “The credit belongs to the man who is actually in the arena …. so that his place shall never be with those cold and timid souls who neither know victory nor defeat.”
…an abridged excerpt from Teddy Roosevelt.
May 17th, 2023 07:58
My Earth Looks Like
L. B. Mek said:
\'My Earth is a place of diversity,
A world where all life thrives in unity.\'
great message!
a wonderful read
thanks for sharing
May 12th, 2023 04:14
L. B. Mek said:
\'My Earth is a place of diversity,
A world where all life thrives in unity.\'
great message!
a wonderful read
thanks for sharing
May 12th, 2023 04:14
Love\'s Eternal Symphony
Caring dove said:
This is a beautiful poem )) liked reading this ))
May 10th, 2023 14:39
Caring dove said:
This is a beautiful poem )) liked reading this ))
May 10th, 2023 14:39
School is cinema
L. B. Mek said:
I like your strong resolve
well written, tight editing
thanks for sharing
May 8th, 2023 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
I like your strong resolve
well written, tight editing
thanks for sharing
May 8th, 2023 05:58
My Last Hope
Bobby O said:
Nice content but you use the same subject/verb sentence structure throughout and that detracts from the message
For example , a quick rearrange 2nd stanza
ie;
Conducting this journey we’re on is love
As destiny guides us from above
Through twists and turns
Our Embers burn
Joined until the final dawn
May 6th, 2023 08:38
Bobby O said:
Nice content but you use the same subject/verb sentence structure throughout and that detracts from the message
For example , a quick rearrange 2nd stanza
ie;
Conducting this journey we’re on is love
As destiny guides us from above
Through twists and turns
Our Embers burn
Joined until the final dawn
May 6th, 2023 08:38
Tears in Dev Parth\'s Eyes
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Dev, that light in our life is always there for us and brings joy to us all.
Andy
April 29th, 2023 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Dev, that light in our life is always there for us and brings joy to us all.
Andy
April 29th, 2023 00:27
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