Comments received on poems by Dev Parth
The Last Day
Cassie58 said:
Partings are sorrowful. Three beautifully penned stanzas capture the emotions well. Chapters that are closing are heavy on the heart. An excellent write from an experienced poet. I envisaged several different types of partings here.
March 3rd, 2024 11:31
Cassie58 said:
Partings are sorrowful. Three beautifully penned stanzas capture the emotions well. Chapters that are closing are heavy on the heart. An excellent write from an experienced poet. I envisaged several different types of partings here.
March 3rd, 2024 11:31
I Thought So
Cassie58 said:
You pen a beautiful poem here out of a simple phrase. When the doubts are confirmed and that sadness knocks the heart for six :(
Better to know than not know says I. Fine stanzas, rhyme and flow. A poem much appreciated Dev.
March 1st, 2024 11:46
Cassie58 said:
You pen a beautiful poem here out of a simple phrase. When the doubts are confirmed and that sadness knocks the heart for six :(
Better to know than not know says I. Fine stanzas, rhyme and flow. A poem much appreciated Dev.
March 1st, 2024 11:46
I Thought So
Alan R said:
For what was believed, now a silhouette.
.... beautiful
February 29th, 2024 12:43
Alan R said:
For what was believed, now a silhouette.
.... beautiful
February 29th, 2024 12:43
Be Yourself
Alan R said:
No mask to wear, no pretense to bear
I like the way this sounds
February 3rd, 2024 01:38
Alan R said:
No mask to wear, no pretense to bear
I like the way this sounds
February 3rd, 2024 01:38
STAY WITH ME
Cassie58 said:
Three beautiful stanzas with a plea. The repetition works so well here. Love is everything. Nicely penned Dev.
January 27th, 2024 17:36
Cassie58 said:
Three beautiful stanzas with a plea. The repetition works so well here. Love is everything. Nicely penned Dev.
January 27th, 2024 17:36
CHEMISTRY
索纳尔·蒙亨 said:
I\'m in STD.7 😄 but i see my teachers also dealing with chemistry and physics.
January 10th, 2024 04:55
索纳尔·蒙亨 said:
I\'m in STD.7 😄 but i see my teachers also dealing with chemistry and physics.
January 10th, 2024 04:55
CHEMISTRY
索纳尔·蒙亨 said:
Are you singing with atoms and molecules?well, my chemistry is not so strong but I really find it interesting. Lol
January 8th, 2024 21:55
索纳尔·蒙亨 said:
Are you singing with atoms and molecules?well, my chemistry is not so strong but I really find it interesting. Lol
January 8th, 2024 21:55
Dear Death
2781 said:
O death, where is thy sting? Obgrave where is thy victory?
January 7th, 2024 05:39
2781 said:
O death, where is thy sting? Obgrave where is thy victory?
January 7th, 2024 05:39
Resilient Melodies
Eileen M. Clark said:
Hi, a really nice poem, I enjoyed reading it.
January 6th, 2024 18:54
Eileen M. Clark said:
Hi, a really nice poem, I enjoyed reading it.
January 6th, 2024 18:54
Dear Death
sorenbarrett said:
A very poetic write that I can feel. If I might offer one small suggestion it would be even better if you used a different word for depth in the line where it is used twice. Very nice
January 5th, 2024 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
A very poetic write that I can feel. If I might offer one small suggestion it would be even better if you used a different word for depth in the line where it is used twice. Very nice
January 5th, 2024 11:30
I Think I Am Bad
Alan R said:
For as Dev, I\'m not bound by the past,
In the sculpting of self, a mold to cast.
\"I think I am bad,\" but can I find,
The strength within, a different kind?
This was the part that shows so much potential for growth and self awareness, if this is something you were going for, well put.
January 4th, 2024 11:04
Alan R said:
For as Dev, I\'m not bound by the past,
In the sculpting of self, a mold to cast.
\"I think I am bad,\" but can I find,
The strength within, a different kind?
This was the part that shows so much potential for growth and self awareness, if this is something you were going for, well put.
January 4th, 2024 11:04
I Think I Am Bad
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written in verse this common thought shows progression to the end where hope prevails and reveals that bad may not be bad after all. Nicely done
January 4th, 2024 10:32
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written in verse this common thought shows progression to the end where hope prevails and reveals that bad may not be bad after all. Nicely done
January 4th, 2024 10:32
May I Love You
Trix said:
This is romantic and soooo beautiful. i love this.
December 31st, 2023 12:57
Trix said:
This is romantic and soooo beautiful. i love this.
December 31st, 2023 12:57
May I Love You
Cassie58 said:
Such beautiful poetic expression, bringing into the frame wonderful imagery of the natural environment. You are a true romantic poet. Lovely work. You have a fan.
December 31st, 2023 08:45
Cassie58 said:
Such beautiful poetic expression, bringing into the frame wonderful imagery of the natural environment. You are a true romantic poet. Lovely work. You have a fan.
December 31st, 2023 08:45
NO TIME
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dev, in life there are many moments like this.
Andy
December 31st, 2023 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dev, in life there are many moments like this.
Andy
December 31st, 2023 02:27
I\'M SINGLE
Neville said:
Hello my very new literary friend ..
I sincerely urge you to continue writing as I do believe that you have a considerable talent .. All Good Things,
Neville
December 30th, 2023 10:11
Neville said:
Hello my very new literary friend ..
I sincerely urge you to continue writing as I do believe that you have a considerable talent .. All Good Things,
Neville
December 30th, 2023 10:11
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