I Love You
Debake said:

fingers, hands, and hearts intertwined as one
love so strong, this time he\'s not gonna run
and in turn, she doesn\'t feel the need for self-sabotage
this time it\'s real not hidden, nor camouflaged

they want to grow gray and wrinkled together
to say the cliche I need, or I will love you forever
to pack the kid\'s lunches or to the principal offices
to pack the family up for those church services

time flys and soon enough, those gray hairs arrived
covered up with a hat or some dye, and your age denied
wrinkles here covered up with makeup or existence refused
till in the end, they accept that they are fragile and easily bruised

though time seemed to have passed oh so fast
they did seem to create a love that will last
the deal was sealed with the first young call
they made it work I guess it wasn\'t a cliche after all


May 18th, 2023 10:11

Failure Rise Up
Bobby O said:

A stepping stone indeed. “The credit belongs to the man who is actually in the arena …. so that his place shall never be with those cold and timid souls who neither know victory nor defeat.”
…an abridged excerpt from Teddy Roosevelt.

May 17th, 2023 07:58

My Attitude
Dr. Shailesh Gupta Veer said:

Beautiful

May 14th, 2023 05:17

Love\'s Eternal Symphony
Caring dove said:

This is a beautiful poem )) liked reading this ))

May 10th, 2023 14:39

School is cinema
L. B. Mek said:

I like your strong resolve
well written, tight editing
thanks for sharing

May 8th, 2023 05:58

Who I am
Bobby O said:

I throw just laurels.

May 7th, 2023 02:49

Tears in Dev Parth\'s Eyes
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words Dev, that light in our life is always there for us and brings joy to us all.

Andy

April 29th, 2023 00:27