Comments received on poems by Dev Parth



Failure Rise Up
2781 said:

Down under they legislate against failure. Not allowing people to make mistakes only dumbs them down. Good advice, cheers.

May 17th, 2023 09:39

Failure Rise Up
Bobby O said:

A stepping stone indeed. “The credit belongs to the man who is actually in the arena …. so that his place shall never be with those cold and timid souls who neither know victory nor defeat.”
…an abridged excerpt from Teddy Roosevelt.

May 17th, 2023 07:58

Oh My God
2781 said:

Now that is what I call worship.

May 16th, 2023 09:28

My Attitude
Dr. Shailesh Gupta Veer said:

Beautiful

May 14th, 2023 05:17

My Earth Looks Like
L. B. Mek said:

\'My Earth is a place of diversity,
A world where all life thrives in unity.\'
great message!
a wonderful read
thanks for sharing

May 12th, 2023 04:14

Love\'s Eternal Symphony
Caring dove said:

This is a beautiful poem )) liked reading this ))

May 10th, 2023 14:39

Forgiveness: The Bridge to Peace
2781 said:

Amen.

May 9th, 2023 01:37

School is cinema
L. B. Mek said:

I like your strong resolve
well written, tight editing
thanks for sharing

May 8th, 2023 05:58

School is cinema
2781 said:

I liked it.

May 8th, 2023 01:16

Who I am
Bobby O said:

I throw just laurels.

May 7th, 2023 02:49

My Last Hope
Bobby O said:

Nice content but you use the same subject/verb sentence structure throughout and that detracts from the message
For example , a quick rearrange 2nd stanza
ie;
Conducting this journey we’re on is love
As destiny guides us from above
Through twists and turns
Our Embers burn
Joined until the final dawn

May 6th, 2023 08:38

Tears in Dev Parth\'s Eyes
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words Dev, that light in our life is always there for us and brings joy to us all.

Andy

April 29th, 2023 00:27

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