Comments received on poems by Dev Parth



EARTH MAY BE
Parisab said:

To be small but so full of light! We live on a special planet, as you wrote about so brilliantly.

December 27th, 2023 23:39

EARTH MAY BE
Accidental Poet said:

Beautiful view of our home. ๐Ÿ‘

December 27th, 2023 12:02

EARTH MAY BE
Philip said:

A very positive message about our planet and well written.

Phil

December 27th, 2023 11:32

CHEMISTRY
2781 said:

Nice one.

December 26th, 2023 08:33

I\'m Dead Too
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful.

December 23rd, 2023 17:20

Tears in Dev Parth\'s Eyes
Neville said:


I journeyed back here to see where you were coming from .. I was not disappointed .. Neville

December 22nd, 2023 02:40

Fading Tears
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful imagery and emotion.

December 19th, 2023 12:12

Alone Vs Lonely
Tooway said:

Nice play on words and narrative structure, cool.

December 15th, 2023 13:20

Alone Vs Lonely
Altrialino said:

Rly like the emotion. Very powerful words thank you

December 15th, 2023 12:27

It\'s Hurts
Lorenz said:

chat gpt said
tapestry of times
sad masterpiece



December 8th, 2023 12:56

Droplets Of Dreams
Santajah Douglass said:

Wow the intense emotions is just so beautiful I might cry

November 30th, 2023 13:53

I And You
sonal monhyung said:

Beautifully written !๐Ÿ˜

November 23rd, 2023 05:10


My Heart Says Something
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful

November 10th, 2023 09:58


Why So Sad
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work.

November 8th, 2023 21:38

Love\'s Bitter End
JuneM said:

Beautifully and truthfully written, I loved it. I am experiencing something similiar at the moment. Anyway, I hope your pain eases in time

November 7th, 2023 10:24

I\'m Death
NinjaGirl said:

What a beautiful poem! It is lovely, I also have to admire your wingdings encryption method. Death is a comforter for some it\'s true. It is nice to have such a well-done personification. Very comforting.

November 6th, 2023 21:59

I\'m In You
Thomas W Case said:

Very well crafted. Nice use of rhyme.

November 3rd, 2023 09:04

Shadows and Resilience
Thomas W Case said:

Through pain we grow. Great job.

October 20th, 2023 12:06

Ocean\'s Lament
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and poignant. Sad, but true. Great write.

October 20th, 2023 11:33

Tears Like Rain
Teddy.15 said:

Ah so very beautiful I adore your rhyme it\'s so natural off the tongue, it\'s so sad when love disappoints us but their are more and even better ones on the way. LoL I\'m a true fan of love and I say what doesn\'t kill us makes us stronger, you are 17? When I was 17 I found a love that was so awful and painful I then became a poetess. โค๏ธ

October 20th, 2023 11:22

Shadows and Resilience
BlessedbyGod said:

It does capture the beauty of life, though we suffer and have scarred, we heal and can find the beauty in it all,

October 20th, 2023 10:35

Ocean\'s Lament
Firefall said:

Your poem perfectly captures the sad state of our oceans today. Hopefully, humanity will wake up before its too late.

October 19th, 2023 21:23

Ocean\'s Lament
novaa said:

A powerful message which we all should pay heed to sooner than later. Great piece!

October 19th, 2023 14:19

Tears Like Rain
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work.

October 18th, 2023 19:37

Tears Like Rain
novaa said:

Profound and beautiful depiction of sorrow and lost love......Very evocative....Nice write!

October 16th, 2023 10:05

Tears Like Rain
Pop64 said:

You summed this up in that lst line, love never ends, we can\'t just drop emotions, but it can cease. Beautifully expressed but a truly sad write.

October 16th, 2023 09:49

Serenity Song
Mario Piedra said:

The sweet melody of serenity
Can be felt anywhere
With a quiet mindโ€ฆ..
I felt such serenity reading your insight
Thank you

July 17th, 2023 05:54

Serenity Song
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful couplets, thanks for sharing dear poet

July 17th, 2023 04:48

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