Comments received on poems by jemina
Chill Pill
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW JEM ~ This is awesome and from a cool MD as well ! I'm not sure how to interpret "Jeans without a top to follow !" No wonder you are twirling ~ spinning ~ dancing ! It reminds me of a Missionary Meeting I attended when I was 14. He was working in one of the Pacific Islands. The Ladies in our Church all had to wear HATS. He showed a slide of the Ladies Meeting on the Island . They all wore big hats but they were all TOPLESS ! 20 of the Men in the Meeting volunteered for Missionary Service ~ c'est la vie ! PENZANCE a great destination ~ nice beach ! Love the poem ! Love BRIAN
September 22nd, 2016 15:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW JEM ~ This is awesome and from a cool MD as well ! I'm not sure how to interpret "Jeans without a top to follow !" No wonder you are twirling ~ spinning ~ dancing ! It reminds me of a Missionary Meeting I attended when I was 14. He was working in one of the Pacific Islands. The Ladies in our Church all had to wear HATS. He showed a slide of the Ladies Meeting on the Island . They all wore big hats but they were all TOPLESS ! 20 of the Men in the Meeting volunteered for Missionary Service ~ c'est la vie ! PENZANCE a great destination ~ nice beach ! Love the poem ! Love BRIAN
September 22nd, 2016 15:04
Missing (\"U\")
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD AFTERNOON JEMINA ~ CTB ~ Great train journey ~ time for your muse to move. There are lots of things missing in the 21st C especially letters in texting " W is a great letter but to often silent ! Like H ! SWARD which is "a stretch of grass" has retained her "W" whereas SWORD has not ~ why ? S (as you say) is an important letter because it multiplies AN EGG to EGGS (a dozen or more ?) Letters (and Lovers !) do need to be kissed back to life. Up North we would say ME OUSE ~ but it is more of AN OME ! Love the concept of MISSING "U" ! Thanks for caring BRIAN
September 22nd, 2016 09:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD AFTERNOON JEMINA ~ CTB ~ Great train journey ~ time for your muse to move. There are lots of things missing in the 21st C especially letters in texting " W is a great letter but to often silent ! Like H ! SWARD which is "a stretch of grass" has retained her "W" whereas SWORD has not ~ why ? S (as you say) is an important letter because it multiplies AN EGG to EGGS (a dozen or more ?) Letters (and Lovers !) do need to be kissed back to life. Up North we would say ME OUSE ~ but it is more of AN OME ! Love the concept of MISSING "U" ! Thanks for caring BRIAN
September 22nd, 2016 09:49
...one poet to another
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing JEMINA (lovely name) I'm about the same age as you and an environmental scientist. So you know as I know "falling in love" is as random as liking (or not liking) certain types of wine. Of course the senses are involved: Sight ~ Scent ~ Savour ~ Sound ~ Sense of touch ~ BUT ~ something mystical happens and you are IN LOVE ! Is it cerebral ~ physiological ~ psychological or just fate ? 'm still single (I have a current GF ~ 28 whom I love) but in my (limited experience) being IN LOVE is awesome and takes no notice of colour ~ class ~ country ~ creed ~ chronology or even gender ! This explains sometimes why our parents are quite "taken aback" by whom we choose to date. Being IN LOVE (thank goodness) overrides suitability. This is where "dating agencies" get it all wrong ! Love the structure and subject of your poem ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
September 21st, 2016 15:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing JEMINA (lovely name) I'm about the same age as you and an environmental scientist. So you know as I know "falling in love" is as random as liking (or not liking) certain types of wine. Of course the senses are involved: Sight ~ Scent ~ Savour ~ Sound ~ Sense of touch ~ BUT ~ something mystical happens and you are IN LOVE ! Is it cerebral ~ physiological ~ psychological or just fate ? 'm still single (I have a current GF ~ 28 whom I love) but in my (limited experience) being IN LOVE is awesome and takes no notice of colour ~ class ~ country ~ creed ~ chronology or even gender ! This explains sometimes why our parents are quite "taken aback" by whom we choose to date. Being IN LOVE (thank goodness) overrides suitability. This is where "dating agencies" get it all wrong ! Love the structure and subject of your poem ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
September 21st, 2016 15:00
...one poet to another
Sarah_and_Elizabeth said:
"When one mind courts another." I like that thought. Its not just about something physical.
January 18th, 2016 21:48
Sarah_and_Elizabeth said:
"When one mind courts another." I like that thought. Its not just about something physical.
January 18th, 2016 21:48
One day
Ken said:
It never ceases to amaze me how those who have love right before their eyes fail to see or just turn a blind eye to it. Free yourself from the chains. Live life. Love life. Do this for yourself. Incredible poem. Peace and love to you.
December 22nd, 2015 19:35
Ken said:
It never ceases to amaze me how those who have love right before their eyes fail to see or just turn a blind eye to it. Free yourself from the chains. Live life. Love life. Do this for yourself. Incredible poem. Peace and love to you.
December 22nd, 2015 19:35
