Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
When it comes to love
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy I love your first line \"Darkness has become my very light\" I also loved the doubt and indecision in the last line.
July 11th, 2023 18:16
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy I love your first line \"Darkness has become my very light\" I also loved the doubt and indecision in the last line.
July 11th, 2023 18:16
When it comes to love
LIZ said:
But...we need darkness in order to see light! So either way you put it, love will always survive!!! \"is mine to write, my blood is my ink pulsating veins raging inside\"- YES!!! Well done!!!
July 11th, 2023 13:33
LIZ said:
But...we need darkness in order to see light! So either way you put it, love will always survive!!! \"is mine to write, my blood is my ink pulsating veins raging inside\"- YES!!! Well done!!!
July 11th, 2023 13:33
When it comes to love
peto said:
Can I decide for you
Happy ever after all day long
\"Nowt\" I didn\'t expect from Italy
You are on fire right now
Superb
July 11th, 2023 12:32
peto said:
Can I decide for you
Happy ever after all day long
\"Nowt\" I didn\'t expect from Italy
You are on fire right now
Superb
July 11th, 2023 12:32
My Nevada
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Full of meaning and significance. We are the result of our experience, and yet the creators of the impending same... Very powerful.
July 11th, 2023 09:13
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Full of meaning and significance. We are the result of our experience, and yet the creators of the impending same... Very powerful.
July 11th, 2023 09:13
My Nevada
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Teddy but you have come out of that down time into your wonderful life so all is good.
Andy
July 11th, 2023 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Teddy but you have come out of that down time into your wonderful life so all is good.
Andy
July 11th, 2023 01:55
My Nevada
peto said:
Super write
That spark returned, I suspect pretty quickly just by your words I\'ve read lately
Loved the dance
July 10th, 2023 10:16
peto said:
Super write
That spark returned, I suspect pretty quickly just by your words I\'ve read lately
Loved the dance
July 10th, 2023 10:16
My Nevada
Christina8 said:
A wonderful write, Teddy! So sad but written with such description.....Great job!
July 10th, 2023 09:28
Christina8 said:
A wonderful write, Teddy! So sad but written with such description.....Great job!
July 10th, 2023 09:28
My Nevada
L. B. Mek said:
who we are and what we overcome
as seeds, to the us blossoming
in the now we cherish sincere
(i can imagine you dancing
in that desert, with just you
and the angels that look over you)
pulse as the drumbeat
to our life\'s emancipation songs
if we survived, we did enough
onwards
to existence\'s, blessed
hurdles
(stay strong beautiful!
but no more public peep shows
gotta make em Pay!
google earth a modern menace)
lol
July 10th, 2023 04:09
L. B. Mek said:
who we are and what we overcome
as seeds, to the us blossoming
in the now we cherish sincere
(i can imagine you dancing
in that desert, with just you
and the angels that look over you)
pulse as the drumbeat
to our life\'s emancipation songs
if we survived, we did enough
onwards
to existence\'s, blessed
hurdles
(stay strong beautiful!
but no more public peep shows
gotta make em Pay!
google earth a modern menace)
lol
July 10th, 2023 04:09
In The Line Of Fire
L. B. Mek said:
lol
thank you for the chuckles my friend
\'don\'t moonwalk on top of walls
when feeling a little, too humpty\'
(i tried 😌)
July 10th, 2023 04:01
L. B. Mek said:
lol
thank you for the chuckles my friend
\'don\'t moonwalk on top of walls
when feeling a little, too humpty\'
(i tried 😌)
July 10th, 2023 04:01
My Nevada
Neville said:
this is absolutely brill & I aint talkin fish neither .. I seriously mean it ..
I thought I was your Nevada tho ... ❤️
July 10th, 2023 02:07
Neville said:
this is absolutely brill & I aint talkin fish neither .. I seriously mean it ..
I thought I was your Nevada tho ... ❤️
July 10th, 2023 02:07
My Nevada
orchidee said:
Good write T.
KP \'kills me off\' - I\'m utterly out of love! lol.
July 10th, 2023 01:55
orchidee said:
Good write T.
KP \'kills me off\' - I\'m utterly out of love! lol.
July 10th, 2023 01:55
My Nevada
Parisab said:
All the desperate things we do for love and sometimes with no reciprocity-great read, being showy in Vegas doesn’t receive much notice-everyone and everything is already extra-thanks for sharing your heartfelt words- bravo a una poetessa
July 10th, 2023 01:04
Parisab said:
All the desperate things we do for love and sometimes with no reciprocity-great read, being showy in Vegas doesn’t receive much notice-everyone and everything is already extra-thanks for sharing your heartfelt words- bravo a una poetessa
July 10th, 2023 01:04
My Nevada
Caring dove said:
Hi teddy this is so sad yet beautifully expressed ) it’s very difficult to feel in a place of sadness / depression .. I’ve been there before .. still get sad sometimes .
Beautiful way with words yet so much sadness speaking from them 🌸
July 10th, 2023 00:48
Caring dove said:
Hi teddy this is so sad yet beautifully expressed ) it’s very difficult to feel in a place of sadness / depression .. I’ve been there before .. still get sad sometimes .
Beautiful way with words yet so much sadness speaking from them 🌸
July 10th, 2023 00:48
In The Line Of Fire
orchidee said:
We must know these things! lol.
And - why some fat bloke in a funny costume and beard comes down our chimneys once a year - how does he do it?!
July 8th, 2023 11:46
orchidee said:
We must know these things! lol.
And - why some fat bloke in a funny costume and beard comes down our chimneys once a year - how does he do it?!
July 8th, 2023 11:46
In The Line Of Fire
Christina8 said:
Huh, I had never heard about the cannon.....love the read and your puns! Great job!
July 8th, 2023 08:00
Christina8 said:
Huh, I had never heard about the cannon.....love the read and your puns! Great job!
July 8th, 2023 08:00
In The Line Of Fire
peto said:
A cannon
Well that\'s scrambled my brain
Excellent as per
Happy Saturday to you also
July 8th, 2023 03:24
peto said:
A cannon
Well that\'s scrambled my brain
Excellent as per
Happy Saturday to you also
July 8th, 2023 03:24
In The Line Of Fire
Neville said:
eggsactly, .. this is smashing ..
it seems the yolk is literally on him .. 🐣🐥🐤💛
July 8th, 2023 02:45
Neville said:
eggsactly, .. this is smashing ..
it seems the yolk is literally on him .. 🐣🐥🐤💛
July 8th, 2023 02:45
In The Line Of Fire
Caring dove said:
Lol )) great writing teddy , I liked the read 🙂
I think he falls off the wall because he is clumsy or yeah someone wasn’t nice to him ,
July 8th, 2023 02:44
Caring dove said:
Lol )) great writing teddy , I liked the read 🙂
I think he falls off the wall because he is clumsy or yeah someone wasn’t nice to him ,
July 8th, 2023 02:44
Messenger (my Raven)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, Ravens are very clever birds to be able to get our imaginations to fill ill of them.
Andy
July 8th, 2023 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, Ravens are very clever birds to be able to get our imaginations to fill ill of them.
Andy
July 8th, 2023 01:13
Messenger (my Raven)
Michael Edwards said:
I read this out loud and it was so so good - now thats what I call a poem!!
July 7th, 2023 07:43
Michael Edwards said:
I read this out loud and it was so so good - now thats what I call a poem!!
July 7th, 2023 07:43
Messenger (my Raven)
LIZ said:
Sorrow! But I have to tell you, the RAVEN is my spirit animal. They\'re empaths, and very smart! If you haven\'t, I suggest reading Odin\'s ravens. They\'re sometimes seen as a sign of death, but I see them as...transformation; and we all know how painful that can be. But, with transformation comes rebirth. Great read!! Thank you!
July 7th, 2023 05:49
LIZ said:
Sorrow! But I have to tell you, the RAVEN is my spirit animal. They\'re empaths, and very smart! If you haven\'t, I suggest reading Odin\'s ravens. They\'re sometimes seen as a sign of death, but I see them as...transformation; and we all know how painful that can be. But, with transformation comes rebirth. Great read!! Thank you!
July 7th, 2023 05:49
Messenger (my Raven)
L. B. Mek said:
\'and as he picked up his eerie feathers
no doubt off to face his next victim
I knew...
I knew ...\'
this poem, is more centred dear Poetess
as-if from the very first word
you already knew, where
your scribbling footsteps would
take you, for a change
a rare gift in our poetic journey
since most of the time, i find
we start not having a clue, where
our words will take us..
lol
(or maybe that\'s jut me and my
mad hatter, tendencies)
such an atmospheric poem you\'ve crafted
a memorable read, thank you!
hope you have lovely weekend my friend
July 7th, 2023 04:19
L. B. Mek said:
\'and as he picked up his eerie feathers
no doubt off to face his next victim
I knew...
I knew ...\'
this poem, is more centred dear Poetess
as-if from the very first word
you already knew, where
your scribbling footsteps would
take you, for a change
a rare gift in our poetic journey
since most of the time, i find
we start not having a clue, where
our words will take us..
lol
(or maybe that\'s jut me and my
mad hatter, tendencies)
such an atmospheric poem you\'ve crafted
a memorable read, thank you!
hope you have lovely weekend my friend
July 7th, 2023 04:19
Messenger (my Raven)
Caring dove said:
Hi teddy )) a good writing .. to be honest I think ravens can often be associated with the dark and that maybe there a sign of bad luck .. but no I don’t think they are .. I always find it interesting the meaning behind seeing different animals /birds ,
July 7th, 2023 03:29
Caring dove said:
Hi teddy )) a good writing .. to be honest I think ravens can often be associated with the dark and that maybe there a sign of bad luck .. but no I don’t think they are .. I always find it interesting the meaning behind seeing different animals /birds ,
July 7th, 2023 03:29
Messenger (my Raven)
peto said:
Getting a very spiritual vibe from this
And believe every word
Happy friday back
The weekend starts here
With a superb read
July 7th, 2023 03:24
peto said:
Getting a very spiritual vibe from this
And believe every word
Happy friday back
The weekend starts here
With a superb read
July 7th, 2023 03:24
Messenger (my Raven)
orchidee said:
A fine write T.
I\'ve seen ravens and crows in a big field, almost all to themselves, seeming to enjoy being there.
July 7th, 2023 01:41
orchidee said:
A fine write T.
I\'ve seen ravens and crows in a big field, almost all to themselves, seeming to enjoy being there.
July 7th, 2023 01:41
My Angel
MendedFences27 said:
An Angel and a muse. A wonderful poem inspired your Angel. May she always bring to you the poetic inspiration. - Phil A.
July 6th, 2023 17:39
MendedFences27 said:
An Angel and a muse. A wonderful poem inspired your Angel. May she always bring to you the poetic inspiration. - Phil A.
July 6th, 2023 17:39
My Angel
sorenbarrett said:
Memories often cast such resplendente images providing a soft pillow where we may lay our head. A most beautiful tribute.
July 6th, 2023 10:12
sorenbarrett said:
Memories often cast such resplendente images providing a soft pillow where we may lay our head. A most beautiful tribute.
July 6th, 2023 10:12
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