Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Life\'s Very Complexity
Thomas W Case said:
Your poem hums with honesty and grit—life’s sorrow and sweetness tangled together.
Even in grief, you carve out the light; that truth sticks in the chest and lingers.
March 3rd, 2026 08:28
Thomas W Case said:
Your poem hums with honesty and grit—life’s sorrow and sweetness tangled together.
Even in grief, you carve out the light; that truth sticks in the chest and lingers.
March 3rd, 2026 08:28
Life\'s Very Complexity
Poetic Licence said:
That has the feel of someone who after many years of struggling has finally found a way of seeing positives in negatives, enabling them to leave a more happy and contented life. I totally understand the message in the write, but I haven\'t quite worked out life yet, nicely written, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2026 17:02
Poetic Licence said:
That has the feel of someone who after many years of struggling has finally found a way of seeing positives in negatives, enabling them to leave a more happy and contented life. I totally understand the message in the write, but I haven\'t quite worked out life yet, nicely written, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2026 17:02
Life\'s Very Complexity
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this balances vulnerability and counsel well. It begins in personal tragedy, expands into shared experience, then circles back to gratitude. “There is never joy without grief” and “leaving us beautiful memories in heart” frame life as cyclical…darkness and light intertwined. A reflective and heartfelt piece, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 27th, 2026 11:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this balances vulnerability and counsel well. It begins in personal tragedy, expands into shared experience, then circles back to gratitude. “There is never joy without grief” and “leaving us beautiful memories in heart” frame life as cyclical…darkness and light intertwined. A reflective and heartfelt piece, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 27th, 2026 11:04
Way Up There
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this is simple in the best way…an invitation to pause and look up. There’s something earnest and childlike about it...and that truly works. Ending on “that you too, were up there?” keeps that sense of wonder open. Powerful poem, dear poet.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 27th, 2026 10:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this is simple in the best way…an invitation to pause and look up. There’s something earnest and childlike about it...and that truly works. Ending on “that you too, were up there?” keeps that sense of wonder open. Powerful poem, dear poet.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 27th, 2026 10:45
Life\'s Very Complexity
sorenbarrett said:
Good advise in this write that speaks to focusing on the positive not the negative the glass is always half full and it is our choice to decide which it is. Nicely said Teddy
February 27th, 2026 06:23
sorenbarrett said:
Good advise in this write that speaks to focusing on the positive not the negative the glass is always half full and it is our choice to decide which it is. Nicely said Teddy
February 27th, 2026 06:23
Life\'s Very Complexity
spilleronsheet said:
I am awaiting a new bright morning lying under a stormy night but thanks teddy for making me remember i did have a beautiful past canvas beside.
February 27th, 2026 05:48
spilleronsheet said:
I am awaiting a new bright morning lying under a stormy night but thanks teddy for making me remember i did have a beautiful past canvas beside.
February 27th, 2026 05:48
Way Up There
spilleronsheet said:
Such wonderful lines, i usually get lost in the sky…keep penning dear teddy
February 27th, 2026 05:35
spilleronsheet said:
Such wonderful lines, i usually get lost in the sky…keep penning dear teddy
February 27th, 2026 05:35
Way Up There
Goldfinch60 said:
I always look at the moon Teddy, as it brings peace within me.
Andy
February 27th, 2026 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
I always look at the moon Teddy, as it brings peace within me.
Andy
February 27th, 2026 01:43
Way Up There
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, I along with many others no doubt, do wish I could up there and see the beauty close up, enjoyed the read
February 26th, 2026 19:34
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, I along with many others no doubt, do wish I could up there and see the beauty close up, enjoyed the read
February 26th, 2026 19:34
Way Up There
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture projected right before us for free. One of the last free things but they are doing their best to dim it with light pollution. A wonderful read my friend I\'ll be there soon enough
February 26th, 2026 13:05
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture projected right before us for free. One of the last free things but they are doing their best to dim it with light pollution. A wonderful read my friend I\'ll be there soon enough
February 26th, 2026 13:05
Evolution of Sorts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, what works here is the movement. The Raven on the sill, the whispered inevitability, the sunlight pulling your gaze away…then the swan. It doesn’t deny the end…it reframes it. Black to white. Omen to grace. A soft but meaningful turn. Another lovely addition to your Raven collection, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 10:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, what works here is the movement. The Raven on the sill, the whispered inevitability, the sunlight pulling your gaze away…then the swan. It doesn’t deny the end…it reframes it. Black to white. Omen to grace. A soft but meaningful turn. Another lovely addition to your Raven collection, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 10:07
Evolution of Sorts
Paul Bell said:
If the Raven goes, is that bad luck.
Mind you, to be replaced by a Swan, that can only be good.
February 23rd, 2026 04:38
Paul Bell said:
If the Raven goes, is that bad luck.
Mind you, to be replaced by a Swan, that can only be good.
February 23rd, 2026 04:38
Evolution of Sorts
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed Teddy one day everything will be gone one day. Never the less that does not prevent one from enjoying the day today. A lovely write where one is left with the view of a beautiful swan today.
February 23rd, 2026 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed Teddy one day everything will be gone one day. Never the less that does not prevent one from enjoying the day today. A lovely write where one is left with the view of a beautiful swan today.
February 23rd, 2026 03:40
Evolution of Sorts
Goldfinch60 said:
Life is so good Teddy, your Raven is a wise bird.
Andy
February 23rd, 2026 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Life is so good Teddy, your Raven is a wise bird.
Andy
February 23rd, 2026 02:05
The Perfect Marriage
Thoughtless said:
Humorous. Mrs. Wally seems a bit unfair. But that\'s the point.
February 20th, 2026 16:48
Thoughtless said:
Humorous. Mrs. Wally seems a bit unfair. But that\'s the point.
February 20th, 2026 16:48
Leave Me Here To Dream
NafisaSB said:
a hauntingly tender poem - the ache felt at the loss is beautifully brought out..well done
February 17th, 2026 01:04
NafisaSB said:
a hauntingly tender poem - the ache felt at the loss is beautifully brought out..well done
February 17th, 2026 01:04
Leave Me Here To Dream
Thomas W Case said:
Sweet Teddy, this is heartbreak laid bare, tender and unguarded as a bruise in daylight.
You’ve let the grief sing without shame, and that chorus aches like someone who loved deep and still does.
February 15th, 2026 09:08
Thomas W Case said:
Sweet Teddy, this is heartbreak laid bare, tender and unguarded as a bruise in daylight.
You’ve let the grief sing without shame, and that chorus aches like someone who loved deep and still does.
February 15th, 2026 09:08
Leave Me Here To Dream
Goldfinch60 said:
That person will always be with Teddy, love never dies.
Andy
February 15th, 2026 02:54
Goldfinch60 said:
That person will always be with Teddy, love never dies.
Andy
February 15th, 2026 02:54
Leave Me Here To Dream
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, “A guitar without strings” is the image that caught me. It’s simple, but it says everything about silence after loss. The music stops, yet the memory of it remains. That metaphor holds the center of the piece. Strong lyrics here, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 14th, 2026 10:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, “A guitar without strings” is the image that caught me. It’s simple, but it says everything about silence after loss. The music stops, yet the memory of it remains. That metaphor holds the center of the piece. Strong lyrics here, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 14th, 2026 10:46
Leave Me Here To Dream
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic Teddy but a romanticism of the lost. A feeling of emptiness and the vacum that leaves one hollow. There is a longing in this song or poem that gives a feeling of despair and a plea for the loved to return where one is waiting. Nicely penned my friend
February 14th, 2026 06:05
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic Teddy but a romanticism of the lost. A feeling of emptiness and the vacum that leaves one hollow. There is a longing in this song or poem that gives a feeling of despair and a plea for the loved to return where one is waiting. Nicely penned my friend
February 14th, 2026 06:05
Leave Me Here To Dream
Paul Bell said:
I like it, and do we get to hear this song, or is it private?
Hopefully the dream comes true, it is that day.
February 14th, 2026 05:55
Paul Bell said:
I like it, and do we get to hear this song, or is it private?
Hopefully the dream comes true, it is that day.
February 14th, 2026 05:55
Un-stemmed
Goldfinch60 said:
I too have a dying rose Teddy, but it means so much to me as it is the rose I was holding at my wife, Joyce\'s funeral over five years ago.
Andy
February 14th, 2026 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
I too have a dying rose Teddy, but it means so much to me as it is the rose I was holding at my wife, Joyce\'s funeral over five years ago.
Andy
February 14th, 2026 02:48
Un-stemmed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this is raw and openly grieving. The repetition of fading, waiting, weakening… it builds an ache that feels sustained. That final image of being “left to die un-stemmed.” lands heavy and vulnerable, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
February 13th, 2026 11:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this is raw and openly grieving. The repetition of fading, waiting, weakening… it builds an ache that feels sustained. That final image of being “left to die un-stemmed.” lands heavy and vulnerable, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
February 13th, 2026 11:37
Un-stemmed
Paul Bell said:
Is it that time again? Roses are red, violets are blue, who was that slapper you were with last night we\'re definitely through.
Suppose I better make my way down to the flower shop for the forgiveness roses and chocolates.
February 13th, 2026 06:32
Paul Bell said:
Is it that time again? Roses are red, violets are blue, who was that slapper you were with last night we\'re definitely through.
Suppose I better make my way down to the flower shop for the forgiveness roses and chocolates.
February 13th, 2026 06:32
Un-stemmed
sorenbarrett said:
A romantic write with highly identifiable imagery that makes interpretation clear. Very nice Teddy
February 13th, 2026 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
A romantic write with highly identifiable imagery that makes interpretation clear. Very nice Teddy
February 13th, 2026 04:44
Poet\'s Heart
Goldfinch60 said:
That romanticism in you shines out Teddy.
Andy
February 13th, 2026 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
That romanticism in you shines out Teddy.
Andy
February 13th, 2026 02:49
Poet\'s Heart
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this radiates, my friend. The electricity, the embroidery of passion, the thousand hearts lit at once. It’s a love letter to love itself, and to poetry’s power to ignite. Lovely work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 12th, 2026 17:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this radiates, my friend. The electricity, the embroidery of passion, the thousand hearts lit at once. It’s a love letter to love itself, and to poetry’s power to ignite. Lovely work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 12th, 2026 17:10
Poet\'s Heart
sorenbarrett said:
It is a special feeling to ignite a spark and kindle a fire in another\'s hear via few lines. A lovely poem Teddy
February 12th, 2026 05:25
sorenbarrett said:
It is a special feeling to ignite a spark and kindle a fire in another\'s hear via few lines. A lovely poem Teddy
February 12th, 2026 05:25
Enlightenment
Thomas W Case said:
Sweet Teddy, Tough wisdom dressed in gentle words — a tug-of-war we all carry.
You’ve got that quiet honesty that hits soft but lingers hard.
February 10th, 2026 07:16
Thomas W Case said:
Sweet Teddy, Tough wisdom dressed in gentle words — a tug-of-war we all carry.
You’ve got that quiet honesty that hits soft but lingers hard.
February 10th, 2026 07:16
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