Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
It Has Always Been You
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautifully intimate poem, dearest Teddy! That first moment of recognition continues through every crowded room afterward, giving the love here both immediacy and permanence. Simple, sincere, and deeply moving, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 16:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautifully intimate poem, dearest Teddy! That first moment of recognition continues through every crowded room afterward, giving the love here both immediacy and permanence. Simple, sincere, and deeply moving, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 16:55
It Has Always Been You
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that says it plainly when a person is infatuated and overcome by another. Well said Teddy
August 21st, 2026 15:52
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that says it plainly when a person is infatuated and overcome by another. Well said Teddy
August 21st, 2026 15:52
Never Shall We Part
NafisaSB said:
wow, hope he reciprocates this eternal love...
August 21st, 2026 01:57
NafisaSB said:
wow, hope he reciprocates this eternal love...
August 21st, 2026 01:57
A Sign From Above
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a deeply moving piece, Teddy. A small, radiant visitor becomes the opening through which sorrow finally leaves and love returns. The whole encounter feels spiritual, intimate, and beautifully healing. Wonderful write and addition to your Raven collection, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 20th, 2026 20:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a deeply moving piece, Teddy. A small, radiant visitor becomes the opening through which sorrow finally leaves and love returns. The whole encounter feels spiritual, intimate, and beautifully healing. Wonderful write and addition to your Raven collection, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 20th, 2026 20:39
A Sign From Above
Syd said:
I love the poem and the imagery within it Shirley. Love conquers all.
Beautifully written - Syd xo
August 20th, 2026 12:15
Syd said:
I love the poem and the imagery within it Shirley. Love conquers all.
Beautifully written - Syd xo
August 20th, 2026 12:15
A Sign From Above
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful image and that flutter that they make is a very fast heartbeat indeed. I have them visit me quite often flying in my front door hovering about my living room and out through the kitchen. The ones here being an iridescent aqua blue. Very nice my friend.
August 20th, 2026 03:19
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful image and that flutter that they make is a very fast heartbeat indeed. I have them visit me quite often flying in my front door hovering about my living room and out through the kitchen. The ones here being an iridescent aqua blue. Very nice my friend.
August 20th, 2026 03:19
Never Shall We Part
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this speaks deeply to me. The thought that those we truly love might somehow remain connected to us beyond this physical existence is something I find profoundly beautiful…love continuing in whatever form comes next. Wonderful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2026 20:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this speaks deeply to me. The thought that those we truly love might somehow remain connected to us beyond this physical existence is something I find profoundly beautiful…love continuing in whatever form comes next. Wonderful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2026 20:27
Never Shall We Part
Syd said:
Hi Shirley, a year or two ago I read a book which my sister loaned me called Proof Of Heaven by Eben Alexander. In the book Eben has a a near death experience and writes about the overwhelming sense of love he experiences in the afterlife. Your poem reminded me of this book.
Great write.
- Syd xo
August 11th, 2026 11:12
Syd said:
Hi Shirley, a year or two ago I read a book which my sister loaned me called Proof Of Heaven by Eben Alexander. In the book Eben has a a near death experience and writes about the overwhelming sense of love he experiences in the afterlife. Your poem reminded me of this book.
Great write.
- Syd xo
August 11th, 2026 11:12
The Abyss
NafisaSB said:
And what did you find 🤔hope it met up to your expectations 😛
August 11th, 2026 03:45
NafisaSB said:
And what did you find 🤔hope it met up to your expectations 😛
August 11th, 2026 03:45
Never Shall We Part
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely a force as strong as nature and gravity a force of the universe that draws two together. Well written Teddy I loved it
August 10th, 2026 15:44
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely a force as strong as nature and gravity a force of the universe that draws two together. Well written Teddy I loved it
August 10th, 2026 15:44
Curtain Twitcher
NafisaSB said:
Nosiness is a problem indeed and such neighbors who pet into your life and comment on each and every thing really test your patience. You have described it perfectly 👍😱
August 9th, 2026 13:37
NafisaSB said:
Nosiness is a problem indeed and such neighbors who pet into your life and comment on each and every thing really test your patience. You have described it perfectly 👍😱
August 9th, 2026 13:37
Sunrise
MendedFences27 said:
What a beautiful sentiment. We all need to see such a view at least once in a lifetime. - Phil A.
August 7th, 2026 16:13
MendedFences27 said:
What a beautiful sentiment. We all need to see such a view at least once in a lifetime. - Phil A.
August 7th, 2026 16:13
The Abyss
Paul Bell said:
That\'s what I say.
Shark infested waters, so what, they look cuddly.
August 4th, 2026 08:58
Paul Bell said:
That\'s what I say.
Shark infested waters, so what, they look cuddly.
August 4th, 2026 08:58
The Abyss
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Brilliant little poem, Teddy. This made me laugh while simultaneously unsettling the hell out of me. Wonderful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 4th, 2026 08:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Brilliant little poem, Teddy. This made me laugh while simultaneously unsettling the hell out of me. Wonderful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 4th, 2026 08:29
The Abyss
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy so good to hear from you and this poem leaves me with the question what all the fus was about myself. Metaphoric I would say one needs distance to understand. So short but a powerful concept my friend.
August 4th, 2026 07:42
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy so good to hear from you and this poem leaves me with the question what all the fus was about myself. Metaphoric I would say one needs distance to understand. So short but a powerful concept my friend.
August 4th, 2026 07:42
Sunrise
Syd said:
Hi Shirley, a beautiful write. I hope your holiday is just as beautiful. I\'ve just returned from my week abroad. I\'m looking forward to catching up on my poetry.
Enjoy 😉 - Syd xo
August 2nd, 2026 03:40
Syd said:
Hi Shirley, a beautiful write. I hope your holiday is just as beautiful. I\'ve just returned from my week abroad. I\'m looking forward to catching up on my poetry.
Enjoy 😉 - Syd xo
August 2nd, 2026 03:40
Sunrise
sorenbarrett said:
The beauty of this piece lies below the horizon. A fave my friend
July 29th, 2026 11:07
sorenbarrett said:
The beauty of this piece lies below the horizon. A fave my friend
July 29th, 2026 11:07
Curtain Twitcher
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this took one hell of a dark turn! What begins as comic irritation suddenly becomes something far more sinister...and that final revelation is wickedly effective. Loved it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 20:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this took one hell of a dark turn! What begins as comic irritation suddenly becomes something far more sinister...and that final revelation is wickedly effective. Loved it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 20:50
Curtain Twitcher
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous, sweet Teddy. This poem has a lively, mischievous voice, turning everyday frustration with gossip and nosiness into a darkly humorous twist. I enjoyed the playful storytelling and the unexpected ending, which gives the piece a memorable bite.
July 28th, 2026 08:24
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous, sweet Teddy. This poem has a lively, mischievous voice, turning everyday frustration with gossip and nosiness into a darkly humorous twist. I enjoyed the playful storytelling and the unexpected ending, which gives the piece a memorable bite.
July 28th, 2026 08:24
Curtain Twitcher
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the nosey neighbours, we all have them, good write
July 28th, 2026 07:55
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the nosey neighbours, we all have them, good write
July 28th, 2026 07:55
Curtain Twitcher
Demar Desu said:
lol seems like we have the same problems, I wish people would buy my poetry if they really wanted to get a glimpse into me… sigh nonetheless great poem and it took a turn at the end I was not expecting; ok now I see why your neighbors are asking questions LOL
July 28th, 2026 06:38
Demar Desu said:
lol seems like we have the same problems, I wish people would buy my poetry if they really wanted to get a glimpse into me… sigh nonetheless great poem and it took a turn at the end I was not expecting; ok now I see why your neighbors are asking questions LOL
July 28th, 2026 06:38
Curtain Twitcher
sorenbarrett said:
A satirical poem of people that find it necessary to poke their nose into everyone\'s business, to stir the pot and fan the flames. A good read my friend that paints reality in absurdities. Nicely done Teddy
July 28th, 2026 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
A satirical poem of people that find it necessary to poke their nose into everyone\'s business, to stir the pot and fan the flames. A good read my friend that paints reality in absurdities. Nicely done Teddy
July 28th, 2026 04:23
Open Heart Surgery
Dan Williams said:
Grief is the side kick of depression, both seem nearly impossible to deter or disperse. Nice.
July 27th, 2026 01:50
Dan Williams said:
Grief is the side kick of depression, both seem nearly impossible to deter or disperse. Nice.
July 27th, 2026 01:50
Open Heart Surgery
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words Teddy but I am sure that you will have wonderfully pleasant dreams as weel.
Andy
July 27th, 2026 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words Teddy but I am sure that you will have wonderfully pleasant dreams as weel.
Andy
July 27th, 2026 01:10
Open Heart Surgery
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, what one heck of a haunting poem. I know the exhaustion of awful dreams personally...and you capture that terrible vulnerability of being pursued by pain even after consciousness releases us. This hit deeply, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 19:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, what one heck of a haunting poem. I know the exhaustion of awful dreams personally...and you capture that terrible vulnerability of being pursued by pain even after consciousness releases us. This hit deeply, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 19:09
Open Heart Surgery
Paul Bell said:
Grief never takes a break, always hits you on the blind.
Hopefully things get better and you grieve on your own terms.
July 26th, 2026 14:43
Paul Bell said:
Grief never takes a break, always hits you on the blind.
Hopefully things get better and you grieve on your own terms.
July 26th, 2026 14:43
Open Heart Surgery
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting dream in this poem of darkness that needs the light of day and cleaning of the room. Well written my friend
July 26th, 2026 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting dream in this poem of darkness that needs the light of day and cleaning of the room. Well written my friend
July 26th, 2026 08:37
Open Heart Surgery
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work, sweet Teddy. This feels like grief refusing to sleep, crawling into the quiet places where memories still have teeth.
The imagery is dark and haunting, but underneath it is a simple human plea—for one peaceful moment where the heart can finally rest.
July 26th, 2026 08:23
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work, sweet Teddy. This feels like grief refusing to sleep, crawling into the quiet places where memories still have teeth.
The imagery is dark and haunting, but underneath it is a simple human plea—for one peaceful moment where the heart can finally rest.
July 26th, 2026 08:23
Modern day Poetry
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this gave me a good laugh...three lines of pure gallows humor, with everyday exhaustion escalating into the darkest possible escape plan. Modern day, indeed. Absolutely brilliant, my friend! 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2026 09:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this gave me a good laugh...three lines of pure gallows humor, with everyday exhaustion escalating into the darkest possible escape plan. Modern day, indeed. Absolutely brilliant, my friend! 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2026 09:12
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