Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Sunrise
sorenbarrett said:
The beauty of this piece lies below the horizon. A fave my friend
July 29th, 2026 11:07
sorenbarrett said:
The beauty of this piece lies below the horizon. A fave my friend
July 29th, 2026 11:07
Curtain Twitcher
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this took one hell of a dark turn! What begins as comic irritation suddenly becomes something far more sinister...and that final revelation is wickedly effective. Loved it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 20:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this took one hell of a dark turn! What begins as comic irritation suddenly becomes something far more sinister...and that final revelation is wickedly effective. Loved it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 20:50
Curtain Twitcher
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous, sweet Teddy. This poem has a lively, mischievous voice, turning everyday frustration with gossip and nosiness into a darkly humorous twist. I enjoyed the playful storytelling and the unexpected ending, which gives the piece a memorable bite.
July 28th, 2026 08:24
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous, sweet Teddy. This poem has a lively, mischievous voice, turning everyday frustration with gossip and nosiness into a darkly humorous twist. I enjoyed the playful storytelling and the unexpected ending, which gives the piece a memorable bite.
July 28th, 2026 08:24
Curtain Twitcher
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the nosey neighbours, we all have them, good write
July 28th, 2026 07:55
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the nosey neighbours, we all have them, good write
July 28th, 2026 07:55
Curtain Twitcher
Demar Desu said:
lol seems like we have the same problems, I wish people would buy my poetry if they really wanted to get a glimpse into me… sigh nonetheless great poem and it took a turn at the end I was not expecting; ok now I see why your neighbors are asking questions LOL
July 28th, 2026 06:38
Demar Desu said:
lol seems like we have the same problems, I wish people would buy my poetry if they really wanted to get a glimpse into me… sigh nonetheless great poem and it took a turn at the end I was not expecting; ok now I see why your neighbors are asking questions LOL
July 28th, 2026 06:38
Curtain Twitcher
sorenbarrett said:
A satirical poem of people that find it necessary to poke their nose into everyone\'s business, to stir the pot and fan the flames. A good read my friend that paints reality in absurdities. Nicely done Teddy
July 28th, 2026 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
A satirical poem of people that find it necessary to poke their nose into everyone\'s business, to stir the pot and fan the flames. A good read my friend that paints reality in absurdities. Nicely done Teddy
July 28th, 2026 04:23
Open Heart Surgery
Dan Williams said:
Grief is the side kick of depression, both seem nearly impossible to deter or disperse. Nice.
July 27th, 2026 01:50
Dan Williams said:
Grief is the side kick of depression, both seem nearly impossible to deter or disperse. Nice.
July 27th, 2026 01:50
Open Heart Surgery
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words Teddy but I am sure that you will have wonderfully pleasant dreams as weel.
Andy
July 27th, 2026 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words Teddy but I am sure that you will have wonderfully pleasant dreams as weel.
Andy
July 27th, 2026 01:10
Open Heart Surgery
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, what one heck of a haunting poem. I know the exhaustion of awful dreams personally...and you capture that terrible vulnerability of being pursued by pain even after consciousness releases us. This hit deeply, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 19:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, what one heck of a haunting poem. I know the exhaustion of awful dreams personally...and you capture that terrible vulnerability of being pursued by pain even after consciousness releases us. This hit deeply, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 19:09
Open Heart Surgery
Paul Bell said:
Grief never takes a break, always hits you on the blind.
Hopefully things get better and you grieve on your own terms.
July 26th, 2026 14:43
Paul Bell said:
Grief never takes a break, always hits you on the blind.
Hopefully things get better and you grieve on your own terms.
July 26th, 2026 14:43
Open Heart Surgery
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting dream in this poem of darkness that needs the light of day and cleaning of the room. Well written my friend
July 26th, 2026 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting dream in this poem of darkness that needs the light of day and cleaning of the room. Well written my friend
July 26th, 2026 08:37
Open Heart Surgery
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work, sweet Teddy. This feels like grief refusing to sleep, crawling into the quiet places where memories still have teeth.
The imagery is dark and haunting, but underneath it is a simple human plea—for one peaceful moment where the heart can finally rest.
July 26th, 2026 08:23
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work, sweet Teddy. This feels like grief refusing to sleep, crawling into the quiet places where memories still have teeth.
The imagery is dark and haunting, but underneath it is a simple human plea—for one peaceful moment where the heart can finally rest.
July 26th, 2026 08:23
Modern day Poetry
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this gave me a good laugh...three lines of pure gallows humor, with everyday exhaustion escalating into the darkest possible escape plan. Modern day, indeed. Absolutely brilliant, my friend! 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2026 09:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this gave me a good laugh...three lines of pure gallows humor, with everyday exhaustion escalating into the darkest possible escape plan. Modern day, indeed. Absolutely brilliant, my friend! 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2026 09:12
Modern day Poetry
Goldfinch60 said:
Sorry Teddy, I have done my forty seven years and one month\'s work sonow every day is Saturday. LOL
Andy
July 25th, 2026 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Sorry Teddy, I have done my forty seven years and one month\'s work sonow every day is Saturday. LOL
Andy
July 25th, 2026 01:53
Modern day Poetry
arqios said:
Me too! And being too old to be called up and conscripted, left alone to putter about at will.
July 24th, 2026 23:16
arqios said:
Me too! And being too old to be called up and conscripted, left alone to putter about at will.
July 24th, 2026 23:16
Modern day Poetry
sorenbarrett said:
The jobs I\'ve had would make me take sick leave and then dock me a days pay for being ill. A good read Teddy hope that things are not that bad my friend.
July 24th, 2026 14:41
sorenbarrett said:
The jobs I\'ve had would make me take sick leave and then dock me a days pay for being ill. A good read Teddy hope that things are not that bad my friend.
July 24th, 2026 14:41
Realisation
RSM0812 said:
Choice creeps on on a person more slowly but its always there.
July 23rd, 2026 05:48
RSM0812 said:
Choice creeps on on a person more slowly but its always there.
July 23rd, 2026 05:48
I Was Busy Growing Up
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a shame you did not know your father better Teddy, my dad and I were like best friends, we got on so very well together, he was one of Nature\'s gentlemen.
Andy
July 22nd, 2026 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a shame you did not know your father better Teddy, my dad and I were like best friends, we got on so very well together, he was one of Nature\'s gentlemen.
Andy
July 22nd, 2026 01:50
I Was Busy Growing Up
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this broke my heart. Growing into ourselves takes time, and sometimes understanding arrives only after the person we most want to share it with is gone. Beautifully vulnerable work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 21st, 2026 20:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this broke my heart. Growing into ourselves takes time, and sometimes understanding arrives only after the person we most want to share it with is gone. Beautifully vulnerable work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 21st, 2026 20:34
I Was Busy Growing Up
Syd said:
Hi Shirley, a lovely poem for your Dad. I\'m sure he knew how much you loved him, even if you admit you didn\'t know him too well.
I love the lines about not knowing yourself as you were busy growing too. It took me until around age 28 to finally embrace the inner me and feel comfortable in my own skin. Strange that isn\'t it? I can relate to this piece, me and my Dad have a had a tough relationship at times but I now get on better than ever with him.
- Syd xo
July 21st, 2026 17:34
Syd said:
Hi Shirley, a lovely poem for your Dad. I\'m sure he knew how much you loved him, even if you admit you didn\'t know him too well.
I love the lines about not knowing yourself as you were busy growing too. It took me until around age 28 to finally embrace the inner me and feel comfortable in my own skin. Strange that isn\'t it? I can relate to this piece, me and my Dad have a had a tough relationship at times but I now get on better than ever with him.
- Syd xo
July 21st, 2026 17:34
I Was Busy Growing Up
sorenbarrett said:
Knowledge comes too late many times in this life. A wonderful write my friend and a bit sad with feelings of regret. Well done Teddy
July 21st, 2026 16:55
sorenbarrett said:
Knowledge comes too late many times in this life. A wonderful write my friend and a bit sad with feelings of regret. Well done Teddy
July 21st, 2026 16:55
Dante Alighieri
8Blackwidow8 said:
This poem is surprisingly relatable for me. Beautiful in its brevity.
July 21st, 2026 09:53
8Blackwidow8 said:
This poem is surprisingly relatable for me. Beautiful in its brevity.
July 21st, 2026 09:53
Dante Alighieri
Thomas W Case said:
Burns like a woman waiting on one voice to save him from himself.
Careful—fires like that don’t get put out, they just learn a new name.
July 21st, 2026 08:08
Thomas W Case said:
Burns like a woman waiting on one voice to save him from himself.
Careful—fires like that don’t get put out, they just learn a new name.
July 21st, 2026 08:08
England
NafisaSB said:
Cheers to the competitive spirit of all the teams who did their best but still did not make it to the finals 👍💅
July 21st, 2026 06:49
NafisaSB said:
Cheers to the competitive spirit of all the teams who did their best but still did not make it to the finals 👍💅
July 21st, 2026 06:49
Dante Alighieri
Goldfinch60 said:
I didn\'t see any of that world cup Teddy, it is the wrong shape ball. LOL
Andy
July 21st, 2026 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
I didn\'t see any of that world cup Teddy, it is the wrong shape ball. LOL
Andy
July 21st, 2026 00:56
Dante Alighieri
Paul Bell said:
The Trump cup.
I will remember it fondly, and tell my children how it was won.
Okay, that was the most boring final ever, mainly because Argentina refused to go up the park.
What was that half time crap all about, nearly topped myself watching it.
Roll on the new season.
July 20th, 2026 09:15
Paul Bell said:
The Trump cup.
I will remember it fondly, and tell my children how it was won.
Okay, that was the most boring final ever, mainly because Argentina refused to go up the park.
What was that half time crap all about, nearly topped myself watching it.
Roll on the new season.
July 20th, 2026 09:15
Dante Alighieri
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, I understand this deeply. Sometimes one writer reaches a place within us that nobody else even knows exists. Lovely tribute, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 20th, 2026 08:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, I understand this deeply. Sometimes one writer reaches a place within us that nobody else even knows exists. Lovely tribute, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 20th, 2026 08:36
Dante Alighieri
Syd said:
I\'m over the moon Spain won Shirley. The Argentinians use dirty tactics on the pitch. It should have been more than one nil to Spain in my opinion.
Nice write
- Syd xo
July 20th, 2026 06:23
Syd said:
I\'m over the moon Spain won Shirley. The Argentinians use dirty tactics on the pitch. It should have been more than one nil to Spain in my opinion.
Nice write
- Syd xo
July 20th, 2026 06:23
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