Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Haiku (an ode to the sky)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That picture is serene...and no, not the actual picture (though it is); rather, the picture painted by your lovely haiku, dearest Teddy.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That picture is serene...and no, not the actual picture (though it is); rather, the picture painted by your lovely haiku, dearest Teddy.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:28
Haiku (an ode to the sky)
sorenbarrett said:
Not only meets the formalities of a haiku but has a splendid set of images and also sends a metaphoric message of a promise very nicely done Teddy a fave
March 28th, 2026 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
Not only meets the formalities of a haiku but has a splendid set of images and also sends a metaphoric message of a promise very nicely done Teddy a fave
March 28th, 2026 04:23
An Ode to the Great Moon
Goldfinch60 said:
The moon brings such joy to me when I see its fullness. Fine words Teddy.
Andy
March 28th, 2026 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
The moon brings such joy to me when I see its fullness. Fine words Teddy.
Andy
March 28th, 2026 02:48
An Ode to the Great Moon
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, “night time’s orchestra” stands out… that phrase carries sound, motion, and atmosphere all at once. It sets the tone perfectly from the start. Well done, dearest friend. This haiku\'s music comes through! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, “night time’s orchestra” stands out… that phrase carries sound, motion, and atmosphere all at once. It sets the tone perfectly from the start. Well done, dearest friend. This haiku\'s music comes through! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:16
An Ode to the Great Moon
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful haiku Teddy it takes a look from three levels at nature sound, vision, motion. Loved it
March 27th, 2026 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful haiku Teddy it takes a look from three levels at nature sound, vision, motion. Loved it
March 27th, 2026 04:10
On The Road to Grief\'s End
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this hits heavy…there’s no pretending here, just grief as it actually feels. That anger, that disbelief…it comes through raw and immediate. Well done, my dear friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 26th, 2026 11:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this hits heavy…there’s no pretending here, just grief as it actually feels. That anger, that disbelief…it comes through raw and immediate. Well done, my dear friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 26th, 2026 11:18
On The Road to Grief\'s End
sorenbarrett said:
A questioning poem that asks why the living suffer loss and the dead rest in peace. In this sense death is not to be feared but welcomed and may be one of the best parts of life. Well written Teddy
March 26th, 2026 03:37
sorenbarrett said:
A questioning poem that asks why the living suffer loss and the dead rest in peace. In this sense death is not to be feared but welcomed and may be one of the best parts of life. Well written Teddy
March 26th, 2026 03:37
On The Road to Grief\'s End
Goldfinch60 said:
We may not live in peace at the moment but it will come to us all in time Teddy.
Andy
March 26th, 2026 03:02
Goldfinch60 said:
We may not live in peace at the moment but it will come to us all in time Teddy.
Andy
March 26th, 2026 03:02
An Ode To Spring
Goldfinch60 said:
May that colour be with you throughout your life Teddy.
Andy
March 26th, 2026 02:57
Goldfinch60 said:
May that colour be with you throughout your life Teddy.
Andy
March 26th, 2026 02:57
An Ode To Spring
MendedFences27 said:
Hi Teddy. A beautiful poem and painting. A duet of art. Together they make a colorful arrival and linger in the mind and eyes. I have to fav this one. - Phil A.
March 25th, 2026 18:52
MendedFences27 said:
Hi Teddy. A beautiful poem and painting. A duet of art. Together they make a colorful arrival and linger in the mind and eyes. I have to fav this one. - Phil A.
March 25th, 2026 18:52
An Ode To Spring
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful. Here\'s to Spring, dearest Teddy! Glad it\'s arrived! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful. Here\'s to Spring, dearest Teddy! Glad it\'s arrived! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:46
An Ode To Spring
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has dual meaning as a haiku it is as rare as the bird or plant both with wonderful color and either working so well. I have never seen the bird that you picture so grandly in the poem but I have the flowers that in their tropical beauty are as grand. A relation to heliconia which grow wild here in Brazil in flaming red the bird of paradise with its orange, yellow and blue have blooms that last for weeks on the stem. A lovely write my friend
March 25th, 2026 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has dual meaning as a haiku it is as rare as the bird or plant both with wonderful color and either working so well. I have never seen the bird that you picture so grandly in the poem but I have the flowers that in their tropical beauty are as grand. A relation to heliconia which grow wild here in Brazil in flaming red the bird of paradise with its orange, yellow and blue have blooms that last for weeks on the stem. A lovely write my friend
March 25th, 2026 05:13
From Sunrise and Then
Goldfinch60 said:
So many questions and so many memories Teddy, I do hope the tears were for the thoughts of wonderful memories of those times.
I do weep occasionally as the pub where we often go for lunch has not had knicker blocker glories on the menu for a while now. 🤣🍷🍺
Andy
March 24th, 2026 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
So many questions and so many memories Teddy, I do hope the tears were for the thoughts of wonderful memories of those times.
I do weep occasionally as the pub where we often go for lunch has not had knicker blocker glories on the menu for a while now. 🤣🍷🍺
Andy
March 24th, 2026 02:19
From Sunrise and Then
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this hit me…that long stretch of questions feels almost playful at first, but then it turns, and the weight of it comes through. That ending lands with real emotion. Well done, dearest poet and friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this hit me…that long stretch of questions feels almost playful at first, but then it turns, and the weight of it comes through. That ending lands with real emotion. Well done, dearest poet and friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:27
From Sunrise and Then
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely list of life\'s joys and pleasures and can say I have done most, not the spoon race but a three legged race instead. Not a barn owl but a falcon. Well written and a pocket of dreams one pulls out from time to time that have filled a bucket list with a few still left to fill it.
March 23rd, 2026 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely list of life\'s joys and pleasures and can say I have done most, not the spoon race but a three legged race instead. Not a barn owl but a falcon. Well written and a pocket of dreams one pulls out from time to time that have filled a bucket list with a few still left to fill it.
March 23rd, 2026 05:59
Nature\'s Painting
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this reminds me of those rare moments where everything just feels right for no reason…like the world softens for a second. You captured that kind of peace really well here. Fantastic job an paired with a breathtaking swan scene too. Love it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 20th, 2026 09:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this reminds me of those rare moments where everything just feels right for no reason…like the world softens for a second. You captured that kind of peace really well here. Fantastic job an paired with a breathtaking swan scene too. Love it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 20th, 2026 09:57
Nature\'s Painting
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy, we were walking by Our River yesterday and your words describe what we were seeing.
Andy
March 20th, 2026 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy, we were walking by Our River yesterday and your words describe what we were seeing.
Andy
March 20th, 2026 02:23
Soon It Will Be Spring Again
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sad words Teddy but as you said Spring will be with us soon and the memories of your friend will grow like the blooms in the soil.
Andy
March 20th, 2026 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sad words Teddy but as you said Spring will be with us soon and the memories of your friend will grow like the blooms in the soil.
Andy
March 20th, 2026 02:16
Nature\'s Painting
sorenbarrett said:
You mentioned dream Teddy and isn\'t life but a dream from which none of us want to wake up. Yet with this all there comes the night and with it to dream again. A lovely write my friend
March 19th, 2026 14:06
sorenbarrett said:
You mentioned dream Teddy and isn\'t life but a dream from which none of us want to wake up. Yet with this all there comes the night and with it to dream again. A lovely write my friend
March 19th, 2026 14:06
Soon It Will Be Spring Again
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, I’ve sat in that kind of silence before…where words stop making sense and everything just feels distant. In fact, I’m sitting in such a liminal space now. You captured that honestly. And that closing shift toward spring…there’s something quietly hopeful in it that feels earned. Appreciate this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, I’ve sat in that kind of silence before…where words stop making sense and everything just feels distant. In fact, I’m sitting in such a liminal space now. You captured that honestly. And that closing shift toward spring…there’s something quietly hopeful in it that feels earned. Appreciate this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:11
Soon It Will Be Spring Again
sorenbarrett said:
So sad but so beautiful Teddy so nicely worded it sounds ethereal you have my condolences
March 18th, 2026 16:33
sorenbarrett said:
So sad but so beautiful Teddy so nicely worded it sounds ethereal you have my condolences
March 18th, 2026 16:33
Of Profound Knowledge
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Teddy, my Mary is often in my dreams.
Andy
March 17th, 2026 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Teddy, my Mary is often in my dreams.
Andy
March 17th, 2026 02:11
Of Profound Knowledge
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, reading this reminded me how dreams can feel like bridges…moments where people we love seem close again, even if only for a little while. You capture that quiet possibility with a lot of sincerity. It’s a comforting thought to sit with and I am thankful for that, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 16th, 2026 08:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, reading this reminded me how dreams can feel like bridges…moments where people we love seem close again, even if only for a little while. You capture that quiet possibility with a lot of sincerity. It’s a comforting thought to sit with and I am thankful for that, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 16th, 2026 08:46
Of Profound Knowledge
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely thought and indeed it is true that at times I have seen my mother long dead and others dear in dreams. A lovely write my friend
March 16th, 2026 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely thought and indeed it is true that at times I have seen my mother long dead and others dear in dreams. A lovely write my friend
March 16th, 2026 04:44
The Last Song
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this hit me hard…there’s such tenderness in the way you speak to that bluebird. The repetition makes it feel like a quiet prayer…hope mixed with the fear of losing it again. It’s gentle and fragile in the best way. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 14th, 2026 08:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this hit me hard…there’s such tenderness in the way you speak to that bluebird. The repetition makes it feel like a quiet prayer…hope mixed with the fear of losing it again. It’s gentle and fragile in the best way. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 14th, 2026 08:19
The Last Song
Goldfinch60 said:
That bird will fly in your life forever Teddy.
Andy
March 14th, 2026 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
That bird will fly in your life forever Teddy.
Andy
March 14th, 2026 02:49
The Last Song
sorenbarrett said:
One must ask, is this the blue bird of happiness or some other visitor with a message of hope. A lovely poem that revives the spirit. Well done my friend
March 13th, 2026 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
One must ask, is this the blue bird of happiness or some other visitor with a message of hope. A lovely poem that revives the spirit. Well done my friend
March 13th, 2026 12:57
Way Up There
NafisaSB said:
I think I am better off down here- able to appreciate it’s beauty though I see and laud your sentiments 👌👏👍
March 5th, 2026 12:00
NafisaSB said:
I think I am better off down here- able to appreciate it’s beauty though I see and laud your sentiments 👌👏👍
March 5th, 2026 12:00
Life\'s Very Complexity
Thomas W Case said:
Your poem hums with honesty and grit—life’s sorrow and sweetness tangled together.
Even in grief, you carve out the light; that truth sticks in the chest and lingers.
March 3rd, 2026 08:28
Thomas W Case said:
Your poem hums with honesty and grit—life’s sorrow and sweetness tangled together.
Even in grief, you carve out the light; that truth sticks in the chest and lingers.
March 3rd, 2026 08:28
Life\'s Very Complexity
Poetic Licence said:
That has the feel of someone who after many years of struggling has finally found a way of seeing positives in negatives, enabling them to leave a more happy and contented life. I totally understand the message in the write, but I haven\'t quite worked out life yet, nicely written, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2026 17:02
Poetic Licence said:
That has the feel of someone who after many years of struggling has finally found a way of seeing positives in negatives, enabling them to leave a more happy and contented life. I totally understand the message in the write, but I haven\'t quite worked out life yet, nicely written, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2026 17:02
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