Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Dearest Teddy, this really lands…that waiting, especially with all those emotions sitting together at once, and the way it hasn’t fully come into view yet. That line about the table of distaste stays with me. There’s something deeply honest here. Powerful write and another great inclusion in your Raven Collection, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 7th, 2026 08:32

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Thomas W Case said:

The weight of waiting seeps from every line—gritty, patient, and real.
There’s tenderness in the ache, a quiet hope fighting the tide.

April 7th, 2026 07:55

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Priya Tomar said:

Nice description of inner conflict .

April 7th, 2026 07:16

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sorenbarrett said:

Teddy this poem reflects deep internal emotion. There is a sense of conflict in the waiting and the wishing that it would hurry up. Once it’s poised waiting for a disaster that seems inevitable that has not yet occurred. A very emotive piece

April 7th, 2026 02:26

Sign
Goldfinch60 said:

I am sure the right road is there for you Teddy and all will be wonderful.

Andy

April 7th, 2026 01:18

And She Smiles
Goldfinch60 said:

And may she smile forever on us all Teddy.

Andy

April 7th, 2026 01:11

And She Smiles
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Teddy, this is bright and gentle…there’s a quiet joy here that just settles in. In it\'s simplicity, it simply blooms. Lovely piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 6th, 2026 09:41

And She Smiles
sorenbarrett said:

Clever and bright it paints spring with color and vibrancy giving it an exuberance. Loved it

April 6th, 2026 04:19

And She Smiles
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

...and there it is perfect

April 6th, 2026 03:58

A Very Grand Affair
Goldfinch60 said:

If only this would happen Teddy the world would bea wonderful place.

Andy

April 6th, 2026 01:11

A Very Grand Affair
NafisaSB said:

love both the message and the attitude it springs from..
have a wonderful and serene week ahead - take care...God bless you always

April 6th, 2026 00:57

An Easter Nightmare
Syd said:

Bravo 👏 👏 👏

April 5th, 2026 12:39

A Very Grand Affair
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Teddy, “a splash of colour”…that opening sets everything in motion. It’s immediate and visual, and the rest flows naturally from it. Beautifully done, dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 5th, 2026 10:35

A Very Grand Affair
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful.

April 5th, 2026 09:41

A Very Grand Affair
sorenbarrett said:

A most lovely Easter Haiku in all its painted glory of new life joining Pagan to Christian. Loved it

April 5th, 2026 04:00

An Easter Nightmare
Goldfinch60 said:

True words Teddy.

Andy

April 5th, 2026 01:14

An Easter Nightmare
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Now shamed...forever stained...imho! Powerful, striking senryu, my dear friend. Truly. A fave and so very true. 😓🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 4th, 2026 13:09

An Easter Nightmare
MendedFences27 said:

Gee Teddy, trust me, they will not listen. There is no hope. The idiots have won and we are all done. I think you sense that too. - Phil A.

April 4th, 2026 09:58

An Easter Nightmare
NafisaSB said:

Agree wholeheartedly 🥲

April 4th, 2026 09:02

An Easter Nightmare
sorenbarrett said:

After the was of 1812 and the burning of the White House it had to be white washed and I would think it needs to be white washed again. A fun read Teddy Happy Easter

April 4th, 2026 04:08

Vision
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever haiku Teddy.

Andy

April 4th, 2026 01:17

Vision
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Dearest Teddy, there’s a sharp, surreal clarity here…that flying roof caught in the twister gives it motion and force, and the whole thing lands like a sudden vision. It’s brief, but it sticks. Powerful metaphor. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 3rd, 2026 08:05

Vision
sorenbarrett said:

Now there is a picture of destruction leaving the viewer astonished. A powerful haiku Teddy

April 3rd, 2026 05:01

An Ode To Spring
NafisaSB said:

wow - what a beautiful picture and in just 10 words you have brought out all the beauty that spring foretells - good work

April 1st, 2026 00:15

My Great Oak
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words about a wonderful tree Teddy, it will always be there for you.

Andy

March 30th, 2026 01:21

My Great Oak
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Dearest Teddy, this is beautiful…there’s such a steady, heartfelt warmth running through it. It feels rooted in something real and lasting. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

March 29th, 2026 09:44

My Great Oak
Thomas W Case said:

There’s a worn, quiet reverence here—like time etched deep into something that still refuses to fade.
I like how you hold that old tree close… not as it was, but as it stays, steady in the heart. Beautiful tribute, sweet Teddy.

March 29th, 2026 08:24

My Great Oak
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely write literal or metaphorical it works. I remember my grandfather with his wrinkled bark and he will always remain in my memory.

March 29th, 2026 07:13

My Great Oak
Jerry Reynolds said:

A fine write, Teddy. Really deeply felt.

March 29th, 2026 06:42

Haiku (an ode to the sky)
Goldfinch60 said:

May the sun always be in your life Teddy.

Andy

March 29th, 2026 01:16

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