Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Autumn\'s Encore
sorenbarrett said:
A most seasonal haiku that speaks of the turning of the seasons most appropriate Teddy
September 30th, 2026 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
A most seasonal haiku that speaks of the turning of the seasons most appropriate Teddy
September 30th, 2026 05:21
Autumn\'s Encore
Paul Bell said:
Is it that time of the year when everyones leaves fly into my garden.
Did I upset nature somewhere down the line maybe.
Big bag waiting.
September 30th, 2026 04:48
Paul Bell said:
Is it that time of the year when everyones leaves fly into my garden.
Did I upset nature somewhere down the line maybe.
Big bag waiting.
September 30th, 2026 04:48
Swan Submerged
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Teddy,
The hallucinations associated with intence grief can be maddening to the point of sleepless nights. I sincerely hope you can vanquish the accursed serpent and find some source of normality. Your poetic description is horrifying as it is brilliant.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
September 29th, 2026 16:08
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Teddy,
The hallucinations associated with intence grief can be maddening to the point of sleepless nights. I sincerely hope you can vanquish the accursed serpent and find some source of normality. Your poetic description is horrifying as it is brilliant.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
September 29th, 2026 16:08
Swan Submerged
MendedFences27 said:
Nice write, Teddy. I always think that the way we remember ourselves is as distorted as the way we see ourselves. I try to live with what I have and not worry about yesterday but look forward to tomorrow. You had some great images in this one: \"snakes slithering inside me, I want my elegance, searching.
\'My grandmother always said, \'You ARE as young as you THINK\" Anyways, enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
September 29th, 2026 15:24
MendedFences27 said:
Nice write, Teddy. I always think that the way we remember ourselves is as distorted as the way we see ourselves. I try to live with what I have and not worry about yesterday but look forward to tomorrow. You had some great images in this one: \"snakes slithering inside me, I want my elegance, searching.
\'My grandmother always said, \'You ARE as young as you THINK\" Anyways, enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
September 29th, 2026 15:24
Swan Submerged
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, I really felt this one. Thereβs something frightening about looking for yourself and not recognizing whatβs looking back. Wonderfuly write, dearest friend.πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 28th, 2026 07:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, I really felt this one. Thereβs something frightening about looking for yourself and not recognizing whatβs looking back. Wonderfuly write, dearest friend.πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 28th, 2026 07:02
Swan Submerged
sorenbarrett said:
Fear of loss provokes strange images and apprehension spawning serpents of doubt. Nicely written my friend
September 28th, 2026 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
Fear of loss provokes strange images and apprehension spawning serpents of doubt. Nicely written my friend
September 28th, 2026 06:19
An Eternity of Chapters
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this made me smile. A great love story really does take a hell of a lot more than love aloneβ¦it takes choosing each other through all the ugly parts too. And that photo? Absolute attitude. You look like you always knew life was going to have to keep up with you. π πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 25th, 2026 22:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this made me smile. A great love story really does take a hell of a lot more than love aloneβ¦it takes choosing each other through all the ugly parts too. And that photo? Absolute attitude. You look like you always knew life was going to have to keep up with you. π πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 25th, 2026 22:26
An Eternity of Chapters
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Teddy,
A love story, like a game of snakes and ladders. Slithering down the back of the snake, \'together\', to climbing up the ladder, \'together\' one rung at a time until you reach the tavern. \"Two gin and tonics please with ice and lemon.\" \"Chin, chin, my love - so good so far!\" Until the next slippery serpent but we\'ll survive as all great lovers do - amen to that.
Wise words from you, Teddy and so true. Lovely to read your poems again.
Wishing you all the very best.
Fond regards,
Tony,
September 25th, 2026 17:39
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Teddy,
A love story, like a game of snakes and ladders. Slithering down the back of the snake, \'together\', to climbing up the ladder, \'together\' one rung at a time until you reach the tavern. \"Two gin and tonics please with ice and lemon.\" \"Chin, chin, my love - so good so far!\" Until the next slippery serpent but we\'ll survive as all great lovers do - amen to that.
Wise words from you, Teddy and so true. Lovely to read your poems again.
Wishing you all the very best.
Fond regards,
Tony,
September 25th, 2026 17:39
An Eternity of Chapters
sorenbarrett said:
The old saying was people can not eat love and it will soon starve on poverty. However I have known many that have nothing but love in this world so I don\'t think true love starves. Nicely done Teddy
September 25th, 2026 16:36
sorenbarrett said:
The old saying was people can not eat love and it will soon starve on poverty. However I have known many that have nothing but love in this world so I don\'t think true love starves. Nicely done Teddy
September 25th, 2026 16:36
A Sign From The Other Side
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful, sweet Teddy. Thereβs a damn tender grief in this, because the dream gives the speaker something death took away: one more ordinary evening with both parents together, complete with a bottle of Chianti and the simple happiness of serving them dinner. The ending is beautiful because the dream doesnβt erase the loss, it transforms it into peace, letting the speaker believe that somewhere beyond this life, his mother and father have found each other again.
September 20th, 2026 07:21
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful, sweet Teddy. Thereβs a damn tender grief in this, because the dream gives the speaker something death took away: one more ordinary evening with both parents together, complete with a bottle of Chianti and the simple happiness of serving them dinner. The ending is beautiful because the dream doesnβt erase the loss, it transforms it into peace, letting the speaker believe that somewhere beyond this life, his mother and father have found each other again.
September 20th, 2026 07:21
A Sign From The Other Side
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, Teddy...I got teary at the chianti, not going to lie. A beautifully moving poem, my dear friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 18th, 2026 09:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, Teddy...I got teary at the chianti, not going to lie. A beautifully moving poem, my dear friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 18th, 2026 09:43
A Sign From The Other Side
Paul Bell said:
Amazing how they little signs come through and the joy they bring.
I would still go out and buy a bottle and fill a couple of glasses.
September 18th, 2026 09:27
Paul Bell said:
Amazing how they little signs come through and the joy they bring.
I would still go out and buy a bottle and fill a couple of glasses.
September 18th, 2026 09:27
A Sign From The Other Side
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams are often a means of working through everyday problems and this one leaves a feeling of peace. Nicely written my friend.
September 18th, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams are often a means of working through everyday problems and this one leaves a feeling of peace. Nicely written my friend.
September 18th, 2026 04:00
A Sign From The Other Side
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a wonderful dream
September 18th, 2026 03:14
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a wonderful dream
September 18th, 2026 03:14
Soul Encounter
Goldfinch60 said:
He will return Teddy even if it is in your dreams.
Andy
September 18th, 2026 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
He will return Teddy even if it is in your dreams.
Andy
September 18th, 2026 01:04
Soul Encounter
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautiful and deeply moving piece, Teddy. You were given a tenderness that life had withheld, and you answered it while you still could...that makes the loss hurt, but it also leaves something sacred behind. Truly moving, dearest friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 17th, 2026 10:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautiful and deeply moving piece, Teddy. You were given a tenderness that life had withheld, and you answered it while you still could...that makes the loss hurt, but it also leaves something sacred behind. Truly moving, dearest friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 17th, 2026 10:32
Soul Encounter
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Teddy. I enjoyed the read.
September 17th, 2026 09:29
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Teddy. I enjoyed the read.
September 17th, 2026 09:29
Soul Encounter
sorenbarrett said:
A special someone made more special by a dreams encounter and true life follow through. The poem is dreamy and wistful although it speaks of grief implying death. It walks in darkness but reveals light. Nicely done Teddy
September 17th, 2026 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
A special someone made more special by a dreams encounter and true life follow through. The poem is dreamy and wistful although it speaks of grief implying death. It walks in darkness but reveals light. Nicely done Teddy
September 17th, 2026 04:44
A Kind thought on Karma
Paul Bell said:
Would need to be Gazpacho, it doesn\'t scold.
Though I\'m thinking you want hot soup on this occasion.
September 15th, 2026 10:41
Paul Bell said:
Would need to be Gazpacho, it doesn\'t scold.
Though I\'m thinking you want hot soup on this occasion.
September 15th, 2026 10:41
A Kind thought on Karma
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work, my sweet Teddy.
September 15th, 2026 07:46
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work, my sweet Teddy.
September 15th, 2026 07:46
A Kind thought on Karma
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a strong piece, Teddy. The boundary is absolute, but the humanity remains intact...you leave consequences to do their work without wishing destruction upon anyone. Wonderfully expressed, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 14th, 2026 11:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a strong piece, Teddy. The boundary is absolute, but the humanity remains intact...you leave consequences to do their work without wishing destruction upon anyone. Wonderfully expressed, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 14th, 2026 11:12
A Kind thought on Karma
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the play on a word here scold and scald. Clever and nicely written it is a reproach to those that meddle where they ought not. A short but strong message to not get in hot water and get burned. Well done my friend.
September 14th, 2026 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the play on a word here scold and scald. Clever and nicely written it is a reproach to those that meddle where they ought not. A short but strong message to not get in hot water and get burned. Well done my friend.
September 14th, 2026 04:28
Dusk Chorus
MendedFences27 said:
Terry, I found serenity in both your poem and accompanying photo. Your poem\'s last line encompassed the main theme beautifully. Just a big WOW! from me. - Phil A.
September 12th, 2026 13:39
MendedFences27 said:
Terry, I found serenity in both your poem and accompanying photo. Your poem\'s last line encompassed the main theme beautifully. Just a big WOW! from me. - Phil A.
September 12th, 2026 13:39
Dusk Chorus
Paul Bell said:
Isn\'t nature great and free too.
Sometimes our problems go away when we leave the house.
September 10th, 2026 15:14
Paul Bell said:
Isn\'t nature great and free too.
Sometimes our problems go away when we leave the house.
September 10th, 2026 15:14
Dusk Chorus
NafisaSB said:
wishing you many such beautiful days...take care.
September 4th, 2026 02:40
NafisaSB said:
wishing you many such beautiful days...take care.
September 4th, 2026 02:40
Dusk Chorus
Syd said:
Hi Shirley,
There\'s something quite peaceful about this write. Sometimes the simplest moments in life are the best ones.
Well written - Syd xo
August 30th, 2026 10:44
Syd said:
Hi Shirley,
There\'s something quite peaceful about this write. Sometimes the simplest moments in life are the best ones.
Well written - Syd xo
August 30th, 2026 10:44
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