Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



Of Profound Knowledge
Goldfinch60 said:

So true Teddy, my Mary is often in my dreams.

Andy

March 17th, 2026 02:11

Of Profound Knowledge
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Teddy, reading this reminded me how dreams can feel like bridges…moments where people we love seem close again, even if only for a little while. You capture that quiet possibility with a lot of sincerity. It’s a comforting thought to sit with and I am thankful for that, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

March 16th, 2026 08:46

Of Profound Knowledge
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely thought and indeed it is true that at times I have seen my mother long dead and others dear in dreams. A lovely write my friend

March 16th, 2026 04:44

The Last Song
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Dearest Teddy, this hit me hard…there’s such tenderness in the way you speak to that bluebird. The repetition makes it feel like a quiet prayer…hope mixed with the fear of losing it again. It’s gentle and fragile in the best way. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

March 14th, 2026 08:19

The Last Song
Goldfinch60 said:

That bird will fly in your life forever Teddy.

Andy

March 14th, 2026 02:49

The Last Song
sorenbarrett said:

One must ask, is this the blue bird of happiness or some other visitor with a message of hope. A lovely poem that revives the spirit. Well done my friend

March 13th, 2026 12:57

Way Up There
NafisaSB said:

I think I am better off down here- able to appreciate it’s beauty though I see and laud your sentiments 👌👏👍

March 5th, 2026 12:00

Life\'s Very Complexity
Thomas W Case said:

Your poem hums with honesty and grit—life’s sorrow and sweetness tangled together.
Even in grief, you carve out the light; that truth sticks in the chest and lingers.

March 3rd, 2026 08:28

Life\'s Very Complexity
Poetic Licence said:

That has the feel of someone who after many years of struggling has finally found a way of seeing positives in negatives, enabling them to leave a more happy and contented life. I totally understand the message in the write, but I haven\'t quite worked out life yet, nicely written, enjoyed the read

February 27th, 2026 17:02

Life\'s Very Complexity
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Teddy, this balances vulnerability and counsel well. It begins in personal tragedy, expands into shared experience, then circles back to gratitude. “There is never joy without grief” and “leaving us beautiful memories in heart” frame life as cyclical…darkness and light intertwined. A reflective and heartfelt piece, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

February 27th, 2026 11:04

Way Up There
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Dearest Teddy, this is simple in the best way…an invitation to pause and look up. There’s something earnest and childlike about it...and that truly works. Ending on “that you too, were up there?” keeps that sense of wonder open. Powerful poem, dear poet.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

February 27th, 2026 10:45

Life\'s Very Complexity
sorenbarrett said:



February 27th, 2026 06:23

Life\'s Very Complexity
sorenbarrett said:

Good advise in this write that speaks to focusing on the positive not the negative the glass is always half full and it is our choice to decide which it is. Nicely said Teddy

February 27th, 2026 06:23

Life\'s Very Complexity
spilleronsheet said:

I am awaiting a new bright morning lying under a stormy night but thanks teddy for making me remember i did have a beautiful past canvas beside.

February 27th, 2026 05:48

Way Up There
spilleronsheet said:

Such wonderful lines, i usually get lost in the sky…keep penning dear teddy

February 27th, 2026 05:35

Way Up There
Goldfinch60 said:

I always look at the moon Teddy, as it brings peace within me.

Andy

February 27th, 2026 01:43

Way Up There
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write, I along with many others no doubt, do wish I could up there and see the beauty close up, enjoyed the read

February 26th, 2026 19:34

Way Up There
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful picture projected right before us for free. One of the last free things but they are doing their best to dim it with light pollution. A wonderful read my friend I\'ll be there soon enough

February 26th, 2026 13:05

Evolution of Sorts
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Teddy, what works here is the movement. The Raven on the sill, the whispered inevitability, the sunlight pulling your gaze away…then the swan. It doesn’t deny the end…it reframes it. Black to white. Omen to grace. A soft but meaningful turn. Another lovely addition to your Raven collection, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

February 23rd, 2026 10:07

Evolution of Sorts
Paul Bell said:

If the Raven goes, is that bad luck.
Mind you, to be replaced by a Swan, that can only be good.

February 23rd, 2026 04:38

Evolution of Sorts
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed Teddy one day everything will be gone one day. Never the less that does not prevent one from enjoying the day today. A lovely write where one is left with the view of a beautiful swan today.

February 23rd, 2026 03:40

Evolution of Sorts
Goldfinch60 said:

Life is so good Teddy, your Raven is a wise bird.

Andy

February 23rd, 2026 02:05

The Perfect Marriage
Thoughtless said:

Humorous. Mrs. Wally seems a bit unfair. But that\'s the point.

February 20th, 2026 16:48

Leave Me Here To Dream
NafisaSB said:

a hauntingly tender poem - the ache felt at the loss is beautifully brought out..well done

February 17th, 2026 01:04

Leave Me Here To Dream
Thomas W Case said:

Sweet Teddy, this is heartbreak laid bare, tender and unguarded as a bruise in daylight.
You’ve let the grief sing without shame, and that chorus aches like someone who loved deep and still does.

February 15th, 2026 09:08

Leave Me Here To Dream
Goldfinch60 said:

That person will always be with Teddy, love never dies.

Andy

February 15th, 2026 02:54

Leave Me Here To Dream
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Dearest Teddy, “A guitar without strings” is the image that caught me. It’s simple, but it says everything about silence after loss. The music stops, yet the memory of it remains. That metaphor holds the center of the piece. Strong lyrics here, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

February 14th, 2026 10:46

Leave Me Here To Dream
sorenbarrett said:

Romantic Teddy but a romanticism of the lost. A feeling of emptiness and the vacum that leaves one hollow. There is a longing in this song or poem that gives a feeling of despair and a plea for the loved to return where one is waiting. Nicely penned my friend

February 14th, 2026 06:05

Leave Me Here To Dream
Paul Bell said:

I like it, and do we get to hear this song, or is it private?
Hopefully the dream comes true, it is that day.

February 14th, 2026 05:55

Un-stemmed
Goldfinch60 said:

I too have a dying rose Teddy, but it means so much to me as it is the rose I was holding at my wife, Joyce\'s funeral over five years ago.

Andy

February 14th, 2026 02:48

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