Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Drift
Kevin Hulme said:
Myself. I\'m a \'Pooh Stick\' traveling down the stream. A good Write.
April 30th, 2026 18:40
Kevin Hulme said:
Myself. I\'m a \'Pooh Stick\' traveling down the stream. A good Write.
April 30th, 2026 18:40
Drift
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of abandoning oneself to the whims of nature in this poem. Drifting as on a leaf allowing the currents and winds of fortune to carry one feels so free but at the same time with unknown trepidation. Well done my friend
April 30th, 2026 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of abandoning oneself to the whims of nature in this poem. Drifting as on a leaf allowing the currents and winds of fortune to carry one feels so free but at the same time with unknown trepidation. Well done my friend
April 30th, 2026 04:56
Drift
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Oak, Lily pad, maple? Do you have a leaf preference? Great poem
April 30th, 2026 04:31
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Oak, Lily pad, maple? Do you have a leaf preference? Great poem
April 30th, 2026 04:31
Haiku (an ode to spring)
Poetic Licence said:
Love the uplifting feel to this write, dancing graciously is a lovely line as spring lightens all our moods in preparation for the party of summer, enjoyed the read
April 29th, 2026 21:52
Poetic Licence said:
Love the uplifting feel to this write, dancing graciously is a lovely line as spring lightens all our moods in preparation for the party of summer, enjoyed the read
April 29th, 2026 21:52
Haiku (an ode to grief)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profound, my friend. This metaphor, though brief, has much to say. Well done, dearest Teddy!
April 29th, 2026 18:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profound, my friend. This metaphor, though brief, has much to say. Well done, dearest Teddy!
April 29th, 2026 18:10
Haiku (an ode to grief)
Kevin Hulme said:
After a Storm there\'s always a Bright Sunny day later. ❤️
April 29th, 2026 07:21
Kevin Hulme said:
After a Storm there\'s always a Bright Sunny day later. ❤️
April 29th, 2026 07:21
Haiku (an ode to grief)
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely haiku in a picture of personification. Well done my friend
April 29th, 2026 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely haiku in a picture of personification. Well done my friend
April 29th, 2026 04:56
Haiku (an ode to spring)
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant and beautiful, sweet Teddy.
April 28th, 2026 09:12
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant and beautiful, sweet Teddy.
April 28th, 2026 09:12
Haiku (an ode to spring)
Kevin Hulme said:
#Its the Most Wonderful time of the year#.
Not Christmas but Spring.
Good Write.
April 28th, 2026 06:44
Kevin Hulme said:
#Its the Most Wonderful time of the year#.
Not Christmas but Spring.
Good Write.
April 28th, 2026 06:44
Haiku (an ode to spring)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, there’s a gentle energy in this that really lands…the movement, the light, that small moment of life returning. The image of the frog ties it all together so naturally. It feels like stepping into spring itself. Beautifully done, my dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 28th, 2026 06:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, there’s a gentle energy in this that really lands…the movement, the light, that small moment of life returning. The image of the frog ties it all together so naturally. It feels like stepping into spring itself. Beautifully done, my dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 28th, 2026 06:08
Haiku (an ode to spring)
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said my friend. I like the word play with spring as the season and jumping of the frog. Well done
April 28th, 2026 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said my friend. I like the word play with spring as the season and jumping of the frog. Well done
April 28th, 2026 04:40
Haiku (an ode to spring)
Paul Bell said:
Finally, I can take a layer of clothes off, spring has sprung.
Don\'t know why the people in ASDA are laughing at me though.
April 28th, 2026 04:26
Paul Bell said:
Finally, I can take a layer of clothes off, spring has sprung.
Don\'t know why the people in ASDA are laughing at me though.
April 28th, 2026 04:26
Haiku (an ode to positivity)
Thomas W Case said:
Clean and elemental—like a breath after something heavy finally loosens its grip.
The grit is in the simplicity: light arriving without argument, just insistence.
April 19th, 2026 08:29
Thomas W Case said:
Clean and elemental—like a breath after something heavy finally loosens its grip.
The grit is in the simplicity: light arriving without argument, just insistence.
April 19th, 2026 08:29
Haiku (golden thoughts)
NafisaSB said:
Why erase if it’s beautiful. Capture it as you have done and store it to look at in poetic or prose or as a painting 💅👌👏
April 19th, 2026 06:26
NafisaSB said:
Why erase if it’s beautiful. Capture it as you have done and store it to look at in poetic or prose or as a painting 💅👌👏
April 19th, 2026 06:26
Fuel for the Fire
NafisaSB said:
that\'s the spirit my dear - show them what gems you can come out with...the more they burn, the more you get inspired....all the best always
April 17th, 2026 23:41
NafisaSB said:
that\'s the spirit my dear - show them what gems you can come out with...the more they burn, the more you get inspired....all the best always
April 17th, 2026 23:41
A Poet\'s View
Kevin Hulme said:
So very true. If we had enough, would we be truly happy? Peace of Mind and Happiness will do me. Nicely Said.
April 16th, 2026 11:28
Kevin Hulme said:
So very true. If we had enough, would we be truly happy? Peace of Mind and Happiness will do me. Nicely Said.
April 16th, 2026 11:28
Haiku (an ode to the sky)
RSM0812 said:
Nice write. I like how short and sweet it is with a good pic.
April 15th, 2026 16:51
RSM0812 said:
Nice write. I like how short and sweet it is with a good pic.
April 15th, 2026 16:51
Haiku (golden thoughts)
Poetic Licence said:
Short but extremally well thought out, how we all would like to find that gold, enjoyed the read.
April 15th, 2026 13:33
Poetic Licence said:
Short but extremally well thought out, how we all would like to find that gold, enjoyed the read.
April 15th, 2026 13:33
Modern Philosophy
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes. I have favourite Love Songs and Songs of Loss. \'Can\'t help falling in Love\' a favourite Love Song. Wonderful Melody, Wonderful Lyrics. As for Dancing: My feet are all Thumbs.
A great poem.
April 14th, 2026 18:46
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes. I have favourite Love Songs and Songs of Loss. \'Can\'t help falling in Love\' a favourite Love Song. Wonderful Melody, Wonderful Lyrics. As for Dancing: My feet are all Thumbs.
A great poem.
April 14th, 2026 18:46
Haiku (golden thoughts)
Kevin Hulme said:
You said it all. Some Poems I\'ve erased and Hopefully: Published the Gold.
Fine Haiku.
April 14th, 2026 18:41
Kevin Hulme said:
You said it all. Some Poems I\'ve erased and Hopefully: Published the Gold.
Fine Haiku.
April 14th, 2026 18:41
Haiku (golden thoughts)
Katie B. said:
Clever and thought provoking! Great write!
April 14th, 2026 15:16
Katie B. said:
Clever and thought provoking! Great write!
April 14th, 2026 15:16
Haiku (golden thoughts)
MendedFences27 said:
An eye for painting. Wish I could say the same, but no such luck. The picture and poem are a lovely duo.
April 14th, 2026 11:53
MendedFences27 said:
An eye for painting. Wish I could say the same, but no such luck. The picture and poem are a lovely duo.
April 14th, 2026 11:53
Haiku (golden thoughts)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy… I know that cycle…putting something down, pulling it back, shaping it again. This brings that rhythm through clearly. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 14th, 2026 09:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy… I know that cycle…putting something down, pulling it back, shaping it again. This brings that rhythm through clearly. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 14th, 2026 09:05
Haiku (golden thoughts)
sorenbarrett said:
So often my mind\'s eye scribbles and erases but does not always create gold. Well done Teddy
April 14th, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
So often my mind\'s eye scribbles and erases but does not always create gold. Well done Teddy
April 14th, 2026 04:21
From Sunrise and Then
Kevin Hulme said:
My Bucket list just got Bigger.
Nice one.
April 13th, 2026 18:13
Kevin Hulme said:
My Bucket list just got Bigger.
Nice one.
April 13th, 2026 18:13
Fuel for the Fire
MendedFences27 said:
I found this as I was roaming through files. I liked it and stopped to say so. Maybe it was the \"Green eyes.\" - Phil A.
April 13th, 2026 09:48
MendedFences27 said:
I found this as I was roaming through files. I liked it and stopped to say so. Maybe it was the \"Green eyes.\" - Phil A.
April 13th, 2026 09:48
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