Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Gone With a Smile
Thomas W Case said:
This carries the sound of someone writing through doubt instead of waiting for it to leave—raw, persistent, and human in the way it refuses to stop reaching for the song underneath the noise.
There’s a quiet grit in it, like the struggle itself is already part of the music.
May 7th, 2026 07:49
Thomas W Case said:
This carries the sound of someone writing through doubt instead of waiting for it to leave—raw, persistent, and human in the way it refuses to stop reaching for the song underneath the noise.
There’s a quiet grit in it, like the struggle itself is already part of the music.
May 7th, 2026 07:49
Gone With a Smile
Goldfinch60 said:
But you won\'t be going yet Teddy, your words are too good to be without.
Andy
May 7th, 2026 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
But you won\'t be going yet Teddy, your words are too good to be without.
Andy
May 7th, 2026 01:42
Gone With a Smile
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this carries real heart from beginning to end. I especially loved how the poem moves through frustration, persistence, self-doubt, and finally toward acceptance without ever losing its sincerity. And that repeated ending...“with a smile”...is filled with a deeply human tenderness. Powerful lyrics, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 6th, 2026 07:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this carries real heart from beginning to end. I especially loved how the poem moves through frustration, persistence, self-doubt, and finally toward acceptance without ever losing its sincerity. And that repeated ending...“with a smile”...is filled with a deeply human tenderness. Powerful lyrics, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 6th, 2026 07:58
Gone With a Smile
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely song Teddy of wanting to be remembered for what one has done and accomplished. A song of continual effort that pays off. Well done my friend
May 6th, 2026 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely song Teddy of wanting to be remembered for what one has done and accomplished. A song of continual effort that pays off. Well done my friend
May 6th, 2026 04:48
With Nothing But Love (lyrics)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Teddy, I just hope it is not true.
Andy
May 6th, 2026 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Teddy, I just hope it is not true.
Andy
May 6th, 2026 01:50
With Nothing But Love (lyrics)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, I love your lyricism dearest poet/songwriter 🌹...this brought me to that space where memories feel closer than the present…where moments replay because they’re all you have left to hold onto. There’s something deeply human in that. You captured it well. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 5th, 2026 10:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, I love your lyricism dearest poet/songwriter 🌹...this brought me to that space where memories feel closer than the present…where moments replay because they’re all you have left to hold onto. There’s something deeply human in that. You captured it well. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 5th, 2026 10:28
With Nothing But Love (lyrics)
Thomas W Case said:
Sweet Teddy, This reads like grief refusing to harden—still warm enough to ache instead of just sting.
The refrain gives it a steady heartbeat, but it risks dulling the impact if it isn’t tightened slightly in repetition.
May 5th, 2026 07:32
Thomas W Case said:
Sweet Teddy, This reads like grief refusing to harden—still warm enough to ache instead of just sting.
The refrain gives it a steady heartbeat, but it risks dulling the impact if it isn’t tightened slightly in repetition.
May 5th, 2026 07:32
With Nothing But Love (lyrics)
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful song of memory of love that has lived its life but remains in the mind. Very nicely done my friend
May 5th, 2026 06:37
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful song of memory of love that has lived its life but remains in the mind. Very nicely done my friend
May 5th, 2026 06:37
Haiku (an ode to spring)
NafisaSB said:
beautiful poem, and beautiful pic - thanks for sharing and making me look forward to a day as bright as the scene...
May 4th, 2026 23:35
NafisaSB said:
beautiful poem, and beautiful pic - thanks for sharing and making me look forward to a day as bright as the scene...
May 4th, 2026 23:35
Proposal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this carries a quiet, grounded truth… something worn, imperfect, and still full of meaning. The way you hold that without trying to fix it gives it real strength. It stays with you. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 3rd, 2026 17:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this carries a quiet, grounded truth… something worn, imperfect, and still full of meaning. The way you hold that without trying to fix it gives it real strength. It stays with you. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 3rd, 2026 17:11
Proposal
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful metaphor my friend and so true in an imperfect world where imperfection is good enough and those that search for perfection will never be happy.
May 3rd, 2026 14:13
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful metaphor my friend and so true in an imperfect world where imperfection is good enough and those that search for perfection will never be happy.
May 3rd, 2026 14:13
For There Is Nothing So Perfect
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. I had a print of that one by Van Gogh many years ago. Love it.
May 3rd, 2026 07:51
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. I had a print of that one by Van Gogh many years ago. Love it.
May 3rd, 2026 07:51
For There Is Nothing So Perfect
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this is a strong piece…what I keep coming back to is how much it says with so little. That idea of needing the whole to truly see beauty feels both simple and quietly challenging. It lingers without trying to. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 2nd, 2026 11:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this is a strong piece…what I keep coming back to is how much it says with so little. That idea of needing the whole to truly see beauty feels both simple and quietly challenging. It lingers without trying to. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 2nd, 2026 11:05
For There Is Nothing So Perfect
sorenbarrett said:
Well written my friend and deeply philosophical nicely done
May 2nd, 2026 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
Well written my friend and deeply philosophical nicely done
May 2nd, 2026 04:48
For There Is Nothing So Perfect
Paul Bell said:
I suppose the Mona Lisa is a great example.
How many times do you at her face and see something different.
May 2nd, 2026 03:42
Paul Bell said:
I suppose the Mona Lisa is a great example.
How many times do you at her face and see something different.
May 2nd, 2026 03:42
Don\'t Ever Underestimate a Butterfly
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this really moved me…there’s a quiet peace in this moment that just settles in. It feels gentle, but there’s something deeper humming beneath it…like a small encounter carrying something much bigger. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 1st, 2026 05:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this really moved me…there’s a quiet peace in this moment that just settles in. It feels gentle, but there’s something deeper humming beneath it…like a small encounter carrying something much bigger. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 1st, 2026 05:47
Don\'t Ever Underestimate a Butterfly
sorenbarrett said:
Even the reincarnated need a rest from time to time. I have had this happen on several occasions and can\'t help but wonder what the animal is thinking. A fluttering bug of beauty choosing me for a resting spot. If only we could understand their language
May 1st, 2026 03:33
sorenbarrett said:
Even the reincarnated need a rest from time to time. I have had this happen on several occasions and can\'t help but wonder what the animal is thinking. A fluttering bug of beauty choosing me for a resting spot. If only we could understand their language
May 1st, 2026 03:33
Don\'t Ever Underestimate a Butterfly
Paul Bell said:
The disappearing butterfly, cherish the moment.
I just get pigions dropping stuff on my shoulder.
May 1st, 2026 03:16
Paul Bell said:
The disappearing butterfly, cherish the moment.
I just get pigions dropping stuff on my shoulder.
May 1st, 2026 03:16
Drift
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of abandoning oneself to the whims of nature in this poem. Drifting as on a leaf allowing the currents and winds of fortune to carry one feels so free but at the same time with unknown trepidation. Well done my friend
April 30th, 2026 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of abandoning oneself to the whims of nature in this poem. Drifting as on a leaf allowing the currents and winds of fortune to carry one feels so free but at the same time with unknown trepidation. Well done my friend
April 30th, 2026 04:56
Drift
Demar Desu said:
Oak, Lily pad, maple? Do you have a leaf preference? Great poem
April 30th, 2026 04:31
Demar Desu said:
Oak, Lily pad, maple? Do you have a leaf preference? Great poem
April 30th, 2026 04:31
Haiku (an ode to spring)
Poetic Licence said:
Love the uplifting feel to this write, dancing graciously is a lovely line as spring lightens all our moods in preparation for the party of summer, enjoyed the read
April 29th, 2026 21:52
Poetic Licence said:
Love the uplifting feel to this write, dancing graciously is a lovely line as spring lightens all our moods in preparation for the party of summer, enjoyed the read
April 29th, 2026 21:52
Haiku (an ode to grief)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profound, my friend. This metaphor, though brief, has much to say. Well done, dearest Teddy!
April 29th, 2026 18:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profound, my friend. This metaphor, though brief, has much to say. Well done, dearest Teddy!
April 29th, 2026 18:10
Haiku (an ode to grief)
Kevin Hulme said:
After a Storm there\'s always a Bright Sunny day later. ❤️
April 29th, 2026 07:21
Kevin Hulme said:
After a Storm there\'s always a Bright Sunny day later. ❤️
April 29th, 2026 07:21
Haiku (an ode to grief)
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely haiku in a picture of personification. Well done my friend
April 29th, 2026 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely haiku in a picture of personification. Well done my friend
April 29th, 2026 04:56
Haiku (an ode to spring)
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant and beautiful, sweet Teddy.
April 28th, 2026 09:12
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant and beautiful, sweet Teddy.
April 28th, 2026 09:12
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