Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
On An Open Top Bus is Were I Shall Be
Goldfinch60 said:
May that heart in your life be forever with you to give you fine memories Teddy.
Andy
February 24th, 2025 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
May that heart in your life be forever with you to give you fine memories Teddy.
Andy
February 24th, 2025 02:52
On An Open Top Bus is Were I Shall Be
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful, sweet Teddy.
February 23rd, 2025 15:44
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful, sweet Teddy.
February 23rd, 2025 15:44
On An Open Top Bus is Were I Shall Be
aDarkerMind said:
the most important thing Teddy, is your heart still belongs to London, no matter where you are;
and your words show how much London misses you also....x
February 23rd, 2025 14:28
aDarkerMind said:
the most important thing Teddy, is your heart still belongs to London, no matter where you are;
and your words show how much London misses you also....x
February 23rd, 2025 14:28
On An Open Top Bus is Were I Shall Be
arqios said:
Now that is nostalgic and quite beautiful 🤩 🙏🏻🕊if I didn’t know my Melbourne poem just got trumped 😂👍🏻🕊
February 23rd, 2025 06:27
arqios said:
Now that is nostalgic and quite beautiful 🤩 🙏🏻🕊if I didn’t know my Melbourne poem just got trumped 😂👍🏻🕊
February 23rd, 2025 06:27
On An Open Top Bus is Were I Shall Be
sorenbarrett said:
How memories of places we have lived can bring back emotions. Yet I found that I can never go home again for upon my return my home has changed and no longer is home to me. A most lovely write of longing for home put so elegantly in flowing poetry with good rhyme. Loved it
February 23rd, 2025 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
How memories of places we have lived can bring back emotions. Yet I found that I can never go home again for upon my return my home has changed and no longer is home to me. A most lovely write of longing for home put so elegantly in flowing poetry with good rhyme. Loved it
February 23rd, 2025 05:16
The Women\'s Movement
Goldfinch60 said:
Before we left home my brother and I could cook, clean, wash clothes, iron and do all the housework which we learned from our parents and all through my life I have done my bit, especially the cooking which is one of my passions. I will always do what is needed in our lives.
Fine words Teddy and very true for many.
Andy
February 23rd, 2025 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Before we left home my brother and I could cook, clean, wash clothes, iron and do all the housework which we learned from our parents and all through my life I have done my bit, especially the cooking which is one of my passions. I will always do what is needed in our lives.
Fine words Teddy and very true for many.
Andy
February 23rd, 2025 02:47
The Women\'s Movement
sorenbarrett said:
A statement from the heart. That we are still talking about equality and feminism tells me that we have not yet achieved it. Sad when all of us are made of the same stuff and came from the same ventre or belly. A powerful write of being oneself and not someone else\'s desire.
February 22nd, 2025 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
A statement from the heart. That we are still talking about equality and feminism tells me that we have not yet achieved it. Sad when all of us are made of the same stuff and came from the same ventre or belly. A powerful write of being oneself and not someone else\'s desire.
February 22nd, 2025 05:03
No Pages to See
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words produced by empty thoughts Teddy.
Andy
I have a book form a long time ago it is entitled \"How to understand Women\" It is full of blank pages. 🤣😂😒
February 22nd, 2025 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words produced by empty thoughts Teddy.
Andy
I have a book form a long time ago it is entitled \"How to understand Women\" It is full of blank pages. 🤣😂😒
February 22nd, 2025 02:53
No Pages to See
MendedFences27 said:
It would be a \"flatline\" world without the poet. No emotions, no beauty, and no Nature, only drabness and death.
Your poem of an empty poetry book is prophetic and scary. What if? Your poem itself is beautifully descriptive of all that would be missed. The only way your empty book could be read is to drop an unnecessary \"a\'\" and make it red. Into my \"Favs\" it goes. - Phil A
February 21st, 2025 17:28
MendedFences27 said:
It would be a \"flatline\" world without the poet. No emotions, no beauty, and no Nature, only drabness and death.
Your poem of an empty poetry book is prophetic and scary. What if? Your poem itself is beautifully descriptive of all that would be missed. The only way your empty book could be read is to drop an unnecessary \"a\'\" and make it red. Into my \"Favs\" it goes. - Phil A
February 21st, 2025 17:28
No Pages to See
arqios said:
Kind of like the Great Expectations of poetry🙏🏻🕊️
February 21st, 2025 13:55
arqios said:
Kind of like the Great Expectations of poetry🙏🏻🕊️
February 21st, 2025 13:55
No Pages to See
Cassie58 said:
That is every poet’s nightmare Teddy. I took this to meaning the total loss of all their work but it could equally apply to the muse being absent. There are such beautiful images in this poem of the natural environment, such a delight. You paint wonderful imagery with your words. The loss of losing all that work would be unbearable. Always good to read you. Have a great weekend Teddy. 💜🌹
February 21st, 2025 07:37
Cassie58 said:
That is every poet’s nightmare Teddy. I took this to meaning the total loss of all their work but it could equally apply to the muse being absent. There are such beautiful images in this poem of the natural environment, such a delight. You paint wonderful imagery with your words. The loss of losing all that work would be unbearable. Always good to read you. Have a great weekend Teddy. 💜🌹
February 21st, 2025 07:37
No Pages to See
sorenbarrett said:
What a dream. When the muse not only is dead but if the book is blank then has never existed. It would be like a novelist waking up to find he had never written anything, or a composer to awaken finding he had never composed anything. I have had certain poems lost by a slip of a key before and that is bad enough. No wonder that the color is red. Very nicely written Teddy
February 21st, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
What a dream. When the muse not only is dead but if the book is blank then has never existed. It would be like a novelist waking up to find he had never written anything, or a composer to awaken finding he had never composed anything. I have had certain poems lost by a slip of a key before and that is bad enough. No wonder that the color is red. Very nicely written Teddy
February 21st, 2025 04:51
The Moon Appears and She is Blue
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Teddy, that moon sees all the horror that is in our world but is also lights up life\'s glory as well.
Andy
February 21st, 2025 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Teddy, that moon sees all the horror that is in our world but is also lights up life\'s glory as well.
Andy
February 21st, 2025 02:11
The Moon Appears and She is Blue
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful and sad. Tremendous writing, sweet Teddy. I felt this to my core.
February 20th, 2025 14:27
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful and sad. Tremendous writing, sweet Teddy. I felt this to my core.
February 20th, 2025 14:27
The Moon Appears and She is Blue
Cassie58 said:
The moon sees everything and has every reason to be blue. Every reason to shed tears of silver hue. Dear Teddy, I travelled to far off places, to lands I do not know and felt profound sadness and much mourning. 💜🌹
February 20th, 2025 07:16
Cassie58 said:
The moon sees everything and has every reason to be blue. Every reason to shed tears of silver hue. Dear Teddy, I travelled to far off places, to lands I do not know and felt profound sadness and much mourning. 💜🌹
February 20th, 2025 07:16
The Moon Appears and She is Blue
sorenbarrett said:
The poem sounds so romantic and wistful and the last line gives a feel of things that are out of reach now for a moment being within reach then the author note shatters all that and my mind goes reeling off into space and a darker image takes the place of romance and I see darkness wrapped in bows and colored wrapping paper with corpses inside. Where have you taken my mind Teddy. Then I read this again and I see where this has come from the black and grey the last poem, the goodbye, explosion of the universe, and of course the moon is blue, I too sad and such a vision. But where had my mind been before? Caught in past images of your poems always bright light hearted, romantic and at most angry this seems to be another side of you and I was caught in my past image. You took me off guard. See how previous prejudices can affect one\'s reading of a poem
February 20th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
The poem sounds so romantic and wistful and the last line gives a feel of things that are out of reach now for a moment being within reach then the author note shatters all that and my mind goes reeling off into space and a darker image takes the place of romance and I see darkness wrapped in bows and colored wrapping paper with corpses inside. Where have you taken my mind Teddy. Then I read this again and I see where this has come from the black and grey the last poem, the goodbye, explosion of the universe, and of course the moon is blue, I too sad and such a vision. But where had my mind been before? Caught in past images of your poems always bright light hearted, romantic and at most angry this seems to be another side of you and I was caught in my past image. You took me off guard. See how previous prejudices can affect one\'s reading of a poem
February 20th, 2025 04:42
The Moon Appears and She is Blue
arqios said:
A super nova poem that is quite rightly mourned by the moon 🌙🙏🏻🕊
February 20th, 2025 03:40
arqios said:
A super nova poem that is quite rightly mourned by the moon 🌙🙏🏻🕊
February 20th, 2025 03:40
Not Just Lightning
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love forever fall on us all Teddy.
Andy
February 20th, 2025 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love forever fall on us all Teddy.
Andy
February 20th, 2025 02:11
Not Just Lightning
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, I slowed your words right down and saw the imagery in spectacular slow motion. What an incredibly beautiful sight that was too. There’s a whole lot of sparkling love in this poem. Your posted image together with your poetry are inspirational. Gorgeous imagery. 💜🌹
February 19th, 2025 08:09
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, I slowed your words right down and saw the imagery in spectacular slow motion. What an incredibly beautiful sight that was too. There’s a whole lot of sparkling love in this poem. Your posted image together with your poetry are inspirational. Gorgeous imagery. 💜🌹
February 19th, 2025 08:09
Not Just Lightning
arqios said:
Like diamonds in the sky… whose beauty is in the sharing thereof 🙏🏻🕊
February 19th, 2025 05:40
arqios said:
Like diamonds in the sky… whose beauty is in the sharing thereof 🙏🏻🕊
February 19th, 2025 05:40
Not Just Lightning
sorenbarrett said:
Celestial fireworks. I love the introduction of words like diamond a symbol of fidelity and marriage, light as truth, black the absence of all light but the unity of all color as a dichotomy of loneliness and unity, meteor symbol of transformation and cosmic connection. You have woven them together to end in a thread of love. Very nice Teddy
February 19th, 2025 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
Celestial fireworks. I love the introduction of words like diamond a symbol of fidelity and marriage, light as truth, black the absence of all light but the unity of all color as a dichotomy of loneliness and unity, meteor symbol of transformation and cosmic connection. You have woven them together to end in a thread of love. Very nice Teddy
February 19th, 2025 05:02
I Am Metaphor
Cassie58 said:
Some beautiful lines here dear Teddy in this metaphor poem. Fabulous imagery and I enjoyed all your references to the natural environment.
I am the soft snow
floating down
in silence
That one is my favourite. Hope you have had a wonderful Tuesday.
🌹💜
February 18th, 2025 16:34
Cassie58 said:
Some beautiful lines here dear Teddy in this metaphor poem. Fabulous imagery and I enjoyed all your references to the natural environment.
I am the soft snow
floating down
in silence
That one is my favourite. Hope you have had a wonderful Tuesday.
🌹💜
February 18th, 2025 16:34
I Am Metaphor
MendedFences27 said:
As they asked Zuckerman, \" What is META for? \" Sorry just had to get rid of that one.
Your poem is a delight of metaphors, mainly of thigs in Nature, ocean, river, waterfall, wind, snow, rain. You are a poet of the Earth. Your poem is a joy to read and brightens my day. Loved it. - Phil A.
February 18th, 2025 12:27
MendedFences27 said:
As they asked Zuckerman, \" What is META for? \" Sorry just had to get rid of that one.
Your poem is a delight of metaphors, mainly of thigs in Nature, ocean, river, waterfall, wind, snow, rain. You are a poet of the Earth. Your poem is a joy to read and brightens my day. Loved it. - Phil A.
February 18th, 2025 12:27
I Am Metaphor
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. You are a metaphor for love and beauty and sweetness. Superb work, dear Teddy.
February 18th, 2025 11:28
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. You are a metaphor for love and beauty and sweetness. Superb work, dear Teddy.
February 18th, 2025 11:28
I Am Metaphor
aDarkerMind said:
I\'m the flow of the waterfall....
and the flow of poetry that keeps my heart beating.
another gem from my close friend teddy x
February 18th, 2025 10:36
aDarkerMind said:
I\'m the flow of the waterfall....
and the flow of poetry that keeps my heart beating.
another gem from my close friend teddy x
February 18th, 2025 10:36
Unjust
whats write for me said:
Alzheimer\'s and dementia is alarming and it is so difficult to watch our loved one\'s suffer through it, while we suffer watching it happen. My mother and my wife\'s father both suffered this fate and all we could do is watch as the stong people that they were wasted away.
February 18th, 2025 09:15
whats write for me said:
Alzheimer\'s and dementia is alarming and it is so difficult to watch our loved one\'s suffer through it, while we suffer watching it happen. My mother and my wife\'s father both suffered this fate and all we could do is watch as the stong people that they were wasted away.
February 18th, 2025 09:15
I Am Metaphor
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor but also true we are all things some closer in space than others but all related. Where does one item end and another begin? Things that seem so clear are blurred as we examine more closely or distance ourselves. A most beautiful and philosophical poem what are our relationships, where do they begin and where do they end? Brilliant!!
February 18th, 2025 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor but also true we are all things some closer in space than others but all related. Where does one item end and another begin? Things that seem so clear are blurred as we examine more closely or distance ourselves. A most beautiful and philosophical poem what are our relationships, where do they begin and where do they end? Brilliant!!
February 18th, 2025 05:16
I Am Metaphor
arqios said:
Lovely images relating Metaphor, which is very liquid/fluid. Good stuff🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 04:09
arqios said:
Lovely images relating Metaphor, which is very liquid/fluid. Good stuff🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 04:09
Such A Beautiful Place
Goldfinch60 said:
The sounds and vistas within our minds are limitless Teddy.
Andy
February 18th, 2025 02:59
Goldfinch60 said:
The sounds and vistas within our minds are limitless Teddy.
Andy
February 18th, 2025 02:59
« Return to the profile of Teddy.15
