Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
From The South I Rose
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, what a heartfelt tribute to your city. I love that the poem doesn\'t romanticize London into perfection. Instead, it embraces the full picture...the pubs, trains, rain, rooftop bars, graffiti, football, wealth, poverty, and all the people in between. That honesty makes the closing declaration of pride feel earned. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 5th, 2026 06:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, what a heartfelt tribute to your city. I love that the poem doesn\'t romanticize London into perfection. Instead, it embraces the full picture...the pubs, trains, rain, rooftop bars, graffiti, football, wealth, poverty, and all the people in between. That honesty makes the closing declaration of pride feel earned. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 5th, 2026 06:28
From The South I Rose
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend well written
June 5th, 2026 03:39
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend well written
June 5th, 2026 03:39
From The South I Rose
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Teddy the intermittent use of rhyme kept attention and the imagery was well painted. Nicely done my friend
June 5th, 2026 03:25
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Teddy the intermittent use of rhyme kept attention and the imagery was well painted. Nicely done my friend
June 5th, 2026 03:25
Generation X
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Teddy, I too was born at the right time.
Andy
June 5th, 2026 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Teddy, I too was born at the right time.
Andy
June 5th, 2026 00:08
Generation X
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hear hear! Me too! Rock on dearest Teddy!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 18:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hear hear! Me too! Rock on dearest Teddy!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 18:07
Generation X
Paul Bell said:
Totally, the standard of politician today is so bad that just being a politician should bar them from being one.
I reckon that if you mixed the politicians in the commons into a potion, you still couldn\'t get a full half-wit.
June 4th, 2026 04:35
Paul Bell said:
Totally, the standard of politician today is so bad that just being a politician should bar them from being one.
I reckon that if you mixed the politicians in the commons into a potion, you still couldn\'t get a full half-wit.
June 4th, 2026 04:35
Generation X
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy this is a wonderful piece that I can hear my parents saying some seventy years ago. It is interesting how though things change they remain the same. I imagine that they were saying the same thing in Nazi Germany. We the people are the ones that elected our leaders it seems that we never learn but then what can be done with a magicians choice. Very nice Teddy loved it.
June 4th, 2026 03:14
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy this is a wonderful piece that I can hear my parents saying some seventy years ago. It is interesting how though things change they remain the same. I imagine that they were saying the same thing in Nazi Germany. We the people are the ones that elected our leaders it seems that we never learn but then what can be done with a magicians choice. Very nice Teddy loved it.
June 4th, 2026 03:14
Will I Ever Find Me
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this really moved me. What I love most is how unguarded it feels...the questions about smiling, laughing, crying, and finding yourself again are things many people carry but struggle to say aloud. The image of the river of lost tears is haunting, and the final question leaves the poem suspended in a place of longing and uncertainty. Powerful and deeply heartfelt, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 2nd, 2026 22:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this really moved me. What I love most is how unguarded it feels...the questions about smiling, laughing, crying, and finding yourself again are things many people carry but struggle to say aloud. The image of the river of lost tears is haunting, and the final question leaves the poem suspended in a place of longing and uncertainty. Powerful and deeply heartfelt, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 2nd, 2026 22:04
Will I Ever Find Me
sorenbarrett said:
So existential. This poem is sad and yet hopeful. A good write my friend
June 2nd, 2026 16:47
sorenbarrett said:
So existential. This poem is sad and yet hopeful. A good write my friend
June 2nd, 2026 16:47
Bright Spark
NafisaSB said:
take the leap - you will not regret it - but find new pathways to explore - all the best...
June 2nd, 2026 02:20
NafisaSB said:
take the leap - you will not regret it - but find new pathways to explore - all the best...
June 2nd, 2026 02:20
Bright Spark
rhmn_7 said:
Courage always comes with unexpected surprises dear Teddy, wish you the best on your journey!
May 31st, 2026 01:45
rhmn_7 said:
Courage always comes with unexpected surprises dear Teddy, wish you the best on your journey!
May 31st, 2026 01:45
Bright Spark
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes its just got to be about yourself.
Lighten the load and set yourself free.
May 29th, 2026 06:25
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes its just got to be about yourself.
Lighten the load and set yourself free.
May 29th, 2026 06:25
Bright Spark
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Teddy, taking that leap into the unknown can be joyous. I sincerely hope that you life is wonderful.
Andy
May 28th, 2026 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Teddy, taking that leap into the unknown can be joyous. I sincerely hope that you life is wonderful.
Andy
May 28th, 2026 01:29
Bright Spark
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this feels deeply freeing and quietly triumphant. The poem carries that difficult but necessary moment where someone finally chooses themselves over the version of themselves others were shaping. There’s courage and relief woven together beautifully here, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 22:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this feels deeply freeing and quietly triumphant. The poem carries that difficult but necessary moment where someone finally chooses themselves over the version of themselves others were shaping. There’s courage and relief woven together beautifully here, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 22:04
Bright Spark
Syd said:
Hi Shirley, you have to put yourself first in these situations. Onwards and upwards. All the best in your new job, I hope everything works out OK. I think the woman who has been bullying you has gotten off lightly though. I\'m sure she\'ll get her comeuppance eventually.
- Syd xo
May 27th, 2026 16:18
Syd said:
Hi Shirley, you have to put yourself first in these situations. Onwards and upwards. All the best in your new job, I hope everything works out OK. I think the woman who has been bullying you has gotten off lightly though. I\'m sure she\'ll get her comeuppance eventually.
- Syd xo
May 27th, 2026 16:18
Bright Spark
sorenbarrett said:
The unknown holds many surprises as well as expectations and this is a good write about looking at it from the positive side
May 27th, 2026 13:55
sorenbarrett said:
The unknown holds many surprises as well as expectations and this is a good write about looking at it from the positive side
May 27th, 2026 13:55
Blue Skies and Thunderstorms
NafisaSB said:
i can well visualize you walking this beautiful and soul satisfying path - keep going on...
May 27th, 2026 00:57
NafisaSB said:
i can well visualize you walking this beautiful and soul satisfying path - keep going on...
May 27th, 2026 00:57
First Class Ticket
Goldfinch60 said:
But not yet Teddy, you have too much to bring to us.
Andy
May 26th, 2026 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
But not yet Teddy, you have too much to bring to us.
Andy
May 26th, 2026 01:48
First Class Ticket
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy…wow, this really moved me, my friend. There’s such a strange warmth to it despite the subject matter…death not as terror, but as reunion, memory, ritual, and final peace. The quiet acceptance throughout feels deeply human. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 16:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy…wow, this really moved me, my friend. There’s such a strange warmth to it despite the subject matter…death not as terror, but as reunion, memory, ritual, and final peace. The quiet acceptance throughout feels deeply human. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 16:14
First Class Ticket
sorenbarrett said:
Good one Teddy I think I would let them in as well. I let in the living why discriminate? A good read my friend
May 25th, 2026 11:29
sorenbarrett said:
Good one Teddy I think I would let them in as well. I let in the living why discriminate? A good read my friend
May 25th, 2026 11:29
Dreams End
Goldfinch60 said:
The dreams of light will be with you soon Teddy.
Andy
May 25th, 2026 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
The dreams of light will be with you soon Teddy.
Andy
May 25th, 2026 01:47
Dreams End
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy…this really hit me hard. The simplicity of it makes the ache feel even more immediate…like a thought whispered to yourself in the middle of the night when there’s nowhere left to hide from it. “a cellar so dark / deep within my heart” lingers heavily. Powerful part of your Raven collection, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 13:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy…this really hit me hard. The simplicity of it makes the ache feel even more immediate…like a thought whispered to yourself in the middle of the night when there’s nowhere left to hide from it. “a cellar so dark / deep within my heart” lingers heavily. Powerful part of your Raven collection, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 13:32
Dreams End
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams so often imaged as something to look forward to, a hope, wish, desire. But here they are dark and miserable more of a nightmare. The are something to be dreaded and feared. A sad composition of what is and felt will never change. The poem is heavy and restless a burden to be carried. Well written my friend.
May 24th, 2026 12:35
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams so often imaged as something to look forward to, a hope, wish, desire. But here they are dark and miserable more of a nightmare. The are something to be dreaded and feared. A sad composition of what is and felt will never change. The poem is heavy and restless a burden to be carried. Well written my friend.
May 24th, 2026 12:35
Blue Skies and Thunderstorms
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this hit me in a deeply human way. The honesty in recognizing yourself changed by storms, yet still choosing to stand and move forward, feels incredibly grounded and real. There’s strength in this without it needing to shout. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 20th, 2026 12:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this hit me in a deeply human way. The honesty in recognizing yourself changed by storms, yet still choosing to stand and move forward, feels incredibly grounded and real. There’s strength in this without it needing to shout. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 20th, 2026 12:16
Blue Skies and Thunderstorms
Paul Bell said:
Blue skies, I keep hearing about them, now thunderstorms, they just wait for me leaving the house.
We all must tread our path, and if we meet on that path I\'ll give you my rainmac in return for your sunshine.
May 20th, 2026 04:28
Paul Bell said:
Blue skies, I keep hearing about them, now thunderstorms, they just wait for me leaving the house.
We all must tread our path, and if we meet on that path I\'ll give you my rainmac in return for your sunshine.
May 20th, 2026 04:28
Blue Skies and Thunderstorms
sorenbarrett said:
And so it may Teddy a beautiful reflection and thought that makes true the old parental advice of choose your friends wisely. Loved it my friend
May 20th, 2026 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
And so it may Teddy a beautiful reflection and thought that makes true the old parental advice of choose your friends wisely. Loved it my friend
May 20th, 2026 03:56
Blue Skies and Thunderstorms
Goldfinch60 said:
We all find the right paths to walk Teddy and we will get to that wonderful place where we will meet.
Andy
May 20th, 2026 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
We all find the right paths to walk Teddy and we will get to that wonderful place where we will meet.
Andy
May 20th, 2026 01:53
Fuel for the Fire
FrasMac said:
it must be haiku season! I like this, if debateable, still a worthy observation and nicely expressed.
May 13th, 2026 11:45
FrasMac said:
it must be haiku season! I like this, if debateable, still a worthy observation and nicely expressed.
May 13th, 2026 11:45
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