Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Mind The Clouds
aDarkerMind said:
very touching Teddy, a subject too many us know too well x
January 25th, 2026 20:42
aDarkerMind said:
very touching Teddy, a subject too many us know too well x
January 25th, 2026 20:42
Mind The Clouds
aDarkerMind said:
a heartbreaking tale Teddy...
beautifully written, as always.
January 23rd, 2026 11:32
aDarkerMind said:
a heartbreaking tale Teddy...
beautifully written, as always.
January 23rd, 2026 11:32
Mind The Clouds
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a true write Teddy, Joyce, my wife of 40 years suffered from dementia and I know all about it. I say to people if you have not lives 24/7 with somebody who has dementia you haven\'t a f****** clue what it is like. She passed six years ago and it was a release for both of us, the anniversary of her funeral is in two days time.
Andy
January 21st, 2026 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a true write Teddy, Joyce, my wife of 40 years suffered from dementia and I know all about it. I say to people if you have not lives 24/7 with somebody who has dementia you haven\'t a f****** clue what it is like. She passed six years ago and it was a release for both of us, the anniversary of her funeral is in two days time.
Andy
January 21st, 2026 02:27
Mind The Clouds
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this is a gentle meditation on thought and presence. The clouded mind doesn’t feel lost, it feels observant, hovering just far enough away to see clearly. Quiet, reflective, and well written my friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 20th, 2026 15:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this is a gentle meditation on thought and presence. The clouded mind doesn’t feel lost, it feels observant, hovering just far enough away to see clearly. Quiet, reflective, and well written my friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 20th, 2026 15:17
Mind The Clouds
Thomas W Case said:
This is quietly heartbreaking—and beautifully restrained.
January 20th, 2026 08:57
Thomas W Case said:
This is quietly heartbreaking—and beautifully restrained.
January 20th, 2026 08:57
Mind The Clouds
sorenbarrett said:
Dementia such a sad disease and robs one of the only treasure that is left in the end, one\'s memories. For some stuck in a happy place every stranger becomes their mother or father for some stuck in a sad place no one is recognized. God grant me death in the physical sense before mental death. Good write my friend
January 20th, 2026 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Dementia such a sad disease and robs one of the only treasure that is left in the end, one\'s memories. For some stuck in a happy place every stranger becomes their mother or father for some stuck in a sad place no one is recognized. God grant me death in the physical sense before mental death. Good write my friend
January 20th, 2026 04:11
Enlightenment
Goldfinch60 said:
May that peace and serenity always be with you Teddy.
Andy
January 20th, 2026 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
May that peace and serenity always be with you Teddy.
Andy
January 20th, 2026 02:50
Fire in One\'s Heart
NafisaSB said:
may you continue to dance and enjoy life without his assistance...enjoy life..
January 19th, 2026 23:49
NafisaSB said:
may you continue to dance and enjoy life without his assistance...enjoy life..
January 19th, 2026 23:49
Enlightenment
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dear Teddy, I connect deeply with this. Learning when to hold on and when to let go has been one of the hardest inner negotiations I know. Your poem names that struggle with truthfully. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 19th, 2026 10:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dear Teddy, I connect deeply with this. Learning when to hold on and when to let go has been one of the hardest inner negotiations I know. Your poem names that struggle with truthfully. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 19th, 2026 10:27
Enlightenment
sorenbarrett said:
Know thyself and to thine own self be true strong points in psychology, philosophy, literature, poetry and society. A lost art missing in much of a modern world of plastic and projected computer generated images. A lovely write Teddy
January 19th, 2026 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
Know thyself and to thine own self be true strong points in psychology, philosophy, literature, poetry and society. A lost art missing in much of a modern world of plastic and projected computer generated images. A lovely write Teddy
January 19th, 2026 04:53
Fire in One\'s Heart
Thomas W Case said:
Great work, Teddy. If anything, the strength here is tone control: playful without being cute, dark without being heavy-handed. It feels like confidence masquerading as humor.
January 18th, 2026 07:50
Thomas W Case said:
Great work, Teddy. If anything, the strength here is tone control: playful without being cute, dark without being heavy-handed. It feels like confidence masquerading as humor.
January 18th, 2026 07:50
Fire in One\'s Heart
Goldfinch60 said:
The Devil may not be able to dance the tango Teddy, but I am sure you woiud be able to teach him (or me). LOL
Andy
January 18th, 2026 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
The Devil may not be able to dance the tango Teddy, but I am sure you woiud be able to teach him (or me). LOL
Andy
January 18th, 2026 02:51
Fire in One\'s Heart
xTattooingPaperx said:
The trick is to never let him keep up with the dance moves. Great minds do think alike.
January 17th, 2026 22:20
xTattooingPaperx said:
The trick is to never let him keep up with the dance moves. Great minds do think alike.
January 17th, 2026 22:20
Fire in One\'s Heart
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this is clever and disarming. It walks right up to something dark, then sidesteps it with wit and confidence. That tonal turn is sharp and satisfying and I thoroughly enjoyed this , my friend. Happy Saturday! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 17th, 2026 09:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this is clever and disarming. It walks right up to something dark, then sidesteps it with wit and confidence. That tonal turn is sharp and satisfying and I thoroughly enjoyed this , my friend. Happy Saturday! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 17th, 2026 09:26
Fire in One\'s Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t be surprised Teddy the devil is a hell of a dancer. I heard that it was he that invented the tango, the passa dobles and the samba. The lobata for sure and maybe the meringue and mambo. He loves the jive the cha cha and even the waltz. He definitely is not into line dancing or even square dancing and even the foxtrot is a little to stiff for his taste so pick your dance and he may show you a few new moves. A good read my friend
January 17th, 2026 05:37
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t be surprised Teddy the devil is a hell of a dancer. I heard that it was he that invented the tango, the passa dobles and the samba. The lobata for sure and maybe the meringue and mambo. He loves the jive the cha cha and even the waltz. He definitely is not into line dancing or even square dancing and even the foxtrot is a little to stiff for his taste so pick your dance and he may show you a few new moves. A good read my friend
January 17th, 2026 05:37
Human Weather Systems
Thomas W Case said:
Teddy, There’s a quiet ache in this, the way loss and visitation share the same breath. Raven feels less like an omen and more like a witness, staying when everything else has already passed through your hands.
January 15th, 2026 07:44
Thomas W Case said:
Teddy, There’s a quiet ache in this, the way loss and visitation share the same breath. Raven feels less like an omen and more like a witness, staying when everything else has already passed through your hands.
January 15th, 2026 07:44
Human Weather Systems
Goldfinch60 said:
That Raven will always be there to look after you Teddy.
Andy
January 13th, 2026 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
That Raven will always be there to look after you Teddy.
Andy
January 13th, 2026 02:21
Human Weather Systems
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this feels like grief processed gently rather than explained. The raven sits, time moves, memory holds…and the poem lets that be enough. Wonderful restraint. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 12th, 2026 21:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this feels like grief processed gently rather than explained. The raven sits, time moves, memory holds…and the poem lets that be enough. Wonderful restraint. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 12th, 2026 21:48
Human Weather Systems
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy this seems a poem of loss and the realization that life is not always peaches and cream. Sad it begs for tears
January 12th, 2026 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy this seems a poem of loss and the realization that life is not always peaches and cream. Sad it begs for tears
January 12th, 2026 05:40
A Poet\'s View
NafisaSB said:
this message is truly worth pondering on...i am glad you shared it at the beginning of the new year, which i hope is great for all of us on this site...
January 9th, 2026 00:36
NafisaSB said:
this message is truly worth pondering on...i am glad you shared it at the beginning of the new year, which i hope is great for all of us on this site...
January 9th, 2026 00:36
Carried Away
Thomas W Case said:
Teddy....Fantastic work...This hits me in the chest. You’ve carried it all—laughter, pain, love lost at sea—and you’re still standing, still walking, still dancing, still daring. There’s a weight and a freedom here at the same time, the kind that only comes from really living and surviving the dark as well as the light. I feel the grit, the salt, the pull of the path you’ve chosen—and the one that chose you. Raw, real, and unapologetically alive.
January 4th, 2026 12:24
Thomas W Case said:
Teddy....Fantastic work...This hits me in the chest. You’ve carried it all—laughter, pain, love lost at sea—and you’re still standing, still walking, still dancing, still daring. There’s a weight and a freedom here at the same time, the kind that only comes from really living and surviving the dark as well as the light. I feel the grit, the salt, the pull of the path you’ve chosen—and the one that chose you. Raw, real, and unapologetically alive.
January 4th, 2026 12:24
Carried Away
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this is a poem of agency and survival. You name the dancing, the grief, the choosing, and let them all lead to that final truth…you carried yourself, and that matters. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 2nd, 2026 19:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this is a poem of agency and survival. You name the dancing, the grief, the choosing, and let them all lead to that final truth…you carried yourself, and that matters. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 2nd, 2026 19:02
Carried Away
sorenbarrett said:
A touching and lovely poem of life and its joys and sorrows. Very nicely done my friend.
January 2nd, 2026 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
A touching and lovely poem of life and its joys and sorrows. Very nicely done my friend.
January 2nd, 2026 13:31
A Poet\'s View
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great question...and the more one has, the seemingly less they ask it. Powerful poem to end the year on, my dear friend! Happy New Year to you and your family! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 31st, 2025 09:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great question...and the more one has, the seemingly less they ask it. Powerful poem to end the year on, my dear friend! Happy New Year to you and your family! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 31st, 2025 09:01
A Poet\'s View
sorenbarrett said:
So short but says so much. A thought that I have had a great deal lately. It seems that people play the game of money just for the sake of it. There are those that have more than they can ever spend yet continue to play. Then there is the ultimate thought, no one can take any of it with them and as for buying indulgences that went out a long time ago. One might leave an empire but look how past empires destroyed families. A wonderful write in the true spirit of poetry where less is more. Wo nicely done Teddy
December 31st, 2025 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
So short but says so much. A thought that I have had a great deal lately. It seems that people play the game of money just for the sake of it. There are those that have more than they can ever spend yet continue to play. Then there is the ultimate thought, no one can take any of it with them and as for buying indulgences that went out a long time ago. One might leave an empire but look how past empires destroyed families. A wonderful write in the true spirit of poetry where less is more. Wo nicely done Teddy
December 31st, 2025 03:44
Silent Nights
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have those muses in our lives Teddy, and they can be our best friends as well. Fine words.
Andy
December 29th, 2025 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have those muses in our lives Teddy, and they can be our best friends as well. Fine words.
Andy
December 29th, 2025 02:48
Silent Nights
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOVE THIS! And love the picture! Oh, dearest Teddy. I am happy your raven took a little holiday, but I so get the weird emptiness of that holiday. I profoundly powerful poem I totally relate to. Well done, dear poet! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 28th, 2025 08:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOVE THIS! And love the picture! Oh, dearest Teddy. I am happy your raven took a little holiday, but I so get the weird emptiness of that holiday. I profoundly powerful poem I totally relate to. Well done, dear poet! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 28th, 2025 08:02
Silent Nights
sorenbarrett said:
We all have our muse and although they may leave us for a while they always return, sometimes when we least expect it. A poet\'s write of a friend missed. Well done my friend
December 28th, 2025 06:40
sorenbarrett said:
We all have our muse and although they may leave us for a while they always return, sometimes when we least expect it. A poet\'s write of a friend missed. Well done my friend
December 28th, 2025 06:40
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