Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Deathbed
Thomas W Case said:
You nailed it, dear Teddy. May we all live until we die.
May 28th, 2025 09:59
Thomas W Case said:
You nailed it, dear Teddy. May we all live until we die.
May 28th, 2025 09:59
If Raven Was to Come Today
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. The rhyme cements the poem.
May 27th, 2025 09:49
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. The rhyme cements the poem.
May 27th, 2025 09:49
If Raven Was to Come Today
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a positive poem Teddy showing the wonderful world that is there for you.
Andy
May 27th, 2025 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a positive poem Teddy showing the wonderful world that is there for you.
Andy
May 27th, 2025 01:23
If Raven Was to Come Today
MendedFences27 said:
\"Who\'s that tapping at my door? Quoth the Raven, \"Nevermore.\" The symbolism for grief in your poem is quite strong. I hope you\'re feeling OK. Your poem made me feel sad. - Phil A.
May 26th, 2025 18:37
MendedFences27 said:
\"Who\'s that tapping at my door? Quoth the Raven, \"Nevermore.\" The symbolism for grief in your poem is quite strong. I hope you\'re feeling OK. Your poem made me feel sad. - Phil A.
May 26th, 2025 18:37
If Raven Was to Come Today
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem, Teddy. You know my affinity for Ravens and I what they mean for you as well. Glad this one took its leave! Whew! Excellent poem on, grief! 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 15:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem, Teddy. You know my affinity for Ravens and I what they mean for you as well. Glad this one took its leave! Whew! Excellent poem on, grief! 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 15:19
If Raven Was to Come Today
sorenbarrett said:
Ah I am glad that this is a brighter day and that you have sent the raven away. A poem of metaphoric emotion and well expressed my friend
May 26th, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Ah I am glad that this is a brighter day and that you have sent the raven away. A poem of metaphoric emotion and well expressed my friend
May 26th, 2025 04:07
Soul 2
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Such a fine poem that is filled with rippled effects. Like starting into water and seeing the glimmer of the first rays of the sun. In this piece there is much reflected, the feminine and the portal s to the soul, much enjoyed the read!
May 24th, 2025 09:50
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Such a fine poem that is filled with rippled effects. Like starting into water and seeing the glimmer of the first rays of the sun. In this piece there is much reflected, the feminine and the portal s to the soul, much enjoyed the read!
May 24th, 2025 09:50
Deathbed
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Simply beautiful the way you have composed this poem, the atmosphere of melancholia and the coming of the sunset you weaved into this piece!
May 24th, 2025 01:25
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Simply beautiful the way you have composed this poem, the atmosphere of melancholia and the coming of the sunset you weaved into this piece!
May 24th, 2025 01:25
Deathbed
Goldfinch60 said:
That love is there for you Teddy and always will ne.
Andy
May 24th, 2025 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
That love is there for you Teddy and always will ne.
Andy
May 24th, 2025 01:24
Deathbed
sorenbarrett said:
This poem of synchrony of appreciation of nature and love is nicely worded. It sees beauty when in love but not so much so when not. Very nicely done Teddy
May 23rd, 2025 17:12
sorenbarrett said:
This poem of synchrony of appreciation of nature and love is nicely worded. It sees beauty when in love but not so much so when not. Very nicely done Teddy
May 23rd, 2025 17:12
How to Get A Thousand Poet\'s to Think?
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. Love it.
May 21st, 2025 22:23
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. Love it.
May 21st, 2025 22:23
In The Name of a Rose
NafisaSB said:
being a rose, i feel she would - because she is the queen of flowers - but then the glow does add to its beauty for sure
May 21st, 2025 00:25
NafisaSB said:
being a rose, i feel she would - because she is the queen of flowers - but then the glow does add to its beauty for sure
May 21st, 2025 00:25
Feathered Wings
NafisaSB said:
this is so full of positivity even in the midst of the darkness - yes there is always light at the end of the tunnel, and your angel will always steer you through it
May 20th, 2025 01:41
NafisaSB said:
this is so full of positivity even in the midst of the darkness - yes there is always light at the end of the tunnel, and your angel will always steer you through it
May 20th, 2025 01:41
A Mystery of Mysteries
Soman Ragavan said:
You speak of “if we are all just a ship
passing through the night...”
We can recall the following :
“Ships that pass in the night and speak each other in passing,
Only a signal shown and a distant voice in the darkness;
So on the ocean of life, we pass and speak one another,
Only a look and a voice, then darkness again and a silence.”
--H. W. Longfellow (1817-1882)
So, on this ocean of life, we talk to each other briefly on sites like this one.
Soman Ragavan.
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May 19th, 2025 23:48
Soman Ragavan said:
You speak of “if we are all just a ship
passing through the night...”
We can recall the following :
“Ships that pass in the night and speak each other in passing,
Only a signal shown and a distant voice in the darkness;
So on the ocean of life, we pass and speak one another,
Only a look and a voice, then darkness again and a silence.”
--H. W. Longfellow (1817-1882)
So, on this ocean of life, we talk to each other briefly on sites like this one.
Soman Ragavan.
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May 19th, 2025 23:48
A Mystery of Mysteries
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Teddy but in life we do all find an answer and my life has had answers that has got me to a wonderful place in my life.
Andy
May 19th, 2025 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Teddy but in life we do all find an answer and my life has had answers that has got me to a wonderful place in my life.
Andy
May 19th, 2025 01:48
A Mystery of Mysteries
Thomas W Case said:
Truly brilliant. You are wise, sweet Teddy.
May 18th, 2025 09:02
Thomas W Case said:
Truly brilliant. You are wise, sweet Teddy.
May 18th, 2025 09:02
A Mystery of Mysteries
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Teddy this poem completes the circle with the last stanza feeding so well into the first. The mysteries of life for which each person has their own answer and for which there is no answer. Yes indeed we are our own foe. Loved this write that flowed so well and rhyme
May 18th, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Teddy this poem completes the circle with the last stanza feeding so well into the first. The mysteries of life for which each person has their own answer and for which there is no answer. Yes indeed we are our own foe. Loved this write that flowed so well and rhyme
May 18th, 2025 04:54
In The Name of a Rose
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, we have a wonderful flowering rose bush in our garden at the moment Teddy.
Andy
May 18th, 2025 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, we have a wonderful flowering rose bush in our garden at the moment Teddy.
Andy
May 18th, 2025 01:48
In The Name of a Rose
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful Senryu, Teddy. The beauty and allure of a rose in 17 syllables and a title...working well as a metaphor for a person. Excellent job, my friend! 🌹👏
May 17th, 2025 05:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful Senryu, Teddy. The beauty and allure of a rose in 17 syllables and a title...working well as a metaphor for a person. Excellent job, my friend! 🌹👏
May 17th, 2025 05:53
Preservation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful, Teddy. Spot on. Wonderful poetic reflection. 🌹👏
May 17th, 2025 05:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful, Teddy. Spot on. Wonderful poetic reflection. 🌹👏
May 17th, 2025 05:52
In The Name of a Rose
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy on first read and looking at the picture I took this to be a flower but then upon thinking about the word glow and seeing the note senryu emotion i thought no this is the name of a person. Clever use of ambiguity to create a dual image. Very nicely done my friend
May 17th, 2025 03:38
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy on first read and looking at the picture I took this to be a flower but then upon thinking about the word glow and seeing the note senryu emotion i thought no this is the name of a person. Clever use of ambiguity to create a dual image. Very nicely done my friend
May 17th, 2025 03:38
Preservation
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Teddy, life is so valuable to us all, live it to the full.
Andy
May 16th, 2025 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Teddy, life is so valuable to us all, live it to the full.
Andy
May 16th, 2025 01:51
Preservation
sorenbarrett said:
I remember as a child looking at my grandfather who was retiring and 65 and thinking how old he looked. Today I am nearly a decade older than he was then and I think what do my grand children think. A pensive write that gives one pause. Well done friend
May 15th, 2025 05:25
sorenbarrett said:
I remember as a child looking at my grandfather who was retiring and 65 and thinking how old he looked. Today I am nearly a decade older than he was then and I think what do my grand children think. A pensive write that gives one pause. Well done friend
May 15th, 2025 05:25
A Grand Photo of Matrimony
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful imagery. You bring this to life.
May 14th, 2025 17:01
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful imagery. You bring this to life.
May 14th, 2025 17:01
Feathered Wings
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great metaphor and a lovely poem that gives hope, my friend. Well done, Teddy. Another fave. 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 10:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great metaphor and a lovely poem that gives hope, my friend. Well done, Teddy. Another fave. 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 10:47
Feathered Wings
Goldfinch60 said:
Your angel will always be there for you Teddy.
Andy
May 14th, 2025 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Your angel will always be there for you Teddy.
Andy
May 14th, 2025 01:24
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