Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Bright Spark
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Teddy, taking that leap into the unknown can be joyous. I sincerely hope that you life is wonderful.
Andy
May 28th, 2026 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Teddy, taking that leap into the unknown can be joyous. I sincerely hope that you life is wonderful.
Andy
May 28th, 2026 01:29
Bright Spark
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this feels deeply freeing and quietly triumphant. The poem carries that difficult but necessary moment where someone finally chooses themselves over the version of themselves others were shaping. There’s courage and relief woven together beautifully here, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 22:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this feels deeply freeing and quietly triumphant. The poem carries that difficult but necessary moment where someone finally chooses themselves over the version of themselves others were shaping. There’s courage and relief woven together beautifully here, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 22:04
Bright Spark
Syd said:
Hi Shirley, you have to put yourself first in these situations. Onwards and upwards. All the best in your new job, I hope everything works out OK. I think the woman who has been bullying you has gotten off lightly though. I\'m sure she\'ll get her comeuppance eventually.
- Syd xo
May 27th, 2026 16:18
Syd said:
Hi Shirley, you have to put yourself first in these situations. Onwards and upwards. All the best in your new job, I hope everything works out OK. I think the woman who has been bullying you has gotten off lightly though. I\'m sure she\'ll get her comeuppance eventually.
- Syd xo
May 27th, 2026 16:18
Bright Spark
sorenbarrett said:
The unknown holds many surprises as well as expectations and this is a good write about looking at it from the positive side
May 27th, 2026 13:55
sorenbarrett said:
The unknown holds many surprises as well as expectations and this is a good write about looking at it from the positive side
May 27th, 2026 13:55
Blue Skies and Thunderstorms
NafisaSB said:
i can well visualize you walking this beautiful and soul satisfying path - keep going on...
May 27th, 2026 00:57
NafisaSB said:
i can well visualize you walking this beautiful and soul satisfying path - keep going on...
May 27th, 2026 00:57
First Class Ticket
Goldfinch60 said:
But not yet Teddy, you have too much to bring to us.
Andy
May 26th, 2026 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
But not yet Teddy, you have too much to bring to us.
Andy
May 26th, 2026 01:48
First Class Ticket
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy…wow, this really moved me, my friend. There’s such a strange warmth to it despite the subject matter…death not as terror, but as reunion, memory, ritual, and final peace. The quiet acceptance throughout feels deeply human. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 16:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy…wow, this really moved me, my friend. There’s such a strange warmth to it despite the subject matter…death not as terror, but as reunion, memory, ritual, and final peace. The quiet acceptance throughout feels deeply human. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 16:14
First Class Ticket
sorenbarrett said:
Good one Teddy I think I would let them in as well. I let in the living why discriminate? A good read my friend
May 25th, 2026 11:29
sorenbarrett said:
Good one Teddy I think I would let them in as well. I let in the living why discriminate? A good read my friend
May 25th, 2026 11:29
Dreams End
Goldfinch60 said:
The dreams of light will be with you soon Teddy.
Andy
May 25th, 2026 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
The dreams of light will be with you soon Teddy.
Andy
May 25th, 2026 01:47
Dreams End
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy…this really hit me hard. The simplicity of it makes the ache feel even more immediate…like a thought whispered to yourself in the middle of the night when there’s nowhere left to hide from it. “a cellar so dark / deep within my heart” lingers heavily. Powerful part of your Raven collection, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 13:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy…this really hit me hard. The simplicity of it makes the ache feel even more immediate…like a thought whispered to yourself in the middle of the night when there’s nowhere left to hide from it. “a cellar so dark / deep within my heart” lingers heavily. Powerful part of your Raven collection, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 13:32
Dreams End
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams so often imaged as something to look forward to, a hope, wish, desire. But here they are dark and miserable more of a nightmare. The are something to be dreaded and feared. A sad composition of what is and felt will never change. The poem is heavy and restless a burden to be carried. Well written my friend.
May 24th, 2026 12:35
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams so often imaged as something to look forward to, a hope, wish, desire. But here they are dark and miserable more of a nightmare. The are something to be dreaded and feared. A sad composition of what is and felt will never change. The poem is heavy and restless a burden to be carried. Well written my friend.
May 24th, 2026 12:35
Blue Skies and Thunderstorms
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this hit me in a deeply human way. The honesty in recognizing yourself changed by storms, yet still choosing to stand and move forward, feels incredibly grounded and real. There’s strength in this without it needing to shout. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 20th, 2026 12:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this hit me in a deeply human way. The honesty in recognizing yourself changed by storms, yet still choosing to stand and move forward, feels incredibly grounded and real. There’s strength in this without it needing to shout. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 20th, 2026 12:16
Blue Skies and Thunderstorms
Paul Bell said:
Blue skies, I keep hearing about them, now thunderstorms, they just wait for me leaving the house.
We all must tread our path, and if we meet on that path I\'ll give you my rainmac in return for your sunshine.
May 20th, 2026 04:28
Paul Bell said:
Blue skies, I keep hearing about them, now thunderstorms, they just wait for me leaving the house.
We all must tread our path, and if we meet on that path I\'ll give you my rainmac in return for your sunshine.
May 20th, 2026 04:28
Blue Skies and Thunderstorms
sorenbarrett said:
And so it may Teddy a beautiful reflection and thought that makes true the old parental advice of choose your friends wisely. Loved it my friend
May 20th, 2026 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
And so it may Teddy a beautiful reflection and thought that makes true the old parental advice of choose your friends wisely. Loved it my friend
May 20th, 2026 03:56
Blue Skies and Thunderstorms
Goldfinch60 said:
We all find the right paths to walk Teddy and we will get to that wonderful place where we will meet.
Andy
May 20th, 2026 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
We all find the right paths to walk Teddy and we will get to that wonderful place where we will meet.
Andy
May 20th, 2026 01:53
Fuel for the Fire
FrasMac said:
it must be haiku season! I like this, if debateable, still a worthy observation and nicely expressed.
May 13th, 2026 11:45
FrasMac said:
it must be haiku season! I like this, if debateable, still a worthy observation and nicely expressed.
May 13th, 2026 11:45
An Ode To Spring
FrasMac said:
bright, even without the illustration. just the way haiku should be.
May 13th, 2026 11:42
FrasMac said:
bright, even without the illustration. just the way haiku should be.
May 13th, 2026 11:42
The Path
Thomas W Case said:
Sweet Teddy, this Feels like a fight through weather and doubt—raw, stubborn, and refusing to go quietly into the dark.
There’s grit in the climb back to light, like someone dragging themselves forward and calling it victory because it had to be.
May 12th, 2026 08:36
Thomas W Case said:
Sweet Teddy, this Feels like a fight through weather and doubt—raw, stubborn, and refusing to go quietly into the dark.
There’s grit in the climb back to light, like someone dragging themselves forward and calling it victory because it had to be.
May 12th, 2026 08:36
Dreams in Hand
Thomas W Case said:
Feels like a quiet yearning to dissolve into something beautiful and lose the weight of being human.
There’s a soft ache in it, like wanting not just to play the music—but to become it.
May 10th, 2026 07:33
Thomas W Case said:
Feels like a quiet yearning to dissolve into something beautiful and lose the weight of being human.
There’s a soft ache in it, like wanting not just to play the music—but to become it.
May 10th, 2026 07:33
Dreams in Hand
Goldfinch60 said:
So be it Teddy, may you play the piano with wonder.
Andy
https://youtu.be/EvNsPyp5O2I?si=trEQpd41ajmnDcFm
May 10th, 2026 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
So be it Teddy, may you play the piano with wonder.
Andy
https://youtu.be/EvNsPyp5O2I?si=trEQpd41ajmnDcFm
May 10th, 2026 01:59
Dreams in Hand
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful line Teddy (hands melted inside the silk of the melody itself) most poetic
May 9th, 2026 18:42
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful line Teddy (hands melted inside the silk of the melody itself) most poetic
May 9th, 2026 18:42
Dreams in Hand
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this is delicate and deeply evocative work. The poem captures not only a love of music, but a longing for total immersion within it…to dissolve into melody itself. The “silk of the melody” image especially gives the piece such softness and emotional elegance. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 16:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Teddy, this is delicate and deeply evocative work. The poem captures not only a love of music, but a longing for total immersion within it…to dissolve into melody itself. The “silk of the melody” image especially gives the piece such softness and emotional elegance. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 16:04
The Path
Goldfinch60 said:
That light will always be there for you Teddy, as it is for me.
Andy
May 9th, 2026 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
That light will always be there for you Teddy, as it is for me.
Andy
May 9th, 2026 01:54
The Path
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this really moved me. There’s such hard-won hope in these lines...not the easy kind, but the kind that fights its way back through storm after storm. And my God...that painting makes me want to walk that path immediately...with lots of water and a sunbrella for the less-than-hospitable sun! The warmth and openness of it feels like the poem itself comes to life. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 8th, 2026 15:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this really moved me. There’s such hard-won hope in these lines...not the easy kind, but the kind that fights its way back through storm after storm. And my God...that painting makes me want to walk that path immediately...with lots of water and a sunbrella for the less-than-hospitable sun! The warmth and openness of it feels like the poem itself comes to life. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 8th, 2026 15:59
The Path
Paul Bell said:
Through the darkness I\'ve found the light.
Some journeys you must take to fully understand life.
May 8th, 2026 10:41
Paul Bell said:
Through the darkness I\'ve found the light.
Some journeys you must take to fully understand life.
May 8th, 2026 10:41
The Path
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of finding oneself and one\'s way. There is a sense of brightness and hope in this
May 8th, 2026 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of finding oneself and one\'s way. There is a sense of brightness and hope in this
May 8th, 2026 06:19
Gone With a Smile
Thomas W Case said:
This carries the sound of someone writing through doubt instead of waiting for it to leave—raw, persistent, and human in the way it refuses to stop reaching for the song underneath the noise.
There’s a quiet grit in it, like the struggle itself is already part of the music.
May 7th, 2026 07:49
Thomas W Case said:
This carries the sound of someone writing through doubt instead of waiting for it to leave—raw, persistent, and human in the way it refuses to stop reaching for the song underneath the noise.
There’s a quiet grit in it, like the struggle itself is already part of the music.
May 7th, 2026 07:49
Gone With a Smile
Goldfinch60 said:
But you won\'t be going yet Teddy, your words are too good to be without.
Andy
May 7th, 2026 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
But you won\'t be going yet Teddy, your words are too good to be without.
Andy
May 7th, 2026 01:42
Gone With a Smile
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this carries real heart from beginning to end. I especially loved how the poem moves through frustration, persistence, self-doubt, and finally toward acceptance without ever losing its sincerity. And that repeated ending...“with a smile”...is filled with a deeply human tenderness. Powerful lyrics, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 6th, 2026 07:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this carries real heart from beginning to end. I especially loved how the poem moves through frustration, persistence, self-doubt, and finally toward acceptance without ever losing its sincerity. And that repeated ending...“with a smile”...is filled with a deeply human tenderness. Powerful lyrics, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 6th, 2026 07:58
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