Comments received on poems by Qurrathul Ain



THE POEM
2781 said:

\"My heart is inditing a good matter: I speak of the things which I have made touching the king: my tongue is the pen of a ready writer.\"

May 9th, 2024 09:21

YOUTH
Bella Shepard said:

This poem is so beautifully phrased dear friend. The metaphor of flowers is priceless. I am of advanced years, and I embrace each lovely word. Thank you for this gem!

April 19th, 2024 06:17

HOPE
Bella Shepard said:

This is a beautiful thought to hold onto, all through my day and every day. Thank you!

April 19th, 2024 06:08

HOW FAR?
NafisaSB said:

so true - we try to please others, and ignore our own self in the process. it\'s good you have realized your worth - and that it\'s not worth living for others.
well done

March 22nd, 2024 01:19

ROSES
Bella Shepard said:

The rose is my favorite as well, so for me this is a very special poem. You caress them so gently with such beautiful imagery. How fortunate that you have them right outside your door.

March 18th, 2024 14:30

HOW FAR?
Bella Shepard said:

Self realization is an amazing thing. When you can allow the peripheral to melt away, and stand alone, you meet a person who has always been there, just waiting to be free. You have phrased this so well my friend, and I can relate.

March 18th, 2024 14:25

CHANGES
Meera Mere said:

\"Because if I think,

Then I\'ll realize all the things that I\'m not happy about,

And that won\'t be easy to digest.\" I can\'t believe how much I related to this poem. You are not alone. You expressed it all so beautifully.

February 29th, 2024 01:39

CHANGES
peto said:

Emotional and heartfelt
I think we all try to build a protective barrier
Unfortunately it can isolate us
Reminds me of pink floyd\'s \"the wall \"
If you get time
Watch the film or listen to the album
It\'s all about tearing it down
Enjoyed reading

February 28th, 2024 20:12

CHANGES
Bella Shepard said:

Perhaps \"sweet delusional dreams\" are a respite from reality, when needed most. I can certainly feel the emotion, the anxiety you express so well in this poem, and you are not alone, for in this day and age it is all too real. Such a powerul write my friend!

February 28th, 2024 16:27

WHERE ARE YOU?
Teddy.15 said:

Such a beautiful sad poem, about the great search, I believe this soulmate will arrive sooner or later πŸ’—

February 8th, 2024 04:30

WHERE ARE YOU?
Nubianpoet said:

Enjoyed the readπŸ’πŸ˜‰

February 7th, 2024 01:37

WHERE ARE YOU?
Bella Shepard said:

The sense of longing is so palpable in this poem, in your eloquently chosen words. And as you search for a pearl in the abyssmal, the last line speaks of hope that lives within. Beautifully penned dear poet!

January 22nd, 2024 11:36

NO MORE
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

January 8th, 2024 07:37