Comments received on poems by Qurrathul Ain
NIGHT SKY
Dan Williams said:
I love the idea of falling into the sky. Nice work.
July 28th, 2024 22:37
Dan Williams said:
I love the idea of falling into the sky. Nice work.
July 28th, 2024 22:37
NIGHT SKY
sorenbarrett said:
Well painted in words this piece poses a question that provokes a bit of thought. Enjoyed it
July 27th, 2024 20:05
sorenbarrett said:
Well painted in words this piece poses a question that provokes a bit of thought. Enjoyed it
July 27th, 2024 20:05
NIGHT SKY
Cassie58 said:
You paint beautifully with words. The imagery is wonderful in this poem. Great work dear poet.
July 27th, 2024 13:44
Cassie58 said:
You paint beautifully with words. The imagery is wonderful in this poem. Great work dear poet.
July 27th, 2024 13:44
NIGHT SKY
Thoughtless said:
The stunning difference between subjective and objective reality. And between immersion and emergence.
July 27th, 2024 12:59
Thoughtless said:
The stunning difference between subjective and objective reality. And between immersion and emergence.
July 27th, 2024 12:59
DIAMOND
sorenbarrett said:
A gem of a poem. It sparkles and shines as a metaphor. Beautifully mined from the heart.
July 26th, 2024 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
A gem of a poem. It sparkles and shines as a metaphor. Beautifully mined from the heart.
July 26th, 2024 05:35
ALL MY LIFE
sorenbarrett said:
Here\'s to you finding it and keeping it. Good write.
July 25th, 2024 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
Here\'s to you finding it and keeping it. Good write.
July 25th, 2024 05:40
WORRIES
Bella Shepard said:
A wonderfully cathartic write my friend. Yoi believe you are the only ones with these worries, so strong are they, but once you let it all out, you find you are not alone. A very good write!
July 23rd, 2024 12:45
Bella Shepard said:
A wonderfully cathartic write my friend. Yoi believe you are the only ones with these worries, so strong are they, but once you let it all out, you find you are not alone. A very good write!
July 23rd, 2024 12:45
SHE WISHED
Bella Shepard said:
I suppose we must have the sways of emotion in our lives. Beautifully written!
July 21st, 2024 15:17
Bella Shepard said:
I suppose we must have the sways of emotion in our lives. Beautifully written!
July 21st, 2024 15:17
THE APPLE TREE
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful parable sad but true and in fact too true. Here the pairing of humility with arrogance, might and weakness, greed and acceptance, as well as a dishonest need to appear what one is not with honesty of being what one is are all magnificently blended in this soup for any coinsure
July 21st, 2024 06:51
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful parable sad but true and in fact too true. Here the pairing of humility with arrogance, might and weakness, greed and acceptance, as well as a dishonest need to appear what one is not with honesty of being what one is are all magnificently blended in this soup for any coinsure
July 21st, 2024 06:51
MIDNIGHT DARKNESS
sorenbarrett said:
Very poetic imagery here with a nice tinge of rhyme mixed it. Lovely
July 20th, 2024 11:12
sorenbarrett said:
Very poetic imagery here with a nice tinge of rhyme mixed it. Lovely
July 20th, 2024 11:12
MIDNIGHT DARKNESS
Cassie58 said:
How welcome and how spiritually uplifting are those gems of light when all else is dark. Beautifully penned dear poet.
July 20th, 2024 04:12
Cassie58 said:
How welcome and how spiritually uplifting are those gems of light when all else is dark. Beautifully penned dear poet.
July 20th, 2024 04:12
UNSAID
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the analogies and the varying images were well done. A poem far deeper than its surface look.
July 19th, 2024 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the analogies and the varying images were well done. A poem far deeper than its surface look.
July 19th, 2024 05:35
YOUR SMILE
RSM0812 said:
I don\'t think it makes you unreal. It just proves that not enough people smile. People train themselves to hide their emotions and unfortunately in societies today a smile is seen by too many people as a weakness or something. I like your poem bc like a picture a smile is worth a thousand words.
July 15th, 2024 08:50
RSM0812 said:
I don\'t think it makes you unreal. It just proves that not enough people smile. People train themselves to hide their emotions and unfortunately in societies today a smile is seen by too many people as a weakness or something. I like your poem bc like a picture a smile is worth a thousand words.
July 15th, 2024 08:50
THE APPLE TREE
Neville said:
As far as I am concerned, you appear to have more than adequately achieved your objective .. Neville
July 14th, 2024 16:16
Neville said:
As far as I am concerned, you appear to have more than adequately achieved your objective .. Neville
July 14th, 2024 16:16
THE APPLE TREE
Bella Shepard said:
The farmers know the true value of their labor, the industrialists have no concept of what it takes to bring forth the fruit, to them it is simply a commodity to be sold and profited by. You capture in verse the diametrically opposed motives of those who labor and those who profit by it. Kudos my friend, well done!
July 14th, 2024 10:00
Bella Shepard said:
The farmers know the true value of their labor, the industrialists have no concept of what it takes to bring forth the fruit, to them it is simply a commodity to be sold and profited by. You capture in verse the diametrically opposed motives of those who labor and those who profit by it. Kudos my friend, well done!
July 14th, 2024 10:00
MISGUIDING ASSUMPTIONS
Teddy.15 said:
How very beautiful, I guess we are just where we are always supposed to be that\'s just what I believe. 🌹
July 12th, 2024 04:30
Teddy.15 said:
How very beautiful, I guess we are just where we are always supposed to be that\'s just what I believe. 🌹
July 12th, 2024 04:30
MISGUIDING ASSUMPTIONS
Neville said:
what a most wonderful thing is our imagination .. but the games and the tricks it does play can make or break us in but a micro moment .. enjoyed muchly Qurra Ain .. Neville
July 10th, 2024 09:23
Neville said:
what a most wonderful thing is our imagination .. but the games and the tricks it does play can make or break us in but a micro moment .. enjoyed muchly Qurra Ain .. Neville
July 10th, 2024 09:23
TWENTY-ONE
Thad Wilk said:
Lovely,
and refreshing
Strong feelings
and thoughts indeed!
Skillfully expressed
and my pleasure
to read!
Best wishes 🌹 Thad
July 1st, 2024 14:59
Thad Wilk said:
Lovely,
and refreshing
Strong feelings
and thoughts indeed!
Skillfully expressed
and my pleasure
to read!
Best wishes 🌹 Thad
July 1st, 2024 14:59
RISE AND FALL
Cassie58 said:
The highs and lows of life. We have to learn to deal with whatever comes and that isn’t always easy. Beautiful expression here dear poet.
June 30th, 2024 19:25
Cassie58 said:
The highs and lows of life. We have to learn to deal with whatever comes and that isn’t always easy. Beautiful expression here dear poet.
June 30th, 2024 19:25
RISE AND FALL
peto said:
Also when we fall we can rise and soar again
Gotta try to learn to enjoy those moments of bliss
The ups and downs are what it\'s all about
After all a straight line in hospital and we are dead
Enjoy the moment as I did when reading
June 30th, 2024 16:35
peto said:
Also when we fall we can rise and soar again
Gotta try to learn to enjoy those moments of bliss
The ups and downs are what it\'s all about
After all a straight line in hospital and we are dead
Enjoy the moment as I did when reading
June 30th, 2024 16:35
PAST
Cassie58 said:
Beautifully visual. Once the water has flowed under the river’s bridge it won’t return. Facing backwards is an interesting way of looking at life. I enjoyed your words dear poet. 🌹
June 29th, 2024 05:54
Cassie58 said:
Beautifully visual. Once the water has flowed under the river’s bridge it won’t return. Facing backwards is an interesting way of looking at life. I enjoyed your words dear poet. 🌹
June 29th, 2024 05:54
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