Comments received on poems by Pop64
My Hope Still Floats II
Teddy.15 said:
Your first stanza is the one I have read.many times, means so much to someone in love. A beautiful poem throughout, security of love and someone who is beside you is rare these days. ❤️ we are all.our own boat yet sometimes it\'s important to know we are not alone. Thank you.
September 25th, 2023 10:55
Teddy.15 said:
Your first stanza is the one I have read.many times, means so much to someone in love. A beautiful poem throughout, security of love and someone who is beside you is rare these days. ❤️ we are all.our own boat yet sometimes it\'s important to know we are not alone. Thank you.
September 25th, 2023 10:55
My Hope Still Floats
Goldfinch60 said:
It will happen that one day you will be together again Michael.
Andy
September 24th, 2023 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
It will happen that one day you will be together again Michael.
Andy
September 24th, 2023 00:35
I Toast to Love
Teddy.15 said:
And all in a champagne glass, so romantic sir. Cheers to love 💖
September 22nd, 2023 12:13
Teddy.15 said:
And all in a champagne glass, so romantic sir. Cheers to love 💖
September 22nd, 2023 12:13
I Toast to Love
Neville said:
I have always been a glass half full kinda guy .. those that think or feel significantly otherwise are my bread and butter .. I liked this sir .. very original and two art forms in one .. cheers, Neville 🍷
September 22nd, 2023 09:40
Neville said:
I have always been a glass half full kinda guy .. those that think or feel significantly otherwise are my bread and butter .. I liked this sir .. very original and two art forms in one .. cheers, Neville 🍷
September 22nd, 2023 09:40
I Toast to Love
Lorenz said:
Irish ? serious things have not yet begun for the blue chickens !
September 22nd, 2023 08:53
Lorenz said:
Irish ? serious things have not yet begun for the blue chickens !
September 22nd, 2023 08:53
I Toast to Love
LIZ said:
Seek, share, toast! LOVE! Michael, as simple as this may seem, there is depth; and so far, it\'s my favorite from you! Cheers!!
September 22nd, 2023 08:31
LIZ said:
Seek, share, toast! LOVE! Michael, as simple as this may seem, there is depth; and so far, it\'s my favorite from you! Cheers!!
September 22nd, 2023 08:31
Nothing to Write About
Goldfinch60 said:
If this is what you write about when you have nothing to say Michael I cannot wait to read your words when you have something to say.
Andy
September 22nd, 2023 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
If this is what you write about when you have nothing to say Michael I cannot wait to read your words when you have something to say.
Andy
September 22nd, 2023 01:01
Nothing to Write About
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Michael Hzugman for bothering to respond when I didn\'t even empathise.....LOL
September 21st, 2023 17:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Michael Hzugman for bothering to respond when I didn\'t even empathise.....LOL
September 21st, 2023 17:39
Nothing to Write About
LIZ said:
Well....if I had writer\'s block, this would certainly open up the floodgates of poetry for me!! Very nice!!!
September 21st, 2023 15:27
LIZ said:
Well....if I had writer\'s block, this would certainly open up the floodgates of poetry for me!! Very nice!!!
September 21st, 2023 15:27
Nothing to Write About
Teddy.15 said:
Maybe you concentrated too much on the perfect rhyme, she says with a frown lol 🤣 wonderful poem I\'m not going to believe for.one second that you may ever suffer writer\'s block. 💖
September 21st, 2023 11:25
Teddy.15 said:
Maybe you concentrated too much on the perfect rhyme, she says with a frown lol 🤣 wonderful poem I\'m not going to believe for.one second that you may ever suffer writer\'s block. 💖
September 21st, 2023 11:25
Nothing to Write About
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t even have to empathise - just am in that state most of the time.
Oh so well writ here.
September 21st, 2023 09:08
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t even have to empathise - just am in that state most of the time.
Oh so well writ here.
September 21st, 2023 09:08
The Sea is a Mistress
Blair Stella Flynn said:
wow, I\'M SPEECHLESS. this is a very beautifully well written poem. the metaphors, word choices, rhyming.. wonderful 🥺
September 21st, 2023 07:38
Blair Stella Flynn said:
wow, I\'M SPEECHLESS. this is a very beautifully well written poem. the metaphors, word choices, rhyming.. wonderful 🥺
September 21st, 2023 07:38
Nothing to Write About
orchidee said:
Ohh, just write any old rubbish, like I do in my \'humour\' genre poems! lol.
September 21st, 2023 06:30
orchidee said:
Ohh, just write any old rubbish, like I do in my \'humour\' genre poems! lol.
September 21st, 2023 06:30
Yesterday Came
Beth K said:
Very clever, Michael and so true! I’ll be sure to listen for that knock tomorrow 😊
Well written!
~Beth
September 20th, 2023 19:52
Beth K said:
Very clever, Michael and so true! I’ll be sure to listen for that knock tomorrow 😊
Well written!
~Beth
September 20th, 2023 19:52
Yesterday Came
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and a good message. Being open to opportunity and making the best of it. A great metaphor and very positive.
September 20th, 2023 12:20
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and a good message. Being open to opportunity and making the best of it. A great metaphor and very positive.
September 20th, 2023 12:20
Seasonal Adaptation
hzugman said:
Very nicely put, Pop. Love the transcend at the end (which, of course, is really not the end).
September 19th, 2023 14:31
hzugman said:
Very nicely put, Pop. Love the transcend at the end (which, of course, is really not the end).
September 19th, 2023 14:31
Seasonal Adaptation
Teddy.15 said:
Ah such a beautiful poem with two meanings one of seasons of nature and the other seasons of one\'s life. 💖
September 19th, 2023 11:22
Teddy.15 said:
Ah such a beautiful poem with two meanings one of seasons of nature and the other seasons of one\'s life. 💖
September 19th, 2023 11:22
The Sea is a Mistress
Beth K said:
Brilliantly written, Michael! Thank you for sharing your poetic talent with others!
~Beth
September 18th, 2023 18:51
Beth K said:
Brilliantly written, Michael! Thank you for sharing your poetic talent with others!
~Beth
September 18th, 2023 18:51
The Sea is a Mistress
Bella Shepard said:
A sea tale as old as time, told in such vivid verse. Rich in imagery, I can see the colors and feel the salty spray. I think I can even hear a concertina being played in the background. A beautiful poem, an outstanding piece of literature!
September 18th, 2023 13:48
Bella Shepard said:
A sea tale as old as time, told in such vivid verse. Rich in imagery, I can see the colors and feel the salty spray. I think I can even hear a concertina being played in the background. A beautiful poem, an outstanding piece of literature!
September 18th, 2023 13:48
The Sea is a Mistress
Teddy.15 said:
Anyone who chooses to sail the seas must find it hard to be grounded. A.stunnung poem 💖 a beautiful rhythm in this.
September 18th, 2023 11:33
Teddy.15 said:
Anyone who chooses to sail the seas must find it hard to be grounded. A.stunnung poem 💖 a beautiful rhythm in this.
September 18th, 2023 11:33
The Sea is a Mistress
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem litterally but in metaphor even grander. It speaks of life\'s adversity and hope that is rewarded but not to the extent of giving up the struggle of going on even after victory. So well penned.
September 18th, 2023 06:51
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem litterally but in metaphor even grander. It speaks of life\'s adversity and hope that is rewarded but not to the extent of giving up the struggle of going on even after victory. So well penned.
September 18th, 2023 06:51
The Whys of Jack and Jill
Teddy.15 said:
Ere I thought they were siblings?
Humpty Dumpty told me... lol 🤣 very funny and you really had me going. 💖
September 15th, 2023 11:13
Teddy.15 said:
Ere I thought they were siblings?
Humpty Dumpty told me... lol 🤣 very funny and you really had me going. 💖
September 15th, 2023 11:13
The Whys of Jack and Jill
peto said:
Jack and jill
Went up the hill
To fetch a pail of water
Jill forgot
To take the pill
And now they\'ve got a daughter
Forgive me pop
Couldn\'t resist
Love your slant on this
September 15th, 2023 10:19
peto said:
Jack and jill
Went up the hill
To fetch a pail of water
Jill forgot
To take the pill
And now they\'ve got a daughter
Forgive me pop
Couldn\'t resist
Love your slant on this
September 15th, 2023 10:19
The Whys of Jack and Jill
BlessedbyGod said:
Great way to think about Jack and Jill
I love it
September 15th, 2023 08:51
BlessedbyGod said:
Great way to think about Jack and Jill
I love it
September 15th, 2023 08:51
Lover\'s Plea (abecedarian format)
BlessedbyGod said:
This is so beautiful Michael!
A true declaration of love
September 14th, 2023 18:53
BlessedbyGod said:
This is so beautiful Michael!
A true declaration of love
September 14th, 2023 18:53
Lover\'s Plea (abecedarian format)
Bella Shepard said:
I googled Abecedarian, and what a treasure I found. This is an incredible form you\'ve chosen to weave a spectacular love poem. Each line falls perfectly into place alphabetically, and with such passion. This was truly a labor of love. I just adored it!
September 14th, 2023 14:14
Bella Shepard said:
I googled Abecedarian, and what a treasure I found. This is an incredible form you\'ve chosen to weave a spectacular love poem. Each line falls perfectly into place alphabetically, and with such passion. This was truly a labor of love. I just adored it!
September 14th, 2023 14:14
Lover\'s Plea (abecedarian format)
LIZ said:
Oh wow!! This is so beautiful! I enjoy love letters. Yes, sad....but so romantic. \"Xpressing my love keeps me alive\"-my favorite line!!
September 14th, 2023 11:29
LIZ said:
Oh wow!! This is so beautiful! I enjoy love letters. Yes, sad....but so romantic. \"Xpressing my love keeps me alive\"-my favorite line!!
September 14th, 2023 11:29
Lover\'s Plea (abecedarian format)
Teddy.15 said:
Wow Micheal you are on fire my friend. Absolutely beautiful.
Open yourself to wondrous possibilities
Permit then yourself, no pain to inflict
Quarantine your heart, protect it from sorrow
Realize please darling, love is so great
Surely, you’ll see that dreams of tomorrow
Tempt us today, to alter our fate
I just love this. May she know because if not it\'s a loss. 💖
September 14th, 2023 11:14
Teddy.15 said:
Wow Micheal you are on fire my friend. Absolutely beautiful.
Open yourself to wondrous possibilities
Permit then yourself, no pain to inflict
Quarantine your heart, protect it from sorrow
Realize please darling, love is so great
Surely, you’ll see that dreams of tomorrow
Tempt us today, to alter our fate
I just love this. May she know because if not it\'s a loss. 💖
September 14th, 2023 11:14
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