Comments received on poems by Pop64
Lover\'s Plea (abecedarian format)
LIZ said:
Oh wow!! This is so beautiful! I enjoy love letters. Yes, sad....but so romantic. \"Xpressing my love keeps me alive\"-my favorite line!!
September 14th, 2023 11:29
LIZ said:
Oh wow!! This is so beautiful! I enjoy love letters. Yes, sad....but so romantic. \"Xpressing my love keeps me alive\"-my favorite line!!
September 14th, 2023 11:29
Lover\'s Plea (abecedarian format)
Teddy.15 said:
Wow Micheal you are on fire my friend. Absolutely beautiful.
Open yourself to wondrous possibilities
Permit then yourself, no pain to inflict
Quarantine your heart, protect it from sorrow
Realize please darling, love is so great
Surely, you’ll see that dreams of tomorrow
Tempt us today, to alter our fate
I just love this. May she know because if not it\'s a loss. 💖
September 14th, 2023 11:14
Teddy.15 said:
Wow Micheal you are on fire my friend. Absolutely beautiful.
Open yourself to wondrous possibilities
Permit then yourself, no pain to inflict
Quarantine your heart, protect it from sorrow
Realize please darling, love is so great
Surely, you’ll see that dreams of tomorrow
Tempt us today, to alter our fate
I just love this. May she know because if not it\'s a loss. 💖
September 14th, 2023 11:14
Life\'s Circumference
Doggerel Dave said:
That was a fun write. NYC sounds like a dangerous place to be walking around in - My special invisible protector worked well during the fortnight I was there - picked one up at Grand Central station...😂
September 13th, 2023 18:25
Doggerel Dave said:
That was a fun write. NYC sounds like a dangerous place to be walking around in - My special invisible protector worked well during the fortnight I was there - picked one up at Grand Central station...😂
September 13th, 2023 18:25
Cursed Loneliness
Neville said:
this is so much more than what it say\'s on the tin .. or in this case, the title .. absolutely nothing to dislike .. in fact much to the contrary, there is so much to like .. the tale you told was told perfectly just perfect for the run up to All Hallows Eve or Halloween .. and also, the body of work was aesthetically pinned to the page .. loved the format and font too .. Bravo Michael .. Neville
September 13th, 2023 12:43
Neville said:
this is so much more than what it say\'s on the tin .. or in this case, the title .. absolutely nothing to dislike .. in fact much to the contrary, there is so much to like .. the tale you told was told perfectly just perfect for the run up to All Hallows Eve or Halloween .. and also, the body of work was aesthetically pinned to the page .. loved the format and font too .. Bravo Michael .. Neville
September 13th, 2023 12:43
Life\'s Circumference
Neville said:
I am almost tempted to type I don\'t believe in coincidence .. but that would be a lie .. funny thing is, I\'m a great believer in karma and fate ..
and for the record sir .. I very much enjoyed my visit here today ..
Neville
September 13th, 2023 12:35
Neville said:
I am almost tempted to type I don\'t believe in coincidence .. but that would be a lie .. funny thing is, I\'m a great believer in karma and fate ..
and for the record sir .. I very much enjoyed my visit here today ..
Neville
September 13th, 2023 12:35
Life\'s Circumference
Teddy.15 said:
Circumstance and mystery of life on a daily basis that we all take for granted an incredible write dear Michael, makes one think about so many thing a reflection I am always open to, your last stanza gave me goose bumps 💖
September 13th, 2023 11:34
Teddy.15 said:
Circumstance and mystery of life on a daily basis that we all take for granted an incredible write dear Michael, makes one think about so many thing a reflection I am always open to, your last stanza gave me goose bumps 💖
September 13th, 2023 11:34
Life\'s Circumference
hzugman said:
Wonderful poem and wonderful idea Pop.
September 13th, 2023 09:07
hzugman said:
Wonderful poem and wonderful idea Pop.
September 13th, 2023 09:07
Cursed Loneliness
Teddy.15 said:
May the loneliness lurk lol oh this is so dark delicious and very inspiring, your rhyming 💖
September 12th, 2023 10:39
Teddy.15 said:
May the loneliness lurk lol oh this is so dark delicious and very inspiring, your rhyming 💖
September 12th, 2023 10:39
Cursed Loneliness
LIZ said:
Loneliness can be seductive. In this case, you went all out! Technically, the night is our companion! But it can be a harsh one! This is right up my alley!! Loved it!!!!
September 12th, 2023 09:15
LIZ said:
Loneliness can be seductive. In this case, you went all out! Technically, the night is our companion! But it can be a harsh one! This is right up my alley!! Loved it!!!!
September 12th, 2023 09:15
Be One This Day (9-11 rememberance)
peto said:
This is such a heart wrenching read
Hopefully you find a little consolation in the justice you have done such a tragic event
The content speaks for itself
The rhyming and rhythm are phenomenal
A message well received
Can\'t really find the words so I\'ll leave it at thank you
September 11th, 2023 17:23
peto said:
This is such a heart wrenching read
Hopefully you find a little consolation in the justice you have done such a tragic event
The content speaks for itself
The rhyming and rhythm are phenomenal
A message well received
Can\'t really find the words so I\'ll leave it at thank you
September 11th, 2023 17:23
Be One This Day (9-11 rememberance)
Teddy.15 said:
Such a poetic sense here your first stanza is truly beautiful, and so the rest. I couldn\'t pretend to imagine what you went through on ground zero up close and personal, I can only say I am so glad you are here to tell your vision. Kudos dear Pop64. Absolutely not easy to write and as a reader not so easy to read. You made it home! 💖
September 11th, 2023 15:53
Teddy.15 said:
Such a poetic sense here your first stanza is truly beautiful, and so the rest. I couldn\'t pretend to imagine what you went through on ground zero up close and personal, I can only say I am so glad you are here to tell your vision. Kudos dear Pop64. Absolutely not easy to write and as a reader not so easy to read. You made it home! 💖
September 11th, 2023 15:53
Be One This Day (9-11 rememberance)
LIZ said:
Absolutely amazing! What a great tribute to a day we all remember! A tragedy! You made it out alive because you\'re meant to be here! And, our job now is to honor those who didn\'t make it!
September 11th, 2023 13:08
LIZ said:
Absolutely amazing! What a great tribute to a day we all remember! A tragedy! You made it out alive because you\'re meant to be here! And, our job now is to honor those who didn\'t make it!
September 11th, 2023 13:08
Be One This Day (9-11 rememberance)
Bella Shepard said:
Such a fitting and beautiful tribute to those who were taken most cruely that day. There is no rhyme or reason in a tragedy such as this, as to who does, or does not survive. So many circumstances put people in a certain place at a certain time. The old adage \"There but for the grace of God go I\" comes to mind. We are fortunate indeed, to have you wonderful verse here dear friend.
September 11th, 2023 12:01
Bella Shepard said:
Such a fitting and beautiful tribute to those who were taken most cruely that day. There is no rhyme or reason in a tragedy such as this, as to who does, or does not survive. So many circumstances put people in a certain place at a certain time. The old adage \"There but for the grace of God go I\" comes to mind. We are fortunate indeed, to have you wonderful verse here dear friend.
September 11th, 2023 12:01
Be One This Day (9-11 rememberance)
Lorenz said:
9/11. Forgotten Tuesday in the world\'s memory...
September 11th, 2023 08:47
Lorenz said:
9/11. Forgotten Tuesday in the world\'s memory...
September 11th, 2023 08:47
Be One This Day (9-11 rememberance)
Doggerel Dave said:
Tragic, terrifying. Innocent people die in war.
September 11th, 2023 07:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Tragic, terrifying. Innocent people die in war.
September 11th, 2023 07:52
Ode to the Poet
Bella Shepard said:
The perfect pen, the perfect poem, your love of this art form pure gold. You generously honor all those who write, and it is quite evident that it comes from the heart. Beautiful!
September 8th, 2023 14:20
Bella Shepard said:
The perfect pen, the perfect poem, your love of this art form pure gold. You generously honor all those who write, and it is quite evident that it comes from the heart. Beautiful!
September 8th, 2023 14:20
There, Within
Neville said:
I wanted to see where you are coming from .. and I was not disappointed
September 8th, 2023 14:02
Neville said:
I wanted to see where you are coming from .. and I was not disappointed
September 8th, 2023 14:02
Ode to the Poet
sorenbarrett said:
Well written, rhymed and with a great message.
September 8th, 2023 11:19
sorenbarrett said:
Well written, rhymed and with a great message.
September 8th, 2023 11:19
Ode to the Poet
MendedFences27 said:
To any and all poets here on MPS this is a great inspiration. It expresses how most of us would feel. It is well written, and I enjoyed the rhyme. - Phil A.
September 8th, 2023 10:59
MendedFences27 said:
To any and all poets here on MPS this is a great inspiration. It expresses how most of us would feel. It is well written, and I enjoyed the rhyme. - Phil A.
September 8th, 2023 10:59
Apology to Martha (all Beatles\' Song Titles)
Teddy.15 said:
Oh how wonderful the Beatles are deep within my heart 💖 I hope you have a poem called soundtrack to my life, that\'s such a cool title if not something to think about in the future.
September 8th, 2023 08:00
Teddy.15 said:
Oh how wonderful the Beatles are deep within my heart 💖 I hope you have a poem called soundtrack to my life, that\'s such a cool title if not something to think about in the future.
September 8th, 2023 08:00
Ode to the Poet
Teddy.15 said:
This is incredibly beautiful along with your perfect title, a beautiful ode indeed. 💖
September 8th, 2023 07:56
Teddy.15 said:
This is incredibly beautiful along with your perfect title, a beautiful ode indeed. 💖
September 8th, 2023 07:56
Love Will Be Thy Sword
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful Morality Tale you weave here dear friend; its rhyme and flow impeccable, its wording outstanding, always a masterful touch.
September 7th, 2023 14:04
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful Morality Tale you weave here dear friend; its rhyme and flow impeccable, its wording outstanding, always a masterful touch.
September 7th, 2023 14:04
Dying to Say
Bella Shepard said:
This is such a bittersweet balad of love. Exquisitely phrased, with a touch of filigree separating stanzas, it is not only great poetry but a work of art. Superb!
September 6th, 2023 13:31
Bella Shepard said:
This is such a bittersweet balad of love. Exquisitely phrased, with a touch of filigree separating stanzas, it is not only great poetry but a work of art. Superb!
September 6th, 2023 13:31
Dying to Say
LIZ said:
Oh my God! I feel like we\'re all in our feelings today! This is such a powerful love letter! I enjoyed it very much! And, to answer your question, yes, I have!
September 6th, 2023 07:14
LIZ said:
Oh my God! I feel like we\'re all in our feelings today! This is such a powerful love letter! I enjoyed it very much! And, to answer your question, yes, I have!
September 6th, 2023 07:14
Apology to Martha (all Beatles\' Song Titles)
Bella Shepard said:
You are a poet after my own heart. I was in late grade school and high school at the height of the Beatles explosion, and came under their spell. Had all the albums, saw \"Help\" 4 times in one sitting, back when they didn\'t kick you out after the first show. I had Beatle Boots, the cap, Carnaby St. fashions, the works. Even had a door length poster of Paul McCartney in my bedroom. Got to see them live at Busch Stadium in St. Louis, 1966, and the sound system was terrible. Now that I have confessed to being a Beatles junkie, I have to say this poem is a true gem. You\'ve captured everything in my favorite song titles. This is a stroke of genius. Thank you for this trip down memory lane, it was a blast!
September 5th, 2023 13:34
Bella Shepard said:
You are a poet after my own heart. I was in late grade school and high school at the height of the Beatles explosion, and came under their spell. Had all the albums, saw \"Help\" 4 times in one sitting, back when they didn\'t kick you out after the first show. I had Beatle Boots, the cap, Carnaby St. fashions, the works. Even had a door length poster of Paul McCartney in my bedroom. Got to see them live at Busch Stadium in St. Louis, 1966, and the sound system was terrible. Now that I have confessed to being a Beatles junkie, I have to say this poem is a true gem. You\'ve captured everything in my favorite song titles. This is a stroke of genius. Thank you for this trip down memory lane, it was a blast!
September 5th, 2023 13:34
Apology to Martha (all Beatles\' Song Titles)
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot about \'I Wanna Hold Your Gland\'?🤣
September 5th, 2023 08:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot about \'I Wanna Hold Your Gland\'?🤣
September 5th, 2023 08:28
Apology to Martha (all Beatles\' Song Titles)
LIZ said:
Oh my God! This is awesome!! But seriously, these titles are crazy!! My favorite part...\"here, there and everywhere! ✨️
September 5th, 2023 07:11
LIZ said:
Oh my God! This is awesome!! But seriously, these titles are crazy!! My favorite part...\"here, there and everywhere! ✨️
September 5th, 2023 07:11
The World Needs Poets
AuburnScribbler said:
This emphatic, cosmic boom like poetic mission statement, is masterfully penned, and I wholeheartedly agree with every word.
Let all poets, endeavour to paint more colours into life, in both to further our enjoyment and understanding of it.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 4th, 2023 11:36
AuburnScribbler said:
This emphatic, cosmic boom like poetic mission statement, is masterfully penned, and I wholeheartedly agree with every word.
Let all poets, endeavour to paint more colours into life, in both to further our enjoyment and understanding of it.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 4th, 2023 11:36
The Craven Raven
AuburnScribbler said:
A lovely two stanzas here Pop64, brilliantly written.
I really like how the comic tones stated in your lines, suggest that a \"mysterious strong swagger\" from the raven, could actually be a decided \"lonesome nervous freeze.\"
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 4th, 2023 11:30
AuburnScribbler said:
A lovely two stanzas here Pop64, brilliantly written.
I really like how the comic tones stated in your lines, suggest that a \"mysterious strong swagger\" from the raven, could actually be a decided \"lonesome nervous freeze.\"
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 4th, 2023 11:30
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