Comments received on poems by Pop64
Poet\'s Riches
Bobby O said:
Love the way you play with words formed as a piece of that mind? Or maybe paid for thought leaves poets PEACE of mind?
This works omnidirectional and I appreciate that
August 4th, 2023 07:29
Bobby O said:
Love the way you play with words formed as a piece of that mind? Or maybe paid for thought leaves poets PEACE of mind?
This works omnidirectional and I appreciate that
August 4th, 2023 07:29
Explosive
Parisab said:
First stanza sets the tone-I like that you let the emotions flow, but intentionally let your ‘mind to fantasy’ but Alas ‘thought turns to reality’!
August 3rd, 2023 08:08
Parisab said:
First stanza sets the tone-I like that you let the emotions flow, but intentionally let your ‘mind to fantasy’ but Alas ‘thought turns to reality’!
August 3rd, 2023 08:08
Explosive
LIZ said:
Oh my! A crave so strong!! \"I am enamored\"! Loved it! ❣️
August 3rd, 2023 07:43
LIZ said:
Oh my! A crave so strong!! \"I am enamored\"! Loved it! ❣️
August 3rd, 2023 07:43
How to Eat a Can of Worms
Bella Shepard said:
This poem was so cleverly written, just loved the fun of it. For myself, I think I would perfer sauted in butter with a little garlic. Mmmm!
August 2nd, 2023 15:35
Bella Shepard said:
This poem was so cleverly written, just loved the fun of it. For myself, I think I would perfer sauted in butter with a little garlic. Mmmm!
August 2nd, 2023 15:35
Self Pity
mvvenkataraman said:
A dolorous poem written superbly,
The rhymes are indeed remarkable,
May God be with the man to protect,
While living and also after his end!
August 1st, 2023 09:38
mvvenkataraman said:
A dolorous poem written superbly,
The rhymes are indeed remarkable,
May God be with the man to protect,
While living and also after his end!
August 1st, 2023 09:38
Self Pity
LIZ said:
Unsure, in disarray, in pain. And yet....we\'re still alive (walking dead)! What to do? Take it....one moment at a time! Beautiful reflection!
August 1st, 2023 08:44
LIZ said:
Unsure, in disarray, in pain. And yet....we\'re still alive (walking dead)! What to do? Take it....one moment at a time! Beautiful reflection!
August 1st, 2023 08:44
Let\'s Make This True
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve taken us on a romantic journey, where all that exists is the beauty and wonder of love. These endearing lines are so precious. Thank you for sharing dear poet!
July 31st, 2023 16:11
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve taken us on a romantic journey, where all that exists is the beauty and wonder of love. These endearing lines are so precious. Thank you for sharing dear poet!
July 31st, 2023 16:11
Question of Self
Bella Shepard said:
This is extraordinary dear poet. The flow, rhyme and cadence of each line is incredible, and the message so very profound. Remarkable insight , as well as masterfully crafted!
July 29th, 2023 14:48
Bella Shepard said:
This is extraordinary dear poet. The flow, rhyme and cadence of each line is incredible, and the message so very profound. Remarkable insight , as well as masterfully crafted!
July 29th, 2023 14:48
Question of Self
Bobby O said:
Kindly suggesting shows strength of demeanor. Not all possess that grace but even so , not all mannered people can write and convey imperatives gently as you certainly do. Your phrases dance large while the words within wiggle so they can claim separate and special status as they dwell
In the structure they build. t
July 29th, 2023 14:19
Bobby O said:
Kindly suggesting shows strength of demeanor. Not all possess that grace but even so , not all mannered people can write and convey imperatives gently as you certainly do. Your phrases dance large while the words within wiggle so they can claim separate and special status as they dwell
In the structure they build. t
July 29th, 2023 14:19
Question of Self
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A nicely expressed writing)) I especially like the mention of the sunshine
And the last lines
Build on the truth in that light
And just allow yourself
To be
A good poem
I think mirrors can be difficult to look into when struggling / not feeling so good
July 29th, 2023 12:01
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A nicely expressed writing)) I especially like the mention of the sunshine
And the last lines
Build on the truth in that light
And just allow yourself
To be
A good poem
I think mirrors can be difficult to look into when struggling / not feeling so good
July 29th, 2023 12:01
Giving In To Lunacy
Bella Shepard said:
I love the wonderful rhyming scheme of this poem as I read aloud. Each step, in it\'s transition into madness falls seamlessly into place. What a wonder is the mind, as you have so eloquently written.
July 28th, 2023 13:19
Bella Shepard said:
I love the wonderful rhyming scheme of this poem as I read aloud. Each step, in it\'s transition into madness falls seamlessly into place. What a wonder is the mind, as you have so eloquently written.
July 28th, 2023 13:19
Giving In To Lunacy
LIZ said:
Wow!!! Exquisite! Aren\'t we all being pulled to different directions? It can be overwhelming. Sometimes it\'s ok to tune it all out. But, at the end of the day, we must face the music!!! Fear and all, hoping for the best! Thank you for sharing!!
July 28th, 2023 07:56
LIZ said:
Wow!!! Exquisite! Aren\'t we all being pulled to different directions? It can be overwhelming. Sometimes it\'s ok to tune it all out. But, at the end of the day, we must face the music!!! Fear and all, hoping for the best! Thank you for sharing!!
July 28th, 2023 07:56
Silent Seduction
LIZ said:
Mmmm yes!! I felt it all!! This is so beautiful! Definitely sent me on a magical trip! This is how I look at poetry. I basically dissect every word, and FEEL them!! Thank you for that!
July 27th, 2023 09:58
LIZ said:
Mmmm yes!! I felt it all!! This is so beautiful! Definitely sent me on a magical trip! This is how I look at poetry. I basically dissect every word, and FEEL them!! Thank you for that!
July 27th, 2023 09:58
Silent Seduction
Jeffrey Weese said:
Pop64, \"Silent Seduction\" is an exquisite exploration of the transformative power of written words and their ability to stir deep, powerful emotions. The poem beautifully encapsulates how literature can transport readers to places they\'ve never been, turning fantasy into perceived reality. I admire the palpable, sensual tension you\'ve built throughout the piece, reflected in the reader\'s heart racing, breath quickening, and the undeniable quake that takes her to the \'apex of poet’s mountain.\' Your poem transcends the boundary between reader and text, highlighting the power of a well-crafted poem to evoke profound emotional responses. Thank you for sharing this stirring, evocative piece.
July 27th, 2023 09:56
Jeffrey Weese said:
Pop64, \"Silent Seduction\" is an exquisite exploration of the transformative power of written words and their ability to stir deep, powerful emotions. The poem beautifully encapsulates how literature can transport readers to places they\'ve never been, turning fantasy into perceived reality. I admire the palpable, sensual tension you\'ve built throughout the piece, reflected in the reader\'s heart racing, breath quickening, and the undeniable quake that takes her to the \'apex of poet’s mountain.\' Your poem transcends the boundary between reader and text, highlighting the power of a well-crafted poem to evoke profound emotional responses. Thank you for sharing this stirring, evocative piece.
July 27th, 2023 09:56
One Tree, Many Branches
Parisab said:
‘But yet, I am one tree with many branches’ great flow to your words and progression of the content. Perhaps, you may like my Summer Feast…
July 25th, 2023 22:44
Parisab said:
‘But yet, I am one tree with many branches’ great flow to your words and progression of the content. Perhaps, you may like my Summer Feast…
July 25th, 2023 22:44
I Remember Tomorrow
Bobby O said:
I remember tomorrow suggests fir all a path fir hope or fir distraction or fir a brief respite. And it’s always there and can always be a way to strength. Nice write good read
July 24th, 2023 17:52
Bobby O said:
I remember tomorrow suggests fir all a path fir hope or fir distraction or fir a brief respite. And it’s always there and can always be a way to strength. Nice write good read
July 24th, 2023 17:52
6:13 Crime Scene
Bobby O said:
May the guilty pay. Dude, I read this twice and imagined that type of loss easily as your prose delivered me to the scene.
Nice write good read.
July 24th, 2023 17:49
Bobby O said:
May the guilty pay. Dude, I read this twice and imagined that type of loss easily as your prose delivered me to the scene.
Nice write good read.
July 24th, 2023 17:49
The Devonshire Ghost
Bella Shepard said:
I love a good ghost story and this poem fulfills all expectations. The imagery, the palpable feeling of trepidation, all make this a gem of one. Great write dear poet, a fav for sure.
July 21st, 2023 14:17
Bella Shepard said:
I love a good ghost story and this poem fulfills all expectations. The imagery, the palpable feeling of trepidation, all make this a gem of one. Great write dear poet, a fav for sure.
July 21st, 2023 14:17
I Remember Tomorrow
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A nicely expressed poem ))
July 21st, 2023 07:47
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A nicely expressed poem ))
July 21st, 2023 07:47
Forfeiture of Thought
Bella Shepard said:
So appropriate a title to describe the surrender of the last vestiges of reason. Your words capture the predicament in which we find ourselves, where conviction, without thought, is a dangerous thing. Thank you dear poet for such an intuitive write!
July 19th, 2023 12:25
Bella Shepard said:
So appropriate a title to describe the surrender of the last vestiges of reason. Your words capture the predicament in which we find ourselves, where conviction, without thought, is a dangerous thing. Thank you dear poet for such an intuitive write!
July 19th, 2023 12:25
I Remember Tomorrow
Eugene S. said:
I like the back and forth of it. Great poem.
July 18th, 2023 17:26
Eugene S. said:
I like the back and forth of it. Great poem.
July 18th, 2023 17:26
The Pompous Fool
Bella Shepard said:
I love the bittersweet sentiment portrayed so beautifully in this poem. The search for self worth in the words of others may satisfy a need unatainable in any other way. And yet there are those who are so vain, as the song goes, they think everything is written about them. You capture it all so well!
July 12th, 2023 13:40
Bella Shepard said:
I love the bittersweet sentiment portrayed so beautifully in this poem. The search for self worth in the words of others may satisfy a need unatainable in any other way. And yet there are those who are so vain, as the song goes, they think everything is written about them. You capture it all so well!
July 12th, 2023 13:40
The Pompous Fool
Michaelpoet said:
I like it. Unfortunately, a good number of people believe they are undeserving of love.
July 12th, 2023 09:22
Michaelpoet said:
I like it. Unfortunately, a good number of people believe they are undeserving of love.
July 12th, 2023 09:22
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