Comments received on poems by Pop64
Passionate Moon
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Michael and so true, the moon is very special.
Andy
October 14th, 2023 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Michael and so true, the moon is very special.
Andy
October 14th, 2023 01:25
Passionate Moon
LIZ said:
I am so passionate about the moon! I\'ve always felt it brings out romance and mystery....\"the true source of power\"!!! Loved it!!! 🌙 🌚 🌔 🌕 🌖 🌛
October 13th, 2023 07:55
LIZ said:
I am so passionate about the moon! I\'ve always felt it brings out romance and mystery....\"the true source of power\"!!! Loved it!!! 🌙 🌚 🌔 🌕 🌖 🌛
October 13th, 2023 07:55
I\'d give you the blood of my heart
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words showing your love Michael.
Andy
October 13th, 2023 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words showing your love Michael.
Andy
October 13th, 2023 01:13
I\'d give you the blood of my heart
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful display of love and devotion.
October 12th, 2023 16:18
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful display of love and devotion.
October 12th, 2023 16:18
I\'d give you the blood of my heart
Teddy.15 said:
A truly stunning promise to someone very lucky to have you in their life. I admire the strength you are sending and I believe you. Utterly beautiful also the rhyme. ❤️ And your title
October 12th, 2023 13:08
Teddy.15 said:
A truly stunning promise to someone very lucky to have you in their life. I admire the strength you are sending and I believe you. Utterly beautiful also the rhyme. ❤️ And your title
October 12th, 2023 13:08
I\'d give you the blood of my heart
Pop64 said:
Thank you, love like this is for friends too
October 12th, 2023 06:48
Pop64 said:
Thank you, love like this is for friends too
October 12th, 2023 06:48
On Writing and Words
Osei Zion said:
\"take you time though, ....\"
i think this line speaks to me. nice poem
October 9th, 2023 01:57
Osei Zion said:
\"take you time though, ....\"
i think this line speaks to me. nice poem
October 9th, 2023 01:57
On Writing and Words
MendedFences27 said:
Agreed! Although I think Love will always be poetry\'s most popular subject I believe as writers we should always explore other subjects and forms. Thanks for bringing up this topic as we all need a wakeup call once in a while. Always take the time to perfect the poems we write, or as W. H. Auden once answered to the question,\" What\'s the secret to your success?\" He replied, \"Revise, Revise, Revise.\"
Well spoken, as is your poem. - Phil A.
October 8th, 2023 16:26
MendedFences27 said:
Agreed! Although I think Love will always be poetry\'s most popular subject I believe as writers we should always explore other subjects and forms. Thanks for bringing up this topic as we all need a wakeup call once in a while. Always take the time to perfect the poems we write, or as W. H. Auden once answered to the question,\" What\'s the secret to your success?\" He replied, \"Revise, Revise, Revise.\"
Well spoken, as is your poem. - Phil A.
October 8th, 2023 16:26
On Writing and Words
Bella Shepard said:
I love the challenge you poem presents. Explore all possibilities, dare to take a different path, find what treasure may lie hidden. As the old saying goes \"variety is the spice of life\", and you have certainly spiced up life with this gem dear friend.
October 8th, 2023 13:13
Bella Shepard said:
I love the challenge you poem presents. Explore all possibilities, dare to take a different path, find what treasure may lie hidden. As the old saying goes \"variety is the spice of life\", and you have certainly spiced up life with this gem dear friend.
October 8th, 2023 13:13
On Writing and Words
Parisab said:
Yes indeed you can impress, yet you are inviting us to let be poetry be a ‘natural force’ when ‘unhurried’ and ‘flowing’. Either is lovely when you post…
October 8th, 2023 11:30
Parisab said:
Yes indeed you can impress, yet you are inviting us to let be poetry be a ‘natural force’ when ‘unhurried’ and ‘flowing’. Either is lovely when you post…
October 8th, 2023 11:30
Love Now Devoid
Bella Shepard said:
Sadness at loss, but treasured memories. Beautifully penned dear friend. Winter has such a special feel, and you have used it perfectly.
October 7th, 2023 11:59
Bella Shepard said:
Sadness at loss, but treasured memories. Beautifully penned dear friend. Winter has such a special feel, and you have used it perfectly.
October 7th, 2023 11:59
Transformative
LIZ said:
Mmmm I love how descriptive this is. I can almost taste the.....pumpkin spice!!! I love this season. Witch season! 🧙♀️ 🪄 🔮 ✨️
October 6th, 2023 13:30
LIZ said:
Mmmm I love how descriptive this is. I can almost taste the.....pumpkin spice!!! I love this season. Witch season! 🧙♀️ 🪄 🔮 ✨️
October 6th, 2023 13:30
Transformative
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece my friend,
We too seem to transform with the seasons, not only our attire but how we do things and when, we transform ourselves to adapt to the different moods and emotions the changing seasons bring as well!
This piece is truly a pleasure to read
October 6th, 2023 12:13
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece my friend,
We too seem to transform with the seasons, not only our attire but how we do things and when, we transform ourselves to adapt to the different moods and emotions the changing seasons bring as well!
This piece is truly a pleasure to read
October 6th, 2023 12:13
Dare I Dream?
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams are the better part of life allowing us to live things that otherwise we would have no chance of experiencing. Whether it be the dangerous or the forbidden its consequences are not as severe.
October 5th, 2023 16:49
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams are the better part of life allowing us to live things that otherwise we would have no chance of experiencing. Whether it be the dangerous or the forbidden its consequences are not as severe.
October 5th, 2023 16:49
Dare I Dream?
AlitaOpal said:
Sounds like the cosmic story of creation.. great read 💯
October 5th, 2023 16:36
AlitaOpal said:
Sounds like the cosmic story of creation.. great read 💯
October 5th, 2023 16:36
Dare I Dream?
Bella Shepard said:
A fantasy truly worth the telling my friend. Wow!
October 5th, 2023 14:43
Bella Shepard said:
A fantasy truly worth the telling my friend. Wow!
October 5th, 2023 14:43
Dare I Dream?
Neville said:
that sound about write to me .. just glad I\'m not the only one .. N 👍
October 5th, 2023 09:19
Neville said:
that sound about write to me .. just glad I\'m not the only one .. N 👍
October 5th, 2023 09:19
Dare I Dream?
Lorenz said:
I like this notion of eroticism that takes the path of the mental.
October 5th, 2023 07:14
Lorenz said:
I like this notion of eroticism that takes the path of the mental.
October 5th, 2023 07:14
Escaping
Bella Shepard said:
It takes a certain amount of courage to break free from convention, and those around you. It\'s finding confidence in yourself that is rewarding. I find all of this and more in this beautifully crafted poem dear friend.
October 4th, 2023 12:28
Bella Shepard said:
It takes a certain amount of courage to break free from convention, and those around you. It\'s finding confidence in yourself that is rewarding. I find all of this and more in this beautifully crafted poem dear friend.
October 4th, 2023 12:28
Escaping
Teddy.15 said:
We all get lost inside ourselves and if we manage to actual overcome all the things that may take us away from our own beings then that\'s what I call self love. Whether it\'s you breaking your self or another breaking you it\'s all we can do to stand up and take that extra look and truly find ourselves. A beautiful subject. ❤️
October 4th, 2023 11:15
Teddy.15 said:
We all get lost inside ourselves and if we manage to actual overcome all the things that may take us away from our own beings then that\'s what I call self love. Whether it\'s you breaking your self or another breaking you it\'s all we can do to stand up and take that extra look and truly find ourselves. A beautiful subject. ❤️
October 4th, 2023 11:15
Escaping
Neville said:
no truer words ever said .. and likewise none more truly read .. bravo
October 4th, 2023 10:29
Neville said:
no truer words ever said .. and likewise none more truly read .. bravo
October 4th, 2023 10:29
Escaping
LIZ said:
This is so powerful! As long as there\'s hope, nothing is lost! But the biggest takeaway, is to always be yourself. This is crazy....I\'m working on a....sort of similar piece. Very interesting!! Truly enjoyed it!
October 4th, 2023 10:25
LIZ said:
This is so powerful! As long as there\'s hope, nothing is lost! But the biggest takeaway, is to always be yourself. This is crazy....I\'m working on a....sort of similar piece. Very interesting!! Truly enjoyed it!
October 4th, 2023 10:25
Left to Die
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Awesomely rhymed poem flowing superbly missing the sun. Works both literally and metaphorically. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
October 4th, 2023 06:07
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Awesomely rhymed poem flowing superbly missing the sun. Works both literally and metaphorically. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
October 4th, 2023 06:07
Left to Die
sorenbarrett said:
It is somehow classical reminding me somewhat of Poe. Its hauntingly dark with a gentle nature that lulls one one beyond the river Styx. I can almost hear Charon rowing with its rhythm.
October 3rd, 2023 14:10
sorenbarrett said:
It is somehow classical reminding me somewhat of Poe. Its hauntingly dark with a gentle nature that lulls one one beyond the river Styx. I can almost hear Charon rowing with its rhythm.
October 3rd, 2023 14:10
Left to Die
Introverted Sage said:
I understand this as the ebb and flow of life, and sometimes by day.
Waves of sadness, anger, regret, pain and misery come in seeming from no where and \'blankets with a grip\'. Like walking around with an invisible, personal, dark cloud over your head.
\'My working eyes, they dare not seek
To find one to replace\'
Knowing or remembering the days that felt lighter and despite the darker feelings, understanding nothing in that field will provide that.
Great write!
October 3rd, 2023 13:29
Introverted Sage said:
I understand this as the ebb and flow of life, and sometimes by day.
Waves of sadness, anger, regret, pain and misery come in seeming from no where and \'blankets with a grip\'. Like walking around with an invisible, personal, dark cloud over your head.
\'My working eyes, they dare not seek
To find one to replace\'
Knowing or remembering the days that felt lighter and despite the darker feelings, understanding nothing in that field will provide that.
Great write!
October 3rd, 2023 13:29
Left to Die
Teddy.15 said:
My working eyes, they dare not seek
To find one to replace
For the sun that melted my cold heart
Shines not upon my face
Beautiful. ❤️.
October 3rd, 2023 11:43
Teddy.15 said:
My working eyes, they dare not seek
To find one to replace
For the sun that melted my cold heart
Shines not upon my face
Beautiful. ❤️.
October 3rd, 2023 11:43
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