Comments received on poems by Pop64
Dreams Whispered Secrets
Carly said:
This is so beautiful, like a melody and ever so touching
October 2nd, 2023 11:57
Carly said:
This is so beautiful, like a melody and ever so touching
October 2nd, 2023 11:57
Critique?
Teddy.15 said:
Not to be the bare of bad news but here it\'s not a workshop. In any case members should never feel like their work is being judged. When I read a poem I don\'t like I move on I don\'t tell them I dislike it it\'s the writers work. Personally I am an atheist so religious poems don\'t interest me at all but I don\'t sling mud at them. Their is a like button that is pretty useless to be honest and a fave button. But here is the most important thing to remember one reader may see a lot more of a poem than another reader, some of us have been friends here a long time and we know each other personally so a poem may mean something much deeper. Anyway that\'s what I wanted to say after reading this poem. ❤️
October 2nd, 2023 11:12
Teddy.15 said:
Not to be the bare of bad news but here it\'s not a workshop. In any case members should never feel like their work is being judged. When I read a poem I don\'t like I move on I don\'t tell them I dislike it it\'s the writers work. Personally I am an atheist so religious poems don\'t interest me at all but I don\'t sling mud at them. Their is a like button that is pretty useless to be honest and a fave button. But here is the most important thing to remember one reader may see a lot more of a poem than another reader, some of us have been friends here a long time and we know each other personally so a poem may mean something much deeper. Anyway that\'s what I wanted to say after reading this poem. ❤️
October 2nd, 2023 11:12
Critique?
Lorenz said:
Thank you pop.this will be the topic of my text tomorrow !
October 2nd, 2023 09:10
Lorenz said:
Thank you pop.this will be the topic of my text tomorrow !
October 2nd, 2023 09:10
Critique?
sorenbarrett said:
So many times I have experienced this. At first I offered constructive criticism but many just got pissed off, so now I just wait for them to ask. Furthermore, I consider myself a novice and wonder how many think the same of my poems but are too polite to say anything. I truly appreciate constructive criticism and have seem much worse, which I just blow off. I know that not all of my poems are good. I loved the rhyme and meter of this piece as well as the creative telling. It was a fun read.
October 2nd, 2023 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
So many times I have experienced this. At first I offered constructive criticism but many just got pissed off, so now I just wait for them to ask. Furthermore, I consider myself a novice and wonder how many think the same of my poems but are too polite to say anything. I truly appreciate constructive criticism and have seem much worse, which I just blow off. I know that not all of my poems are good. I loved the rhyme and meter of this piece as well as the creative telling. It was a fun read.
October 2nd, 2023 08:43
Critique?
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece , I\'m sure we all have had these thoughts at some point
October 2nd, 2023 06:59
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece , I\'m sure we all have had these thoughts at some point
October 2nd, 2023 06:59
Critique?
BlessedbyGod said:
Constructive criticism is best in my opinion,
That\'s how we grow as poets and artists,
As long as it isn\'t in a mean way, I personally would welcome it
October 2nd, 2023 06:58
BlessedbyGod said:
Constructive criticism is best in my opinion,
That\'s how we grow as poets and artists,
As long as it isn\'t in a mean way, I personally would welcome it
October 2nd, 2023 06:58
Dreams Whispered Secrets
Parisab said:
Words in this poem transform and take shape like a gentle breeze with a heartfelt promise. Such an enjoyable poem!
October 1st, 2023 22:39
Parisab said:
Words in this poem transform and take shape like a gentle breeze with a heartfelt promise. Such an enjoyable poem!
October 1st, 2023 22:39
Dreams Whispered Secrets
LIZ said:
Oh how beautiful, so gentle and soft ... you\'re revealing secrets, but at the same time, trying to protect her...I love it! 💫💫💫
October 1st, 2023 14:15
LIZ said:
Oh how beautiful, so gentle and soft ... you\'re revealing secrets, but at the same time, trying to protect her...I love it! 💫💫💫
October 1st, 2023 14:15
Dreams Whispered Secrets
GeekSusie said:
Thank you for sharing such heartfelt words. Your whispered secrets carry a message of love, care, and hope. It\'s evident how much you adore and think of this person. May your intentions find their way and bring warmth to the one you hold dear.
October 1st, 2023 14:07
GeekSusie said:
Thank you for sharing such heartfelt words. Your whispered secrets carry a message of love, care, and hope. It\'s evident how much you adore and think of this person. May your intentions find their way and bring warmth to the one you hold dear.
October 1st, 2023 14:07
Half Century Ink (see photo in my gallery)
Bella Shepard said:
Now that\'s what I call a tatoo! A true work of art, I\'m sure it has great significance for you. I applaud your bravery, I was too squeamish even to get my ears pierced. Good write, and congrats on a 10 yrs going strong.
September 30th, 2023 15:23
Bella Shepard said:
Now that\'s what I call a tatoo! A true work of art, I\'m sure it has great significance for you. I applaud your bravery, I was too squeamish even to get my ears pierced. Good write, and congrats on a 10 yrs going strong.
September 30th, 2023 15:23
Half Century Ink (see photo in my gallery)
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I\'m not a fan of tattoos but I may get one when I\'m drink on my bottom. 😆 hey your tatoo artist is the hero here, the skill to paint anything onto skin is a telent. I\'ve seen yours and it looks amazing. I\'ll be 50 in 12 months time so we will see never say never lol
September 30th, 2023 13:13
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I\'m not a fan of tattoos but I may get one when I\'m drink on my bottom. 😆 hey your tatoo artist is the hero here, the skill to paint anything onto skin is a telent. I\'ve seen yours and it looks amazing. I\'ll be 50 in 12 months time so we will see never say never lol
September 30th, 2023 13:13
Half Century Ink (see photo in my gallery)
Christina8 said:
Very good poem! I enjoyed reading it. I hope you love your half century tattoo!!
September 30th, 2023 08:44
Christina8 said:
Very good poem! I enjoyed reading it. I hope you love your half century tattoo!!
September 30th, 2023 08:44
In My English Garden
Lorenz said:
orchid is my favorite.its fragrance still etched in my memory as I was walking through the Rio\'s botanical garden.
September 29th, 2023 06:42
Lorenz said:
orchid is my favorite.its fragrance still etched in my memory as I was walking through the Rio\'s botanical garden.
September 29th, 2023 06:42
In My English Garden
sorenbarrett said:
This has special meaning for me in that both the rose and dahlia were flowers that my father grew and the lavender was grown by my grandmother. This poem flows off the tongue as smoot as honey. It has such a pleasant rhythm that seems meant for the garden as if one was taking a walk through it. Loved it
September 29th, 2023 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
This has special meaning for me in that both the rose and dahlia were flowers that my father grew and the lavender was grown by my grandmother. This poem flows off the tongue as smoot as honey. It has such a pleasant rhythm that seems meant for the garden as if one was taking a walk through it. Loved it
September 29th, 2023 05:49
Hanging on Love
sorenbarrett said:
\"they cup the
moon within its hands,
the wild night it tames.\"
Great lines. The relationship between the sun and the moon is intriguing.
September 28th, 2023 11:57
sorenbarrett said:
\"they cup the
moon within its hands,
the wild night it tames.\"
Great lines. The relationship between the sun and the moon is intriguing.
September 28th, 2023 11:57
Grave, Indeed
AuburnScribbler said:
The rhyme pattern here is gorgeous, and the tone is beautifully excruciating Pop64, an excellently written piece here.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 28th, 2023 10:45
AuburnScribbler said:
The rhyme pattern here is gorgeous, and the tone is beautifully excruciating Pop64, an excellently written piece here.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 28th, 2023 10:45
Hanging on Love
Lorenz said:
an eclipsing sun -moon aspect which expresses itself in a creative catharsis
September 28th, 2023 07:12
Lorenz said:
an eclipsing sun -moon aspect which expresses itself in a creative catharsis
September 28th, 2023 07:12
Grave, Indeed
Christina8 said:
Lots of emotion in this poem and i like the rhyme and cadence! Awesome job!
September 27th, 2023 13:10
Christina8 said:
Lots of emotion in this poem and i like the rhyme and cadence! Awesome job!
September 27th, 2023 13:10
Grave, Indeed
sorenbarrett said:
A definite plea of desperation and urgency. Air is number one on the needed chart and I heard it here
September 27th, 2023 12:51
sorenbarrett said:
A definite plea of desperation and urgency. Air is number one on the needed chart and I heard it here
September 27th, 2023 12:51
Grave, Indeed
LIZ said:
Wow I felt all the emotions. Suffocating.....waiting on love\'s saving grace!! A little goth! Loved it!!
September 27th, 2023 08:59
LIZ said:
Wow I felt all the emotions. Suffocating.....waiting on love\'s saving grace!! A little goth! Loved it!!
September 27th, 2023 08:59
They Share a Kiss
Goldfinch60 said:
Lovely emotive words Michael and what Maxine has said is so true.
Andy
September 27th, 2023 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Lovely emotive words Michael and what Maxine has said is so true.
Andy
September 27th, 2023 01:21
My Hope Still Floats II
LIZ said:
Ahhhh when that one heart makes all the past experiences seem mundane! When love arrives! So beautiful!
September 25th, 2023 15:08
LIZ said:
Ahhhh when that one heart makes all the past experiences seem mundane! When love arrives! So beautiful!
September 25th, 2023 15:08
My Hope Still Floats
LIZ said:
Awwww Michael this is so heartfelt! I came to read this one because I read part II, and wanted to understand. Thank you!
September 25th, 2023 15:07
LIZ said:
Awwww Michael this is so heartfelt! I came to read this one because I read part II, and wanted to understand. Thank you!
September 25th, 2023 15:07
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