Comments received on poems by Pop64
Love\'s Infliction, My Inflection
sorenbarrett said:
This required two readings and was worth much more. A heartfelt plea of love
December 22nd, 2023 12:04
sorenbarrett said:
This required two readings and was worth much more. A heartfelt plea of love
December 22nd, 2023 12:04
Wishful Thinking
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend, International Peace Day is long overdue. The arrow of every stanza hits the mark, bulls eye! The last stanza, empower our children with knowledge, allow them to question, doubt, explore, instead of just grooming them to be us. This poem challenges all of us to take a long, deep look at ourselves and what we allow to be in this world. We have the power to change, but can we ever find the collective will to do it. The profundity of your words is powerful, and perhaps one day humanity will see the light. Where there is a will, there is a way. Thank you for this incredible piece.
October 31st, 2023 15:03
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend, International Peace Day is long overdue. The arrow of every stanza hits the mark, bulls eye! The last stanza, empower our children with knowledge, allow them to question, doubt, explore, instead of just grooming them to be us. This poem challenges all of us to take a long, deep look at ourselves and what we allow to be in this world. We have the power to change, but can we ever find the collective will to do it. The profundity of your words is powerful, and perhaps one day humanity will see the light. Where there is a will, there is a way. Thank you for this incredible piece.
October 31st, 2023 15:03
Love\'s Infliction, My Inflection
Neville said:
You just nailed love poetry this is so very good .. Neville
October 23rd, 2023 15:43
Neville said:
You just nailed love poetry this is so very good .. Neville
October 23rd, 2023 15:43
Love\'s Infliction, My Inflection
Neville said:
You just nailed love poetry this is so very good .. Neville
October 23rd, 2023 15:42
Neville said:
You just nailed love poetry this is so very good .. Neville
October 23rd, 2023 15:42
Wishful Thinking
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words and so true when you said \"Why can’t there be a day of International Peace\" and make that day last forever.
Andy
October 18th, 2023 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words and so true when you said \"Why can’t there be a day of International Peace\" and make that day last forever.
Andy
October 18th, 2023 02:09
Love\'s Infliction, My Inflection
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Michael.
Andy
October 18th, 2023 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Michael.
Andy
October 18th, 2023 01:44
Love\'s Infliction, My Inflection
Thomas W Case said:
Superb. Great flow and you drive the point home.
October 18th, 2023 00:21
Thomas W Case said:
Superb. Great flow and you drive the point home.
October 18th, 2023 00:21
Wishful Thinking
LIZ said:
If…only. So much corruption. Broken promises from those who call themselves leaders.
Why can\'t we just let children be children? Why can\'t we be at peace with each other? A heavy challenge you\'ve thrown here. One I am in agreement with…but you\'re right…wishful thinking.
October 17th, 2023 09:53
LIZ said:
If…only. So much corruption. Broken promises from those who call themselves leaders.
Why can\'t we just let children be children? Why can\'t we be at peace with each other? A heavy challenge you\'ve thrown here. One I am in agreement with…but you\'re right…wishful thinking.
October 17th, 2023 09:53
Wishful Thinking
orchidee said:
Well, some UK newspapers say we\'re being run by clowns - Bozo, Coco, Thicko, etc. Doh! They ask for it sometimes, I reckon.
October 17th, 2023 09:46
orchidee said:
Well, some UK newspapers say we\'re being run by clowns - Bozo, Coco, Thicko, etc. Doh! They ask for it sometimes, I reckon.
October 17th, 2023 09:46
Wishful Thinking
Arastu Goyal said:
Loved reading this, I love the message you painted with this poem. We do need an International Day of Peace :-)
October 17th, 2023 08:12
Arastu Goyal said:
Loved reading this, I love the message you painted with this poem. We do need an International Day of Peace :-)
October 17th, 2023 08:12
Wishful Thinking
sorenbarrett said:
A great message that is long overdue in happening. In wars and battles it is the innocent that are harmed, usually not the perpetrators. As a violent species we need a change if we wish to continue calling ourselves humans.
October 17th, 2023 07:25
sorenbarrett said:
A great message that is long overdue in happening. In wars and battles it is the innocent that are harmed, usually not the perpetrators. As a violent species we need a change if we wish to continue calling ourselves humans.
October 17th, 2023 07:25
Love\'s Infliction, My Inflection
LIZ said:
Raw emotions! No sugar coating! You make it so matter of fact at the end! \"I can’t get my mind off of you\" Nothing more, nothing less!!! Take it as you please...kind of thing! Beautiful!!
October 16th, 2023 12:22
LIZ said:
Raw emotions! No sugar coating! You make it so matter of fact at the end! \"I can’t get my mind off of you\" Nothing more, nothing less!!! Take it as you please...kind of thing! Beautiful!!
October 16th, 2023 12:22
Love\'s Infliction, My Inflection
Teddy.15 said:
A bitter sweet pill of love, lol nothing if not complex. beautiful imagery and your last lines just so painfully real. ❤️
October 16th, 2023 11:41
Teddy.15 said:
A bitter sweet pill of love, lol nothing if not complex. beautiful imagery and your last lines just so painfully real. ❤️
October 16th, 2023 11:41
Love\'s Infliction, My Inflection
BlessedbyGod said:
So sweet, sounds like you\'ve been bitten by the love bug
October 16th, 2023 06:44
BlessedbyGod said:
So sweet, sounds like you\'ve been bitten by the love bug
October 16th, 2023 06:44
Under the Moon
BlessedbyGod said:
So beautiful pop!! So beautifully written ❤️ 💖
October 15th, 2023 21:25
BlessedbyGod said:
So beautiful pop!! So beautifully written ❤️ 💖
October 15th, 2023 21:25
Under the Moon
Parisab said:
A safe space described beautifully beneath the moonlight! I also prefer moonlight for that sort of imagery! Liked this very much…
October 15th, 2023 13:48
Parisab said:
A safe space described beautifully beneath the moonlight! I also prefer moonlight for that sort of imagery! Liked this very much…
October 15th, 2023 13:48
Under the Moon
Lorenz said:
The first man to walk on the moon was a Belgian !
October 15th, 2023 10:02
Lorenz said:
The first man to walk on the moon was a Belgian !
October 15th, 2023 10:02
Under the Moon
LIZ said:
In love with the moon!! Because yes, under its light, anything is possible...even the wildest of fantasies!!!
October 15th, 2023 09:44
LIZ said:
In love with the moon!! Because yes, under its light, anything is possible...even the wildest of fantasies!!!
October 15th, 2023 09:44
Unending
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dreams become reality one day Michael.
Andy
October 15th, 2023 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dreams become reality one day Michael.
Andy
October 15th, 2023 01:54
Unending
LIZ said:
Mmmmmm what an incredibly delicious fantasy!! Loved every bit!
October 14th, 2023 11:28
LIZ said:
Mmmmmm what an incredibly delicious fantasy!! Loved every bit!
October 14th, 2023 11:28
Unending
novaa said:
Perfectly captures intense longing and desire. Nice read!
October 14th, 2023 09:30
novaa said:
Perfectly captures intense longing and desire. Nice read!
October 14th, 2023 09:30
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