Comments received on poems by nix :)
Waiting Forever
LIZ said:
Right? Doesn\'t it feel like forever when we want to say so much, but can\'t find the right words, the right time, the right circumstance? Those dark times can teach us so much though. Thank you for sharing this heartfelt piece!
August 6th, 2023 07:31
LIZ said:
Right? Doesn\'t it feel like forever when we want to say so much, but can\'t find the right words, the right time, the right circumstance? Those dark times can teach us so much though. Thank you for sharing this heartfelt piece!
August 6th, 2023 07:31
Mixed Signals
vicecream said:
I feel this one its tuff to be gay and not have a proper gaydar
August 4th, 2023 13:42
vicecream said:
I feel this one its tuff to be gay and not have a proper gaydar
August 4th, 2023 13:42
Mixed Signals
L. B. Mek said:
that guessing game
made so much harder
when questions of sexual preferences are involved..
its so impossible to guess at the right choice or action
its only after the fact, anyone can tell
if the right action was chosen..
I guess that\'s why only the brave
are guaranteed a chance at love
I wish you luck
and thanks for sharing
(And the fact you call people “bro” and “legend” and “king”)
when they\'re nice to everyone, so much harder to tell
grrr
lol
August 4th, 2023 06:44
L. B. Mek said:
that guessing game
made so much harder
when questions of sexual preferences are involved..
its so impossible to guess at the right choice or action
its only after the fact, anyone can tell
if the right action was chosen..
I guess that\'s why only the brave
are guaranteed a chance at love
I wish you luck
and thanks for sharing
(And the fact you call people “bro” and “legend” and “king”)
when they\'re nice to everyone, so much harder to tell
grrr
lol
August 4th, 2023 06:44
Singing Hearts
Bobby O said:
Change your sentence structure Start w what you have cuz it’s nice material but then accept the challenge to rewrite to add dimension and shape just my altered form. Ie: yiur last two lines could Be…
Sudden recoil visits and tension dwells and bothers not from pain but rather from cue of splendor end your voice trickled to whispers as rare treat your glorious voice desvrnds.
Now that was quick and needs refinement but the structure change builds interest. It you’re not rewriting you ain’t writing.
Best intention proffered here my friend
July 29th, 2023 22:09
Bobby O said:
Change your sentence structure Start w what you have cuz it’s nice material but then accept the challenge to rewrite to add dimension and shape just my altered form. Ie: yiur last two lines could Be…
Sudden recoil visits and tension dwells and bothers not from pain but rather from cue of splendor end your voice trickled to whispers as rare treat your glorious voice desvrnds.
Now that was quick and needs refinement but the structure change builds interest. It you’re not rewriting you ain’t writing.
Best intention proffered here my friend
July 29th, 2023 22:09
Singing Hearts
Bobby O said:
Change your sentence structure Start w what you have cuz it’s nice material but then accept the challenge to rewrite to add dimension and shape just my altered form. Ie: yiur last two lines could Be…
Sudden recoil visits and tension dwells and bothers not from pain but rather from cue of splendor end your voice trickled to whispers as rare treat your glorious voice desvrnds.
Now that was quick and needs refinement but the structure change builds interest. It you’re not rewriting you ain’t writing.
Best intention proffered here my friend
July 29th, 2023 21:07
Bobby O said:
Change your sentence structure Start w what you have cuz it’s nice material but then accept the challenge to rewrite to add dimension and shape just my altered form. Ie: yiur last two lines could Be…
Sudden recoil visits and tension dwells and bothers not from pain but rather from cue of splendor end your voice trickled to whispers as rare treat your glorious voice desvrnds.
Now that was quick and needs refinement but the structure change builds interest. It you’re not rewriting you ain’t writing.
Best intention proffered here my friend
July 29th, 2023 21:07
Singing Hearts
Bobby O said:
Change your sentence structure Start w what you have cuz it’s nice material but then accept the challenge to rewrite to add dimension and shape just my altered form. Ie: yiur last two lines could Be…
Sudden recoil visits and tension dwells and bothers not from pain but rather from cue of splendor end your voice trickled to whispers as rare treat your glorious voice desvrnds.
Now that was quick and needs refinement but the structure change builds interest. It you’re not rewriting you ain’t writing.
Best intention proffered here my friend
July 29th, 2023 20:20
Bobby O said:
Change your sentence structure Start w what you have cuz it’s nice material but then accept the challenge to rewrite to add dimension and shape just my altered form. Ie: yiur last two lines could Be…
Sudden recoil visits and tension dwells and bothers not from pain but rather from cue of splendor end your voice trickled to whispers as rare treat your glorious voice desvrnds.
Now that was quick and needs refinement but the structure change builds interest. It you’re not rewriting you ain’t writing.
Best intention proffered here my friend
July 29th, 2023 20:20
This Cruel World
arqios said:
It\'s never that simple, sad to say, and across the board too. Imagine having to go through life with mates and colleagues all suffering in each one\'s respective inward worlds. The masks we wear grows heavier each day. So relatable. Thanks for sharing.
July 19th, 2023 20:59
arqios said:
It\'s never that simple, sad to say, and across the board too. Imagine having to go through life with mates and colleagues all suffering in each one\'s respective inward worlds. The masks we wear grows heavier each day. So relatable. Thanks for sharing.
July 19th, 2023 20:59
This Cruel World
Twilightqueenbee said:
Yes wish they listen to our thoughts atleast for once, nice one keep going!
July 19th, 2023 06:41
Twilightqueenbee said:
Yes wish they listen to our thoughts atleast for once, nice one keep going!
July 19th, 2023 06:41
Love and Heartbreak
Pop64 said:
the torment of a love lost, so clearly defined in this write.
July 18th, 2023 07:04
Pop64 said:
the torment of a love lost, so clearly defined in this write.
July 18th, 2023 07:04
In Love With You
Pop64 said:
Very clear and honest write. Very good expressive writing.
July 10th, 2023 08:15
Pop64 said:
Very clear and honest write. Very good expressive writing.
July 10th, 2023 08:15
Unrequited
peto said:
May I ask how you know?
The line \"my feelings are probably one sided\" suggests you have not declared said feelings
Heartfelt
July 9th, 2023 10:23
peto said:
May I ask how you know?
The line \"my feelings are probably one sided\" suggests you have not declared said feelings
Heartfelt
July 9th, 2023 10:23
Unrequited
Bobby O said:
That’s a nice piece. I read it twice. Nice write good read
July 9th, 2023 06:33
Bobby O said:
That’s a nice piece. I read it twice. Nice write good read
July 9th, 2023 06:33
Meeting You
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
That’s sad
A good poem tho like the mention of the shooting stars and the genie ))
July 8th, 2023 09:14
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
That’s sad
A good poem tho like the mention of the shooting stars and the genie ))
July 8th, 2023 09:14
