Comments received on poems by Miss_Dreamer
Moon
rhmn_7 said:
And the sun always gets the credit, the moon doing whatever it can but still not valued enough, lovely analogy!
October 8th, 2023 05:03
rhmn_7 said:
And the sun always gets the credit, the moon doing whatever it can but still not valued enough, lovely analogy!
October 8th, 2023 05:03
Moon
BlessedbyGod said:
I\'m my mind the moon is a more peaceful feel and the sun give me warmth and light, yes, but it is also a raging inferno that burns up everything that comes close to it,
Personally, I would rather relate to the moon!!
October 6th, 2023 12:10
BlessedbyGod said:
I\'m my mind the moon is a more peaceful feel and the sun give me warmth and light, yes, but it is also a raging inferno that burns up everything that comes close to it,
Personally, I would rather relate to the moon!!
October 6th, 2023 12:10
Moon
Pop64 said:
To address the subject, the moon offers as much visual beauty and importance as the sun,. The write remains a beautiful reflection and allows the reader to interpret the imntent clearly. I enjoyed this read.
October 6th, 2023 11:59
Pop64 said:
To address the subject, the moon offers as much visual beauty and importance as the sun,. The write remains a beautiful reflection and allows the reader to interpret the imntent clearly. I enjoyed this read.
October 6th, 2023 11:59
Moon
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Moon” by Dreamer
You point out that the moon moves the tides in darkness. Although the moon is much smaller than the sun, it is the moon that moves the tide. So, in a sense the moon achieves that which the sun does not. Whereas the sun can create beautiful scenes at sunrise and sunset, the moon is more romantic. While sunrise and sunset last for a short time, the moon lasts longer. Even the different phases of the moon have each their own appeal and have been sung in poetry.
We have been able to walk on the moon. As for walking on the sun..... Even by getting close to the sun we will be fried. As for the waning of the moon, the sun, too, disappears at sunset. So, don’t worry : as the moon, you do have value. Soman Ragavan. 6 October, 2023. //
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October 6th, 2023 11:14
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Moon” by Dreamer
You point out that the moon moves the tides in darkness. Although the moon is much smaller than the sun, it is the moon that moves the tide. So, in a sense the moon achieves that which the sun does not. Whereas the sun can create beautiful scenes at sunrise and sunset, the moon is more romantic. While sunrise and sunset last for a short time, the moon lasts longer. Even the different phases of the moon have each their own appeal and have been sung in poetry.
We have been able to walk on the moon. As for walking on the sun..... Even by getting close to the sun we will be fried. As for the waning of the moon, the sun, too, disappears at sunset. So, don’t worry : as the moon, you do have value. Soman Ragavan. 6 October, 2023. //
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October 6th, 2023 11:14
Sleep
BlessedbyGod said:
You seem to be describing my night last night as well, restless
September 21st, 2023 09:52
BlessedbyGod said:
You seem to be describing my night last night as well, restless
September 21st, 2023 09:52
Prisoner
Pop64 said:
We are so often prisoners to ourselves, seeing only the negative and rarely the positive. The shackles that bind us are strong, but we also hold the key and fighting turns the key. Very well written and wonderfully introspective.
September 21st, 2023 08:14
Pop64 said:
We are so often prisoners to ourselves, seeing only the negative and rarely the positive. The shackles that bind us are strong, but we also hold the key and fighting turns the key. Very well written and wonderfully introspective.
September 21st, 2023 08:14
Sleep
Pop64 said:
Aah, night, the hours where we do our deepest contemplating and doing that disturbs our sleep patterns and also enters into our sleep, as with the nightmares. Wonderfully expressed and very well written.
September 21st, 2023 05:41
Pop64 said:
Aah, night, the hours where we do our deepest contemplating and doing that disturbs our sleep patterns and also enters into our sleep, as with the nightmares. Wonderfully expressed and very well written.
September 21st, 2023 05:41
Flood
BlessedbyGod said:
You will get there dreamer, you will get to the place where you will feel free
September 18th, 2023 18:07
BlessedbyGod said:
You will get there dreamer, you will get to the place where you will feel free
September 18th, 2023 18:07
Flood
L. B. Mek said:
hopefully this too
will someday, be just a memory..
\'stay\' strong! fight the good fight
thanks for sharing
September 18th, 2023 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
hopefully this too
will someday, be just a memory..
\'stay\' strong! fight the good fight
thanks for sharing
September 18th, 2023 05:00
Empty
BlessedbyGod said:
Miss Dreamer, get those thoughts out of your head girl! You are a beautiful person inside and out, I resonate with you so much
But there is hope and you are more precious than gold , you have purpose and a beautiful soul,hang in there girl,you are full of life and we love you, we\'re your MPS family
September 16th, 2023 08:32
BlessedbyGod said:
Miss Dreamer, get those thoughts out of your head girl! You are a beautiful person inside and out, I resonate with you so much
But there is hope and you are more precious than gold , you have purpose and a beautiful soul,hang in there girl,you are full of life and we love you, we\'re your MPS family
September 16th, 2023 08:32
Pills
BlessedbyGod said:
Hair, who needs it, I\'m sure you are beautiful with or without it,
I\'m sorry about everything you are going through,
I used to be stuck in darkness due to my abusive past,
And my depression and anxiety and borderline personality disorder didn\'t help either, it took me fully trusting in God and saying , ok Lord I know you love me and have plans for me, why am I going through this,I give my life to you to do what you will, lead me where you want me to go,
So He did, He gave me a way and got me out of there, now I\'m condition free and actually happy, which is very strange for me, because I\'ve never been truly happy until the day I left home
September 16th, 2023 08:21
BlessedbyGod said:
Hair, who needs it, I\'m sure you are beautiful with or without it,
I\'m sorry about everything you are going through,
I used to be stuck in darkness due to my abusive past,
And my depression and anxiety and borderline personality disorder didn\'t help either, it took me fully trusting in God and saying , ok Lord I know you love me and have plans for me, why am I going through this,I give my life to you to do what you will, lead me where you want me to go,
So He did, He gave me a way and got me out of there, now I\'m condition free and actually happy, which is very strange for me, because I\'ve never been truly happy until the day I left home
September 16th, 2023 08:21
Pills
jarcher54 said:
MD, hang in there... I adore this little soliloquy... thanks for letting us peek in at your... shall we call in frustration?
September 16th, 2023 01:48
jarcher54 said:
MD, hang in there... I adore this little soliloquy... thanks for letting us peek in at your... shall we call in frustration?
September 16th, 2023 01:48
Prisoner
Lorenz said:
My impatient jailer never leaves me in peace ,he needs it\'s daily words to nourish it\'s soul...
September 16th, 2023 01:10
Lorenz said:
My impatient jailer never leaves me in peace ,he needs it\'s daily words to nourish it\'s soul...
September 16th, 2023 01:10
Prisoner
BlessedbyGod said:
Breaking out is very difficult, I know from personal experience, there is hope there is a way out, it took me finally surrendering to God and giving Him control,full control,
He saved me from myself and my own mind, he saved me from the situation I was in , there is hope and love and freedom in God
September 15th, 2023 17:27
BlessedbyGod said:
Breaking out is very difficult, I know from personal experience, there is hope there is a way out, it took me finally surrendering to God and giving Him control,full control,
He saved me from myself and my own mind, he saved me from the situation I was in , there is hope and love and freedom in God
September 15th, 2023 17:27
Empty
peto said:
Tremendous write
I think we have all felt that way at some point
Almost heard the echo of the windows and foundations shaking
Pleasure to read
September 9th, 2023 04:36
peto said:
Tremendous write
I think we have all felt that way at some point
Almost heard the echo of the windows and foundations shaking
Pleasure to read
September 9th, 2023 04:36
Skinny
Bobby O said:
You have seen the effect of undue and unfair societal expectation and thus piece calls those w recognition to rally and reduce the pressure on those innocent. It’s a SHOUT OUT that I hope rings and rings. Really nice. I’m a fan
September 9th, 2023 02:32
Bobby O said:
You have seen the effect of undue and unfair societal expectation and thus piece calls those w recognition to rally and reduce the pressure on those innocent. It’s a SHOUT OUT that I hope rings and rings. Really nice. I’m a fan
September 9th, 2023 02:32
Scars
Bobby O said:
Memories with weapons that invade. How perfect the description that draws a reader in and feel and that is the pinnacle of this art. Thanks fot having bravery to share
September 9th, 2023 02:29
Bobby O said:
Memories with weapons that invade. How perfect the description that draws a reader in and feel and that is the pinnacle of this art. Thanks fot having bravery to share
September 9th, 2023 02:29
Glass
Bobby O said:
Out loud is a good plan, perhaps it exposes the foe that wriggles though one’s mind when searching fir recompense or dilution of torrid moments. Cathartic and perspective are likely results. Thanks fir sharing
September 9th, 2023 02:26
Bobby O said:
Out loud is a good plan, perhaps it exposes the foe that wriggles though one’s mind when searching fir recompense or dilution of torrid moments. Cathartic and perspective are likely results. Thanks fir sharing
September 9th, 2023 02:26
Empty
Bobby O said:
Such a tight metaphor. I walked thru the house through your description and felt sad about how you feel. It really is so well written displays a versatile thought provoking talent that I will be anxious to catch up on your past offerings and will look forward to future pieces.
Nice write great read
September 9th, 2023 02:22
Bobby O said:
Such a tight metaphor. I walked thru the house through your description and felt sad about how you feel. It really is so well written displays a versatile thought provoking talent that I will be anxious to catch up on your past offerings and will look forward to future pieces.
Nice write great read
September 9th, 2023 02:22
Skinny
Bobby O said:
For shamefully miscast and misjudged arbitrary blemished form of vain the innocent punished by such vulgarity were deeply bruised multiple scarred.
Gio Lizzo go Britt abundant that pleases hearts fair eye
July 29th, 2023 05:19
Bobby O said:
For shamefully miscast and misjudged arbitrary blemished form of vain the innocent punished by such vulgarity were deeply bruised multiple scarred.
Gio Lizzo go Britt abundant that pleases hearts fair eye
July 29th, 2023 05:19
Skinny
L. B. Mek said:
an important subject matter, widely ignored
unless attached to ideology positioning fallacies..
thank you for sharing, really well written
July 28th, 2023 06:32
L. B. Mek said:
an important subject matter, widely ignored
unless attached to ideology positioning fallacies..
thank you for sharing, really well written
July 28th, 2023 06:32
Mountains
David Wakeling said:
This is okay.Sadly I don\'t know what it is about.It seems unfinished
July 27th, 2023 17:11
David Wakeling said:
This is okay.Sadly I don\'t know what it is about.It seems unfinished
July 27th, 2023 17:11
Glass
Pop64 said:
It\'s very easy to be seduced by thoughts, the unknown, the it could be better on the other side. Just remember, what\'s better for some becomes the worse for others. Not to sound preachy, but my brother had taken his own life and I pray he\'s in a better place. Just wish the rest of us had been able to find better places. Sorry to ramble, but that\'s what writing does, it gets the read to feel, be inspired, to empathize. You write with clarity and hopefully saving thoughts.
July 26th, 2023 13:39
Pop64 said:
It\'s very easy to be seduced by thoughts, the unknown, the it could be better on the other side. Just remember, what\'s better for some becomes the worse for others. Not to sound preachy, but my brother had taken his own life and I pray he\'s in a better place. Just wish the rest of us had been able to find better places. Sorry to ramble, but that\'s what writing does, it gets the read to feel, be inspired, to empathize. You write with clarity and hopefully saving thoughts.
July 26th, 2023 13:39
Scars
peto said:
Welcome
Keep writing
Begin healing
Raw and emotional
Looking forward to reading more from you
July 25th, 2023 23:26
peto said:
Welcome
Keep writing
Begin healing
Raw and emotional
Looking forward to reading more from you
July 25th, 2023 23:26
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