Comments received on poems by vividvoid14
imma make it
Bobby O said:
Three lines instead??
I know where my place….
Won’t stop till on top
it’s my competitive curse
Weaponized flow that I drop
Podium Gold Place me First
Nev’r rest my Righteous destiny BEST
ride this goat of success
Work Hardest like JB strutting
silky Marvin’s finesse
You can’t just say your gonna be first or good, that’s fine a dozen cliche, provide them the reasons,
August 18th, 2023 14:14
Bobby O said:
Three lines instead??
I know where my place….
Won’t stop till on top
it’s my competitive curse
Weaponized flow that I drop
Podium Gold Place me First
Nev’r rest my Righteous destiny BEST
ride this goat of success
Work Hardest like JB strutting
silky Marvin’s finesse
You can’t just say your gonna be first or good, that’s fine a dozen cliche, provide them the reasons,
August 18th, 2023 14:14
heartfelt
Sunsetmet said:
Beautiful my heart as my light those words stayed with me thanks so much for the lovely read
August 15th, 2023 08:33
Sunsetmet said:
Beautiful my heart as my light those words stayed with me thanks so much for the lovely read
August 15th, 2023 08:33
she is gone
Bobby O said:
My video on Hip Hop meets Jazz
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-163174
August 14th, 2023 07:12
Bobby O said:
My video on Hip Hop meets Jazz
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-163174
August 14th, 2023 07:12
heartfelt
Bobby O said:
Listen to the brilliance of that beautiful lady from above. The piece is kind to my ear snd embodies
RESILence
August 13th, 2023 17:46
Bobby O said:
Listen to the brilliance of that beautiful lady from above. The piece is kind to my ear snd embodies
RESILence
August 13th, 2023 17:46
heartfelt
Bobby O said:
Listen to the brilliance of that beautiful lady from above. The piece is kind to my ear snd embodies
RESILence
August 13th, 2023 17:41
Bobby O said:
Listen to the brilliance of that beautiful lady from above. The piece is kind to my ear snd embodies
RESILence
August 13th, 2023 17:41
heartfelt
Bobby O said:
Listen to the brilliance of that beautiful lady from above. The piece is kind to my ear snd embodies
RESILence
August 13th, 2023 17:41
Bobby O said:
Listen to the brilliance of that beautiful lady from above. The piece is kind to my ear snd embodies
RESILence
August 13th, 2023 17:41
heartfelt
Parisab said:
You have all the right tools Vivid! May you keep shining, in years to come! Cohesive and personal poem! Well done!!
August 13th, 2023 17:04
Parisab said:
You have all the right tools Vivid! May you keep shining, in years to come! Cohesive and personal poem! Well done!!
August 13th, 2023 17:04
friends are!
Bobby O said:
This piece is a winner. Pretty soon I’m coming to YOU for help.
YOU GO DUDE!
August 12th, 2023 20:42
Bobby O said:
This piece is a winner. Pretty soon I’m coming to YOU for help.
YOU GO DUDE!
August 12th, 2023 20:42
she is gone
Bobby O said:
My video on Hip Hop meets Jazz
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-163174
August 11th, 2023 22:28
Bobby O said:
My video on Hip Hop meets Jazz
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-163174
August 11th, 2023 22:28
she is gone
Bobby O said:
Smarter is good. I like the sentiment in the piece. Please read where I act without sense?
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-170159
August 11th, 2023 14:30
Bobby O said:
Smarter is good. I like the sentiment in the piece. Please read where I act without sense?
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-170159
August 11th, 2023 14:30
no dad
evenwheniLie said:
Poems should have meaning, or at least a meaningful intent, you hit this one out the ballpark… this poem should be the poster child for deadbeat dads and the sons they leave behind…. Excellent
August 11th, 2023 13:52
evenwheniLie said:
Poems should have meaning, or at least a meaningful intent, you hit this one out the ballpark… this poem should be the poster child for deadbeat dads and the sons they leave behind…. Excellent
August 11th, 2023 13:52
no dad
Parisab said:
You are a dream fourteen year old boy and a young man we should be all proud of! You rose above and you are a shining star! I feel sorry for any parent who misses out on a gift (for any reason.) Good poem and enjoy your business…
August 10th, 2023 11:16
Parisab said:
You are a dream fourteen year old boy and a young man we should be all proud of! You rose above and you are a shining star! I feel sorry for any parent who misses out on a gift (for any reason.) Good poem and enjoy your business…
August 10th, 2023 11:16
lord
2781 said:
\"Unless the Lord of Hosts had left us a very small remnant, we should have been as Sodom, and we should have been like unto Gomorrah.\"
Praise the Lord!
August 9th, 2023 19:30
2781 said:
\"Unless the Lord of Hosts had left us a very small remnant, we should have been as Sodom, and we should have been like unto Gomorrah.\"
Praise the Lord!
August 9th, 2023 19:30
lord
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet this is a beautiful poem, a beautiful reaffirming prayer. Hold fast to what gives you strength and purpose. This was indeed a joy to read, keep writing!
August 9th, 2023 13:07
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet this is a beautiful poem, a beautiful reaffirming prayer. Hold fast to what gives you strength and purpose. This was indeed a joy to read, keep writing!
August 9th, 2023 13:07
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