Comments received on poems by vividvoid14
Dad vs Garfield\'s dad
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write over the pain and sadness felt at their fathers inability to be a father, nicely expressed and written
June 26th, 2025 21:49
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write over the pain and sadness felt at their fathers inability to be a father, nicely expressed and written
June 26th, 2025 21:49
Dad vs Garfield\'s dad
sorenbarrett said:
Questions in a poem as to why father left and self blame rejected blame falls where it should. Nicely done
June 26th, 2025 19:56
sorenbarrett said:
Questions in a poem as to why father left and self blame rejected blame falls where it should. Nicely done
June 26th, 2025 19:56
Off the charts 📉
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt very personal write, keep writing at least your thoughts and feelings are safe in poetic form and slowly healing will begin
June 14th, 2025 00:28
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt very personal write, keep writing at least your thoughts and feelings are safe in poetic form and slowly healing will begin
June 14th, 2025 00:28
Off the charts 📉
Parisab said:
Sometimes you are stronger than even your mom-keep writing and give her time to go through her own growth and healing-keep on the nice and steady path if life’s trippin’ and feelin sad…see you made me do this:))
June 13th, 2025 14:47
Parisab said:
Sometimes you are stronger than even your mom-keep writing and give her time to go through her own growth and healing-keep on the nice and steady path if life’s trippin’ and feelin sad…see you made me do this:))
June 13th, 2025 14:47
Off the charts 📉
sorenbarrett said:
A deeply personal poem that is heart felt. A lovely write
June 13th, 2025 14:26
sorenbarrett said:
A deeply personal poem that is heart felt. A lovely write
June 13th, 2025 14:26
I\'m sorry
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate write of undying love, and is struggling to move on through the hurt and pain, nicely expressed and written
April 11th, 2025 05:02
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate write of undying love, and is struggling to move on through the hurt and pain, nicely expressed and written
April 11th, 2025 05:02
I\'m sorry
sorenbarrett said:
Sad this poem speaks from the perspective of one with love unrequited. Nicely written from a first person perspective.
April 11th, 2025 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
Sad this poem speaks from the perspective of one with love unrequited. Nicely written from a first person perspective.
April 11th, 2025 03:59
Everything I wish for
arqios said:
If only wishes and reality were a bit less apart. Some pretty strong emotions expressed here. Makes for powerful reading.
December 23rd, 2024 07:53
arqios said:
If only wishes and reality were a bit less apart. Some pretty strong emotions expressed here. Makes for powerful reading.
December 23rd, 2024 07:53
Everything I wish for
Poetic Licence said:
Emotional piece about an inner struggle to except themselves and see everyone else as better, Touching piece
December 22nd, 2024 02:25
Poetic Licence said:
Emotional piece about an inner struggle to except themselves and see everyone else as better, Touching piece
December 22nd, 2024 02:25
Everything I wish for
sheta said:
nice although we have things you dont want too
December 21st, 2024 18:51
sheta said:
nice although we have things you dont want too
December 21st, 2024 18:51
Words
Cassie58 said:
Words can be lethal as can people at times. It takes a person to pull the trigger. It takes a person to be vitriolic with their words. Nicely conveyed. Keep writing.
December 16th, 2024 12:48
Cassie58 said:
Words can be lethal as can people at times. It takes a person to pull the trigger. It takes a person to be vitriolic with their words. Nicely conveyed. Keep writing.
December 16th, 2024 12:48
Words
Poetic Licence said:
A quite stark reminder of the power of our tongue if used wrongly, but it also has the power to do so much good, Enjoyable read.
December 16th, 2024 06:10
Poetic Licence said:
A quite stark reminder of the power of our tongue if used wrongly, but it also has the power to do so much good, Enjoyable read.
December 16th, 2024 06:10
Thoughts of other lads
sheta said:
i can be sure im straight
but i don\'t like dating boys
someone left me and im in the dust im never dating again
good poem!
December 14th, 2024 23:19
sheta said:
i can be sure im straight
but i don\'t like dating boys
someone left me and im in the dust im never dating again
good poem!
December 14th, 2024 23:19
Thoughts of other lads
Poetic Licence said:
You have to except yourself as who you are, before others can. Brave write
December 14th, 2024 09:05
Poetic Licence said:
You have to except yourself as who you are, before others can. Brave write
December 14th, 2024 09:05
Thoughts of other lads
rin said:
Are driving my mad
Having said that, the fact that you look at yourself and assert yourself is what makes you unique.
December 14th, 2024 06:04
rin said:
Are driving my mad
Having said that, the fact that you look at yourself and assert yourself is what makes you unique.
December 14th, 2024 06:04
Lorenz
Parisab said:
Whatever their name, they are ignorant and certainly not a philosopher, with their tone-deaf messaging! Vivid walk away and report if you must-also preserve your emotions please when it gets too upsetting on social media-There is no room for inappropriateness or abuse here! Glad that your poetry keeps shinning …
December 13th, 2024 15:59
Parisab said:
Whatever their name, they are ignorant and certainly not a philosopher, with their tone-deaf messaging! Vivid walk away and report if you must-also preserve your emotions please when it gets too upsetting on social media-There is no room for inappropriateness or abuse here! Glad that your poetry keeps shinning …
December 13th, 2024 15:59
Mistakes
Parisab said:
Your words are maturing and your spirit is always pure and you! Shine on, Vivid!
December 13th, 2024 15:47
Parisab said:
Your words are maturing and your spirit is always pure and you! Shine on, Vivid!
December 13th, 2024 15:47
Mistakes
Poetic Licence said:
We all have faults in ourself that need repair, as best you can always be yourself, nicely expressed poem, thank you
December 13th, 2024 03:29
Poetic Licence said:
We all have faults in ourself that need repair, as best you can always be yourself, nicely expressed poem, thank you
December 13th, 2024 03:29
Lorenz
Poetic Licence said:
Am sorry this has happened to you, hope your on the mend
December 11th, 2024 09:21
Poetic Licence said:
Am sorry this has happened to you, hope your on the mend
December 11th, 2024 09:21
Lorenz
Sealgair said:
Do you have no sense of self-preservation in you and are so easily led astray? Life is beautiful, appreciate it and cherish it.
December 11th, 2024 07:44
Sealgair said:
Do you have no sense of self-preservation in you and are so easily led astray? Life is beautiful, appreciate it and cherish it.
December 11th, 2024 07:44
Lorenz
Lorenz said:
I just read and translate the profound message of souls .
December 11th, 2024 07:15
Lorenz said:
I just read and translate the profound message of souls .
December 11th, 2024 07:15
Lorenz
Cassie58 said:
You convey your feeling very well here. A new day has begun. You are a beautiful person and I have been enjoying reading you. Put all your energy into your writing, it is good therapy. Ignore the hurt .
December 11th, 2024 05:21
Cassie58 said:
You convey your feeling very well here. A new day has begun. You are a beautiful person and I have been enjoying reading you. Put all your energy into your writing, it is good therapy. Ignore the hurt .
December 11th, 2024 05:21
Lorenz
Bobby O said:
Wow! It’s good writing but very targeted and was dripping
December 11th, 2024 05:12
Bobby O said:
Wow! It’s good writing but very targeted and was dripping
December 11th, 2024 05:12
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