Comments received on poems by vividvoid14



What if SpongeBob was never happy
Poetic Licence said:

We cannot always see what is happening and they are not always as they appear, many people cry on the inside, very relatable write

July 5th, 2025 01:15

What if SpongeBob was never happy
sorenbarrett said:

Things are not always what they appear, illusions occur and misunderstandings as well. Nicely written

July 4th, 2025 19:04

Dad vs Garfield\'s dad
Poetic Licence said:

A touching write over the pain and sadness felt at their fathers inability to be a father, nicely expressed and written

June 26th, 2025 21:49

Dad vs Garfield\'s dad
sorenbarrett said:

Questions in a poem as to why father left and self blame rejected blame falls where it should. Nicely done

June 26th, 2025 19:56

Off the charts 📉
Poetic Licence said:

A heartfelt very personal write, keep writing at least your thoughts and feelings are safe in poetic form and slowly healing will begin

June 14th, 2025 00:28

Off the charts 📉
Tony36 said:

Love it

June 13th, 2025 18:46

Off the charts 📉
Parisab said:

Sometimes you are stronger than even your mom-keep writing and give her time to go through her own growth and healing-keep on the nice and steady path if life’s trippin’ and feelin sad…see you made me do this:))

June 13th, 2025 14:47

Off the charts 📉
sorenbarrett said:

A deeply personal poem that is heart felt. A lovely write

June 13th, 2025 14:26

I\'m sorry
Poetic Licence said:

A passionate write of undying love, and is struggling to move on through the hurt and pain, nicely expressed and written

April 11th, 2025 05:02

I\'m sorry
sorenbarrett said:

Sad this poem speaks from the perspective of one with love unrequited. Nicely written from a first person perspective.

April 11th, 2025 03:59

Everything I wish for
arqios said:

If only wishes and reality were a bit less apart. Some pretty strong emotions expressed here. Makes for powerful reading.

December 23rd, 2024 07:53

Everything I wish for
Poetic Licence said:

Emotional piece about an inner struggle to except themselves and see everyone else as better, Touching piece

December 22nd, 2024 02:25

Everything I wish for
sheta said:

nice although we have things you dont want too

December 21st, 2024 18:51

Star
rin said:

watching over you

December 16th, 2024 13:04

Words
Cassie58 said:

Words can be lethal as can people at times. It takes a person to pull the trigger. It takes a person to be vitriolic with their words. Nicely conveyed. Keep writing.

December 16th, 2024 12:48

Words
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

December 16th, 2024 10:54

Words
Poetic Licence said:

A quite stark reminder of the power of our tongue if used wrongly, but it also has the power to do so much good, Enjoyable read.

December 16th, 2024 06:10

Thoughts of other lads
sheta said:

i can be sure im straight
but i don\'t like dating boys
someone left me and im in the dust im never dating again
good poem!

December 14th, 2024 23:19

Thoughts of other lads
Poetic Licence said:

You have to except yourself as who you are, before others can. Brave write

December 14th, 2024 09:05

Thoughts of other lads
rin said:

Are driving my mad
Having said that, the fact that you look at yourself and assert yourself is what makes you unique.


December 14th, 2024 06:04

Lorenz
Parisab said:

Whatever their name, they are ignorant and certainly not a philosopher, with their tone-deaf messaging! Vivid walk away and report if you must-also preserve your emotions please when it gets too upsetting on social media-There is no room for inappropriateness or abuse here! Glad that your poetry keeps shinning …

December 13th, 2024 15:59

Mistakes
Parisab said:

Your words are maturing and your spirit is always pure and you! Shine on, Vivid!

December 13th, 2024 15:47

Mistakes
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 13th, 2024 09:02

Mistakes
Poetic Licence said:

We all have faults in ourself that need repair, as best you can always be yourself, nicely expressed poem, thank you

December 13th, 2024 03:29

Mistakes
rin said:

That\'s a good message. I thought about it a lot.

December 13th, 2024 02:29

Mistakes
MR.apocalypse said:

Very good

December 13th, 2024 02:26

Lorenz
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 11th, 2024 15:05

Lorenz
Poetic Licence said:

Am sorry this has happened to you, hope your on the mend

December 11th, 2024 09:21

Lorenz
Sealgair said:

Do you have no sense of self-preservation in you and are so easily led astray? Life is beautiful, appreciate it and cherish it.

December 11th, 2024 07:44

Lorenz
Lorenz said:

I just read and translate the profound message of souls .

December 11th, 2024 07:15

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