Comments received on poems by vividvoid14



Everything I wish for
rengoku said:

nice although we have things you dont want too

December 21st, 2024 18:51

Star
rin said:

watching over you

December 16th, 2024 13:04

Words
Cassie58 said:

Words can be lethal as can people at times. It takes a person to pull the trigger. It takes a person to be vitriolic with their words. Nicely conveyed. Keep writing.

December 16th, 2024 12:48

Words
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

December 16th, 2024 10:54

Words
TobaniNataiella said:

A quite stark reminder of the power of our tongue if used wrongly, but it also has the power to do so much good, Enjoyable read.

December 16th, 2024 06:10

Thoughts of other lads
rengoku said:

i can be sure im straight
but i don\'t like dating boys
someone left me and im in the dust im never dating again
good poem!

December 14th, 2024 23:19

Thoughts of other lads
TobaniNataiella said:

You have to except yourself as who you are, before others can. Brave write

December 14th, 2024 09:05

Thoughts of other lads
rin said:

Are driving my mad
Having said that, the fact that you look at yourself and assert yourself is what makes you unique.


December 14th, 2024 06:04

Lorenz
Parisab said:

Whatever their name, they are ignorant and certainly not a philosopher, with their tone-deaf messaging! Vivid walk away and report if you must-also preserve your emotions please when it gets too upsetting on social media-There is no room for inappropriateness or abuse here! Glad that your poetry keeps shinning …

December 13th, 2024 15:59

Mistakes
Parisab said:

Your words are maturing and your spirit is always pure and you! Shine on, Vivid!

December 13th, 2024 15:47

Mistakes
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 13th, 2024 09:02

Mistakes
TobaniNataiella said:

We all have faults in ourself that need repair, as best you can always be yourself, nicely expressed poem, thank you

December 13th, 2024 03:29

Mistakes
rin said:

That\'s a good message. I thought about it a lot.

December 13th, 2024 02:29

Mistakes
MR.apocalypse said:

Very good

December 13th, 2024 02:26

Lorenz
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 11th, 2024 15:05

Lorenz
TobaniNataiella said:

Am sorry this has happened to you, hope your on the mend

December 11th, 2024 09:21

Lorenz
Sealgair said:

Do you have no sense of self-preservation in you and are so easily led astray? Life is beautiful, appreciate it and cherish it.

December 11th, 2024 07:44

Lorenz
Lorenz said:

I just read and translate the profound message of souls .

December 11th, 2024 07:15

Lorenz
Cassie58 said:

You convey your feeling very well here. A new day has begun. You are a beautiful person and I have been enjoying reading you. Put all your energy into your writing, it is good therapy. Ignore the hurt .

December 11th, 2024 05:21

Lorenz
Bobby O said:

Wow! It’s good writing but very targeted and was dripping

December 11th, 2024 05:12

Why?
Lorenz said:

Suicide could be a good option !

December 9th, 2024 07:47

Broken lover\'s
TobaniNataiella said:

Fear of losing something you love is very frighting, and if hurt before would be natural to put defences up against getting hurt again. The problem if you get someone who really loves you but they do feel you trust them, it can cost you badly. Sometimes we have to go with our heart and take that chance, Keep the faith

December 8th, 2024 20:40

Help me
TobaniNataiella said:

Hi, if this is relating to yourself and i am not assuming it is, however if it is you need to find a friend or family member you can trust and discuss your feelings.
All the Best

November 29th, 2024 00:51

Doors are open
mati said:

This is so beautiful, sending you so much light

November 27th, 2024 09:48

Doors are open
Cassie58 said:

I dislike how people are given labels and put in pigeon holes. Let people be themselves without having to worry where they will fit in. That’s what your poem meant to me. Be happy, that’s all that counts. Enjoyed reading you.

November 27th, 2024 07:30

Star
Tony36 said:

L9ve it

November 26th, 2024 10:26

Star
Parisab said:

You are already shining bright, Vivid!
I’m so glad to see you in the “midnight sky”
Your words effortlessly shine, just as you are…
Great poem too…

November 26th, 2024 01:41

Star
Cassie58 said:

Midnight stars, in the vast night sky. Time for quiet reflection. Never give up on your dreams and Mother Nature is a wonderful healer for a troubled mind. You have a good friend giving you this challenge and well done you for rising to the occasion.

November 26th, 2024 01:27

your no man
Mutley Ravishes said:

Have you checked out NF’s work?

This maybe hard to understand
But what if your dad is teaching you
How to be a real man ? (however unintentionally)
Wishing you all the best in life!

May 30th, 2024 18:22

your no man
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful. The pain is palpable.

May 30th, 2024 14:11

Page 1 of 512345»


« Return to the profile of vividvoid14