Comments received on poems by vividvoid14
till the day i die
Parisab said:
Great symbolism of the beehive to describe dangerously bitter thoughts. Our racing minds can sting and make our life situation sticky. I like this concept and can’t wait to hear about when the honey turns sweet. Keep writing Vivid, but don’t forget to dance, talented one!
February 16th, 2024 01:02
Parisab said:
Great symbolism of the beehive to describe dangerously bitter thoughts. Our racing minds can sting and make our life situation sticky. I like this concept and can’t wait to hear about when the honey turns sweet. Keep writing Vivid, but don’t forget to dance, talented one!
February 16th, 2024 01:02
time to die
Bobby O said:
Nice write. I encourage you think about pairing these cathartic writes with another that teaches toward optimism. It’ll help me keep from worrying about my friend ???
February 15th, 2024 19:03
Bobby O said:
Nice write. I encourage you think about pairing these cathartic writes with another that teaches toward optimism. It’ll help me keep from worrying about my friend ???
February 15th, 2024 19:03
till the day i die
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a sad description of the human condition.But hey we all go through it
February 14th, 2024 15:02
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a sad description of the human condition.But hey we all go through it
February 14th, 2024 15:02
no longer my dad
Bobby O said:
Wow! I felt that. You really hit me w this one and it’s obvious you’ve listened well Gone is the military pacing , replaced instead by Heartfelt prose
Props
February 12th, 2024 12:55
Bobby O said:
Wow! I felt that. You really hit me w this one and it’s obvious you’ve listened well Gone is the military pacing , replaced instead by Heartfelt prose
Props
February 12th, 2024 12:55
no longer my dad
Lil said:
I agree. I just love this. It shows your perspective on it.
February 11th, 2024 19:47
Lil said:
I agree. I just love this. It shows your perspective on it.
February 11th, 2024 19:47
never ending symphony
Bobby O said:
Had to read it twice to filter out your ambivalence. It’s written with a caring attention and respect for the art but I wonder if it’s a coalescence or a collision ?
February 4th, 2024 17:41
Bobby O said:
Had to read it twice to filter out your ambivalence. It’s written with a caring attention and respect for the art but I wonder if it’s a coalescence or a collision ?
February 4th, 2024 17:41
never ending symphony
Parisab said:
Great elements to include in your “never ending symphony”. Looks like love is center stage and can conduct it all in great balance. Keep writing talented one… I’ld enjoy if you would start a rhyming fusion for us to join…
February 4th, 2024 12:10
Parisab said:
Great elements to include in your “never ending symphony”. Looks like love is center stage and can conduct it all in great balance. Keep writing talented one… I’ld enjoy if you would start a rhyming fusion for us to join…
February 4th, 2024 12:10
my struggles
vividvoid14 said:
IM NOT ON DRUGS NICOTINE I DONT DRINK WHINE I JUST MADE THIS FOR EDUCATIONAL AND LIFE ALTERING REASONS
January 23rd, 2024 23:34
vividvoid14 said:
IM NOT ON DRUGS NICOTINE I DONT DRINK WHINE I JUST MADE THIS FOR EDUCATIONAL AND LIFE ALTERING REASONS
January 23rd, 2024 23:34
Emotional journey
Parisab said:
Keep letting your light shine-your path is a great one-
January 20th, 2024 00:29
Parisab said:
Keep letting your light shine-your path is a great one-
January 20th, 2024 00:29
What a friend is
Accidental Poet said:
A friend is rare yes indeed
Without which we all surely need.
Well penned vividvoid14
January 10th, 2024 09:52
Accidental Poet said:
A friend is rare yes indeed
Without which we all surely need.
Well penned vividvoid14
January 10th, 2024 09:52
What a friend is
Cassie58 said:
True friends aren’t easy to find. They are worth their weight in gold. Cherish your friends. Keep them close. Lovely sentiment expressed here.
January 9th, 2024 15:00
Cassie58 said:
True friends aren’t easy to find. They are worth their weight in gold. Cherish your friends. Keep them close. Lovely sentiment expressed here.
January 9th, 2024 15:00
What a friend is
Bella Shepard said:
A true friend is gold, always and forever. Beautiful dear poet!
January 9th, 2024 12:34
Bella Shepard said:
A true friend is gold, always and forever. Beautiful dear poet!
January 9th, 2024 12:34
poem for a mother
Parisab said:
Your mother must be so special to inspire such bright a d beautiful words! This topic never gets old just like her love for you…
January 6th, 2024 22:55
Parisab said:
Your mother must be so special to inspire such bright a d beautiful words! This topic never gets old just like her love for you…
January 6th, 2024 22:55
Suicide letter to my girlfriend
NinjaGirl said:
So sad...she may follow you to be with you...I hope you feel better
January 6th, 2024 22:26
NinjaGirl said:
So sad...she may follow you to be with you...I hope you feel better
January 6th, 2024 22:26
poem for a mother
Bobby O said:
Perfect topic and a heartfelt tribute and you can keep this and keep adding and you can hold 96 pages or more of love in your hands.
January 2nd, 2024 23:42
Bobby O said:
Perfect topic and a heartfelt tribute and you can keep this and keep adding and you can hold 96 pages or more of love in your hands.
January 2nd, 2024 23:42
Suicide
Parisab said:
Sometimes it’s a good exercise to bring out what’s on your mind-good to see you fete, Vivid…
January 1st, 2024 23:38
Parisab said:
Sometimes it’s a good exercise to bring out what’s on your mind-good to see you fete, Vivid…
January 1st, 2024 23:38
Don’t judge a book by its cover
Bobby O said:
Your comment about your poem is wise. You mostly did succeed. I won’t repeat anything about the pronouns since you already admitted you didn’t go back to fix things
December 29th, 2023 18:31
Bobby O said:
Your comment about your poem is wise. You mostly did succeed. I won’t repeat anything about the pronouns since you already admitted you didn’t go back to fix things
December 29th, 2023 18:31
Insecurities of your beauty
Bella Shepard said:
Insecurity does need encouragement to find self worth. Beautifully penned!
November 19th, 2023 13:32
Bella Shepard said:
Insecurity does need encouragement to find self worth. Beautifully penned!
November 19th, 2023 13:32
HAPYY!
Parisab said:
I love the spelling you chose for the title “Hapyy” it grabs the attention and brings joy -I would keep that spelling throughout the poem-as for the rest go through your spelling and punctuation and chose them carefully- but what is perfect is your talent and all the Joy and good wisdom you bring-thank you for sharing this special poem and your talent here-asking for comments is brave and smart-all the best, Vivid!
October 20th, 2023 00:42
Parisab said:
I love the spelling you chose for the title “Hapyy” it grabs the attention and brings joy -I would keep that spelling throughout the poem-as for the rest go through your spelling and punctuation and chose them carefully- but what is perfect is your talent and all the Joy and good wisdom you bring-thank you for sharing this special poem and your talent here-asking for comments is brave and smart-all the best, Vivid!
October 20th, 2023 00:42
Burdened Soul
Parisab said:
Vivid, your words are getting stronger and the soul of a poet notices things some others don’t, and that is pressure! I’m proud of this poem…
October 13th, 2023 11:52
Parisab said:
Vivid, your words are getting stronger and the soul of a poet notices things some others don’t, and that is pressure! I’m proud of this poem…
October 13th, 2023 11:52
Burdened Soul
Bobby O said:
I love the invention present here. I also have faith that this pressure will make diamonds that translate to success
October 11th, 2023 06:30
Bobby O said:
I love the invention present here. I also have faith that this pressure will make diamonds that translate to success
October 11th, 2023 06:30
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