Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Cocktails
Ellen Marsell said:
This could have been a very exciting exploration of exotic tastes and aromas.
June 30th, 2024 10:45
Ellen Marsell said:
This could have been a very exciting exploration of exotic tastes and aromas.
June 30th, 2024 10:45
In the mood
Ellen Marsell said:
I love that gentle melancholy tone in your poem.
May 27th, 2024 10:58
Ellen Marsell said:
I love that gentle melancholy tone in your poem.
May 27th, 2024 10:58
The ledger
2781 said:
Thy dead men shall live, together with my dead body shall they arise. Awake and sing, ye that dwell in the dust: for thy dew is as the dew of herbs, and the earth shall cast out the dead.
May 24th, 2024 02:26
2781 said:
Thy dead men shall live, together with my dead body shall they arise. Awake and sing, ye that dwell in the dust: for thy dew is as the dew of herbs, and the earth shall cast out the dead.
May 24th, 2024 02:26
The streetcar girl
Ellen Marsell said:
A girl lost in her own world and a stirring moment of fleeting contemplation... A gentle message.
May 14th, 2024 11:14
Ellen Marsell said:
A girl lost in her own world and a stirring moment of fleeting contemplation... A gentle message.
May 14th, 2024 11:14
Punishment
2781 said:
And I saw, and behold a white horse: and he that sat on him had a bow, and a crown was given unto him: and he went forth conquering, and to conquer.
May 13th, 2024 15:01
2781 said:
And I saw, and behold a white horse: and he that sat on him had a bow, and a crown was given unto him: and he went forth conquering, and to conquer.
May 13th, 2024 15:01
Prelude
Ellen Marsell said:
The music in your words and the feeling of nature\'s embrace. So vivid and sensual.
May 11th, 2024 09:44
Ellen Marsell said:
The music in your words and the feeling of nature\'s embrace. So vivid and sensual.
May 11th, 2024 09:44
Requiem
Ellen Marsell said:
Very impressive!
He once said he was writing \"Requiem\" for himself.
May 7th, 2024 11:02
Ellen Marsell said:
Very impressive!
He once said he was writing \"Requiem\" for himself.
May 7th, 2024 11:02
A little poem
Ellen Marsell said:
\"There would be many moments of happiness in life, if only we could slow down the passage of time and dwell on them longer\".
That is a marvelous poem, my friend.
May 5th, 2024 09:25
Ellen Marsell said:
\"There would be many moments of happiness in life, if only we could slow down the passage of time and dwell on them longer\".
That is a marvelous poem, my friend.
May 5th, 2024 09:25
Spirit of fire
Ellen Marsell said:
Reading you is like living every story.
That\'s great!
May 3rd, 2024 10:59
Ellen Marsell said:
Reading you is like living every story.
That\'s great!
May 3rd, 2024 10:59
Spirit of fire
aDarkerMind said:
how to pick a favourite line from this, or just marvel it all;
when I read it for the umpteenth time, I\'ll let you know.
May 3rd, 2024 10:25
aDarkerMind said:
how to pick a favourite line from this, or just marvel it all;
when I read it for the umpteenth time, I\'ll let you know.
May 3rd, 2024 10:25
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