Comments received on poems by sunshine777
You
peto said:
Ouch
Keep writing it out sunshine
Hopefully your Ray\'s shine again soon
April 10th, 2024 20:19
peto said:
Ouch
Keep writing it out sunshine
Hopefully your Ray\'s shine again soon
April 10th, 2024 20:19
Light And Dark
Hugh said:
Wonderfully written, it just shone through with hope
March 31st, 2024 17:39
Hugh said:
Wonderfully written, it just shone through with hope
March 31st, 2024 17:39
Light And Dark
aDarkerMind said:
very touchng....and well written.
I will read more of your poems, and will also read Tupac Shakur who I have not heard of.
March 28th, 2024 11:04
aDarkerMind said:
very touchng....and well written.
I will read more of your poems, and will also read Tupac Shakur who I have not heard of.
March 28th, 2024 11:04
Mirror
Hugh said:
I do like that, a lot, the sadness there is all too palpable. Everything we do, we love it so dependant on others that when that breaks its so hard and you have expressed that so well
March 27th, 2024 17:05
Hugh said:
I do like that, a lot, the sadness there is all too palpable. Everything we do, we love it so dependant on others that when that breaks its so hard and you have expressed that so well
March 27th, 2024 17:05
The Truth
Meera Mere said:
\"My heart is in his eyes
The heavens we share
In our reality I confide\"
Well penned sunshine777.
March 16th, 2024 08:14
Meera Mere said:
\"My heart is in his eyes
The heavens we share
In our reality I confide\"
Well penned sunshine777.
March 16th, 2024 08:14
Heartless
Cassie58 said:
Sadly sunshine, in life there are givers and takers. You write here of a taker. Incapable of giving anything but perfectly capable of leaving a broken heart. I felt your sadness.
March 11th, 2024 23:21
Cassie58 said:
Sadly sunshine, in life there are givers and takers. You write here of a taker. Incapable of giving anything but perfectly capable of leaving a broken heart. I felt your sadness.
March 11th, 2024 23:21
This Ain\'t Life
Thoughtless said:
There may be a sequel with great and terrifying consequences.
March 10th, 2024 15:37
Thoughtless said:
There may be a sequel with great and terrifying consequences.
March 10th, 2024 15:37
This Ain\'t Life
peto said:
If only sunshine
You are describing what would be paradise
Really enjoyed the final verse
With a banging rhyme
Super write
March 10th, 2024 15:26
peto said:
If only sunshine
You are describing what would be paradise
Really enjoyed the final verse
With a banging rhyme
Super write
March 10th, 2024 15:26
Mirror
Cassie58 said:
You want to settle the score and that is so understandable when you feel betrayed. Your pain is evident. I am a firm believer in karma. There will come a time ……..
March 10th, 2024 00:32
Cassie58 said:
You want to settle the score and that is so understandable when you feel betrayed. Your pain is evident. I am a firm believer in karma. There will come a time ……..
March 10th, 2024 00:32
Mirror
sunshine777 said:
Thank you for the read and I am reflecting deep on your comment. I guess I\'m a firm believer in karma so there\'s always the question of looking into yourself to ask why certain things happen to people
March 9th, 2024 21:25
sunshine777 said:
Thank you for the read and I am reflecting deep on your comment. I guess I\'m a firm believer in karma so there\'s always the question of looking into yourself to ask why certain things happen to people
March 9th, 2024 21:25
Mirror
peto said:
Such a sad write
I don\'t see how another\'s behaviour or actions should reflect on you
I can understand when we give everything and are betrayed we hurt
But not our doing so look in the mirror with pride knowing you did your bit
Loved the rhyme and flow of this
March 9th, 2024 21:16
peto said:
Such a sad write
I don\'t see how another\'s behaviour or actions should reflect on you
I can understand when we give everything and are betrayed we hurt
But not our doing so look in the mirror with pride knowing you did your bit
Loved the rhyme and flow of this
March 9th, 2024 21:16
Hell or Heaven
peto said:
\"We were real far from perfect \"
Great line
Enjoyed the read
Keep shining
March 5th, 2024 20:23
peto said:
\"We were real far from perfect \"
Great line
Enjoyed the read
Keep shining
March 5th, 2024 20:23
Art
peto said:
Thanks for sharing your art with us
We all need a little sunshine
Enjoyed this one
March 3rd, 2024 14:23
peto said:
Thanks for sharing your art with us
We all need a little sunshine
Enjoyed this one
March 3rd, 2024 14:23
Art
Teddy.15 said:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder your title is beautiful and fits this piece of poetry perfectly, about someone whom will never fade from vision always in a frame. Simply beautiful. 🌹
March 3rd, 2024 13:57
Teddy.15 said:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder your title is beautiful and fits this piece of poetry perfectly, about someone whom will never fade from vision always in a frame. Simply beautiful. 🌹
March 3rd, 2024 13:57
Snakes
Thomas W Case said:
The best way to kill a snake is cut off its head. Good write. Stay strong.
October 28th, 2023 18:36
Thomas W Case said:
The best way to kill a snake is cut off its head. Good write. Stay strong.
October 28th, 2023 18:36
Boomerang
L. B. Mek said:
sadly i so fervently, relate
but hence
i also, champion and rate..
thanks for sharing
I found this a therapeutic read
September 4th, 2023 05:29
L. B. Mek said:
sadly i so fervently, relate
but hence
i also, champion and rate..
thanks for sharing
I found this a therapeutic read
September 4th, 2023 05:29
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