Comments received on poems by sunshine777
Self Obsessed
sorenbarrett said:
There are things worth more than money. A great write
October 30th, 2024 11:22
sorenbarrett said:
There are things worth more than money. A great write
October 30th, 2024 11:22
Self Obsessed
MendedFences27 said:
A very moving scene created here. Your style is unique. Your empathy for the downtrodden speaks in your poem. Maybe one day we will all have \"A heart.\'\" - Phil A.
October 30th, 2024 09:34
MendedFences27 said:
A very moving scene created here. Your style is unique. Your empathy for the downtrodden speaks in your poem. Maybe one day we will all have \"A heart.\'\" - Phil A.
October 30th, 2024 09:34
Starvation
sorenbarrett said:
An empathetic heart is heard in this poem. Hungry children pull at the heart strings. Sometimes I would rather be hungry in the belly than in the soul. Great write
October 29th, 2024 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
An empathetic heart is heard in this poem. Hungry children pull at the heart strings. Sometimes I would rather be hungry in the belly than in the soul. Great write
October 29th, 2024 08:19
Starvation
mvvenkataraman said:
I fall at your feet to wash them with my tears,
You only are a true human being surely,
Your poem is extraordinarily touching,
I pray for you and other poor souls,
Great poetic write that has no match,
As its meaning pierces my old heart !
October 29th, 2024 07:59
mvvenkataraman said:
I fall at your feet to wash them with my tears,
You only are a true human being surely,
Your poem is extraordinarily touching,
I pray for you and other poor souls,
Great poetic write that has no match,
As its meaning pierces my old heart !
October 29th, 2024 07:59
If We
sorenbarrett said:
A good question as to what love really is and what most call love is really only passion that is short lived. Nicely worded
October 28th, 2024 19:55
sorenbarrett said:
A good question as to what love really is and what most call love is really only passion that is short lived. Nicely worded
October 28th, 2024 19:55
Until
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and haunting. Sad, well written with a poignant message
October 23rd, 2024 18:49
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and haunting. Sad, well written with a poignant message
October 23rd, 2024 18:49
Truth
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting metaphor that can be take to great extreems. Although never touching they are drawn to each other by the gravitational pull or love the moon may eclipse the sun but this casts shadows, the light on the moon is biven by the sun and is reflected back. on and on it goes lovely poem
October 20th, 2024 05:36
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting metaphor that can be take to great extreems. Although never touching they are drawn to each other by the gravitational pull or love the moon may eclipse the sun but this casts shadows, the light on the moon is biven by the sun and is reflected back. on and on it goes lovely poem
October 20th, 2024 05:36
A Little Girl
NinjaGirl said:
And we mourn the childhood we never had... Very beautiful, thank you.
October 14th, 2024 21:18
NinjaGirl said:
And we mourn the childhood we never had... Very beautiful, thank you.
October 14th, 2024 21:18
Where Is My Love
sorenbarrett said:
The bond can be very strong and one does not feel right without the other. All this in this poem nicely written
October 13th, 2024 15:26
sorenbarrett said:
The bond can be very strong and one does not feel right without the other. All this in this poem nicely written
October 13th, 2024 15:26
Where Is My Love
hzugman said:
He\'s out there maybe nearer than you think. And don\'t underestimate the value of a pawn. In the right circumstance, a promoted pawn can be even more powerful that a queen having the options of becoming a queen as well as a bishop, knight or rook.
October 13th, 2024 09:38
hzugman said:
He\'s out there maybe nearer than you think. And don\'t underestimate the value of a pawn. In the right circumstance, a promoted pawn can be even more powerful that a queen having the options of becoming a queen as well as a bishop, knight or rook.
October 13th, 2024 09:38
A Woman With A Heart
sorenbarrett said:
It is always good to know oneself. Nicely stated with confidence
October 12th, 2024 05:11
sorenbarrett said:
It is always good to know oneself. Nicely stated with confidence
October 12th, 2024 05:11
A Little Girl
sorenbarrett said:
Sad story where the best steal is that that is tempered.
October 10th, 2024 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
Sad story where the best steal is that that is tempered.
October 10th, 2024 05:18
You
Cassie58 said:
Sometimes enough is enough. There is a limit to what each heart can take. Words well conveyed sunshine.
September 24th, 2024 04:09
Cassie58 said:
Sometimes enough is enough. There is a limit to what each heart can take. Words well conveyed sunshine.
September 24th, 2024 04:09
What\'s Next?
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message one should never look back. One should live in the present. This is a poem that applies to all.
September 5th, 2024 06:34
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message one should never look back. One should live in the present. This is a poem that applies to all.
September 5th, 2024 06:34
I Don\'t Know Why
Mutley Ravishes said:
Have you checked out the work of John St Julien Baba Wanyama?
A mighty soul!
August 27th, 2024 19:17
Mutley Ravishes said:
Have you checked out the work of John St Julien Baba Wanyama?
A mighty soul!
August 27th, 2024 19:17
Infinity
sorenbarrett said:
A statement of love and pledge of friendship. Lovely
August 19th, 2024 05:25
sorenbarrett said:
A statement of love and pledge of friendship. Lovely
August 19th, 2024 05:25
The Bible Says Be Honest
sorenbarrett said:
Nature has her own rules and she is a mother too. I can hear the anger in this poem and it pleads for an answer. Maybe we are just looking at it wrong. A good write
July 29th, 2024 09:24
sorenbarrett said:
Nature has her own rules and she is a mother too. I can hear the anger in this poem and it pleads for an answer. Maybe we are just looking at it wrong. A good write
July 29th, 2024 09:24
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