Comments received on poems by sunshine777
Until
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and haunting. Sad, well written with a poignant message
October 23rd, 2024 18:49
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and haunting. Sad, well written with a poignant message
October 23rd, 2024 18:49
Truth
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting metaphor that can be take to great extreems. Although never touching they are drawn to each other by the gravitational pull or love the moon may eclipse the sun but this casts shadows, the light on the moon is biven by the sun and is reflected back. on and on it goes lovely poem
October 20th, 2024 05:36
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting metaphor that can be take to great extreems. Although never touching they are drawn to each other by the gravitational pull or love the moon may eclipse the sun but this casts shadows, the light on the moon is biven by the sun and is reflected back. on and on it goes lovely poem
October 20th, 2024 05:36
A Little Girl
NinjaGirl said:
And we mourn the childhood we never had... Very beautiful, thank you.
October 14th, 2024 21:18
NinjaGirl said:
And we mourn the childhood we never had... Very beautiful, thank you.
October 14th, 2024 21:18
Where Is My Love
sorenbarrett said:
The bond can be very strong and one does not feel right without the other. All this in this poem nicely written
October 13th, 2024 15:26
sorenbarrett said:
The bond can be very strong and one does not feel right without the other. All this in this poem nicely written
October 13th, 2024 15:26
Where Is My Love
hzugman said:
He\'s out there maybe nearer than you think. And don\'t underestimate the value of a pawn. In the right circumstance, a promoted pawn can be even more powerful that a queen having the options of becoming a queen as well as a bishop, knight or rook.
October 13th, 2024 09:38
hzugman said:
He\'s out there maybe nearer than you think. And don\'t underestimate the value of a pawn. In the right circumstance, a promoted pawn can be even more powerful that a queen having the options of becoming a queen as well as a bishop, knight or rook.
October 13th, 2024 09:38
A Woman With A Heart
sorenbarrett said:
It is always good to know oneself. Nicely stated with confidence
October 12th, 2024 05:11
sorenbarrett said:
It is always good to know oneself. Nicely stated with confidence
October 12th, 2024 05:11
A Little Girl
sorenbarrett said:
Sad story where the best steal is that that is tempered.
October 10th, 2024 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
Sad story where the best steal is that that is tempered.
October 10th, 2024 05:18
You
Cassie58 said:
Sometimes enough is enough. There is a limit to what each heart can take. Words well conveyed sunshine.
September 24th, 2024 04:09
Cassie58 said:
Sometimes enough is enough. There is a limit to what each heart can take. Words well conveyed sunshine.
September 24th, 2024 04:09
What\'s Next?
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message one should never look back. One should live in the present. This is a poem that applies to all.
September 5th, 2024 06:34
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message one should never look back. One should live in the present. This is a poem that applies to all.
September 5th, 2024 06:34
I Don\'t Know Why
Mutley Ravishes said:
Have you checked out the work of John St Julien Baba Wanyama?
A mighty soul!
August 27th, 2024 19:17
Mutley Ravishes said:
Have you checked out the work of John St Julien Baba Wanyama?
A mighty soul!
August 27th, 2024 19:17
Infinity
sorenbarrett said:
A statement of love and pledge of friendship. Lovely
August 19th, 2024 05:25
sorenbarrett said:
A statement of love and pledge of friendship. Lovely
August 19th, 2024 05:25
The Bible Says Be Honest
sorenbarrett said:
Nature has her own rules and she is a mother too. I can hear the anger in this poem and it pleads for an answer. Maybe we are just looking at it wrong. A good write
July 29th, 2024 09:24
sorenbarrett said:
Nature has her own rules and she is a mother too. I can hear the anger in this poem and it pleads for an answer. Maybe we are just looking at it wrong. A good write
July 29th, 2024 09:24
No Name
Cassie58 said:
A thought provoking piece of brevity sunshine. I have read this several times and it has left a mark on me. Have a good Thursday.
July 18th, 2024 01:27
Cassie58 said:
A thought provoking piece of brevity sunshine. I have read this several times and it has left a mark on me. Have a good Thursday.
July 18th, 2024 01:27
No Name
sunshine777 said:
No more fear of the abyss
Hell cannot be any worse then this
July 17th, 2024 21:52
sunshine777 said:
No more fear of the abyss
Hell cannot be any worse then this
July 17th, 2024 21:52
Mind
Cassie58 said:
So often we can find our heart and our minds aren’t in sync. The mind can play such games . Nicely penned Sunshine.
July 9th, 2024 15:42
Cassie58 said:
So often we can find our heart and our minds aren’t in sync. The mind can play such games . Nicely penned Sunshine.
July 9th, 2024 15:42
He Will Take The Kids
Cassie58 said:
Sad poem, hurt to read. What would I do? Never leave your kids. If you go take them with you. If you stay, get him out. If this is a true picture and not fiction get professional help Sunshine. The lines say there is no fear and yet this reader felt it.
May 28th, 2024 14:38
Cassie58 said:
Sad poem, hurt to read. What would I do? Never leave your kids. If you go take them with you. If you stay, get him out. If this is a true picture and not fiction get professional help Sunshine. The lines say there is no fear and yet this reader felt it.
May 28th, 2024 14:38
Dear Mind
Cassie58 said:
Keep believing he cares. The world is a hostile place. Thank you for sharing. .
May 19th, 2024 16:36
Cassie58 said:
Keep believing he cares. The world is a hostile place. Thank you for sharing. .
May 19th, 2024 16:36
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