Comments received on poems by sunshine777
No Name
Cassie58 said:
A thought provoking piece of brevity sunshine. I have read this several times and it has left a mark on me. Have a good Thursday.
July 18th, 2024 01:27
Cassie58 said:
A thought provoking piece of brevity sunshine. I have read this several times and it has left a mark on me. Have a good Thursday.
July 18th, 2024 01:27
No Name
sunshine777 said:
No more fear of the abyss
Hell cannot be any worse then this
July 17th, 2024 21:52
sunshine777 said:
No more fear of the abyss
Hell cannot be any worse then this
July 17th, 2024 21:52
Mind
Cassie58 said:
So often we can find our heart and our minds aren’t in sync. The mind can play such games . Nicely penned Sunshine.
July 9th, 2024 15:42
Cassie58 said:
So often we can find our heart and our minds aren’t in sync. The mind can play such games . Nicely penned Sunshine.
July 9th, 2024 15:42
He Will Take The Kids
Cassie58 said:
Sad poem, hurt to read. What would I do? Never leave your kids. If you go take them with you. If you stay, get him out. If this is a true picture and not fiction get professional help Sunshine. The lines say there is no fear and yet this reader felt it.
May 28th, 2024 14:38
Cassie58 said:
Sad poem, hurt to read. What would I do? Never leave your kids. If you go take them with you. If you stay, get him out. If this is a true picture and not fiction get professional help Sunshine. The lines say there is no fear and yet this reader felt it.
May 28th, 2024 14:38
Dear Mind
Cassie58 said:
Keep believing he cares. The world is a hostile place. Thank you for sharing. .
May 19th, 2024 16:36
Cassie58 said:
Keep believing he cares. The world is a hostile place. Thank you for sharing. .
May 19th, 2024 16:36
The One
Cassie58 said:
We all need a rock to lean on. Beautiful poem. Thanks for accepting my friend request.
May 5th, 2024 16:02
Cassie58 said:
We all need a rock to lean on. Beautiful poem. Thanks for accepting my friend request.
May 5th, 2024 16:02
What is Life?
Cassie58 said:
Life is all those things from start to finish, Better lived if the positives are found and the negatives are cast aside. To be kind is one that I try to live by. Pleased I stopped by to read your spiritual poem sunshine.
May 3rd, 2024 20:50
Cassie58 said:
Life is all those things from start to finish, Better lived if the positives are found and the negatives are cast aside. To be kind is one that I try to live by. Pleased I stopped by to read your spiritual poem sunshine.
May 3rd, 2024 20:50
I Say
peto said:
Now I hope you welcome victory
Sounds like you have a real survival instinct
Really enjoy how you write
More please
May 1st, 2024 19:09
peto said:
Now I hope you welcome victory
Sounds like you have a real survival instinct
Really enjoy how you write
More please
May 1st, 2024 19:09
Beginning and End
peto said:
Ah sunshine...
Hope the middle bit was as good as the beginning and end
Another great read
Emotional
April 28th, 2024 00:09
peto said:
Ah sunshine...
Hope the middle bit was as good as the beginning and end
Another great read
Emotional
April 28th, 2024 00:09
Love Remains in Me
peto said:
A love warrior ..... perfect
Loved this read full of hope and inspiration
Keep em coming
Loved it
April 25th, 2024 21:26
peto said:
A love warrior ..... perfect
Loved this read full of hope and inspiration
Keep em coming
Loved it
April 25th, 2024 21:26
You
peto said:
Ouch
Keep writing it out sunshine
Hopefully your Ray\'s shine again soon
April 10th, 2024 20:19
peto said:
Ouch
Keep writing it out sunshine
Hopefully your Ray\'s shine again soon
April 10th, 2024 20:19
Light And Dark
Hugh said:
Wonderfully written, it just shone through with hope
March 31st, 2024 17:39
Hugh said:
Wonderfully written, it just shone through with hope
March 31st, 2024 17:39
Light And Dark
aDarkerMind said:
very touchng....and well written.
I will read more of your poems, and will also read Tupac Shakur who I have not heard of.
March 28th, 2024 11:04
aDarkerMind said:
very touchng....and well written.
I will read more of your poems, and will also read Tupac Shakur who I have not heard of.
March 28th, 2024 11:04
Mirror
Hugh said:
I do like that, a lot, the sadness there is all too palpable. Everything we do, we love it so dependant on others that when that breaks its so hard and you have expressed that so well
March 27th, 2024 17:05
Hugh said:
I do like that, a lot, the sadness there is all too palpable. Everything we do, we love it so dependant on others that when that breaks its so hard and you have expressed that so well
March 27th, 2024 17:05
The Truth
Meera Mere said:
\"My heart is in his eyes
The heavens we share
In our reality I confide\"
Well penned sunshine777.
March 16th, 2024 08:14
Meera Mere said:
\"My heart is in his eyes
The heavens we share
In our reality I confide\"
Well penned sunshine777.
March 16th, 2024 08:14
Heartless
Cassie58 said:
Sadly sunshine, in life there are givers and takers. You write here of a taker. Incapable of giving anything but perfectly capable of leaving a broken heart. I felt your sadness.
March 11th, 2024 23:21
Cassie58 said:
Sadly sunshine, in life there are givers and takers. You write here of a taker. Incapable of giving anything but perfectly capable of leaving a broken heart. I felt your sadness.
March 11th, 2024 23:21
This Ain\'t Life
Thoughtless said:
There may be a sequel with great and terrifying consequences.
March 10th, 2024 15:37
Thoughtless said:
There may be a sequel with great and terrifying consequences.
March 10th, 2024 15:37
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