Comments received on poems by sunshine777
When Mom Breaks
sorenbarrett said:
When mothers loose their temper there is a wish to just disappear. There is always the feeling that mothers are right and one deserves the beating. A touching but tough read
August 29th, 2025 16:21
sorenbarrett said:
When mothers loose their temper there is a wish to just disappear. There is always the feeling that mothers are right and one deserves the beating. A touching but tough read
August 29th, 2025 16:21
Words Cut Like A Knife
NinjaGirl said:
What I find so piercing about words is that there\'s no proof. People will say they didn\'t say that, or say they didn\'t mean it. But the cloth doesn\'t forget the ink.
August 28th, 2025 23:12
NinjaGirl said:
What I find so piercing about words is that there\'s no proof. People will say they didn\'t say that, or say they didn\'t mean it. But the cloth doesn\'t forget the ink.
August 28th, 2025 23:12
Words Cut Like A Knife
sorenbarrett said:
Words can hurt depending upon the person that says them and the self esteem of the person they are directed at. Nicely worded
August 28th, 2025 09:53
sorenbarrett said:
Words can hurt depending upon the person that says them and the self esteem of the person they are directed at. Nicely worded
August 28th, 2025 09:53
Poetic Justice
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of abandonment and betrayal in this poem come through. Anger as well and then standing up for oneself and leaving to better the situation. Well written
May 29th, 2025 15:47
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of abandonment and betrayal in this poem come through. Anger as well and then standing up for oneself and leaving to better the situation. Well written
May 29th, 2025 15:47
Poetic Justice
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt write of what appears a very one sided at times abusive relationship, raw and honestly written
May 29th, 2025 15:32
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt write of what appears a very one sided at times abusive relationship, raw and honestly written
May 29th, 2025 15:32
Forget The World (FTW)
Poetic Licence said:
So true, we appear as a race to never learn from our mistakes, we stand around like drunken boxers just waiting to be hit again, nicely expressed and written
May 28th, 2025 02:16
Poetic Licence said:
So true, we appear as a race to never learn from our mistakes, we stand around like drunken boxers just waiting to be hit again, nicely expressed and written
May 28th, 2025 02:16
Forget The World (FTW)
Mutley Ravishes said:
The mesmerizing power of this human life! Great write.
May 27th, 2025 21:08
Mutley Ravishes said:
The mesmerizing power of this human life! Great write.
May 27th, 2025 21:08
Forget The World (FTW)
sorenbarrett said:
It is difficult for people to learn from their experience and hard to change. Well written
May 27th, 2025 20:51
sorenbarrett said:
It is difficult for people to learn from their experience and hard to change. Well written
May 27th, 2025 20:51
Middle Of A Storm
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
sadly the way of the world now, thanks for sharing
May 24th, 2025 12:46
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
sadly the way of the world now, thanks for sharing
May 24th, 2025 12:46
Smile
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of religious belief and conviction that leads to a better life. Nicely written in good rhyme
May 24th, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of religious belief and conviction that leads to a better life. Nicely written in good rhyme
May 24th, 2025 03:54
Smile
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of their faith helping them overcome the pain and trauma of the past, nicely expressed and written, given them back their self worth
May 24th, 2025 02:38
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of their faith helping them overcome the pain and trauma of the past, nicely expressed and written, given them back their self worth
May 24th, 2025 02:38
Middle Of A Storm
sorenbarrett said:
Reality or dream how does one tell the difference? It does seem to be the present state of mind. A most poignant poem, well done.
May 14th, 2025 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
Reality or dream how does one tell the difference? It does seem to be the present state of mind. A most poignant poem, well done.
May 14th, 2025 03:50
Middle Of A Storm
Mutley Ravishes said:
Gratitude is out of date
Self-righteous justification
On the dinner plate
Every night!
Great write.
May 14th, 2025 00:27
Mutley Ravishes said:
Gratitude is out of date
Self-righteous justification
On the dinner plate
Every night!
Great write.
May 14th, 2025 00:27
Simply His Touch
arqios said:
Amen. Nothing this side of heaven is guaranteed. But it all will finish up superbly 🙏🏻🕊️
May 9th, 2025 19:13
arqios said:
Amen. Nothing this side of heaven is guaranteed. But it all will finish up superbly 🙏🏻🕊️
May 9th, 2025 19:13
Eternally You and I
Poetic Licence said:
I sense appreciation of the person and the companionship, in comfort knowing they are not alone, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 08:27
Poetic Licence said:
I sense appreciation of the person and the companionship, in comfort knowing they are not alone, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 08:27
Simply His Touch
Poetic Licence said:
A strong pledge of love, something we could all do with, nicely expressed and written
May 7th, 2025 08:10
Poetic Licence said:
A strong pledge of love, something we could all do with, nicely expressed and written
May 7th, 2025 08:10
Simply His Touch
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that is a pledge of love. Firmly stated and well put. very nice
May 3rd, 2025 16:12
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that is a pledge of love. Firmly stated and well put. very nice
May 3rd, 2025 16:12
Eternally You and I
sorenbarrett said:
I hear gratitude in this poem of strife and life, companionship makes it all worth while.
May 1st, 2025 15:59
sorenbarrett said:
I hear gratitude in this poem of strife and life, companionship makes it all worth while.
May 1st, 2025 15:59
One Day You\'ll Understand
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in letter form to one\'s children telling of your sacrifice for them. Freedom for happiness of others. An understandable decision that only a mother\'s love could engineer. Well written
April 29th, 2025 20:30
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in letter form to one\'s children telling of your sacrifice for them. Freedom for happiness of others. An understandable decision that only a mother\'s love could engineer. Well written
April 29th, 2025 20:30
Strength
sorenbarrett said:
The perseverance to keep going is evident here. Very nicely written
April 27th, 2025 18:42
sorenbarrett said:
The perseverance to keep going is evident here. Very nicely written
April 27th, 2025 18:42
Boom
sorenbarrett said:
Harsh, dark, brutal, sad. A poem too real to be ignored. Well done
April 26th, 2025 18:04
sorenbarrett said:
Harsh, dark, brutal, sad. A poem too real to be ignored. Well done
April 26th, 2025 18:04
Trapped
sorenbarrett said:
A most painful read surreal or not a poem of wrestling with evil. Well written
April 24th, 2025 12:55
sorenbarrett said:
A most painful read surreal or not a poem of wrestling with evil. Well written
April 24th, 2025 12:55
Love Remains In Me
Mutley Ravishes said:
Keep the faith! Surely our greatest test?
April 22nd, 2025 18:51
Mutley Ravishes said:
Keep the faith! Surely our greatest test?
April 22nd, 2025 18:51
Love Remains In Me
sorenbarrett said:
To love oneself first before one can love another makes total sense to me and is expressed well in this poem
April 22nd, 2025 17:09
sorenbarrett said:
To love oneself first before one can love another makes total sense to me and is expressed well in this poem
April 22nd, 2025 17:09
Oppressed
Mutley Ravishes said:
Perhaps \"evil\" starts to run riot because it\'s easier (in the short term).
April 17th, 2025 19:26
Mutley Ravishes said:
Perhaps \"evil\" starts to run riot because it\'s easier (in the short term).
April 17th, 2025 19:26
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