Comments received on poems by sunshine777
Dear Monster
Poetic Licence said:
Monsters will always come and go, don\'t let them control you or abuse you and they will leave quicker, enjoyed your writing
March 3rd, 2025 03:00
Poetic Licence said:
Monsters will always come and go, don\'t let them control you or abuse you and they will leave quicker, enjoyed your writing
March 3rd, 2025 03:00
Dear Monster
sorenbarrett said:
A good read that portrays the situation as a monster. The metaphor fits well
March 2nd, 2025 18:36
sorenbarrett said:
A good read that portrays the situation as a monster. The metaphor fits well
March 2nd, 2025 18:36
Dear Monster
Cassie58 said:
Dear sunshine. We all have our own monsters from time to time. Such a sense of release when they go. Enjoyed reading you dear poet. All the best.
March 2nd, 2025 17:29
Cassie58 said:
Dear sunshine. We all have our own monsters from time to time. Such a sense of release when they go. Enjoyed reading you dear poet. All the best.
March 2nd, 2025 17:29
My Heart Is Cracked
rin said:
The heart is a fragile thing that can crack or disappear.
``Tenderness to You\\\\\\\'\\\\\\\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 01:31
rin said:
The heart is a fragile thing that can crack or disappear.
``Tenderness to You\\\\\\\'\\\\\\\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 01:31
My Heart Is Cracked
Poetic Licence said:
The feeling of sadness and the need to put on a mask to the world for self protection, sometimes though we need to let the mask slip, so we can move on. Well written tender piece.
December 23rd, 2024 12:57
Poetic Licence said:
The feeling of sadness and the need to put on a mask to the world for self protection, sometimes though we need to let the mask slip, so we can move on. Well written tender piece.
December 23rd, 2024 12:57
Never Be Me
Poetic Licence said:
A few powerful words covering rules and emotions, Well written
December 23rd, 2024 04:45
Poetic Licence said:
A few powerful words covering rules and emotions, Well written
December 23rd, 2024 04:45
Never Be Me
sorenbarrett said:
Asserting boundaries and respect despite pain or feelings of loss. Nicely worded
December 23rd, 2024 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
Asserting boundaries and respect despite pain or feelings of loss. Nicely worded
December 23rd, 2024 03:51
Emotions
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. I hope your writing is cethartic.
November 26th, 2024 16:04
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. I hope your writing is cethartic.
November 26th, 2024 16:04
Emotions
Cassie58 said:
Your strong faith will help you deal with those negative emotions. A good cry helps sunshine. Yes roller coaster, they can be. Thank you for sharing this spiritual poem with us .
November 24th, 2024 16:55
Cassie58 said:
Your strong faith will help you deal with those negative emotions. A good cry helps sunshine. Yes roller coaster, they can be. Thank you for sharing this spiritual poem with us .
November 24th, 2024 16:55
Double Minded
Cassie58 said:
Dear sunshine, I felt the chill here. Words mean nothing. It is always the actions that speak volumes in a relationship. A sad fact.
November 18th, 2024 08:56
Cassie58 said:
Dear sunshine, I felt the chill here. Words mean nothing. It is always the actions that speak volumes in a relationship. A sad fact.
November 18th, 2024 08:56
Double Minded
sorenbarrett said:
A hard truth in many relationships where words do not fit with actions. It seems that this is just part of the human condition nicely written.
November 18th, 2024 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
A hard truth in many relationships where words do not fit with actions. It seems that this is just part of the human condition nicely written.
November 18th, 2024 05:50
2Pac
sorenbarrett said:
Are you speaking of the rapper? Who else I\'m sure. A tribute nicely written
November 4th, 2024 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Are you speaking of the rapper? Who else I\'m sure. A tribute nicely written
November 4th, 2024 04:22
Self Obsessed
peto said:
Hi sunshine
Great to see you still writing
And as previous comment said
Nailing it
November 1st, 2024 17:48
peto said:
Hi sunshine
Great to see you still writing
And as previous comment said
Nailing it
November 1st, 2024 17:48
Self Obsessed
Young Fella said:
Emotionally moving lines .Really liked them. Heart is the heart of the topic. Excellent.
October 30th, 2024 17:55
Young Fella said:
Emotionally moving lines .Really liked them. Heart is the heart of the topic. Excellent.
October 30th, 2024 17:55
If We
Young Fella said:
Gorgeous verses. Enjoyed the topic and how your ines flow.
October 30th, 2024 17:54
Young Fella said:
Gorgeous verses. Enjoyed the topic and how your ines flow.
October 30th, 2024 17:54
Self Obsessed
sorenbarrett said:
There are things worth more than money. A great write
October 30th, 2024 11:22
sorenbarrett said:
There are things worth more than money. A great write
October 30th, 2024 11:22
Self Obsessed
MendedFences27 said:
A very moving scene created here. Your style is unique. Your empathy for the downtrodden speaks in your poem. Maybe one day we will all have \"A heart.\'\" - Phil A.
October 30th, 2024 09:34
MendedFences27 said:
A very moving scene created here. Your style is unique. Your empathy for the downtrodden speaks in your poem. Maybe one day we will all have \"A heart.\'\" - Phil A.
October 30th, 2024 09:34
Starvation
sorenbarrett said:
An empathetic heart is heard in this poem. Hungry children pull at the heart strings. Sometimes I would rather be hungry in the belly than in the soul. Great write
October 29th, 2024 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
An empathetic heart is heard in this poem. Hungry children pull at the heart strings. Sometimes I would rather be hungry in the belly than in the soul. Great write
October 29th, 2024 08:19
Starvation
mvvenkataraman said:
I fall at your feet to wash them with my tears,
You only are a true human being surely,
Your poem is extraordinarily touching,
I pray for you and other poor souls,
Great poetic write that has no match,
As its meaning pierces my old heart !
October 29th, 2024 07:59
mvvenkataraman said:
I fall at your feet to wash them with my tears,
You only are a true human being surely,
Your poem is extraordinarily touching,
I pray for you and other poor souls,
Great poetic write that has no match,
As its meaning pierces my old heart !
October 29th, 2024 07:59
If We
sorenbarrett said:
A good question as to what love really is and what most call love is really only passion that is short lived. Nicely worded
October 28th, 2024 19:55
sorenbarrett said:
A good question as to what love really is and what most call love is really only passion that is short lived. Nicely worded
October 28th, 2024 19:55
Until
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and haunting. Sad, well written with a poignant message
October 23rd, 2024 18:49
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and haunting. Sad, well written with a poignant message
October 23rd, 2024 18:49
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