Comments received on poems by sunshine777
My Heart Is Cracked
rin said:
The heart is a fragile thing that can crack or disappear.
``Tenderness to You\\\\\\\'\\\\\\\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 01:31
rin said:
The heart is a fragile thing that can crack or disappear.
``Tenderness to You\\\\\\\'\\\\\\\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 01:31
My Heart Is Cracked
TobaniNataiella said:
The feeling of sadness and the need to put on a mask to the world for self protection, sometimes though we need to let the mask slip, so we can move on. Well written tender piece.
December 23rd, 2024 12:57
TobaniNataiella said:
The feeling of sadness and the need to put on a mask to the world for self protection, sometimes though we need to let the mask slip, so we can move on. Well written tender piece.
December 23rd, 2024 12:57
Never Be Me
TobaniNataiella said:
A few powerful words covering rules and emotions, Well written
December 23rd, 2024 04:45
TobaniNataiella said:
A few powerful words covering rules and emotions, Well written
December 23rd, 2024 04:45
Never Be Me
sorenbarrett said:
Asserting boundaries and respect despite pain or feelings of loss. Nicely worded
December 23rd, 2024 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
Asserting boundaries and respect despite pain or feelings of loss. Nicely worded
December 23rd, 2024 03:51
Emotions
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. I hope your writing is cethartic.
November 26th, 2024 16:04
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. I hope your writing is cethartic.
November 26th, 2024 16:04
Emotions
Cassie58 said:
Your strong faith will help you deal with those negative emotions. A good cry helps sunshine. Yes roller coaster, they can be. Thank you for sharing this spiritual poem with us .
November 24th, 2024 16:55
Cassie58 said:
Your strong faith will help you deal with those negative emotions. A good cry helps sunshine. Yes roller coaster, they can be. Thank you for sharing this spiritual poem with us .
November 24th, 2024 16:55
Double Minded
Cassie58 said:
Dear sunshine, I felt the chill here. Words mean nothing. It is always the actions that speak volumes in a relationship. A sad fact.
November 18th, 2024 08:56
Cassie58 said:
Dear sunshine, I felt the chill here. Words mean nothing. It is always the actions that speak volumes in a relationship. A sad fact.
November 18th, 2024 08:56
Double Minded
sorenbarrett said:
A hard truth in many relationships where words do not fit with actions. It seems that this is just part of the human condition nicely written.
November 18th, 2024 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
A hard truth in many relationships where words do not fit with actions. It seems that this is just part of the human condition nicely written.
November 18th, 2024 05:50
2Pac
sorenbarrett said:
Are you speaking of the rapper? Who else I\'m sure. A tribute nicely written
November 4th, 2024 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Are you speaking of the rapper? Who else I\'m sure. A tribute nicely written
November 4th, 2024 04:22
Self Obsessed
peto said:
Hi sunshine
Great to see you still writing
And as previous comment said
Nailing it
November 1st, 2024 17:48
peto said:
Hi sunshine
Great to see you still writing
And as previous comment said
Nailing it
November 1st, 2024 17:48
Self Obsessed
Young Fella said:
Emotionally moving lines .Really liked them. Heart is the heart of the topic. Excellent.
October 30th, 2024 17:55
Young Fella said:
Emotionally moving lines .Really liked them. Heart is the heart of the topic. Excellent.
October 30th, 2024 17:55
If We
Young Fella said:
Gorgeous verses. Enjoyed the topic and how your ines flow.
October 30th, 2024 17:54
Young Fella said:
Gorgeous verses. Enjoyed the topic and how your ines flow.
October 30th, 2024 17:54
Self Obsessed
sorenbarrett said:
There are things worth more than money. A great write
October 30th, 2024 11:22
sorenbarrett said:
There are things worth more than money. A great write
October 30th, 2024 11:22
Self Obsessed
MendedFences27 said:
A very moving scene created here. Your style is unique. Your empathy for the downtrodden speaks in your poem. Maybe one day we will all have \"A heart.\'\" - Phil A.
October 30th, 2024 09:34
MendedFences27 said:
A very moving scene created here. Your style is unique. Your empathy for the downtrodden speaks in your poem. Maybe one day we will all have \"A heart.\'\" - Phil A.
October 30th, 2024 09:34
Starvation
sorenbarrett said:
An empathetic heart is heard in this poem. Hungry children pull at the heart strings. Sometimes I would rather be hungry in the belly than in the soul. Great write
October 29th, 2024 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
An empathetic heart is heard in this poem. Hungry children pull at the heart strings. Sometimes I would rather be hungry in the belly than in the soul. Great write
October 29th, 2024 08:19
Starvation
mvvenkataraman said:
I fall at your feet to wash them with my tears,
You only are a true human being surely,
Your poem is extraordinarily touching,
I pray for you and other poor souls,
Great poetic write that has no match,
As its meaning pierces my old heart !
October 29th, 2024 07:59
mvvenkataraman said:
I fall at your feet to wash them with my tears,
You only are a true human being surely,
Your poem is extraordinarily touching,
I pray for you and other poor souls,
Great poetic write that has no match,
As its meaning pierces my old heart !
October 29th, 2024 07:59
If We
sorenbarrett said:
A good question as to what love really is and what most call love is really only passion that is short lived. Nicely worded
October 28th, 2024 19:55
sorenbarrett said:
A good question as to what love really is and what most call love is really only passion that is short lived. Nicely worded
October 28th, 2024 19:55
Until
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and haunting. Sad, well written with a poignant message
October 23rd, 2024 18:49
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and haunting. Sad, well written with a poignant message
October 23rd, 2024 18:49
Truth
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting metaphor that can be take to great extreems. Although never touching they are drawn to each other by the gravitational pull or love the moon may eclipse the sun but this casts shadows, the light on the moon is biven by the sun and is reflected back. on and on it goes lovely poem
October 20th, 2024 05:36
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting metaphor that can be take to great extreems. Although never touching they are drawn to each other by the gravitational pull or love the moon may eclipse the sun but this casts shadows, the light on the moon is biven by the sun and is reflected back. on and on it goes lovely poem
October 20th, 2024 05:36
A Little Girl
NinjaGirl said:
And we mourn the childhood we never had... Very beautiful, thank you.
October 14th, 2024 21:18
NinjaGirl said:
And we mourn the childhood we never had... Very beautiful, thank you.
October 14th, 2024 21:18
Where Is My Love
sorenbarrett said:
The bond can be very strong and one does not feel right without the other. All this in this poem nicely written
October 13th, 2024 15:26
sorenbarrett said:
The bond can be very strong and one does not feel right without the other. All this in this poem nicely written
October 13th, 2024 15:26
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